Alavyuu,, 😅
Job Welime said:

Thank you Vamsi, true love will always reoccur like the sunrise and sunsets, irregardless of what happens

January 29th, 2022 23:15

My damsel.
L. B. Mek said:

really like your analogy in the last two lines
another wonderful read, dear poet

January 28th, 2022 05:32

My damsel.
Vamsi Sudha said:

This does need an heartful ovation. She is truly blessed. So many ways of expression of your affection. She really got a wonderful poet out of you !!

Great One Job !!

January 28th, 2022 02:14

My girl.
Jay-Lee Jane said:

makes my heart ache, such power in your story. keep growing and writing!!

January 27th, 2022 18:47

I\'ve fallen in love.
L. B. Mek said:

those rare treasures, in life...!
(a good read, really like the depth
you\'re showcasing in your write\'s)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

January 27th, 2022 06:44

What a beauty!!!
Job Welime said:

Love has really found a way of making one express things In a language you didn\'t existed

January 27th, 2022 03:18

My girl.
Buzz Bray said:

Outstanding! I am writing this and wiping my eyes. Beautiful sentiment. Keep writing!

January 26th, 2022 22:25

Mine
L. B. Mek said:

\'World in her eyes,
And me in her heart,,,
Couldn\'t ask
for more (than that!)\'
one of your very best, dear poet
thanks for sharing

January 13th, 2022 05:50

Mine
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sweet words ))

January 13th, 2022 01:55

I want,,,
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving words Job.

Andy

January 12th, 2022 02:19

Ever since,,,
L. B. Mek said:

really like how more refined
this work feels
and your purposed use of repetition
in that first line
to anchor the spine of your poem..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

January 11th, 2022 07:44

None but you,,
Paul Bell said:

She sounds like a girl for the long term.

January 5th, 2022 09:32

Found love.
L. B. Mek said:

this is wonderful, but there is enough material
to make several poems, might be better
if you just narrow down
what exactly you want to highlight
in one specific poem
instead of highlighting, everything
in one write, for example:
\'Under the light
of a billion stars, I want to hang you
on the moon, and tell the world
about the glory of your magic touch,
I want to tell of the butterflies
you created in my body, because
out of all the numerous pictures
that I\'ve coloured in my head, yours
is the only one
that I couldn\'t erase,
My body will age,
but my feelings won\'t change,
You\'re my night sky
filled with stars, beautiful
with all your scars\'

January 4th, 2022 05:45

My prayer.
Job Welime said:

Thanks for reading it,Vamsi,answered prayers is the sweetest thing one can ever have.

December 30th, 2021 14:09

What I want you to know,,
Job Welime said:

Hey Vamsi,,cheers for reading, I\'m really glad that this one appealed to you,
Thanks for finding time to read.

December 20th, 2021 10:00