Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Boom. Boom. Boom.
Teddy.15 said:
I found myself chuckling dear Melvin, loved every bit of imagery 🌹
July 5th, 2024 04:01
Teddy.15 said:
I found myself chuckling dear Melvin, loved every bit of imagery 🌹
July 5th, 2024 04:01
Boom. Boom. Boom.
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing write!!
Your stunning
creative poetic
talent never
will
cease to daze
and amaze! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 4th, 2024 19:50
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing write!!
Your stunning
creative poetic
talent never
will
cease to daze
and amaze! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 4th, 2024 19:50
Boom. Boom. Boom.
Thomas W Case said:
This is a different style with the rhyme. I like it, my friend.
July 4th, 2024 18:31
Thomas W Case said:
This is a different style with the rhyme. I like it, my friend.
July 4th, 2024 18:31
How Many Times it Turns
Teddy.15 said:
The very thought of this imagery
through the sunshine of a chair
that every day stood silent as it grieved
Sends my mind into deep deep reflection, .my mother had an arm chair that was kept as was filled with teddy bears for a very very long time. Your lines have the most powerful yet unique tone and speak to me loudly and of course your last lines marvelous powerful and full of fabulous imagery. 🌹
July 3rd, 2024 14:48
Teddy.15 said:
The very thought of this imagery
through the sunshine of a chair
that every day stood silent as it grieved
Sends my mind into deep deep reflection, .my mother had an arm chair that was kept as was filled with teddy bears for a very very long time. Your lines have the most powerful yet unique tone and speak to me loudly and of course your last lines marvelous powerful and full of fabulous imagery. 🌹
July 3rd, 2024 14:48
How Many Times it Turns
Thad Wilk said:
Yeaaa! 👍 👍
An outstanding and
most captivating write! ✍️
Blood chilling imagery,
great use of metaphor,
AND my pleasure to recite!
Thanks for sharing my friend! ✌️
Thad
July 3rd, 2024 14:47
Thad Wilk said:
Yeaaa! 👍 👍
An outstanding and
most captivating write! ✍️
Blood chilling imagery,
great use of metaphor,
AND my pleasure to recite!
Thanks for sharing my friend! ✌️
Thad
July 3rd, 2024 14:47
Wallflower Green
Alan R said:
he knows best when he knows less of me...this is a really beautiful line!
July 2nd, 2024 00:43
Alan R said:
he knows best when he knows less of me...this is a really beautiful line!
July 2nd, 2024 00:43
Wallflower Green
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I love your use of language.
July 1st, 2024 19:51
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I love your use of language.
July 1st, 2024 19:51
Wallflower Green
Teddy.15 said:
How very true the show must go on. Beautiful and most profound dearest Melvin. 🌹
July 1st, 2024 15:25
Teddy.15 said:
How very true the show must go on. Beautiful and most profound dearest Melvin. 🌹
July 1st, 2024 15:25
Where The Smaller People Go
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing poetry,
poetic perfection
just flows
through each
articulately
penned line!
Much enjoyed
my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 1st, 2024 09:25
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing poetry,
poetic perfection
just flows
through each
articulately
penned line!
Much enjoyed
my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 1st, 2024 09:25
Where The Smaller People Go
Dan Williams said:
Esoteric. Nice. Makes me wonder just who are the smaller people.
June 30th, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Esoteric. Nice. Makes me wonder just who are the smaller people.
June 30th, 2024 23:36
Where The Smaller People Go
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Powerful work.
June 30th, 2024 12:29
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Powerful work.
June 30th, 2024 12:29
Where The Smaller People Go
Teddy.15 said:
Like a cat that has nine lives we only get our fair share of chances, Dear Melvin, this is extraordinary and speaks so loudly to me especially today, having battled shingles for more than 16 months you certainly hit my nerves, kudos,
I particularly love these lines
nine times each we have slain loves stocks and shares.
our kingdom was our own, it was lush
it was a blood-rush high of cortisone.
our muscles lost in the day-to-day
our bones repellant sprays on a nervous twitch
Oh kudos my friend. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 04:21
Teddy.15 said:
Like a cat that has nine lives we only get our fair share of chances, Dear Melvin, this is extraordinary and speaks so loudly to me especially today, having battled shingles for more than 16 months you certainly hit my nerves, kudos,
I particularly love these lines
nine times each we have slain loves stocks and shares.
our kingdom was our own, it was lush
it was a blood-rush high of cortisone.
our muscles lost in the day-to-day
our bones repellant sprays on a nervous twitch
Oh kudos my friend. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 04:21
It Stands But Doesn\'t Move
Teddy.15 said:
If only we could choose to make a monent stand still a moment in time and forever keep it there, but such is life we are not such magicians. Your words are truly felt and even wanting so desperately to turn a clock back even for a mere moment we know that we cannot, therefore we wait for the next fase. Your work is stunning dear Melvin, as original as it gets and I\'m truly humbled to read it Sir. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
If only we could choose to make a monent stand still a moment in time and forever keep it there, but such is life we are not such magicians. Your words are truly felt and even wanting so desperately to turn a clock back even for a mere moment we know that we cannot, therefore we wait for the next fase. Your work is stunning dear Melvin, as original as it gets and I\'m truly humbled to read it Sir. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 03:25
How Can I Scoff This Giving Of Unreal?
Teddy.15 said:
Nostalgia you just gave me a view of my own mother and the babycham we used to share when I was very young, she only ever drank babycham. I love this dearest Melvin. 🌹
June 27th, 2024 15:00
Teddy.15 said:
Nostalgia you just gave me a view of my own mother and the babycham we used to share when I was very young, she only ever drank babycham. I love this dearest Melvin. 🌹
June 27th, 2024 15:00
My Haven Is A Horse-Box
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful theme and horses are truly good for the soul. 🌹
June 24th, 2024 12:27
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful theme and horses are truly good for the soul. 🌹
June 24th, 2024 12:27
How Far From Where It Came
Meera Mere said:
Amazing poem aDarkerMind
\"I will read again all letters from your grave
chant your name through a choral evensong
and trade your soul for a vinyl cigarette.\"
June 23rd, 2024 01:08
Meera Mere said:
Amazing poem aDarkerMind
\"I will read again all letters from your grave
chant your name through a choral evensong
and trade your soul for a vinyl cigarette.\"
June 23rd, 2024 01:08
How Far From Where It Came
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, how extraordinary you do write, one can be so lost yet a simple reminder can bring us back to.our surface. Another incredibly emotional ride with you. 🌹
June 22nd, 2024 04:36
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, how extraordinary you do write, one can be so lost yet a simple reminder can bring us back to.our surface. Another incredibly emotional ride with you. 🌹
June 22nd, 2024 04:36
No Beneficial Light
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful is your poem, rain on fire and just the thought of such a slumber. Isn\'t it funny how our semi-conscious can also affect us with pleasure or with sinister. Personally when I dream it\'s like I\'m in another world. Love your title dear Melvin a wonderful read and most inspiring. 🌹
June 22nd, 2024 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful is your poem, rain on fire and just the thought of such a slumber. Isn\'t it funny how our semi-conscious can also affect us with pleasure or with sinister. Personally when I dream it\'s like I\'m in another world. Love your title dear Melvin a wonderful read and most inspiring. 🌹
June 22nd, 2024 03:47
It Is Monday, And The Dead Are Still Awake
Cassie58 said:
I found myself in a graveyard. The feelings were deep and sorrowful. Your poetic expression extraordinary.
June 21st, 2024 02:37
Cassie58 said:
I found myself in a graveyard. The feelings were deep and sorrowful. Your poetic expression extraordinary.
June 21st, 2024 02:37
It Is Monday, And The Dead Are Still Awake
Teddy.15 said:
It seems unfair that some get all the tragedies of life yet others are unscathed, June is my hardest month along with January, but in the end each passing day week month year seems to bring me to that bit closer to solace. Loved every line dear Melvin. 🌹
June 20th, 2024 17:21
Teddy.15 said:
It seems unfair that some get all the tragedies of life yet others are unscathed, June is my hardest month along with January, but in the end each passing day week month year seems to bring me to that bit closer to solace. Loved every line dear Melvin. 🌹
June 20th, 2024 17:21
It Is Monday, And The Dead Are Still Awake
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous abstraction.
June 20th, 2024 12:09
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous abstraction.
June 20th, 2024 12:09
A Buttercup in a Crowded House
Teddy.15 said:
Most inspiring read dearest Melvin, as you are aware a subject close to my own heart
a buttercup in a crowded room.
for those who choke on anger
more discreet than distance dared to glow
Magnificent Lines
And your last so powerful. 🌹
June 19th, 2024 12:18
Teddy.15 said:
Most inspiring read dearest Melvin, as you are aware a subject close to my own heart
a buttercup in a crowded room.
for those who choke on anger
more discreet than distance dared to glow
Magnificent Lines
And your last so powerful. 🌹
June 19th, 2024 12:18
My Avacado Heart
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is bursting with incredible imagery and contemplation. The beautiful, final stanza ties it all together with a golden bow.
June 19th, 2024 08:55
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is bursting with incredible imagery and contemplation. The beautiful, final stanza ties it all together with a golden bow.
June 19th, 2024 08:55
My Avacado Heart
antra.sharma_ said:
Inspiring!!!!! Amazing words and vocabulary used!! Nicely penned
June 18th, 2024 13:12
antra.sharma_ said:
Inspiring!!!!! Amazing words and vocabulary used!! Nicely penned
June 18th, 2024 13:12
In My Sunday Morning Mews
Teddy.15 said:
The very essence of the bitter sweet in life. Beautifully done my dear Melvin. 🌹
June 18th, 2024 02:35
Teddy.15 said:
The very essence of the bitter sweet in life. Beautifully done my dear Melvin. 🌹
June 18th, 2024 02:35
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