Comments received on poems by Job Welime
Change is hard.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that takes a unique view of what our existence is (we are just stories) each book can be closed at any time a story without an ending. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely poem that takes a unique view of what our existence is (we are just stories) each book can be closed at any time a story without an ending. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 04:05
Nobody but You
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some wonderful charming lines, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:14
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, some wonderful charming lines, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:14
Nobody but You
sorenbarrett said:
Full of gracious and magnanimous compliments this poem oozes with charm one line after the next. Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Full of gracious and magnanimous compliments this poem oozes with charm one line after the next. Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 04:27
“Bent, Not Broken”
NafisaSB said:
this one is a cry straight from the heart, and i hope it\'s answered with equal love and fervor
July 7th, 2025 23:29
NafisaSB said:
this one is a cry straight from the heart, and i hope it\'s answered with equal love and fervor
July 7th, 2025 23:29
Dial A Tone.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad call of loss and now coming to terms with it. A sense of melancholy in this piece. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A sad call of loss and now coming to terms with it. A sense of melancholy in this piece. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 08:37
“Bent, Not Broken”
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
“Bent, Not Broken”
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
BlessedbyGod said:
This is a great piece my friend , it’s definitely another perspective of looking at things ,
We are never truly broken , only bent
July 2nd, 2025 16:23
“Bent, Not Broken”
Bragee said:
Wow just wow!
I’m sure this is something that almost all of us have been and this is the type of writing that can inspire and motivate. Definitely hit a soft spot in my heart.
July 2nd, 2025 11:17
Bragee said:
Wow just wow!
I’m sure this is something that almost all of us have been and this is the type of writing that can inspire and motivate. Definitely hit a soft spot in my heart.
July 2nd, 2025 11:17
“Bent, Not Broken”
Caring dove said:
You express yourself nicely in your poems .
I really liked reading this ))
July 2nd, 2025 09:16
Caring dove said:
You express yourself nicely in your poems .
I really liked reading this ))
July 2nd, 2025 09:16
“Bent, Not Broken”
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and from the heart this poem asks for honest communication to rebuild a relationship that is bent not broken. Very nice
July 2nd, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and from the heart this poem asks for honest communication to rebuild a relationship that is bent not broken. Very nice
July 2nd, 2025 07:23
“Bent, Not Broken”
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the desire to fix a relationship, lovely lines, enjoyed the read, good to see you back
July 2nd, 2025 06:32
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the desire to fix a relationship, lovely lines, enjoyed the read, good to see you back
July 2nd, 2025 06:32
Life – The Unscripted Stage
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how we play our part out on the world stage, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:45
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how we play our part out on the world stage, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:45
Life – The Unscripted Stage
sorenbarrett said:
A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage. Nicely written it flows well and conveys its message. Very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage. Nicely written it flows well and conveys its message. Very nice
March 19th, 2025 03:34
Forever Etched
Poetic Licence said:
An undying declaration of love, nicely expressed write
March 13th, 2025 06:42
Poetic Licence said:
An undying declaration of love, nicely expressed write
March 13th, 2025 06:42
Forever Etched
sorenbarrett said:
This is a pledge of love where comparisons are made as to the importance of the other and all set in poetic form. Nicely done
March 13th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This is a pledge of love where comparisons are made as to the importance of the other and all set in poetic form. Nicely done
March 13th, 2025 04:00
If love meant surrender.
Poetic Licence said:
You certainly know how to write a love poem, another well expressed and very enjoyable read
February 19th, 2025 08:45
Poetic Licence said:
You certainly know how to write a love poem, another well expressed and very enjoyable read
February 19th, 2025 08:45
If love meant surrender.
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful love poetry. A delight to read. Fine imagery and your lines are heartfelt. Good job. Have a lovely Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:00
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful love poetry. A delight to read. Fine imagery and your lines are heartfelt. Good job. Have a lovely Wednesday.
February 19th, 2025 08:00
If love meant surrender.
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept, the meter, the very words as you hypnotically convince me that love is a type of surrender. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept, the meter, the very words as you hypnotically convince me that love is a type of surrender. Nicely written
February 19th, 2025 07:05
Atlas of my Heart
BlessedbyGod said:
Still love your work Job , great job my friend
February 14th, 2025 20:08
BlessedbyGod said:
Still love your work Job , great job my friend
February 14th, 2025 20:08
Atlas of my Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice allegories in this piece so appropriate for today on Valentines. A most romantic write.
February 14th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice allegories in this piece so appropriate for today on Valentines. A most romantic write.
February 14th, 2025 05:47
Atlas of my Heart
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and creative piece of very enjoyable poetry
February 14th, 2025 03:39
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and creative piece of very enjoyable poetry
February 14th, 2025 03:39
Love
sorenbarrett said:
I was struck by the authenticity of the poem and it has a really great line (We patch up wounds with borrowed time) brilliant!!
February 7th, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
I was struck by the authenticity of the poem and it has a really great line (We patch up wounds with borrowed time) brilliant!!
February 7th, 2025 16:16
Her Beauty
Poetic Licence said:
Her beauty encompassed beautifully in the beauty of the poem, really enjoyed the read.
February 6th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
Her beauty encompassed beautifully in the beauty of the poem, really enjoyed the read.
February 6th, 2025 05:31
My vow
BlessedbyGod said:
Looks like you’ve found your muse, you’re spark again my friend, so happy for u
December 30th, 2024 16:40
BlessedbyGod said:
Looks like you’ve found your muse, you’re spark again my friend, so happy for u
December 30th, 2024 16:40
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