Comments received on poems by Job Welime
Not another breakup poem.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Your expressions of love are always so admirably woven, dear writer. This offering here is just another one of those... Beautiful, sir!
November 5th, 2021 08:54
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Your expressions of love are always so admirably woven, dear writer. This offering here is just another one of those... Beautiful, sir!
November 5th, 2021 08:54
I love you 💘.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Your happiness is my favourite song\" - I mean... Watch me melt! #Flames!
November 3rd, 2021 05:00
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Your happiness is my favourite song\" - I mean... Watch me melt! #Flames!
November 3rd, 2021 05:00
I love you 💘.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Poet
What an impressive poem..!!
These lines hit me straight
\"because,I spell the word love as luv just so that I can see u in it,
I mean my heart is on the left but you still make all my insides feel right,\"
Keep Writing and sharing !!
November 3rd, 2021 02:22
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Poet
What an impressive poem..!!
These lines hit me straight
\"because,I spell the word love as luv just so that I can see u in it,
I mean my heart is on the left but you still make all my insides feel right,\"
Keep Writing and sharing !!
November 3rd, 2021 02:22
I love you 💘.
CuteCrescent said:
It really is something commendable. You just nailed this one!!
Hope you keep shining like this!!:)
November 3rd, 2021 01:46
CuteCrescent said:
It really is something commendable. You just nailed this one!!
Hope you keep shining like this!!:)
November 3rd, 2021 01:46
My bet
Caring dove said:
Another lovely poem .., especially like these words
I bet she hangs out with stars but her shine eclipses stars.’
I bet her doubts, her dreams, and her laughter are a mining site of precious stones, in fact, I bet her name rhymes with ruby.‘
October 29th, 2021 10:34
Caring dove said:
Another lovely poem .., especially like these words
I bet she hangs out with stars but her shine eclipses stars.’
I bet her doubts, her dreams, and her laughter are a mining site of precious stones, in fact, I bet her name rhymes with ruby.‘
October 29th, 2021 10:34
My girl
L. B. Mek said:
bars for days, thanks for sharing
\'Poets tell of paths, that cross
and stars, that align
mine is a beautiful accident\'
\'She\'s the backspace key
that deleted all my bad memories,\'
October 29th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
bars for days, thanks for sharing
\'Poets tell of paths, that cross
and stars, that align
mine is a beautiful accident\'
\'She\'s the backspace key
that deleted all my bad memories,\'
October 29th, 2021 06:31
Tell her,,
Caring dove said:
You have a lovely way with words 🙂 this is very nice !
October 28th, 2021 01:02
Caring dove said:
You have a lovely way with words 🙂 this is very nice !
October 28th, 2021 01:02
You
Caring dove said:
Very nice ! 🙂 sweet words . I like how you mention nature in your love for a girl ..,
October 26th, 2021 15:09
Caring dove said:
Very nice ! 🙂 sweet words . I like how you mention nature in your love for a girl ..,
October 26th, 2021 15:09
You
dusk arising said:
Wonderful expression of love. You have great poetry within you. Keep writing.
October 26th, 2021 14:50
dusk arising said:
Wonderful expression of love. You have great poetry within you. Keep writing.
October 26th, 2021 14:50
When I say I love you.
L. B. Mek said:
if you\'re not - yet
a slam poet
its only a matter of time and poetic maturity,
\'in my humble opinion\'
and if you haven\'t tried it yet, give it a go
read, out loud - these wonderful words of yours
see if you can find a supportive community, to cultivate and help your talent blossom!
forgive my overzealous nature, I only meant to encourage and support
don\'t let me inject that toxicity burden of expectancy, in your life
just, do you!
(thanks for choosing to share
its just wonderful to witness your poetry\'s growth
thanks for including us in your journey)
October 19th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
if you\'re not - yet
a slam poet
its only a matter of time and poetic maturity,
\'in my humble opinion\'
and if you haven\'t tried it yet, give it a go
read, out loud - these wonderful words of yours
see if you can find a supportive community, to cultivate and help your talent blossom!
forgive my overzealous nature, I only meant to encourage and support
don\'t let me inject that toxicity burden of expectancy, in your life
just, do you!
(thanks for choosing to share
its just wonderful to witness your poetry\'s growth
thanks for including us in your journey)
October 19th, 2021 05:53
Let me 🥰
L. B. Mek said:
nice, there\'s a maturity to the love you\'re depicting
more about Us, and less about that possessive mindset of
this is what I want/need from You..
thanks for sharing
and these lines exemplify that well:
\'Let us be,
pedestrians: with patience,
To fulfil our big dreams,
And I\'ll take your hand in mine,
And I\'ll walk, with you all the time,
Any where, any time,
only with you, because
You\'re the lyrics that I can never forget.
Each word has a meaning,
Each line rhymes,
And its the only tune that keeps playing in my mind,\'
September 28th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
nice, there\'s a maturity to the love you\'re depicting
more about Us, and less about that possessive mindset of
this is what I want/need from You..
thanks for sharing
and these lines exemplify that well:
\'Let us be,
pedestrians: with patience,
To fulfil our big dreams,
And I\'ll take your hand in mine,
And I\'ll walk, with you all the time,
Any where, any time,
only with you, because
You\'re the lyrics that I can never forget.
Each word has a meaning,
Each line rhymes,
And its the only tune that keeps playing in my mind,\'
September 28th, 2021 05:26
Nothing but love
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Job and welcome to M.P.S.
I am delighted to have caught your richly rhymed, exciting and very well crafted romantic poem.I look forward to reading more of your work.
August 19th, 2021 02:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Job and welcome to M.P.S.
I am delighted to have caught your richly rhymed, exciting and very well crafted romantic poem.I look forward to reading more of your work.
August 19th, 2021 02:33
Nothing but love
L. B. Mek said:
\'as the moon who stays
during her darkest nights,
It\'s always a pleasure to lend her time,
And even create her poems that rhyme,\'..
a wonderful depiction of romantic sincerity
and an eloquently worded dedication,
thanks for sharing
August 19th, 2021 02:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'as the moon who stays
during her darkest nights,
It\'s always a pleasure to lend her time,
And even create her poems that rhyme,\'..
a wonderful depiction of romantic sincerity
and an eloquently worded dedication,
thanks for sharing
August 19th, 2021 02:18
Nothing but love
The elder poet said:
I hope all your wants come true. A nice write . Thanks for sharing.
August 18th, 2021 11:46
The elder poet said:
I hope all your wants come true. A nice write . Thanks for sharing.
August 18th, 2021 11:46
My Crush
The elder poet said:
Through out our lives we find we have crushes. Mine was at 13 years of age. Later on my real crush came at a later dare. A true crush. One where I felt the same way that you wrote about. Very well written . Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:22
The elder poet said:
Through out our lives we find we have crushes. Mine was at 13 years of age. Later on my real crush came at a later dare. A true crush. One where I felt the same way that you wrote about. Very well written . Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:22
I\'m sorry
Lorna said:
This is very touching and haven\'t we all let slip a barrage of awfulness that we later regret. A very sincere apology.......
August 15th, 2021 05:08
Lorna said:
This is very touching and haven\'t we all let slip a barrage of awfulness that we later regret. A very sincere apology.......
August 15th, 2021 05:08
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