Comments received on poems by Job Welime
Life – The Unscripted Stage
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how we play our part out on the world stage, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:45
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how we play our part out on the world stage, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:45
Life – The Unscripted Stage
sorenbarrett said:
A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage. Nicely written it flows well and conveys its message. Very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage. Nicely written it flows well and conveys its message. Very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:34
Forever Etched
Poetic Licence said:
An undying declaration of love, nicely expressed write
March 13th, 2025 06:42
Poetic Licence said:
An undying declaration of love, nicely expressed write
March 13th, 2025 06:42
Forever Etched
sorenbarrett said:
This is a pledge of love where comparisons are made as to the importance of the other and all set in poetic form. Nicely done
March 13th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This is a pledge of love where comparisons are made as to the importance of the other and all set in poetic form. Nicely done
March 13th, 2025 04:00
If love meant surrender.
Poetic Licence said:
You certainly know how to write a love poem, another well expressed and very enjoyable read
February 19th, 2025 08:45
Poetic Licence said:
You certainly know how to write a love poem, another well expressed and very enjoyable read
February 19th, 2025 08:45
If love meant surrender.
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful love poetry. A delight to read. Fine imagery and your lines are heartfelt. Good job. Have a lovely Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:00
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful love poetry. A delight to read. Fine imagery and your lines are heartfelt. Good job. Have a lovely Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:00
If love meant surrender.
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept, the meter, the very words as you hypnotically convince me that love is a type of surrender. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept, the meter, the very words as you hypnotically convince me that love is a type of surrender. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 07:05
Atlas of my Heart
BlessedbyGod said:
Still love your work Job , great job my friend
February 14th, 2025 20:08
BlessedbyGod said:
Still love your work Job , great job my friend
February 14th, 2025 20:08
Atlas of my Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice allegories in this piece so appropriate for today on Valentines. A most romantic write.
February 14th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice allegories in this piece so appropriate for today on Valentines. A most romantic write.
February 14th, 2025 05:47
Atlas of my Heart
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and creative piece of very enjoyable poetry
February 14th, 2025 03:39
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and creative piece of very enjoyable poetry
February 14th, 2025 03:39
Love
sorenbarrett said:
I was struck by the authenticity of the poem and it has a really great line (We patch up wounds with borrowed time) brilliant!!
February 7th, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
I was struck by the authenticity of the poem and it has a really great line (We patch up wounds with borrowed time) brilliant!!
February 7th, 2025 16:16
Her Beauty
Poetic Licence said:
Her beauty encompassed beautifully in the beauty of the poem, really enjoyed the read.
February 6th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
Her beauty encompassed beautifully in the beauty of the poem, really enjoyed the read.
February 6th, 2025 05:31
My vow
BlessedbyGod said:
Looks like you’ve found your muse, you’re spark again my friend, so happy for u
December 30th, 2024 16:40
BlessedbyGod said:
Looks like you’ve found your muse, you’re spark again my friend, so happy for u
December 30th, 2024 16:40
I will stick it through.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem, a pledge and vow that calls out to the other for faith and unity against all that rages. Very nicely rhymed and with great flow
December 27th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem, a pledge and vow that calls out to the other for faith and unity against all that rages. Very nicely rhymed and with great flow
December 27th, 2024 14:38
Your Love, My Everything.
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format that you chose for this poem. The alternating two or three words with the next line of explanation worked well and your rhyme was well done.
December 24th, 2024 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format that you chose for this poem. The alternating two or three words with the next line of explanation worked well and your rhyme was well done.
December 24th, 2024 04:06
Where Eternity Resides.
Poetic Licence said:
Clearly a bit of a natural writer especially about love, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
Clearly a bit of a natural writer especially about love, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 04:51
Where Eternity Resides.
Caring dove said:
So beautiful ))
A lovely read
You have a good way with words
December 23rd, 2024 04:48
Caring dove said:
So beautiful ))
A lovely read
You have a good way with words
December 23rd, 2024 04:48
You Are My World
Poetic Licence said:
Who ever you are writing these for must be the happiest person around, another good declaration of love, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 01:57
Poetic Licence said:
Who ever you are writing these for must be the happiest person around, another good declaration of love, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 01:57
We Will Rise
Poetic Licence said:
Another beautiful read, i hope your love lasts as good as you write about it.
December 19th, 2024 04:07
Poetic Licence said:
Another beautiful read, i hope your love lasts as good as you write about it.
December 19th, 2024 04:07
We Will Rise
Caring dove said:
You write about love in such a nice way .. ))
Like the mention of nature and stars in this
Beautiful poem
December 19th, 2024 03:23
Caring dove said:
You write about love in such a nice way .. ))
Like the mention of nature and stars in this
Beautiful poem
December 19th, 2024 03:23
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