I talk to the heavens about you
sorenbarrett said:

There is a pledge of loyalty in this poem that speaks of fidelity despite any obstacles. Nicely said

February 11th, 2026 04:38

I love you
sorenbarrett said:

Any poem that can take me from sceptic to believer, from doubter to converted on a trite and overused subject in free verse that poem deserves a fave and this one does.

February 10th, 2026 04:29

Love looks like this,,,
sorenbarrett said:

Life is built in the mundane and in the everyday nicely said

February 7th, 2026 14:16

My True North.
sorenbarrett said:

Love as a guiding star. Nicely written and poetic in metaphor. Well done

February 5th, 2026 04:51

I want to hold you
sorenbarrett said:

Gentle love expressed in this poem and it feels soft. Nicely said

February 3rd, 2026 04:20

I want to hold you
2781 said:

Add a good dose of commitment and it sets us free.

February 3rd, 2026 01:28

I want a love,,,,
sorenbarrett said:

Now days those are hard to come by being on back order, sold out and no longer in production. Those that have one hold on to them and don\'t trade them in. Well written and nicely worded it speaks to the unity of a relationship and devotion to each other. Well done

February 2nd, 2026 09:03

She is poetry.
Goddess of the Mist said:

Beautifully written ❤️

February 1st, 2026 10:39

Missing You.
sorenbarrett said:

A type of haunting of a most positive type where the image of the separated returns again and again and will not let the possessed be. A different type of love poem. Well done

January 31st, 2026 13:44

Maybe I was never asking for too much just asking the wrong person to hear me.
Friendship said:

This poem is exceptionally well-written. You are not isolated in your emotions. The world has undergone a significant transformation, with individuals becoming increasingly self-centered, and those you trust may exploit your vulnerabilities. Remain resilient, have faith in your inner voice, and rely solely on yourself. I have learned this through personal experience, and I offer you this advice, dear friend.

January 29th, 2026 08:36

I’m leaving with my dignity intact.
Friendship said:

Nicely done. Your poem revolves around self-empowerment and the realization of one\'s worth after a prolonged period of unreciprocated love.

January 28th, 2026 07:56

Enough with being delulu,,,
sorenbarrett said:

This seems a poem of reflection on past errors and a resolution to not make the same ones again. Nicely worded

January 26th, 2026 04:20

I didn’t lose you, I found myself.
Sakwa Franc said:

Nice piece wakwetu

January 24th, 2026 05:23

Your love came with,,,
sorenbarrett said:

Inspirational and a wonderful poem I loved its lines

January 23rd, 2026 05:04

What is meant for me will never miss me.
sorenbarrett said:

This soliloquy speaks wisdom and spits self dedication and knowledge. Very nicely said

January 22nd, 2026 04:26