Comments received on poems by Job Welime
Christian Rizz.
BlessedbyGod said:
Very nice Job!!!
Hope you found that special someone
November 5th, 2024 18:56
BlessedbyGod said:
Very nice Job!!!
Hope you found that special someone
November 5th, 2024 18:56
She wasn’t perfect but she was everything I had ever wanted.
Tony36 said:
Love it
November 4th, 2024 16:07
Tony36 said:
Love it
November 4th, 2024 16:07
Strangers to Something.
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Hard-hitting reality addressed too winsomely to effect. I love how beautifully you\'ve rendered our very common case on the worldwide web interface, more especially since having chatted with a colleague at work only hours ago about how he met his wife [whom he\'s now getting rid off, sadly]. Wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and aptly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 13:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Hard-hitting reality addressed too winsomely to effect. I love how beautifully you\'ve rendered our very common case on the worldwide web interface, more especially since having chatted with a colleague at work only hours ago about how he met his wife [whom he\'s now getting rid off, sadly]. Wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and aptly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 13:03
Spellbinding Tale
sorenbarrett said:
Gratitude well expressed in a love letter
September 5th, 2024 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
Gratitude well expressed in a love letter
September 5th, 2024 10:51
Power of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Young expectations expressed in this poem a pledge to love. The youth comes through in the words and the exuberance of new love. Nicley done.
August 14th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Young expectations expressed in this poem a pledge to love. The youth comes through in the words and the exuberance of new love. Nicley done.
August 14th, 2024 06:38
I love you,I want you.
BlessedbyGod said:
Beautiful piece my friend , do I dare say that you’ve found love? If so , I’m so happy for you
August 12th, 2024 12:37
BlessedbyGod said:
Beautiful piece my friend , do I dare say that you’ve found love? If so , I’m so happy for you
August 12th, 2024 12:37
I want to love and be loved back.
Lei said:
how much I relate to this is kinda scary. But I hope you find a love like what you are searching for
April 8th, 2024 22:50
Lei said:
how much I relate to this is kinda scary. But I hope you find a love like what you are searching for
April 8th, 2024 22:50
All I need is love
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a beautifully written emotional piece Job,
Don\'t give up my friend, she\'ll come to you,
You deserve to be loved as love
March 19th, 2024 18:31
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a beautifully written emotional piece Job,
Don\'t give up my friend, she\'ll come to you,
You deserve to be loved as love
March 19th, 2024 18:31
Love like no other.
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 13th, 2024 23:06
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 13th, 2024 23:06
Love like no other.
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 11th, 2024 12:55
Cassie58 said:
How beautiful is your poetic expression. A wonderful read. So well written. Have a lovely day.
March 11th, 2024 12:55
Stranger than Fiction Love Story.
Accidental Poet said:
A very well penned poem Job. A love story for the ages. 🌹
March 9th, 2024 00:22
Accidental Poet said:
A very well penned poem Job. A love story for the ages. 🌹
March 9th, 2024 00:22
Stranger than Fiction Love Story.
Cassie58 said:
Lovely work. Beautiful poetic expression. I enjoyed reading your stanzas.
March 8th, 2024 23:21
Cassie58 said:
Lovely work. Beautiful poetic expression. I enjoyed reading your stanzas.
March 8th, 2024 23:21
To her with love
Bobby O said:
Sometimes it’s a style that is dictated by content and mood but other times it’s just easy to fall back on. I loved the content and the sentiment though I wonder if using the pronoun “I” so often served to impart Declaration of import or if shifting to another option hear and there might be considered. I’m gonna take a shot at the last paragraph honoring its intent without the redundancy of “I”
A building desire to love you in such a way that it’s supersedes eternity elevating my gift of love, almost reaching the stars and now they may bear witness as I share more of me with you.
For your consideration ….
December 15th, 2023 10:23
Bobby O said:
Sometimes it’s a style that is dictated by content and mood but other times it’s just easy to fall back on. I loved the content and the sentiment though I wonder if using the pronoun “I” so often served to impart Declaration of import or if shifting to another option hear and there might be considered. I’m gonna take a shot at the last paragraph honoring its intent without the redundancy of “I”
A building desire to love you in such a way that it’s supersedes eternity elevating my gift of love, almost reaching the stars and now they may bear witness as I share more of me with you.
For your consideration ….
December 15th, 2023 10:23
To her with love
BlessedbyGod said:
Beautiful poem my friend, she is one lucky lady to be loved like this
December 14th, 2023 12:01
BlessedbyGod said:
Beautiful poem my friend, she is one lucky lady to be loved like this
December 14th, 2023 12:01
It\'s bad
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sorry you are still feeling this my friend, you must not let it engulf you and define who you are,
Sometimes things like this happen but we must not let it win, don\'t lose faith Job, don\'t lose heart, keep pressing forward and trusting God, you will be ok
December 13th, 2023 09:31
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sorry you are still feeling this my friend, you must not let it engulf you and define who you are,
Sometimes things like this happen but we must not let it win, don\'t lose faith Job, don\'t lose heart, keep pressing forward and trusting God, you will be ok
December 13th, 2023 09:31
My prosetry
Accidental Poet said:
Very well written Job. You say you were never very good with words, but maybe you should reconsider that statement. 😉👍
December 9th, 2023 10:27
Accidental Poet said:
Very well written Job. You say you were never very good with words, but maybe you should reconsider that statement. 😉👍
December 9th, 2023 10:27
My prosetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Job and so very true in my life as well.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Job and so very true in my life as well.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:41
Another hurt.
Aleme Kao Gammo said:
a superb poem written with imagery words, thought provoking message.
December 6th, 2023 06:48
Aleme Kao Gammo said:
a superb poem written with imagery words, thought provoking message.
December 6th, 2023 06:48
If you can\'t be mine let me be yours.
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with confident power.
October 23rd, 2023 00:15
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with confident power.
October 23rd, 2023 00:15
Another hurt.
Thomas W Case said:
Profound and tragic. I hope writing brings peace. It can.
October 16th, 2023 01:12
Thomas W Case said:
Profound and tragic. I hope writing brings peace. It can.
October 16th, 2023 01:12
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