Comments received on poems by Job Welime
Found love.
Job Welime said:
I\'ll try it,but can\'t guarantee for sure,sometimes I just write what I\'m feeling,and I just kinda find my words all over the place
January 5th, 2022 06:41
Job Welime said:
I\'ll try it,but can\'t guarantee for sure,sometimes I just write what I\'m feeling,and I just kinda find my words all over the place
January 5th, 2022 06:41
Found love.
L. B. Mek said:
this is wonderful, but there is enough material
to make several poems, might be better
if you just narrow down
what exactly you want to highlight
in one specific poem
instead of highlighting, everything
in one write, for example:
\'Under the light
of a billion stars, I want to hang you
on the moon, and tell the world
about the glory of your magic touch,
I want to tell of the butterflies
you created in my body, because
out of all the numerous pictures
that I\'ve coloured in my head, yours
is the only one
that I couldn\'t erase,
My body will age,
but my feelings won\'t change,
You\'re my night sky
filled with stars, beautiful
with all your scars\'
January 4th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
this is wonderful, but there is enough material
to make several poems, might be better
if you just narrow down
what exactly you want to highlight
in one specific poem
instead of highlighting, everything
in one write, for example:
\'Under the light
of a billion stars, I want to hang you
on the moon, and tell the world
about the glory of your magic touch,
I want to tell of the butterflies
you created in my body, because
out of all the numerous pictures
that I\'ve coloured in my head, yours
is the only one
that I couldn\'t erase,
My body will age,
but my feelings won\'t change,
You\'re my night sky
filled with stars, beautiful
with all your scars\'
January 4th, 2022 05:45
My prayer.
Job Welime said:
Thanks for reading it,Vamsi,answered prayers is the sweetest thing one can ever have.
December 30th, 2021 14:09
Job Welime said:
Thanks for reading it,Vamsi,answered prayers is the sweetest thing one can ever have.
December 30th, 2021 14:09
What I want you to know,,
Job Welime said:
Hey Vamsi,,cheers for reading, I\'m really glad that this one appealed to you,
Thanks for finding time to read.
December 20th, 2021 10:00
Job Welime said:
Hey Vamsi,,cheers for reading, I\'m really glad that this one appealed to you,
Thanks for finding time to read.
December 20th, 2021 10:00
What I want you to know,,
Vamsi Sudha said:
Job !! you have not left any stone unturned in expression your love and affection !! So many ways and a variety in your expression !! Really amazed :)
December 18th, 2021 12:17
Vamsi Sudha said:
Job !! you have not left any stone unturned in expression your love and affection !! So many ways and a variety in your expression !! Really amazed :)
December 18th, 2021 12:17
The girl in my dream.
L. B. Mek said:
well you\'ve definitely worded
a crisp clear scene for me to imagine,
such a relatable wording
of instantaneous attraction,
thanks for sharing
December 10th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
well you\'ve definitely worded
a crisp clear scene for me to imagine,
such a relatable wording
of instantaneous attraction,
thanks for sharing
December 10th, 2021 04:54
My best love story.
Job Welime said:
Thanks,Vamsi,, I\'ll try improve next time
December 9th, 2021 13:10
Job Welime said:
Thanks,Vamsi,, I\'ll try improve next time
December 9th, 2021 13:10
My best love story.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! Not in par with your previous versions, but yes a good write !!
December 9th, 2021 11:49
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! Not in par with your previous versions, but yes a good write !!
December 9th, 2021 11:49
Everytime.
Job Welime said:
As long as she doesn\'t outgrow the color scheme it\'s all good,,thanks for reading Yellowrose.
December 4th, 2021 00:09
Job Welime said:
As long as she doesn\'t outgrow the color scheme it\'s all good,,thanks for reading Yellowrose.
December 4th, 2021 00:09
Could there be a love like this?
Job Welime said:
Do you know of any other couple that\'s legendary and their love story thrived?
December 3rd, 2021 16:02
Job Welime said:
Do you know of any other couple that\'s legendary and their love story thrived?
December 3rd, 2021 16:02
Could there be a love like this?
SureshG said:
Romeo and Juliet was a tragedy, whereas your love, as romanticized shall thrive
December 3rd, 2021 11:14
SureshG said:
Romeo and Juliet was a tragedy, whereas your love, as romanticized shall thrive
December 3rd, 2021 11:14
Could there be a love like this?
Job Welime said:
The things that we do for Love!!!
And still I just can\'t get enough taste of it
December 3rd, 2021 03:06
Job Welime said:
The things that we do for Love!!!
And still I just can\'t get enough taste of it
December 3rd, 2021 03:06
Could there be a love like this?
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! you are really crazy about her !! She is blessed !!
you surely rock !!
December 3rd, 2021 01:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! you are really crazy about her !! She is blessed !!
you surely rock !!
December 3rd, 2021 01:40
My pretty damsel.
SureshG said:
Words pronounced with intense feeling - to be remembered
December 2nd, 2021 15:04
SureshG said:
Words pronounced with intense feeling - to be remembered
December 2nd, 2021 15:04
My pretty damsel.
Caring dove said:
Lovely words ! Sounds like a soulmate to me …
December 2nd, 2021 13:23
Caring dove said:
Lovely words ! Sounds like a soulmate to me …
December 2nd, 2021 13:23
My pretty damsel.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !!
this was a funny line..
She\'s the mathematical proof that I knew was true all along.
Good one for sure !!
December 2nd, 2021 09:27
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !!
this was a funny line..
She\'s the mathematical proof that I knew was true all along.
Good one for sure !!
December 2nd, 2021 09:27
You deserve your own rarity.
Nicholas Browning said:
It really is \"Rare\" these days. I often find that the reason behind what people do doesn\'t match up with what they say or imply.
A heartfelt read. I enjoyed.
December 1st, 2021 02:35
Nicholas Browning said:
It really is \"Rare\" these days. I often find that the reason behind what people do doesn\'t match up with what they say or imply.
A heartfelt read. I enjoyed.
December 1st, 2021 02:35
You deserve your own rarity.
Caring dove said:
Caring lovely words . It’s not nice when someone we care about is disappointed / hurt by others in lifec
December 1st, 2021 01:01
Caring dove said:
Caring lovely words . It’s not nice when someone we care about is disappointed / hurt by others in lifec
December 1st, 2021 01:01
The Love I want.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Your expression of Love in so many ways is really mind-blowing.
This line was so beautiful
\"I want to space walk in all the galaxies that exist in your eyes,\"
Its time you get a book of LOVE Poetry !! Good one again Job !!
November 30th, 2021 11:29
Vamsi Sudha said:
Your expression of Love in so many ways is really mind-blowing.
This line was so beautiful
\"I want to space walk in all the galaxies that exist in your eyes,\"
Its time you get a book of LOVE Poetry !! Good one again Job !!
November 30th, 2021 11:29
The Love I want.
Job Welime said:
cheers for reading,your comment means alot,,,
I think Love will forever be the house that we will step in and feel at home,
November 30th, 2021 09:01
Job Welime said:
cheers for reading,your comment means alot,,,
I think Love will forever be the house that we will step in and feel at home,
November 30th, 2021 09:01
The Love I want.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I want to pin, my last name
to your name
so that, I can always enjoy
the music of the wind, when
people call you: by my name,\'
(somewhere, you\'ve weaved
in-to these memorable lines, dear poet
the fundamental core, to why
despite everything
some of us, still choose to believe
in the sacred, magic
of marriage
born: out of Equality\'s realised Phoenix!
of shared heart\'s
willingly diving
to the depthless sea\'s: in
stubbornly treasured, love\'!)
November 30th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'I want to pin, my last name
to your name
so that, I can always enjoy
the music of the wind, when
people call you: by my name,\'
(somewhere, you\'ve weaved
in-to these memorable lines, dear poet
the fundamental core, to why
despite everything
some of us, still choose to believe
in the sacred, magic
of marriage
born: out of Equality\'s realised Phoenix!
of shared heart\'s
willingly diving
to the depthless sea\'s: in
stubbornly treasured, love\'!)
November 30th, 2021 07:19
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