Comments received on poems by Job Welime
You only you,
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! You seem to be on a roll !!
Lovely lines
Say you love me and see words written in unique prose, expressions coated with candy sucrose emotions conveyed from a higher dimension,
Expressions seems to be flowing out, get them on paper soon.. :)
April 8th, 2022 02:17
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Job !! You seem to be on a roll !!
Lovely lines
Say you love me and see words written in unique prose, expressions coated with candy sucrose emotions conveyed from a higher dimension,
Expressions seems to be flowing out, get them on paper soon.. :)
April 8th, 2022 02:17
Lord I pray.
Dahlia said:
such a beautiful wholehearted prayer
AMEN to it......Dahlia
April 7th, 2022 14:03
Dahlia said:
such a beautiful wholehearted prayer
AMEN to it......Dahlia
April 7th, 2022 14:03
This love
Vamsi Sudha said:
Warm feeling of Love vibes...
Liked these lines..
As I age,I don\'t want my feelings to change,
Because you\'re my beautiful night sky filled with stars, beautiful with all your scars,
This love,I want to tell the moon about it,
I want the sun to witness it,
I want all the stars to be amazed by it.
Great one.Job.......:)
April 6th, 2022 07:43
Vamsi Sudha said:
Warm feeling of Love vibes...
Liked these lines..
As I age,I don\'t want my feelings to change,
Because you\'re my beautiful night sky filled with stars, beautiful with all your scars,
This love,I want to tell the moon about it,
I want the sun to witness it,
I want all the stars to be amazed by it.
Great one.Job.......:)
April 6th, 2022 07:43
This love
Crowns4Christ said:
So beautiful Job, I\'m very happy for you my friend
April 6th, 2022 02:58
Crowns4Christ said:
So beautiful Job, I\'m very happy for you my friend
April 6th, 2022 02:58
This love
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure the sun, moon and stars know about your love and forever will know.
Andy
April 6th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure the sun, moon and stars know about your love and forever will know.
Andy
April 6th, 2022 01:49
Beautiful things.
Crowns4Christ said:
You always write from your heart, that\'s a great thing to do, keep it up Job, you\'re very talented
April 5th, 2022 13:27
Crowns4Christ said:
You always write from your heart, that\'s a great thing to do, keep it up Job, you\'re very talented
April 5th, 2022 13:27
Beautiful things.
L. B. Mek said:
another wonderful write, dear poet
but I think this line, needs a little clarification/refinement:
\'When a person who only heard of \'I like you\' finally gets to hear \'I\'m yours\'
(some readers, may not realise
the \'I like you\', as being one voice
and the \'I\'m yours\', as being their partners..)
maybe something like:
\'When a person whose gotten used
to his own voices \'I like you\', never being replied to
one day, hearing that blissful reply of \'I\'m yours\'
from the lips, of the one they cherish
most...\'
(just my 2 cents, worth
dear poet
if you disagree, please ignore
and know
that I apologise in advance
if you deem my reply, disrespectful
to your art, in any way)
April 5th, 2022 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
another wonderful write, dear poet
but I think this line, needs a little clarification/refinement:
\'When a person who only heard of \'I like you\' finally gets to hear \'I\'m yours\'
(some readers, may not realise
the \'I like you\', as being one voice
and the \'I\'m yours\', as being their partners..)
maybe something like:
\'When a person whose gotten used
to his own voices \'I like you\', never being replied to
one day, hearing that blissful reply of \'I\'m yours\'
from the lips, of the one they cherish
most...\'
(just my 2 cents, worth
dear poet
if you disagree, please ignore
and know
that I apologise in advance
if you deem my reply, disrespectful
to your art, in any way)
April 5th, 2022 04:41
To my creator.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen, indeed
a beautiful worded prayer
worded so poetic, like
those wonderfully diverse Psalms
inked by so many differing minds...
(even devoid of theological, alignment
we can all appreciate, their fantastical artistry)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
Amen, indeed
a beautiful worded prayer
worded so poetic, like
those wonderfully diverse Psalms
inked by so many differing minds...
(even devoid of theological, alignment
we can all appreciate, their fantastical artistry)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 06:26
I\'m gifted
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
\'I swear she has built a life, that makes me smile even in the simplest of moments,
Every choice I make, feels lighter, because together we interpret life from a lens of optimism,each passing day we orient ourselves into a joy filled buffet kind of world,
With her, I find love in all aspects of life;\'
April 4th, 2022 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
\'I swear she has built a life, that makes me smile even in the simplest of moments,
Every choice I make, feels lighter, because together we interpret life from a lens of optimism,each passing day we orient ourselves into a joy filled buffet kind of world,
With her, I find love in all aspects of life;\'
April 4th, 2022 04:30
I\'m gifted
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love filled words Job, I feel the same.
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love filled words Job, I feel the same.
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:40
I\'m gifted
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! Love seems to bloom in your life again. That\'s awesome and glad to see your muse again. Good one ..:)
April 4th, 2022 00:22
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Job !! Love seems to bloom in your life again. That\'s awesome and glad to see your muse again. Good one ..:)
April 4th, 2022 00:22
I\'m gifted
Crowns4Christ said:
Welcome back, sounds like love Job,I\'m happy for you
April 3rd, 2022 23:18
Crowns4Christ said:
Welcome back, sounds like love Job,I\'m happy for you
April 3rd, 2022 23:18
Show me
Crowns4Christ said:
Different style than usual but I like it,a big statement for such few words
March 22nd, 2022 20:23
Crowns4Christ said:
Different style than usual but I like it,a big statement for such few words
March 22nd, 2022 20:23
Show me
Vamsi Sudha said:
A different angle of your poetry. Loved it ....Job !!
March 22nd, 2022 13:08
Vamsi Sudha said:
A different angle of your poetry. Loved it ....Job !!
March 22nd, 2022 13:08
Show me
L. B. Mek said:
oh clever, aesthetic imagery
of your Poetry, enhancing
that mountain climb of escape
your words, depict
(read it from bottom line up)
I would suggest
layering the poem on top of itself
so others can grasp it easier, like:
\'And for once just be real with you.
For me to escape myself,
I need a back door,
Show me,
Show me,
I need a back door,
For me to escape myself,
And for once just be real with you.\'
..
(a great shorty!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
March 22nd, 2022 07:44
L. B. Mek said:
oh clever, aesthetic imagery
of your Poetry, enhancing
that mountain climb of escape
your words, depict
(read it from bottom line up)
I would suggest
layering the poem on top of itself
so others can grasp it easier, like:
\'And for once just be real with you.
For me to escape myself,
I need a back door,
Show me,
Show me,
I need a back door,
For me to escape myself,
And for once just be real with you.\'
..
(a great shorty!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
March 22nd, 2022 07:44
I want you
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m listening to colours, walking in clouds,
My undeniable connection,
Friendship formed from the scars\'
(beautifully worded, such a poignant portrayal
of bruised heart\'s joining, to ease
each others suffering)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 15th, 2022 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m listening to colours, walking in clouds,
My undeniable connection,
Friendship formed from the scars\'
(beautifully worded, such a poignant portrayal
of bruised heart\'s joining, to ease
each others suffering)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 15th, 2022 06:41
My luck.
Rocky Lagou said:
What a fine presentation! This was so heartfelt and original and the whole flower analogy was so fitting for the theme. Well done! 💖
March 14th, 2022 13:07
Rocky Lagou said:
What a fine presentation! This was so heartfelt and original and the whole flower analogy was so fitting for the theme. Well done! 💖
March 14th, 2022 13:07
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