Comments received on poems by Job Welime



If I could.
Goldfinch60 said:

Your heart is so full of love for her she will never leave it.

Andy

February 13th, 2022 01:51

Heartache.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Your expressions of love are always powerful, gifted one. I love how carefully this is woven together... Well done sir!

February 12th, 2022 04:55

Was it too much to ask for?
Vamsi Sudha said:

Oh ! Job ,
That was a sad one from you....
And wish things get back to normalcy and green again...
Nice emotional painful write !!

February 12th, 2022 03:51

Was it too much to ask for?
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad words if a love that is still there in your heart but no in reality. Maybe one day all will be well.

Andy

February 12th, 2022 01:52

Heartache.
Crowns4Christ said:

Lost love is always hard,but the wounds do heal, I don\'t know what you believe,but invest in the Lord,he will heal your broken heart,and bring you somebody really special,like he brought me and foreverjesus6 together,right here on this site.now we\'re happily married.there might even be somebody on this site for you too.let me ask you something,are you a Christian

February 11th, 2022 21:51

Heartache.
L. B. Mek said:

\'though you sure as death have every right to,\'

\'love doesn\'t hurt you but a person who doesn\'t know how to love you does,\'

\'mourn my emptiness as if the tears will freeze and fill my voids,
I miss the sky that as a star I can no longer belong to.\'
(such dazzling lines!
such raw Truth
which translates
to such unblemished Beauty..)
so many great writes from you this week, it has been a privilege
to read each one, dear Poet
thank you!

February 11th, 2022 05:39

Heartache.
Vamsi Sudha said:

Hey Job !! Hope everything is alright ?? Nice write , but hope its not what you feel right now !!

February 11th, 2022 04:41

Heartache.
Job Welime said:

Thanks dear poet, cheers for reading,


February 11th, 2022 02:13

14 reasons why,
Goldfinch60 said:

Super Valentines words Job, I hope she is your Valentine.

Andy

February 11th, 2022 01:29

14 reasons why,
Palebluecardigan said:

My favourite is reason three, another wonderful poem!

February 11th, 2022 01:29

Heartache.
Job Welime said:

Thank you Dear poet

February 11th, 2022 00:35

Heartache.
Palebluecardigan said:

The last line is so touching! Good job!

February 11th, 2022 00:29

14 reasons why,
orchidee said:

A fifteenth reason - why this a good write - cos it is! :)

February 10th, 2022 10:26

14 reasons why,
Vamsi Sudha said:

Lovely to the core ..
these lines touched me straight !!

Ten, if beauty was a weapon, then you could be used as a weapon of mass destruction,
Two, When I close my eyes to sleep, I don\'t dream anymore because my reality is better than whatever I could ever dream of,

You don\'t seem to fall in dearth of expression for your love !! That really amazing and have a great valentine :)

February 10th, 2022 07:24

14 reasons why,
L. B. Mek said:

\'then, you could be used
as a weapon of mass destruction\'..
(I imagine a youthful heart
messaging each line, one day at a time
and then appearing on valentine\'s day
to deliver the last line in person
\'how romcom cheesy and sweet
and all-things gloriously brave
about a budding love story\') lol
a wonderful read,
I can\'t help, but feel
Brian McKnight\'s \'Back at one\'
in your words
(and no, not just for the maths) lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet

February 10th, 2022 05:52

Love hurt.
Job Welime said:

I try to focus on the good side but,,, when bad happens you just can\'t help it

February 10th, 2022 05:03

Love hurt.
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Job, love can be painful at times but mostly it is wonderful.

Andy

February 10th, 2022 02:21

This valentine
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words for a Valentine or for anytime showing your everlasting love.

Andy

February 9th, 2022 01:54

This valentine
Vamsi Sudha said:

Lovely one for this Valentine week !! You speak from your heart , its very visible !! :) Good Job , JOB :)

February 9th, 2022 00:32

This valentine
Jay-Lee Jane said:

beautiful words expressing a deep and true love

February 8th, 2022 22:48

Cutey
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
\'But her body was the temple made of pure gold,
God made a perfect guess,
She was not only flawless, Nevertheless enchantress,
I thought she came to this world by mistake,\'

February 8th, 2022 06:03

Cutey
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words about a beautiful lady Job.

Andy

February 8th, 2022 02:43

Relationshipđź’•
Job Welime said:

Couldn\'t agree more, dear poet

February 5th, 2022 07:40

Relationshipđź’•
Paul Bell said:

Sounds like the perfect relationship to me.

February 5th, 2022 06:59

My love.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true words Job, I am going through all that now with the new lady in my life.

Andy

February 5th, 2022 01:18

My love.
Crowns4Christ said:

Sweet poem job,you must not give up on this person.that you love

February 4th, 2022 15:04

My love.
Job Welime said:

I really hope to rise up to the challenge

February 4th, 2022 11:45

My love.
L. B. Mek said:

\'I want you to adore not just the physical but everything my heart and soul has to offer\'
(another wonderful write,
but I can\'t wait to read your shares next week, dear poet
our very own, poetic Valentine
gonna have us dreaming of romance
all week, I bet) lol

February 4th, 2022 06:22

My love.
orchidee said:

Good write Job.

February 4th, 2022 03:24

My lovely someone.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely ! Like your mention of nature ..

February 4th, 2022 01:37

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