Comments received on poems by Job Welime
I\'m gifted
Crowns4Christ said:
Welcome back, sounds like love Job,I\'m happy for you
April 3rd, 2022 23:18
Crowns4Christ said:
Welcome back, sounds like love Job,I\'m happy for you
April 3rd, 2022 23:18
Show me
Crowns4Christ said:
Different style than usual but I like it,a big statement for such few words
March 22nd, 2022 20:23
Crowns4Christ said:
Different style than usual but I like it,a big statement for such few words
March 22nd, 2022 20:23
Show me
Vamsi Sudha said:
A different angle of your poetry. Loved it ....Job !!
March 22nd, 2022 13:08
Vamsi Sudha said:
A different angle of your poetry. Loved it ....Job !!
March 22nd, 2022 13:08
Show me
L. B. Mek said:
oh clever, aesthetic imagery
of your Poetry, enhancing
that mountain climb of escape
your words, depict
(read it from bottom line up)
I would suggest
layering the poem on top of itself
so others can grasp it easier, like:
\'And for once just be real with you.
For me to escape myself,
I need a back door,
Show me,
Show me,
I need a back door,
For me to escape myself,
And for once just be real with you.\'
..
(a great shorty!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
March 22nd, 2022 07:44
L. B. Mek said:
oh clever, aesthetic imagery
of your Poetry, enhancing
that mountain climb of escape
your words, depict
(read it from bottom line up)
I would suggest
layering the poem on top of itself
so others can grasp it easier, like:
\'And for once just be real with you.
For me to escape myself,
I need a back door,
Show me,
Show me,
I need a back door,
For me to escape myself,
And for once just be real with you.\'
..
(a great shorty!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
March 22nd, 2022 07:44
I want you
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m listening to colours, walking in clouds,
My undeniable connection,
Friendship formed from the scars\'
(beautifully worded, such a poignant portrayal
of bruised heart\'s joining, to ease
each others suffering)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 15th, 2022 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m listening to colours, walking in clouds,
My undeniable connection,
Friendship formed from the scars\'
(beautifully worded, such a poignant portrayal
of bruised heart\'s joining, to ease
each others suffering)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 15th, 2022 06:41
My luck.
Rocky Lagou said:
What a fine presentation! This was so heartfelt and original and the whole flower analogy was so fitting for the theme. Well done! 💖
March 14th, 2022 13:07
Rocky Lagou said:
What a fine presentation! This was so heartfelt and original and the whole flower analogy was so fitting for the theme. Well done! 💖
March 14th, 2022 13:07
One day.
Crowns4Christ said:
Did you find someone who deserves you Job,if not, she\'s just on the horizon
March 5th, 2022 04:55
Crowns4Christ said:
Did you find someone who deserves you Job,if not, she\'s just on the horizon
March 5th, 2022 04:55
One day.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! That ONE Day is not far for you ....keep up the Hope !!
March 5th, 2022 01:27
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! That ONE Day is not far for you ....keep up the Hope !!
March 5th, 2022 01:27
Don\'t change.
Goldfinch60 said:
I do sincerely hope that your life together comes to fruition Job, your love for her is so very strong.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
I do sincerely hope that your life together comes to fruition Job, your love for her is so very strong.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:41
Don\'t change.
Crowns4Christ said:
Has she ever read these, does she know you\'re an excellent poet
February 22nd, 2022 19:24
Crowns4Christ said:
Has she ever read these, does she know you\'re an excellent poet
February 22nd, 2022 19:24
Don\'t change.
Job Welime said:
It\'s just a meal of fried potatoes that have been chopped into some good small size we call it chips, so we can either put sauce in it, usually for me I don\'t put sauce in it,I am not really sure if this explanation will make it comprehendable
February 22nd, 2022 08:48
Job Welime said:
It\'s just a meal of fried potatoes that have been chopped into some good small size we call it chips, so we can either put sauce in it, usually for me I don\'t put sauce in it,I am not really sure if this explanation will make it comprehendable
February 22nd, 2022 08:48
Don\'t change.
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s that bit about chilly sauce and fries supposed to mean, dear poet
I was so lost, lol
February 22nd, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s that bit about chilly sauce and fries supposed to mean, dear poet
I was so lost, lol
February 22nd, 2022 05:43
I\'m into you.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Job and that last line is so very true.
Andy
February 22nd, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Job and that last line is so very true.
Andy
February 22nd, 2022 01:51
I\'m into you.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another sensitive heart touching one !!
Good one !! Job !!
February 22nd, 2022 00:46
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another sensitive heart touching one !!
Good one !! Job !!
February 22nd, 2022 00:46
You\'re not wrong.
Goldfinch60 said:
That chance is there for you Job, grab it with both hands.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That chance is there for you Job, grab it with both hands.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 01:57
You\'re not wrong.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! signs of positivity in your poems. Glad things are better !! Great way to express then out !!
February 19th, 2022 23:50
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! signs of positivity in your poems. Glad things are better !! Great way to express then out !!
February 19th, 2022 23:50
You\'re not wrong.
Crowns4Christ said:
Your healing is beginning Job,keep your faith and keep running the good race my friend,
February 19th, 2022 17:23
Crowns4Christ said:
Your healing is beginning Job,keep your faith and keep running the good race my friend,
February 19th, 2022 17:23
Intervene for us.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'d like to believe that the me, who survives this difficult period, will thank me in future for not giving up,\'
(even devoid of theological alignment, this is such an empowering line)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 18th, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'d like to believe that the me, who survives this difficult period, will thank me in future for not giving up,\'
(even devoid of theological alignment, this is such an empowering line)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 18th, 2022 05:00
Why?
Crowns4Christ said:
Job,you seem like a great guy,your perfect match is out there somewhere, someone who deserves your love, keep your faith
February 17th, 2022 17:15
Crowns4Christ said:
Job,you seem like a great guy,your perfect match is out there somewhere, someone who deserves your love, keep your faith
February 17th, 2022 17:15
Why?
Job Welime said:
Thanks dear poet for the advice, that\'s really wise, especially the dependency part,,, before I forget I really admire your knowledge of poetry, you\'re great.
February 17th, 2022 07:33
Job Welime said:
Thanks dear poet for the advice, that\'s really wise, especially the dependency part,,, before I forget I really admire your knowledge of poetry, you\'re great.
February 17th, 2022 07:33
Why?
L. B. Mek said:
but still, that seed remains
and should you strive to find your own waters, for it/for you
or other\'s, that are competent gardeners
you\'ll soon have a forest of love and hope
budding, with that self reliant resolve..
and maybe then, it will be you
planting seeds and watering
the nurturing needs of another
lost, in the dessert\'s of loneliness..
(trust and dependence
are two very difference concepts
we should Trust our partners
but never be too, dependant
on them
or have them be too, dependant on us..)
another wonderful read, dear poet
really like the way you unfurled the steps of a typical relationship with each cascading line
it made the narrative, twist
in your final two lines much more effective..
thanks for sharing!
February 17th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
but still, that seed remains
and should you strive to find your own waters, for it/for you
or other\'s, that are competent gardeners
you\'ll soon have a forest of love and hope
budding, with that self reliant resolve..
and maybe then, it will be you
planting seeds and watering
the nurturing needs of another
lost, in the dessert\'s of loneliness..
(trust and dependence
are two very difference concepts
we should Trust our partners
but never be too, dependant
on them
or have them be too, dependant on us..)
another wonderful read, dear poet
really like the way you unfurled the steps of a typical relationship with each cascading line
it made the narrative, twist
in your final two lines much more effective..
thanks for sharing!
February 17th, 2022 04:38
In Pain.
Crowns4Christ said:
Keep praying for comfort Job,it will come, healing begins with God
February 16th, 2022 13:00
Crowns4Christ said:
Keep praying for comfort Job,it will come, healing begins with God
February 16th, 2022 13:00
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