Comments received on poems by Job Welime
My bet
Caring dove said:
Another lovely poem .., especially like these words
I bet she hangs out with stars but her shine eclipses stars.’
I bet her doubts, her dreams, and her laughter are a mining site of precious stones, in fact, I bet her name rhymes with ruby.‘
October 29th, 2021 10:34
Caring dove said:
Another lovely poem .., especially like these words
I bet she hangs out with stars but her shine eclipses stars.’
I bet her doubts, her dreams, and her laughter are a mining site of precious stones, in fact, I bet her name rhymes with ruby.‘
October 29th, 2021 10:34
My girl
L. B. Mek said:
bars for days, thanks for sharing
\'Poets tell of paths, that cross
and stars, that align
mine is a beautiful accident\'
\'She\'s the backspace key
that deleted all my bad memories,\'
October 29th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
bars for days, thanks for sharing
\'Poets tell of paths, that cross
and stars, that align
mine is a beautiful accident\'
\'She\'s the backspace key
that deleted all my bad memories,\'
October 29th, 2021 06:31
Tell her,,
Caring dove said:
You have a lovely way with words 🙂 this is very nice !
October 28th, 2021 01:02
Caring dove said:
You have a lovely way with words 🙂 this is very nice !
October 28th, 2021 01:02
You
Caring dove said:
Very nice ! 🙂 sweet words . I like how you mention nature in your love for a girl ..,
October 26th, 2021 15:09
Caring dove said:
Very nice ! 🙂 sweet words . I like how you mention nature in your love for a girl ..,
October 26th, 2021 15:09
You
dusk arising said:
Wonderful expression of love. You have great poetry within you. Keep writing.
October 26th, 2021 14:50
dusk arising said:
Wonderful expression of love. You have great poetry within you. Keep writing.
October 26th, 2021 14:50
When I say I love you.
L. B. Mek said:
if you\'re not - yet
a slam poet
its only a matter of time and poetic maturity,
\'in my humble opinion\'
and if you haven\'t tried it yet, give it a go
read, out loud - these wonderful words of yours
see if you can find a supportive community, to cultivate and help your talent blossom!
forgive my overzealous nature, I only meant to encourage and support
don\'t let me inject that toxicity burden of expectancy, in your life
just, do you!
(thanks for choosing to share
its just wonderful to witness your poetry\'s growth
thanks for including us in your journey)
October 19th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
if you\'re not - yet
a slam poet
its only a matter of time and poetic maturity,
\'in my humble opinion\'
and if you haven\'t tried it yet, give it a go
read, out loud - these wonderful words of yours
see if you can find a supportive community, to cultivate and help your talent blossom!
forgive my overzealous nature, I only meant to encourage and support
don\'t let me inject that toxicity burden of expectancy, in your life
just, do you!
(thanks for choosing to share
its just wonderful to witness your poetry\'s growth
thanks for including us in your journey)
October 19th, 2021 05:53
When I say I love you.
Accidental Poet said:
And that\'s what it really feels like to be in love. Been there 54 years now, never regretting one second. Wonderfully penned. 🌹
October 19th, 2021 05:32
Accidental Poet said:
And that\'s what it really feels like to be in love. Been there 54 years now, never regretting one second. Wonderfully penned. 🌹
October 19th, 2021 05:32
Unwrapped gift from God.
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like love to me. Great write . 👍
October 1st, 2021 22:29
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like love to me. Great write . 👍
October 1st, 2021 22:29
Let me 🥰
L. B. Mek said:
nice, there\'s a maturity to the love you\'re depicting
more about Us, and less about that possessive mindset of
this is what I want/need from You..
thanks for sharing
and these lines exemplify that well:
\'Let us be,
pedestrians: with patience,
To fulfil our big dreams,
And I\'ll take your hand in mine,
And I\'ll walk, with you all the time,
Any where, any time,
only with you, because
You\'re the lyrics that I can never forget.
Each word has a meaning,
Each line rhymes,
And its the only tune that keeps playing in my mind,\'
September 28th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
nice, there\'s a maturity to the love you\'re depicting
more about Us, and less about that possessive mindset of
this is what I want/need from You..
thanks for sharing
and these lines exemplify that well:
\'Let us be,
pedestrians: with patience,
To fulfil our big dreams,
And I\'ll take your hand in mine,
And I\'ll walk, with you all the time,
Any where, any time,
only with you, because
You\'re the lyrics that I can never forget.
Each word has a meaning,
Each line rhymes,
And its the only tune that keeps playing in my mind,\'
September 28th, 2021 05:26
Nothing but love
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Job and welcome to M.P.S.
I am delighted to have caught your richly rhymed, exciting and very well crafted romantic poem.I look forward to reading more of your work.
August 19th, 2021 02:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Job and welcome to M.P.S.
I am delighted to have caught your richly rhymed, exciting and very well crafted romantic poem.I look forward to reading more of your work.
August 19th, 2021 02:33
Nothing but love
L. B. Mek said:
\'as the moon who stays
during her darkest nights,
It\'s always a pleasure to lend her time,
And even create her poems that rhyme,\'..
a wonderful depiction of romantic sincerity
and an eloquently worded dedication,
thanks for sharing
August 19th, 2021 02:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'as the moon who stays
during her darkest nights,
It\'s always a pleasure to lend her time,
And even create her poems that rhyme,\'..
a wonderful depiction of romantic sincerity
and an eloquently worded dedication,
thanks for sharing
August 19th, 2021 02:18
Nothing but love
The elder poet said:
I hope all your wants come true. A nice write . Thanks for sharing.
August 18th, 2021 11:46
The elder poet said:
I hope all your wants come true. A nice write . Thanks for sharing.
August 18th, 2021 11:46
My Crush
The elder poet said:
Through out our lives we find we have crushes. Mine was at 13 years of age. Later on my real crush came at a later dare. A true crush. One where I felt the same way that you wrote about. Very well written . Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:22
The elder poet said:
Through out our lives we find we have crushes. Mine was at 13 years of age. Later on my real crush came at a later dare. A true crush. One where I felt the same way that you wrote about. Very well written . Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:22
I\'m sorry
Lorna said:
This is very touching and haven\'t we all let slip a barrage of awfulness that we later regret. A very sincere apology.......
August 15th, 2021 05:08
Lorna said:
This is very touching and haven\'t we all let slip a barrage of awfulness that we later regret. A very sincere apology.......
August 15th, 2021 05:08
My dream
Arvy said:
Loved the metaphors you used, I hope you find the love you dream of and deserve.
August 11th, 2021 07:23
Arvy said:
Loved the metaphors you used, I hope you find the love you dream of and deserve.
August 11th, 2021 07:23
She
Goldfinch60 said:
Forever is eternity and may that love always be there Job.
Welcome to MPS.
August 11th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Forever is eternity and may that love always be there Job.
Welcome to MPS.
August 11th, 2021 00:44
She
The elder poet said:
Very well written. A great description of what love is . Thank you for sharing.
August 10th, 2021 11:50
The elder poet said:
Very well written. A great description of what love is . Thank you for sharing.
August 10th, 2021 11:50
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