Comments received on poems by Job Welime
One day.
Crowns4Christ said:
Did you find someone who deserves you Job,if not, she\'s just on the horizon
March 5th, 2022 04:55
Crowns4Christ said:
Did you find someone who deserves you Job,if not, she\'s just on the horizon
March 5th, 2022 04:55
One day.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! That ONE Day is not far for you ....keep up the Hope !!
March 5th, 2022 01:27
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! That ONE Day is not far for you ....keep up the Hope !!
March 5th, 2022 01:27
Don\'t change.
Goldfinch60 said:
I do sincerely hope that your life together comes to fruition Job, your love for her is so very strong.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
I do sincerely hope that your life together comes to fruition Job, your love for her is so very strong.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:41
Don\'t change.
Crowns4Christ said:
Has she ever read these, does she know you\'re an excellent poet
February 22nd, 2022 19:24
Crowns4Christ said:
Has she ever read these, does she know you\'re an excellent poet
February 22nd, 2022 19:24
Don\'t change.
Job Welime said:
It\'s just a meal of fried potatoes that have been chopped into some good small size we call it chips, so we can either put sauce in it, usually for me I don\'t put sauce in it,I am not really sure if this explanation will make it comprehendable
February 22nd, 2022 08:48
Job Welime said:
It\'s just a meal of fried potatoes that have been chopped into some good small size we call it chips, so we can either put sauce in it, usually for me I don\'t put sauce in it,I am not really sure if this explanation will make it comprehendable
February 22nd, 2022 08:48
Don\'t change.
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s that bit about chilly sauce and fries supposed to mean, dear poet
I was so lost, lol
February 22nd, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s that bit about chilly sauce and fries supposed to mean, dear poet
I was so lost, lol
February 22nd, 2022 05:43
I\'m into you.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Job and that last line is so very true.
Andy
February 22nd, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Job and that last line is so very true.
Andy
February 22nd, 2022 01:51
I\'m into you.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another sensitive heart touching one !!
Good one !! Job !!
February 22nd, 2022 00:46
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another sensitive heart touching one !!
Good one !! Job !!
February 22nd, 2022 00:46
You\'re not wrong.
Goldfinch60 said:
That chance is there for you Job, grab it with both hands.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That chance is there for you Job, grab it with both hands.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 01:57
You\'re not wrong.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! signs of positivity in your poems. Glad things are better !! Great way to express then out !!
February 19th, 2022 23:50
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! signs of positivity in your poems. Glad things are better !! Great way to express then out !!
February 19th, 2022 23:50
You\'re not wrong.
Crowns4Christ said:
Your healing is beginning Job,keep your faith and keep running the good race my friend,
February 19th, 2022 17:23
Crowns4Christ said:
Your healing is beginning Job,keep your faith and keep running the good race my friend,
February 19th, 2022 17:23
Intervene for us.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'d like to believe that the me, who survives this difficult period, will thank me in future for not giving up,\'
(even devoid of theological alignment, this is such an empowering line)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 18th, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'d like to believe that the me, who survives this difficult period, will thank me in future for not giving up,\'
(even devoid of theological alignment, this is such an empowering line)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 18th, 2022 05:00
Why?
Crowns4Christ said:
Job,you seem like a great guy,your perfect match is out there somewhere, someone who deserves your love, keep your faith
February 17th, 2022 17:15
Crowns4Christ said:
Job,you seem like a great guy,your perfect match is out there somewhere, someone who deserves your love, keep your faith
February 17th, 2022 17:15
Why?
Job Welime said:
Thanks dear poet for the advice, that\'s really wise, especially the dependency part,,, before I forget I really admire your knowledge of poetry, you\'re great.
February 17th, 2022 07:33
Job Welime said:
Thanks dear poet for the advice, that\'s really wise, especially the dependency part,,, before I forget I really admire your knowledge of poetry, you\'re great.
February 17th, 2022 07:33
Why?
L. B. Mek said:
but still, that seed remains
and should you strive to find your own waters, for it/for you
or other\'s, that are competent gardeners
you\'ll soon have a forest of love and hope
budding, with that self reliant resolve..
and maybe then, it will be you
planting seeds and watering
the nurturing needs of another
lost, in the dessert\'s of loneliness..
(trust and dependence
are two very difference concepts
we should Trust our partners
but never be too, dependant
on them
or have them be too, dependant on us..)
another wonderful read, dear poet
really like the way you unfurled the steps of a typical relationship with each cascading line
it made the narrative, twist
in your final two lines much more effective..
thanks for sharing!
February 17th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
but still, that seed remains
and should you strive to find your own waters, for it/for you
or other\'s, that are competent gardeners
you\'ll soon have a forest of love and hope
budding, with that self reliant resolve..
and maybe then, it will be you
planting seeds and watering
the nurturing needs of another
lost, in the dessert\'s of loneliness..
(trust and dependence
are two very difference concepts
we should Trust our partners
but never be too, dependant
on them
or have them be too, dependant on us..)
another wonderful read, dear poet
really like the way you unfurled the steps of a typical relationship with each cascading line
it made the narrative, twist
in your final two lines much more effective..
thanks for sharing!
February 17th, 2022 04:38
In Pain.
Crowns4Christ said:
Keep praying for comfort Job,it will come, healing begins with God
February 16th, 2022 13:00
Crowns4Christ said:
Keep praying for comfort Job,it will come, healing begins with God
February 16th, 2022 13:00
In Pain.
Rocky Lagou said:
I felt the emotion in this one. The volcano image was so apt for your purpose and love is a complex soul. Kudos! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:52
Rocky Lagou said:
I felt the emotion in this one. The volcano image was so apt for your purpose and love is a complex soul. Kudos! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:52
What\'s love?
Crowns4Christ said:
Hang in there Job,things will be great again,you will find someone who truly loves you and deserves you.keep your faith friend,it will happen, God is never wrong
February 14th, 2022 15:34
Crowns4Christ said:
Hang in there Job,things will be great again,you will find someone who truly loves you and deserves you.keep your faith friend,it will happen, God is never wrong
February 14th, 2022 15:34
What\'s love?
L. B. Mek said:
\'the unpaid therapist\'.. lol
so true!
it\'s funny
how our friends, somehow
end-up suffering for our love..
when it\'s going well, they get neglected
and if it burns down, they gotta help us
pick-up the pieces..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 14th, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'the unpaid therapist\'.. lol
so true!
it\'s funny
how our friends, somehow
end-up suffering for our love..
when it\'s going well, they get neglected
and if it burns down, they gotta help us
pick-up the pieces..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 14th, 2022 05:36
What\'s love?
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love one day return to you Job.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love one day return to you Job.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:55
If I could.
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a great piece my friend, keep writing.
Persistence is key
February 13th, 2022 13:45
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a great piece my friend, keep writing.
Persistence is key
February 13th, 2022 13:45
If I could.
Crowns4Christ said:
Never lose your faith Job, love is a wonderful thing,it will find you again when you least expect it,
February 13th, 2022 13:28
Crowns4Christ said:
Never lose your faith Job, love is a wonderful thing,it will find you again when you least expect it,
February 13th, 2022 13:28
If I could.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! Overflowing emotions and you are so rich in love !! Its overflowing , creative write once again !!
February 13th, 2022 01:56
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! Overflowing emotions and you are so rich in love !! Its overflowing , creative write once again !!
February 13th, 2022 01:56
If I could.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is so full of love for her she will never leave it.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is so full of love for her she will never leave it.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:51
Heartache.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Your expressions of love are always powerful, gifted one. I love how carefully this is woven together... Well done sir!
February 12th, 2022 04:55
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Your expressions of love are always powerful, gifted one. I love how carefully this is woven together... Well done sir!
February 12th, 2022 04:55
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