My Crush
The elder poet said:

Through out our lives we find we have crushes. Mine was at 13 years of age. Later on my real crush came at a later dare. A true crush. One where I felt the same way that you wrote about. Very well written . Thank you for sharing.


August 16th, 2021 11:22

I\'m sorry
Lorna said:

This is very touching and haven\'t we all let slip a barrage of awfulness that we later regret. A very sincere apology.......

August 15th, 2021 05:08

My dream
Arvy said:

Loved the metaphors you used, I hope you find the love you dream of and deserve.

August 11th, 2021 07:23

She
The elder poet said:

Very well written. A great description of what love is . Thank you for sharing.


August 10th, 2021 11:50