Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
A Better Man
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I love your use of language and imagery.
October 21st, 2023 14:31
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I love your use of language and imagery.
October 21st, 2023 14:31
make real one ending day
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and imagery my friend. Perfect.
October 20th, 2023 16:36
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and imagery my friend. Perfect.
October 20th, 2023 16:36
make real one ending day
Teddy.15 said:
Loved every line especially the last stanza
But this really stands out
where melts the stars
where touches fingers white as viognier
dripping from the sinus of a sin.
no strings attached
death only is as death; or so it seems.
And then the electric music superb. I can feel it ❤️
October 20th, 2023 14:04
Teddy.15 said:
Loved every line especially the last stanza
But this really stands out
where melts the stars
where touches fingers white as viognier
dripping from the sinus of a sin.
no strings attached
death only is as death; or so it seems.
And then the electric music superb. I can feel it ❤️
October 20th, 2023 14:04
Hindsight
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant my friend. Excellent use of language.
October 20th, 2023 00:35
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant my friend. Excellent use of language.
October 20th, 2023 00:35
Hindsight
Teddy.15 said:
I suspect we\'d all like to go back and change something dearest Melvin. I know I would. ❤️ stunning imagery uniquely yours. If you had a book it would certainly stand well ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:29
Teddy.15 said:
I suspect we\'d all like to go back and change something dearest Melvin. I know I would. ❤️ stunning imagery uniquely yours. If you had a book it would certainly stand well ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:29
the smile that couldn\'t see
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted. The flow is fantastic, and as always, great use of language.
October 19th, 2023 11:32
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted. The flow is fantastic, and as always, great use of language.
October 19th, 2023 11:32
the smile that couldn\'t see
aDarkerMind said:
yes it is Maxine.
a little jumbled here and there tho.
thank you.
October 18th, 2023 15:06
aDarkerMind said:
yes it is Maxine.
a little jumbled here and there tho.
thank you.
October 18th, 2023 15:06
Hanging Lines
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture so well with your word choice and imagery.
October 17th, 2023 16:08
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture so well with your word choice and imagery.
October 17th, 2023 16:08
Hanging Lines
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like a plea to the dark side to give you some peace and quiet. you paint your very own masterpiece every time. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 15:28
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like a plea to the dark side to give you some peace and quiet. you paint your very own masterpiece every time. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 15:28
The Figure 8
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language to paint flash scenes great job.
October 17th, 2023 13:15
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language to paint flash scenes great job.
October 17th, 2023 13:15
one trip to moon and back
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful I love your use of language.
October 15th, 2023 12:17
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful I love your use of language.
October 15th, 2023 12:17
one trip to moon and back
Teddy.15 said:
No matter how far we come there is always something holding us back. ❤️ a fabulous rendition of a darker side. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 09:31
Teddy.15 said:
No matter how far we come there is always something holding us back. ❤️ a fabulous rendition of a darker side. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 09:31
I Have Never Seen a Ghost So White
Thomas W Case said:
You have painted a grim scene with your keen use of language and imagery. Fantastic work.
October 15th, 2023 01:11
Thomas W Case said:
You have painted a grim scene with your keen use of language and imagery. Fantastic work.
October 15th, 2023 01:11
To a Face We Cannot See
Thomas W Case said:
You use language well to pint the scene you desire. Nice work.
October 15th, 2023 01:07
Thomas W Case said:
You use language well to pint the scene you desire. Nice work.
October 15th, 2023 01:07
I Cannot Sleep
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language to paint your scene.
October 14th, 2023 01:14
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language to paint your scene.
October 14th, 2023 01:14
Should Silence Sing
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. I love your use of language and poetic technique in this one. Great flow.
October 13th, 2023 20:02
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. I love your use of language and poetic technique in this one. Great flow.
October 13th, 2023 20:02
what colour air we breathe
Thomas W Case said:
I really like the way you use imagery to paint the picture with words.
October 12th, 2023 16:30
Thomas W Case said:
I really like the way you use imagery to paint the picture with words.
October 12th, 2023 16:30
somewhere deep, inside the stomach of a crow
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic use of language and imagery. I like your style Sir.
October 12th, 2023 15:41
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic use of language and imagery. I like your style Sir.
October 12th, 2023 15:41
somewhere deep, inside the stomach of a crow
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere deep
inside the stomach of a crow
satire breeds it\'s vengeance
biting through a walnuts scant remains;
See this makes me think of all that I\'ve been through to find my satire ❤️ so damn clever sir. Your last lines kudos and that in the middle fabulous. Imagery that would scare anyone but not me.
October 12th, 2023 13:23
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere deep
inside the stomach of a crow
satire breeds it\'s vengeance
biting through a walnuts scant remains;
See this makes me think of all that I\'ve been through to find my satire ❤️ so damn clever sir. Your last lines kudos and that in the middle fabulous. Imagery that would scare anyone but not me.
October 12th, 2023 13:23
No Heart on Hand
Teddy.15 said:
Some what cracked inside the nut with no where to go, I feel your lost and Ive certainly been so in time that\'s passed. Extraordinary write as ever. ❤️
October 8th, 2023 13:56
Teddy.15 said:
Some what cracked inside the nut with no where to go, I feel your lost and Ive certainly been so in time that\'s passed. Extraordinary write as ever. ❤️
October 8th, 2023 13:56
One Backward Step
L. B. Mek said:
\'two inside the engine
wrapped as horse-meat
safe from sound\'
few realise the depth of this line
since most have forgot
where the term horsepower
came from...
!Brilliant!
(we fall forwards
while leaping backwards
wishing on a faithless prayer
warped mindsets, decrying reality
waning hope\'s clinging to nihilism\'s
ease
Why care, when \'Fck It\' is answer
enough..)
I read and learn wise Poet
October 6th, 2023 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'two inside the engine
wrapped as horse-meat
safe from sound\'
few realise the depth of this line
since most have forgot
where the term horsepower
came from...
!Brilliant!
(we fall forwards
while leaping backwards
wishing on a faithless prayer
warped mindsets, decrying reality
waning hope\'s clinging to nihilism\'s
ease
Why care, when \'Fck It\' is answer
enough..)
I read and learn wise Poet
October 6th, 2023 06:09
One Backward Step
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary, your imagery is quite something. ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:39
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary, your imagery is quite something. ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:39
A Postcard of Conception
Teddy.15 said:
Missing someone, Melvin, your last 10 lines just make me want to weep. ❤️ like an arrow through the heart.
October 2nd, 2023 11:04
Teddy.15 said:
Missing someone, Melvin, your last 10 lines just make me want to weep. ❤️ like an arrow through the heart.
October 2nd, 2023 11:04
To a Face We Cannot See
Teddy.15 said:
Being my authentic self is so important, and as you have taught me on many occasions to write from my heart, I see that you take your own advice. There is far too much competitiveness in the world dear Melvin personally I prefer uniqueness, and you got that my dear friend. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 13:08
Teddy.15 said:
Being my authentic self is so important, and as you have taught me on many occasions to write from my heart, I see that you take your own advice. There is far too much competitiveness in the world dear Melvin personally I prefer uniqueness, and you got that my dear friend. ❤️
September 30th, 2023 13:08
pyramids of albatross
Teddy.15 said:
A friendship dead a buried.
all Satan\'s men came gathering lips and verse
singing death it\'s happiness for a quiet introvert;
who sings so who remembers something less?
Move over Dante! Your lines are genius.
❤️
September 30th, 2023 02:39
Teddy.15 said:
A friendship dead a buried.
all Satan\'s men came gathering lips and verse
singing death it\'s happiness for a quiet introvert;
who sings so who remembers something less?
Move over Dante! Your lines are genius.
❤️
September 30th, 2023 02:39
pyramids of albatross
Saxon Crow said:
Clearly, you\'ve got the gift my friend.
September 29th, 2023 14:55
Saxon Crow said:
Clearly, you\'ve got the gift my friend.
September 29th, 2023 14:55
A Better Man
Teddy.15 said:
The magic of your poetry touches my soul dear Melvin.
September 28th, 2023 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
The magic of your poetry touches my soul dear Melvin.
September 28th, 2023 12:10
Should Silence Sing
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin silence is one of the most powerful ways we can comunicate, yet this poem is anything but silent, amazing lines ripping a soul to shreds. ❤️ your last lines as always are most beautiful.
September 27th, 2023 00:54
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin silence is one of the most powerful ways we can comunicate, yet this poem is anything but silent, amazing lines ripping a soul to shreds. ❤️ your last lines as always are most beautiful.
September 27th, 2023 00:54
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