Comments received on poems by Job Welime



Why I love herπŸ₯°
Vamsi Sudha said:

Hey Job !! One more fantastic one from you ..
Like these lines from...
If I could I would write her songs in the air.......from dimples to wrinkles..
Sky is the limit of your imagination and yes its no wonder beautiful....


November 27th, 2021 13:17

Why I love herπŸ₯°
Lorna said:

I hope she gets to read this.... perfectly lovely.....

November 27th, 2021 12:40

Why I love herπŸ₯°
Paul Bell said:

I\'m thinking you like this girl.
Actually, I think you love this girl.

November 27th, 2021 05:32

Why I love herπŸ₯°
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

November 27th, 2021 05:31

I Confess.
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing, dear poet
I couldn\'t help but compare and liken
your style, (however modern)
to the great, love poet: Edmund Spencer
you may enjoy reading some of his poems
I especially like a poem of his titled, \'sonnet 75\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-27972 )


November 16th, 2021 06:12

I Confess.
Vamsi Sudha said:

Oh My God !! what a gush of feelings and your expression leaves me at awe !! Lovely poem...!!!

November 16th, 2021 04:31

All Love
L. B. Mek said:

\'When your laugh, moved me
when your smile, outlined
my happiness
*with magnetic, chemistry*
when I inhaled, your exhale
it was all: love
*draped, in our heartfelt sincerity*\'..
simply beautifully expressed, once again
(please
forgive me, for tampering with your artistry!
consider it, the foolish actions of my overzealous enthusiasm
for your poetry)

November 15th, 2021 07:18

Beautiful you,,
SureshG said:

Glad to know there is beauty in your life. As is there beauty in your words.

November 14th, 2021 20:19

Beautiful you,,
Vamsi Sudha said:

Your Poetry on Love Rocks !! Its time you get a book on it soon !! Give it a thought , would help many people in love :)

November 14th, 2021 02:44

Beautiful you,,
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sweet words πŸ™‚

November 13th, 2021 12:34

I\'m thinking about you.
Vamsi Sudha said:

This is an awesome framing of words..
If the thread is in your heart,Then it\'s sure my kite is upon your sky,,,
You have an eye to express love so beautifully....Lucky one she is altogether. ..:)



November 12th, 2021 05:49

I\'m thinking about you.
L. B. Mek said:

\'While reading the phrases
you can find, A part of me
that lies: within the rhymes\'
loved these lines!
thanks for sharing, reads like lyrics to an 80\'s love ballad

November 12th, 2021 05:42

My poem for you.
Vamsi Sudha said:

A unique way of expression of Love !! Loved your similes.
TikTok was funny and cute.
Liked this line ..
I want to write it in braille, because love is blind,
Keep writing !!!

November 11th, 2021 13:19

You\'re my everything
Vamsi Sudha said:

Job !! your poems are heart touching. You truly feel your heart out in your poetries...!!! Beautiful one indeed.

November 11th, 2021 13:10

You\'re my everything
Job Welime said:

Thank you, dear friend,its also my prayer,it lasts forever.

November 11th, 2021 02:10

You\'re my everything
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love be forever with you.

Andy

November 11th, 2021 02:03

My poem for you.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Your quirky use of humor never ceases to impress me! - Stunning!

November 9th, 2021 14:07

Not another breakup poem.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Your expressions of love are always so admirably woven, dear writer. This offering here is just another one of those... Beautiful, sir!

November 5th, 2021 08:54

I love you πŸ’˜.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

\"Your happiness is my favourite song\" - I mean... Watch me melt! #Flames!

November 3rd, 2021 05:00

I love you πŸ’˜.
Vamsi Sudha said:

Hey Poet
What an impressive poem..!!
These lines hit me straight
\"because,I spell the word love as luv just so that I can see u in it,

I mean my heart is on the left but you still make all my insides feel right,\"

Keep Writing and sharing !!

November 3rd, 2021 02:22

I love you πŸ’˜.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Job.

Andy

November 3rd, 2021 01:53

I love you πŸ’˜.
CuteCrescent said:

It really is something commendable. You just nailed this one!!
Hope you keep shining like this!!:)

November 3rd, 2021 01:46

my new found love.
CuteCrescent said:

it is really wonderful!! :)

November 2nd, 2021 08:40

My bet
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Another lovely poem .., especially like these words

I bet she hangs out with stars but her shine eclipses stars.’

I bet her doubts, her dreams, and her laughter are a mining site of precious stones, in fact, I bet her name rhymes with ruby.β€˜





October 29th, 2021 10:34

My girl
L. B. Mek said:

bars for days, thanks for sharing
\'Poets tell of paths, that cross
and stars, that align
mine is a beautiful accident\'

\'She\'s the backspace key
that deleted all my bad memories,\'

October 29th, 2021 06:31

My girl
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I like your words ! Lovely poem πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

October 29th, 2021 04:58

Tell her,,
L. B. Mek said:

again, just a wonderful read
thanks for sharing

October 28th, 2021 04:02

Tell her,,
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

You have a lovely way with words πŸ™‚ this is very nice !

October 28th, 2021 01:02

You
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Very nice ! πŸ™‚ sweet words . I like how you mention nature in your love for a girl ..,

October 26th, 2021 15:09

You
dusk arising said:

Wonderful expression of love. You have great poetry within you. Keep writing.

October 26th, 2021 14:50

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