Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. In the abstraction, you say a lot of concrete things. Very well done.
June 6th, 2024 07:28
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. In the abstraction, you say a lot of concrete things. Very well done.
June 6th, 2024 07:28
An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Teddy.15 said:
lol this is fabulous, love those last lines I really nearly did bark. 🌹
June 5th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
lol this is fabulous, love those last lines I really nearly did bark. 🌹
June 5th, 2024 14:08
Too Long
Teddy.15 said:
To admit defeat even though it breaks your heart to miss something or someone stunning dear Melvin. Always an inspiration to me. 🌹
June 4th, 2024 13:59
Teddy.15 said:
To admit defeat even though it breaks your heart to miss something or someone stunning dear Melvin. Always an inspiration to me. 🌹
June 4th, 2024 13:59
The Colour Clean
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here :
black- pudding proud in pots of knotted wool
mourning flowers while on a plate of steam
the raw side of the meat now vomits change
Such original poetic expression. Much enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2024 23:01
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here :
black- pudding proud in pots of knotted wool
mourning flowers while on a plate of steam
the raw side of the meat now vomits change
Such original poetic expression. Much enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2024 23:01
Confessions of an Oceanic Crust
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen.
June 2nd, 2024 06:08
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen.
June 2nd, 2024 06:08
Confessions of an Oceanic Crust
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s all so very deep within. Oh extraordinary stunning lines. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s all so very deep within. Oh extraordinary stunning lines. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 06:00
An Atlas on a String of Steel Erect
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Melvin,hopelessness and Helplessness within a dream that\'s what I see, Powerful and absolutely wonderful. Your ending is magnificent. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 02:16
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Melvin,hopelessness and Helplessness within a dream that\'s what I see, Powerful and absolutely wonderful. Your ending is magnificent. 🌹
June 2nd, 2024 02:16
Placebo Pink
Neville said:
A compelling read well crafted and with no rough edges to tear apart .. just about perfect in my humble opinion .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 12:17
Neville said:
A compelling read well crafted and with no rough edges to tear apart .. just about perfect in my humble opinion .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 12:17
Placebo Pink
Teddy.15 said:
Your emotions speak so loud and clear I feel your pain. 🌹 never the less writing that for me is quite extraordinary and most inspiring. ❤️
May 30th, 2024 00:53
Teddy.15 said:
Your emotions speak so loud and clear I feel your pain. 🌹 never the less writing that for me is quite extraordinary and most inspiring. ❤️
May 30th, 2024 00:53
Fourteen Days Of June
Cassie58 said:
The first of yours I have read, I am so pleased to have stopped by.
one flower each for the birds who cannot sing
Anniversaries can be so painful. I felt the depth of that pain in the wonderful choice of language and poetic expression. The finest poetry.
May 29th, 2024 05:47
Cassie58 said:
The first of yours I have read, I am so pleased to have stopped by.
one flower each for the birds who cannot sing
Anniversaries can be so painful. I felt the depth of that pain in the wonderful choice of language and poetic expression. The finest poetry.
May 29th, 2024 05:47
King of a Lost Frontier
Eugene S. said:
You can feel the heavy weight of time and suffering in each stanza. Regimented frustrations: \"two cocktail sticks for supper dead on nine.\". Such an artistic way to describe it all.
May 29th, 2024 03:47
Eugene S. said:
You can feel the heavy weight of time and suffering in each stanza. Regimented frustrations: \"two cocktail sticks for supper dead on nine.\". Such an artistic way to describe it all.
May 29th, 2024 03:47
King of a Lost Frontier
Teddy.15 said:
Lost frontiers is truly what you have made with your imagery as I am truly lost inside it all, an amazing way to play with the human mind dearest Melvin. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 16:11
Teddy.15 said:
Lost frontiers is truly what you have made with your imagery as I am truly lost inside it all, an amazing way to play with the human mind dearest Melvin. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 16:11
To Live Again
Teddy.15 said:
The most fascinating lines dear Melvin, to live again indeed, your first stanza took me back to where I used to live in south London, amazing. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 00:29
Teddy.15 said:
The most fascinating lines dear Melvin, to live again indeed, your first stanza took me back to where I used to live in south London, amazing. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 00:29
First Vision All In White
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Brilliant work.
May 26th, 2024 23:03
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Brilliant work.
May 26th, 2024 23:03
First Vision All In White
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, outstanding imagery and written with such class,
mother moon in her horses shoes
through a funnel of a face
she has laid aside her grieving ghost
in a stomach full of ice
This has struck me, wow and as the night then turns to day from one yet to become... I am truly inspired by your gracious pen. 🌹
May 26th, 2024 10:47
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, outstanding imagery and written with such class,
mother moon in her horses shoes
through a funnel of a face
she has laid aside her grieving ghost
in a stomach full of ice
This has struck me, wow and as the night then turns to day from one yet to become... I am truly inspired by your gracious pen. 🌹
May 26th, 2024 10:47
First Vision All In White
2781 said:
Who has heard such a thing?
Who has seen such things? Shall the earth be made to bring forth in one day? Or shall a nation be born at once?
May 26th, 2024 09:43
2781 said:
Who has heard such a thing?
Who has seen such things? Shall the earth be made to bring forth in one day? Or shall a nation be born at once?
May 26th, 2024 09:43
Fourteen Days Of June
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous choice of language and imagery.
May 23rd, 2024 17:45
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous choice of language and imagery.
May 23rd, 2024 17:45
Fourteen Days Of June
Teddy.15 said:
My heart be with you in these days of june, June a very hard month for me too. Absolutely painful I felt all your emotions and the depth of each tear dear Melvin. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 00:44
Teddy.15 said:
My heart be with you in these days of june, June a very hard month for me too. Absolutely painful I felt all your emotions and the depth of each tear dear Melvin. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 00:44
My Heart a Grave
MrNobody40 said:
Honestly. That\'s really good. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2024 11:43
MrNobody40 said:
Honestly. That\'s really good. Thank you for sharing.
May 21st, 2024 11:43
The Moon has no Balloons
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Beautiful and moving tribute to the lovely Teddy. We must keep on keeping on. Trolls be damned.
May 19th, 2024 14:48
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Beautiful and moving tribute to the lovely Teddy. We must keep on keeping on. Trolls be damned.
May 19th, 2024 14:48
The Moon has no Balloons
Teddy.15 said:
Wow magnificent, and in honour of my plight, probably the kindest act anyone could have done for me today, I\'m not alone and i know it, many thanks to you dear Melvin, and may this beautiful poem get all its fame. i would hope the moon of balloons pops and what was inside that balloon showers every troll and every weak and jealous writer of words with the means to extinguish the way in which they work at making others feel worthless. kudos and truly out of a moments of misery you and I have marvelous work to show. Thank you thank you. ❤️
May 19th, 2024 10:33
Teddy.15 said:
Wow magnificent, and in honour of my plight, probably the kindest act anyone could have done for me today, I\'m not alone and i know it, many thanks to you dear Melvin, and may this beautiful poem get all its fame. i would hope the moon of balloons pops and what was inside that balloon showers every troll and every weak and jealous writer of words with the means to extinguish the way in which they work at making others feel worthless. kudos and truly out of a moments of misery you and I have marvelous work to show. Thank you thank you. ❤️
May 19th, 2024 10:33
A Paragraph of Sadness
Teddy.15 said:
Melvin, your last stanza is phenomenal dear Poet. Love this. 🌹
May 17th, 2024 12:42
Teddy.15 said:
Melvin, your last stanza is phenomenal dear Poet. Love this. 🌹
May 17th, 2024 12:42
To Dance With Isadora
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful title, I\'m thinking they don\'t make them like the old days. Utterly stunning poetry love love your last lines. 🌹
May 13th, 2024 13:46
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful title, I\'m thinking they don\'t make them like the old days. Utterly stunning poetry love love your last lines. 🌹
May 13th, 2024 13:46
I Have Driven Green This Age Where Muscles Dry
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your use of language and flow is brilliant on fire, as Teddy said.
May 12th, 2024 10:48
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your use of language and flow is brilliant on fire, as Teddy said.
May 12th, 2024 10:48
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