Comments received on poems by Job Welime
Nobody but You
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hi Job, the Lucky one...She has all the words at her feet, to the one who admires her in every possible way he can express....Amazing lines..
\"You fix your makeup like the universe needs approval to keep spinning, Like beauty was something you had to fight for.
But don’t you know? Galaxies collapse trying to imitate your smile!\"
September 23rd, 2025 13:06
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hi Job, the Lucky one...She has all the words at her feet, to the one who admires her in every possible way he can express....Amazing lines..
\"You fix your makeup like the universe needs approval to keep spinning, Like beauty was something you had to fight for.
But don’t you know? Galaxies collapse trying to imitate your smile!\"
September 23rd, 2025 13:06
“Bent, Not Broken”
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hi Job, missed your poems... Lovely and heart touching as usual....How you are doing my friend... ?
September 23rd, 2025 13:03
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hi Job, missed your poems... Lovely and heart touching as usual....How you are doing my friend... ?
September 23rd, 2025 13:03
The woman I love.
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely tribute to a woman loved and in a poem honored. Lovely
September 19th, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely tribute to a woman loved and in a poem honored. Lovely
September 19th, 2025 05:26
Grammar of Us.
Fred1794 said:
Lovely wordplay. Reminds me of the lyrics of John Linnell - I hope you do not mind a comparison.
Simple and effective, very clever.
September 16th, 2025 12:19
Fred1794 said:
Lovely wordplay. Reminds me of the lyrics of John Linnell - I hope you do not mind a comparison.
Simple and effective, very clever.
September 16th, 2025 12:19
Grammar of Us.
sorenbarrett said:
Like math, grammar is something I am no good at but find intriguing and most interesting. Here you lay out love a most ambiguous word in a gramatical poem and I adore it. A wonderful write
September 16th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Like math, grammar is something I am no good at but find intriguing and most interesting. Here you lay out love a most ambiguous word in a gramatical poem and I adore it. A wonderful write
September 16th, 2025 07:58
Change is hard.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that takes a unique view of what our existence is (we are just stories) each book can be closed at any time a story without an ending. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that takes a unique view of what our existence is (we are just stories) each book can be closed at any time a story without an ending. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 04:05
Nobody but You
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some wonderful charming lines, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:14
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some wonderful charming lines, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:14
Nobody but You
sorenbarrett said:
Full of gracious and magnanimous compliments this poem oozes with charm one line after the next. Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Full of gracious and magnanimous compliments this poem oozes with charm one line after the next. Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 04:27
“Bent, Not Broken”
NafisaSB said:
this one is a cry straight from the heart, and i hope it\'s answered with equal love and fervor
July 7th, 2025 23:29
NafisaSB said:
this one is a cry straight from the heart, and i hope it\'s answered with equal love and fervor
July 7th, 2025 23:29
Dial A Tone.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad call of loss and now coming to terms with it. A sense of melancholy in this piece. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A sad call of loss and now coming to terms with it. A sense of melancholy in this piece. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 08:37
“Bent, Not Broken”
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
“Bent, Not Broken”
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
“Bent, Not Broken”
Bragee said:
Wow just wow!
I’m sure this is something that almost all of us have been and this is the type of writing that can inspire and motivate. Definitely hit a soft spot in my heart.
July 2nd, 2025 11:17
Bragee said:
Wow just wow!
I’m sure this is something that almost all of us have been and this is the type of writing that can inspire and motivate. Definitely hit a soft spot in my heart.
July 2nd, 2025 11:17
“Bent, Not Broken”
Caring dove said:
You express yourself nicely in your poems .
I really liked reading this ))
July 2nd, 2025 09:16
Caring dove said:
You express yourself nicely in your poems .
I really liked reading this ))
July 2nd, 2025 09:16
“Bent, Not Broken”
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and from the heart this poem asks for honest communication to rebuild a relationship that is bent not broken. Very nice
July 2nd, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and from the heart this poem asks for honest communication to rebuild a relationship that is bent not broken. Very nice
July 2nd, 2025 07:23
“Bent, Not Broken”
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the desire to fix a relationship, lovely lines, enjoyed the read, good to see you back
July 2nd, 2025 06:32
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the desire to fix a relationship, lovely lines, enjoyed the read, good to see you back
July 2nd, 2025 06:32
Life – The Unscripted Stage
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how we play our part out on the world stage, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:45
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how we play our part out on the world stage, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:45
Life – The Unscripted Stage
sorenbarrett said:
A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage. Nicely written it flows well and conveys its message. Very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage. Nicely written it flows well and conveys its message. Very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:34
Forever Etched
Poetic Licence said:
An undying declaration of love, nicely expressed write
March 13th, 2025 06:42
Poetic Licence said:
An undying declaration of love, nicely expressed write
March 13th, 2025 06:42
Forever Etched
sorenbarrett said:
This is a pledge of love where comparisons are made as to the importance of the other and all set in poetic form. Nicely done
March 13th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This is a pledge of love where comparisons are made as to the importance of the other and all set in poetic form. Nicely done
March 13th, 2025 04:00
If love meant surrender.
Poetic Licence said:
You certainly know how to write a love poem, another well expressed and very enjoyable read
February 19th, 2025 08:45
Poetic Licence said:
You certainly know how to write a love poem, another well expressed and very enjoyable read
February 19th, 2025 08:45
If love meant surrender.
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful love poetry. A delight to read. Fine imagery and your lines are heartfelt. Good job. Have a lovely Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:00
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful love poetry. A delight to read. Fine imagery and your lines are heartfelt. Good job. Have a lovely Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:00
If love meant surrender.
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept, the meter, the very words as you hypnotically convince me that love is a type of surrender. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept, the meter, the very words as you hypnotically convince me that love is a type of surrender. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 07:05
Atlas of my Heart
BlessedbyGod said:
Still love your work Job , great job my friend
February 14th, 2025 20:08
BlessedbyGod said:
Still love your work Job , great job my friend
February 14th, 2025 20:08
Atlas of my Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice allegories in this piece so appropriate for today on Valentines. A most romantic write.
February 14th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice allegories in this piece so appropriate for today on Valentines. A most romantic write.
February 14th, 2025 05:47
Atlas of my Heart
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and creative piece of very enjoyable poetry
February 14th, 2025 03:39
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and creative piece of very enjoyable poetry
February 14th, 2025 03:39
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