Comments received on poems by Job Welime



My vow
BlessedbyGod said:

Looks like you’ve found your muse, you’re spark again my friend, so happy for u

December 30th, 2024 16:40

I will stick it through.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 27th, 2024 17:43

I will stick it through.
sorenbarrett said:

A poem, a pledge and vow that calls out to the other for faith and unity against all that rages. Very nicely rhymed and with great flow

December 27th, 2024 14:38

Your Love, My Everything.
sorenbarrett said:

I loved the format that you chose for this poem. The alternating two or three words with the next line of explanation worked well and your rhyme was well done.

December 24th, 2024 04:06

Where Eternity Resides.
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

December 23rd, 2024 13:19

Where Eternity Resides.
TobaniNataiella said:

Clearly a bit of a natural writer especially about love, enjoyed the read

December 23rd, 2024 04:51

Where Eternity Resides.
Caring dove said:

So beautiful ))

A lovely read

You have a good way with words

December 23rd, 2024 04:48

You Are My World
Caring dove said:

Very lovely ) nice writing 🙂

December 20th, 2024 02:47

You Are My World
TobaniNataiella said:

Who ever you are writing these for must be the happiest person around, another good declaration of love, enjoyed the read.

December 20th, 2024 01:57

We Will Rise
Tony36 said:

Love it

December 19th, 2024 10:27

We Will Rise
BlessedbyGod said:

Once again this is a beautiful piece

December 19th, 2024 04:24

We Will Rise
TobaniNataiella said:

Another beautiful read, i hope your love lasts as good as you write about it.

December 19th, 2024 04:07

We Will Rise
Caring dove said:

You write about love in such a nice way .. ))

Like the mention of nature and stars in this

Beautiful poem

December 19th, 2024 03:23

Bound in Triumph
BlessedbyGod said:

Very beautiful my friend ‘

December 18th, 2024 18:31

Bound in Triumph
arqios said:

The stream goth and beauty melded together in poetry.

December 18th, 2024 03:36

Bound in Triumph
TobaniNataiella said:

Beautifully written, i really enjoy reading your poetry, it is very well written.

December 18th, 2024 03:01

Bound in Triumph
Caring dove said:

Beautiful words

December 18th, 2024 02:39

Power of Love
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

December 17th, 2024 10:25

Power of Love
TobaniNataiella said:

A beautifully written poem, showing what real love be and involves, really enjoyed the read

December 17th, 2024 06:26

Power of Love
Caring dove said:

That’s beautiful 🙂 very nice way with words I liked the read

December 17th, 2024 02:03

Christian Rizz.
BlessedbyGod said:

Very nice Job!!!
Hope you found that special someone

November 5th, 2024 18:56


Strangers to Something.
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. Hard-hitting reality addressed too winsomely to effect. I love how beautifully you\'ve rendered our very common case on the worldwide web interface, more especially since having chatted with a colleague at work only hours ago about how he met his wife [whom he\'s now getting rid off, sadly]. Wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and aptly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.

October 26th, 2024 13:03

Without Pen and Paper
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 25th, 2024 09:39

Spellbinding Tale
sorenbarrett said:

Gratitude well expressed in a love letter

September 5th, 2024 10:51

Power of Love
sorenbarrett said:

Young expectations expressed in this poem a pledge to love. The youth comes through in the words and the exuberance of new love. Nicley done.

August 14th, 2024 06:38

I love you,I want you.
BlessedbyGod said:

Beautiful piece my friend , do I dare say that you’ve found love? If so , I’m so happy for you

August 12th, 2024 12:37

I love you,I want you.
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Beautiful write!!!!

August 12th, 2024 01:00

Next time love comes around!
ele said:

I love this omg :(

May 15th, 2024 10:35

I want to love and be loved back.
Lei said:

how much I relate to this is kinda scary. But I hope you find a love like what you are searching for

April 8th, 2024 22:50

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