Comments received on poems by Job Welime
I want to love and be loved back.
Lei said:
how much I relate to this is kinda scary. But I hope you find a love like what you are searching for
April 8th, 2024 22:50
Lei said:
how much I relate to this is kinda scary. But I hope you find a love like what you are searching for
April 8th, 2024 22:50
All I need is love
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a beautifully written emotional piece Job,
Don\'t give up my friend, she\'ll come to you,
You deserve to be loved as love
March 19th, 2024 18:31
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a beautifully written emotional piece Job,
Don\'t give up my friend, she\'ll come to you,
You deserve to be loved as love
March 19th, 2024 18:31
Love like no other.
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 13th, 2024 23:06
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 13th, 2024 23:06
Love like no other.
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 11th, 2024 12:55
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 11th, 2024 12:55
Stranger than Fiction Love Story.
Accidental Poet said:
A very well penned poem Job. A love story for the ages. 🌹
March 9th, 2024 00:22
Accidental Poet said:
A very well penned poem Job. A love story for the ages. 🌹
March 9th, 2024 00:22
Stranger than Fiction Love Story.
Cassie58 said:
Lovely work. Beautiful poetic expression. I enjoyed reading your stanzas.
March 8th, 2024 23:21
Cassie58 said:
Lovely work. Beautiful poetic expression. I enjoyed reading your stanzas.
March 8th, 2024 23:21
To her with love
Bobby O said:
Sometimes it’s a style that is dictated by content and mood but other times it’s just easy to fall back on. I loved the content and the sentiment though I wonder if using the pronoun “I” so often served to impart Declaration of import or if shifting to another option hear and there might be considered. I’m gonna take a shot at the last paragraph honoring its intent without the redundancy of “I”
A building desire to love you in such a way that it’s supersedes eternity elevating my gift of love, almost reaching the stars and now they may bear witness as I share more of me with you.
For your consideration ….
December 15th, 2023 10:23
Bobby O said:
Sometimes it’s a style that is dictated by content and mood but other times it’s just easy to fall back on. I loved the content and the sentiment though I wonder if using the pronoun “I” so often served to impart Declaration of import or if shifting to another option hear and there might be considered. I’m gonna take a shot at the last paragraph honoring its intent without the redundancy of “I”
A building desire to love you in such a way that it’s supersedes eternity elevating my gift of love, almost reaching the stars and now they may bear witness as I share more of me with you.
For your consideration ….
December 15th, 2023 10:23
To her with love
BlessedbyGod said:
Beautiful poem my friend, she is one lucky lady to be loved like this
December 14th, 2023 12:01
BlessedbyGod said:
Beautiful poem my friend, she is one lucky lady to be loved like this
December 14th, 2023 12:01
It\'s bad
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sorry you are still feeling this my friend, you must not let it engulf you and define who you are,
Sometimes things like this happen but we must not let it win, don\'t lose faith Job, don\'t lose heart, keep pressing forward and trusting God, you will be ok
December 13th, 2023 09:31
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sorry you are still feeling this my friend, you must not let it engulf you and define who you are,
Sometimes things like this happen but we must not let it win, don\'t lose faith Job, don\'t lose heart, keep pressing forward and trusting God, you will be ok
December 13th, 2023 09:31
My prosetry
Accidental Poet said:
Very well written Job. You say you were never very good with words, but maybe you should reconsider that statement. 😉👍
December 9th, 2023 10:27
Accidental Poet said:
Very well written Job. You say you were never very good with words, but maybe you should reconsider that statement. 😉👍
December 9th, 2023 10:27
My prosetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Job and so very true in my life as well.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Job and so very true in my life as well.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:41
Another hurt.
Aleme Kao Gammo said:
a superb poem written with imagery words, thought provoking message.
December 6th, 2023 06:48
Aleme Kao Gammo said:
a superb poem written with imagery words, thought provoking message.
December 6th, 2023 06:48
If you can\'t be mine let me be yours.
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with confident power.
October 23rd, 2023 00:15
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with confident power.
October 23rd, 2023 00:15
Another hurt.
Thomas W Case said:
Profound and tragic. I hope writing brings peace. It can.
October 16th, 2023 01:12
Thomas W Case said:
Profound and tragic. I hope writing brings peace. It can.
October 16th, 2023 01:12
I\'m sad its over.
BlessedbyGod said:
Really Job! My friend you deserve so much happiness and love in your life,I pray that God delivers you a woman that deserves your love and devotion,
I\'m sorry that you are still going through this my friend
September 14th, 2023 18:56
BlessedbyGod said:
Really Job! My friend you deserve so much happiness and love in your life,I pray that God delivers you a woman that deserves your love and devotion,
I\'m sorry that you are still going through this my friend
September 14th, 2023 18:56
Words fail me.
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this one too my friend,
I\'m sorry that you had to experience heartache, but we can learn and grow from every experience, good or bad,
August 7th, 2023 14:36
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this one too my friend,
I\'m sorry that you had to experience heartache, but we can learn and grow from every experience, good or bad,
August 7th, 2023 14:36
My vow
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Job!!I love it, explains your love for this girl perfectly
August 7th, 2023 14:34
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Job!!I love it, explains your love for this girl perfectly
August 7th, 2023 14:34
My vow
L. B. Mek said:
\'I promise
to love you not only with words
but also repeated acts of devotion,
I promise
to treat you not as the temporary solution\'
efficacy of love\'s sincerity distilled
poetic
love this, dear poet
thank you!
July 31st, 2023 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'I promise
to love you not only with words
but also repeated acts of devotion,
I promise
to treat you not as the temporary solution\'
efficacy of love\'s sincerity distilled
poetic
love this, dear poet
thank you!
July 31st, 2023 06:05
The love that once was,,,
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! This is true from the heart and sadness expressed incredibly..
Loved this expression....
There\'s not one to love, pain has pulled me in it\'s embrace,tears have showered me with itself, I\'ve lost myself in darkness,
July 12th, 2023 01:02
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! This is true from the heart and sadness expressed incredibly..
Loved this expression....
There\'s not one to love, pain has pulled me in it\'s embrace,tears have showered me with itself, I\'ve lost myself in darkness,
July 12th, 2023 01:02
Words fail me.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hi Job,
That was a very touching and wrenching write...Can feel the pain and you have expressed it beautifully. Love, loss everything is exquisite in your words....
May you recover this loss soon...
July 12th, 2023 00:57
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hi Job,
That was a very touching and wrenching write...Can feel the pain and you have expressed it beautifully. Love, loss everything is exquisite in your words....
May you recover this loss soon...
July 12th, 2023 00:57
Words fail me.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This made my heart melt, especially the last stanza... That powerful refrain \"Why haven\'t I given enough?\" can\'t not be felt... A moving write. Respect.
July 11th, 2023 09:02
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This made my heart melt, especially the last stanza... That powerful refrain \"Why haven\'t I given enough?\" can\'t not be felt... A moving write. Respect.
July 11th, 2023 09:02
An attempt to tempt your heart.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem !
Love this line
Always remember this as my heartfelt attempt to tempt your heart.
You\'re my greenlight at a love highway,I dare not stop to love you,
Beautiful words ! ).. a green light at a love highway ..
July 11th, 2023 02:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem !
Love this line
Always remember this as my heartfelt attempt to tempt your heart.
You\'re my greenlight at a love highway,I dare not stop to love you,
Beautiful words ! ).. a green light at a love highway ..
July 11th, 2023 02:59
Words fail me.
L. B. Mek said:
no regrets, give it all we got
makes it easier later
when we\'re trying to move on..
(I so relate dear poet
thanks for sharing)
July 10th, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
no regrets, give it all we got
makes it easier later
when we\'re trying to move on..
(I so relate dear poet
thanks for sharing)
July 10th, 2023 04:52
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