Comments received on poems by Job Welime
Intervene for us.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'d like to believe that the me, who survives this difficult period, will thank me in future for not giving up,\'
(even devoid of theological alignment, this is such an empowering line)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 18th, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'d like to believe that the me, who survives this difficult period, will thank me in future for not giving up,\'
(even devoid of theological alignment, this is such an empowering line)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 18th, 2022 05:00
Why?
Crowns4Christ said:
Job,you seem like a great guy,your perfect match is out there somewhere, someone who deserves your love, keep your faith
February 17th, 2022 17:15
Crowns4Christ said:
Job,you seem like a great guy,your perfect match is out there somewhere, someone who deserves your love, keep your faith
February 17th, 2022 17:15
Why?
Job Welime said:
Thanks dear poet for the advice, that\'s really wise, especially the dependency part,,, before I forget I really admire your knowledge of poetry, you\'re great.
February 17th, 2022 07:33
Job Welime said:
Thanks dear poet for the advice, that\'s really wise, especially the dependency part,,, before I forget I really admire your knowledge of poetry, you\'re great.
February 17th, 2022 07:33
Why?
L. B. Mek said:
but still, that seed remains
and should you strive to find your own waters, for it/for you
or other\'s, that are competent gardeners
you\'ll soon have a forest of love and hope
budding, with that self reliant resolve..
and maybe then, it will be you
planting seeds and watering
the nurturing needs of another
lost, in the dessert\'s of loneliness..
(trust and dependence
are two very difference concepts
we should Trust our partners
but never be too, dependant
on them
or have them be too, dependant on us..)
another wonderful read, dear poet
really like the way you unfurled the steps of a typical relationship with each cascading line
it made the narrative, twist
in your final two lines much more effective..
thanks for sharing!
February 17th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
but still, that seed remains
and should you strive to find your own waters, for it/for you
or other\'s, that are competent gardeners
you\'ll soon have a forest of love and hope
budding, with that self reliant resolve..
and maybe then, it will be you
planting seeds and watering
the nurturing needs of another
lost, in the dessert\'s of loneliness..
(trust and dependence
are two very difference concepts
we should Trust our partners
but never be too, dependant
on them
or have them be too, dependant on us..)
another wonderful read, dear poet
really like the way you unfurled the steps of a typical relationship with each cascading line
it made the narrative, twist
in your final two lines much more effective..
thanks for sharing!
February 17th, 2022 04:38
In Pain.
Crowns4Christ said:
Keep praying for comfort Job,it will come, healing begins with God
February 16th, 2022 13:00
Crowns4Christ said:
Keep praying for comfort Job,it will come, healing begins with God
February 16th, 2022 13:00
In Pain.
Rocky Lagou said:
I felt the emotion in this one. The volcano image was so apt for your purpose and love is a complex soul. Kudos! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:52
Rocky Lagou said:
I felt the emotion in this one. The volcano image was so apt for your purpose and love is a complex soul. Kudos! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:52
What\'s love?
Crowns4Christ said:
Hang in there Job,things will be great again,you will find someone who truly loves you and deserves you.keep your faith friend,it will happen, God is never wrong
February 14th, 2022 15:34
Crowns4Christ said:
Hang in there Job,things will be great again,you will find someone who truly loves you and deserves you.keep your faith friend,it will happen, God is never wrong
February 14th, 2022 15:34
What\'s love?
L. B. Mek said:
\'the unpaid therapist\'.. lol
so true!
it\'s funny
how our friends, somehow
end-up suffering for our love..
when it\'s going well, they get neglected
and if it burns down, they gotta help us
pick-up the pieces..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 14th, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'the unpaid therapist\'.. lol
so true!
it\'s funny
how our friends, somehow
end-up suffering for our love..
when it\'s going well, they get neglected
and if it burns down, they gotta help us
pick-up the pieces..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 14th, 2022 05:36
What\'s love?
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love one day return to you Job.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love one day return to you Job.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:55
If I could.
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a great piece my friend, keep writing.
Persistence is key
February 13th, 2022 13:45
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a great piece my friend, keep writing.
Persistence is key
February 13th, 2022 13:45
If I could.
Crowns4Christ said:
Never lose your faith Job, love is a wonderful thing,it will find you again when you least expect it,
February 13th, 2022 13:28
Crowns4Christ said:
Never lose your faith Job, love is a wonderful thing,it will find you again when you least expect it,
February 13th, 2022 13:28
If I could.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! Overflowing emotions and you are so rich in love !! Its overflowing , creative write once again !!
February 13th, 2022 01:56
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! Overflowing emotions and you are so rich in love !! Its overflowing , creative write once again !!
February 13th, 2022 01:56
If I could.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is so full of love for her she will never leave it.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is so full of love for her she will never leave it.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:51
Heartache.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Your expressions of love are always powerful, gifted one. I love how carefully this is woven together... Well done sir!
February 12th, 2022 04:55
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Your expressions of love are always powerful, gifted one. I love how carefully this is woven together... Well done sir!
February 12th, 2022 04:55
Was it too much to ask for?
Vamsi Sudha said:
Oh ! Job ,
That was a sad one from you....
And wish things get back to normalcy and green again...
Nice emotional painful write !!
February 12th, 2022 03:51
Vamsi Sudha said:
Oh ! Job ,
That was a sad one from you....
And wish things get back to normalcy and green again...
Nice emotional painful write !!
February 12th, 2022 03:51
Was it too much to ask for?
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad words if a love that is still there in your heart but no in reality. Maybe one day all will be well.
Andy
February 12th, 2022 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad words if a love that is still there in your heart but no in reality. Maybe one day all will be well.
Andy
February 12th, 2022 01:52
Heartache.
Crowns4Christ said:
Lost love is always hard,but the wounds do heal, I don\'t know what you believe,but invest in the Lord,he will heal your broken heart,and bring you somebody really special,like he brought me and foreverjesus6 together,right here on this site.now we\'re happily married.there might even be somebody on this site for you too.let me ask you something,are you a Christian
February 11th, 2022 21:51
Crowns4Christ said:
Lost love is always hard,but the wounds do heal, I don\'t know what you believe,but invest in the Lord,he will heal your broken heart,and bring you somebody really special,like he brought me and foreverjesus6 together,right here on this site.now we\'re happily married.there might even be somebody on this site for you too.let me ask you something,are you a Christian
February 11th, 2022 21:51
Heartache.
L. B. Mek said:
\'though you sure as death have every right to,\'
\'love doesn\'t hurt you but a person who doesn\'t know how to love you does,\'
\'mourn my emptiness as if the tears will freeze and fill my voids,
I miss the sky that as a star I can no longer belong to.\'
(such dazzling lines!
such raw Truth
which translates
to such unblemished Beauty..)
so many great writes from you this week, it has been a privilege
to read each one, dear Poet
thank you!
February 11th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'though you sure as death have every right to,\'
\'love doesn\'t hurt you but a person who doesn\'t know how to love you does,\'
\'mourn my emptiness as if the tears will freeze and fill my voids,
I miss the sky that as a star I can no longer belong to.\'
(such dazzling lines!
such raw Truth
which translates
to such unblemished Beauty..)
so many great writes from you this week, it has been a privilege
to read each one, dear Poet
thank you!
February 11th, 2022 05:39
Heartache.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! Hope everything is alright ?? Nice write , but hope its not what you feel right now !!
February 11th, 2022 04:41
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! Hope everything is alright ?? Nice write , but hope its not what you feel right now !!
February 11th, 2022 04:41
14 reasons why,
Goldfinch60 said:
Super Valentines words Job, I hope she is your Valentine.
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Super Valentines words Job, I hope she is your Valentine.
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:29
14 reasons why,
Palebluecardigan said:
My favourite is reason three, another wonderful poem!
February 11th, 2022 01:29
Palebluecardigan said:
My favourite is reason three, another wonderful poem!
February 11th, 2022 01:29
14 reasons why,
orchidee said:
A fifteenth reason - why this a good write - cos it is! :)
February 10th, 2022 10:26
orchidee said:
A fifteenth reason - why this a good write - cos it is! :)
February 10th, 2022 10:26
14 reasons why,
Vamsi Sudha said:
Lovely to the core ..
these lines touched me straight !!
Ten, if beauty was a weapon, then you could be used as a weapon of mass destruction,
Two, When I close my eyes to sleep, I don\'t dream anymore because my reality is better than whatever I could ever dream of,
You don\'t seem to fall in dearth of expression for your love !! That really amazing and have a great valentine :)
February 10th, 2022 07:24
Vamsi Sudha said:
Lovely to the core ..
these lines touched me straight !!
Ten, if beauty was a weapon, then you could be used as a weapon of mass destruction,
Two, When I close my eyes to sleep, I don\'t dream anymore because my reality is better than whatever I could ever dream of,
You don\'t seem to fall in dearth of expression for your love !! That really amazing and have a great valentine :)
February 10th, 2022 07:24
14 reasons why,
L. B. Mek said:
\'then, you could be used
as a weapon of mass destruction\'..
(I imagine a youthful heart
messaging each line, one day at a time
and then appearing on valentine\'s day
to deliver the last line in person
\'how romcom cheesy and sweet
and all-things gloriously brave
about a budding love story\') lol
a wonderful read,
I can\'t help, but feel
Brian McKnight\'s \'Back at one\'
in your words
(and no, not just for the maths) lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 10th, 2022 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'then, you could be used
as a weapon of mass destruction\'..
(I imagine a youthful heart
messaging each line, one day at a time
and then appearing on valentine\'s day
to deliver the last line in person
\'how romcom cheesy and sweet
and all-things gloriously brave
about a budding love story\') lol
a wonderful read,
I can\'t help, but feel
Brian McKnight\'s \'Back at one\'
in your words
(and no, not just for the maths) lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 10th, 2022 05:52
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