Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Tony36 said:
Sad, but a great write
June 9th, 2024 09:52
Tony36 said:
Sad, but a great write
June 9th, 2024 09:52
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Teddy.15 said:
An extreme amount of sadness and regret, as you always do dear Melvin you write with an extraordinary amount of passion and love it shows in each line, 2 days away from opening the chocolates makes me think of Christmas day. The very vision of you at the end of the pier something I feel great sadness to see. Kudos sir once again. 🌹
June 9th, 2024 02:52
Teddy.15 said:
An extreme amount of sadness and regret, as you always do dear Melvin you write with an extraordinary amount of passion and love it shows in each line, 2 days away from opening the chocolates makes me think of Christmas day. The very vision of you at the end of the pier something I feel great sadness to see. Kudos sir once again. 🌹
June 9th, 2024 02:52
Out Walking With An X
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, I could think of worst meetings, sometimes in life confronting things that need to be faced actually settles ones gut. A wonderful provocative write dear Melvin. 🌹
June 8th, 2024 13:52
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, I could think of worst meetings, sometimes in life confronting things that need to be faced actually settles ones gut. A wonderful provocative write dear Melvin. 🌹
June 8th, 2024 13:52
Neither Of Us Mad
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me of early Bukowski. Tremendous work.
June 7th, 2024 11:33
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me of early Bukowski. Tremendous work.
June 7th, 2024 11:33
All Numbers Tell A Story\'s Solitaire
aDarkerMind said:
as kind and supportive as always Teddy.
a kiss that put a smile on my face as well.
and how true...perhaps a simple life isn\'t such a big deal.
thank you my friend x
June 7th, 2024 08:38
aDarkerMind said:
as kind and supportive as always Teddy.
a kiss that put a smile on my face as well.
and how true...perhaps a simple life isn\'t such a big deal.
thank you my friend x
June 7th, 2024 08:38
All Numbers Tell A Story\'s Solitaire
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps she will, until then here\'s a big fat kiss from your friend teddy 🤣 your words magnificent as always if life was simple you or i wouldn\'t even have met dear Melvin. 🌹
June 6th, 2024 16:35
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps she will, until then here\'s a big fat kiss from your friend teddy 🤣 your words magnificent as always if life was simple you or i wouldn\'t even have met dear Melvin. 🌹
June 6th, 2024 16:35
Too Long
O. Ella said:
Now I really appreciate your comment on my poem because this is just fantastic, mediocre in the least.
June 6th, 2024 12:58
O. Ella said:
Now I really appreciate your comment on my poem because this is just fantastic, mediocre in the least.
June 6th, 2024 12:58
An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. In the abstraction, you say a lot of concrete things. Very well done.
June 6th, 2024 07:28
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. In the abstraction, you say a lot of concrete things. Very well done.
June 6th, 2024 07:28
An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Teddy.15 said:
lol this is fabulous, love those last lines I really nearly did bark. 🌹
June 5th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
lol this is fabulous, love those last lines I really nearly did bark. 🌹
June 5th, 2024 14:08
Too Long
Teddy.15 said:
To admit defeat even though it breaks your heart to miss something or someone stunning dear Melvin. Always an inspiration to me. 🌹
June 4th, 2024 13:59
Teddy.15 said:
To admit defeat even though it breaks your heart to miss something or someone stunning dear Melvin. Always an inspiration to me. 🌹
June 4th, 2024 13:59
The Colour Clean
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here :
black- pudding proud in pots of knotted wool
mourning flowers while on a plate of steam
the raw side of the meat now vomits change
Such original poetic expression. Much enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2024 23:01
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here :
black- pudding proud in pots of knotted wool
mourning flowers while on a plate of steam
the raw side of the meat now vomits change
Such original poetic expression. Much enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2024 23:01
Confessions of an Oceanic Crust
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen.
June 2nd, 2024 06:08
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen.
June 2nd, 2024 06:08
Confessions of an Oceanic Crust
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s all so very deep within. Oh extraordinary stunning lines. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s all so very deep within. Oh extraordinary stunning lines. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 06:00
An Atlas on a String of Steel Erect
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Melvin,hopelessness and Helplessness within a dream that\'s what I see, Powerful and absolutely wonderful. Your ending is magnificent. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 02:16
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Melvin,hopelessness and Helplessness within a dream that\'s what I see, Powerful and absolutely wonderful. Your ending is magnificent. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 02:16
Placebo Pink
Neville said:
A compelling read well crafted and with no rough edges to tear apart .. just about perfect in my humble opinion .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 12:17
Neville said:
A compelling read well crafted and with no rough edges to tear apart .. just about perfect in my humble opinion .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 12:17
Placebo Pink
Teddy.15 said:
Your emotions speak so loud and clear I feel your pain. 🌹 never the less writing that for me is quite extraordinary and most inspiring. ❤️
May 30th, 2024 00:53
Teddy.15 said:
Your emotions speak so loud and clear I feel your pain. 🌹 never the less writing that for me is quite extraordinary and most inspiring. ❤️
May 30th, 2024 00:53
Fourteen Days Of June
Cassie58 said:
The first of yours I have read, I am so pleased to have stopped by.
one flower each for the birds who cannot sing
Anniversaries can be so painful. I felt the depth of that pain in the wonderful choice of language and poetic expression. The finest poetry.
May 29th, 2024 05:47
Cassie58 said:
The first of yours I have read, I am so pleased to have stopped by.
one flower each for the birds who cannot sing
Anniversaries can be so painful. I felt the depth of that pain in the wonderful choice of language and poetic expression. The finest poetry.
May 29th, 2024 05:47
King of a Lost Frontier
Eugene S. said:
You can feel the heavy weight of time and suffering in each stanza. Regimented frustrations: \"two cocktail sticks for supper dead on nine.\". Such an artistic way to describe it all.
May 29th, 2024 03:47
Eugene S. said:
You can feel the heavy weight of time and suffering in each stanza. Regimented frustrations: \"two cocktail sticks for supper dead on nine.\". Such an artistic way to describe it all.
May 29th, 2024 03:47
King of a Lost Frontier
Teddy.15 said:
Lost frontiers is truly what you have made with your imagery as I am truly lost inside it all, an amazing way to play with the human mind dearest Melvin. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 16:11
Teddy.15 said:
Lost frontiers is truly what you have made with your imagery as I am truly lost inside it all, an amazing way to play with the human mind dearest Melvin. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 16:11
To Live Again
Teddy.15 said:
The most fascinating lines dear Melvin, to live again indeed, your first stanza took me back to where I used to live in south London, amazing. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 00:29
Teddy.15 said:
The most fascinating lines dear Melvin, to live again indeed, your first stanza took me back to where I used to live in south London, amazing. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 00:29
First Vision All In White
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Brilliant work.
May 26th, 2024 23:03
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Brilliant work.
May 26th, 2024 23:03
First Vision All In White
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, outstanding imagery and written with such class,
mother moon in her horses shoes
through a funnel of a face
she has laid aside her grieving ghost
in a stomach full of ice
This has struck me, wow and as the night then turns to day from one yet to become... I am truly inspired by your gracious pen. 🌹
May 26th, 2024 10:47
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, outstanding imagery and written with such class,
mother moon in her horses shoes
through a funnel of a face
she has laid aside her grieving ghost
in a stomach full of ice
This has struck me, wow and as the night then turns to day from one yet to become... I am truly inspired by your gracious pen. 🌹
May 26th, 2024 10:47
First Vision All In White
2781 said:
Who has heard such a thing?
Who has seen such things? Shall the earth be made to bring forth in one day? Or shall a nation be born at once?
May 26th, 2024 09:43
2781 said:
Who has heard such a thing?
Who has seen such things? Shall the earth be made to bring forth in one day? Or shall a nation be born at once?
May 26th, 2024 09:43
Fourteen Days Of June
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous choice of language and imagery.
May 23rd, 2024 17:45
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous choice of language and imagery.
May 23rd, 2024 17:45
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