Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
I Envy
L. B. Mek said:
the truly absurd fact, is when you eventually get to realise
those very same \'aspects\' of existence, you envy
are looking back at you
envying, your sentient capacity
to communicate: your envy...
\'before we search for the bandages
to cover our inadequacies,
we must realise, our capacity to self correct
is that essential asset, we need to appreciate: Most!\'
(thanks for sharing,
an interesting subject)
October 18th, 2021 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
the truly absurd fact, is when you eventually get to realise
those very same \'aspects\' of existence, you envy
are looking back at you
envying, your sentient capacity
to communicate: your envy...
\'before we search for the bandages
to cover our inadequacies,
we must realise, our capacity to self correct
is that essential asset, we need to appreciate: Most!\'
(thanks for sharing,
an interesting subject)
October 18th, 2021 07:26
Withering
Paul Bell said:
The great thing these days is the people with great advice you never asked for. Sometimes a sledgehammer is the tool required to get your point over. People tend to take notice when a sledgehammer is pulled from the holster. Plus, it makes you smile just that little bit more.
October 17th, 2021 08:18
Paul Bell said:
The great thing these days is the people with great advice you never asked for. Sometimes a sledgehammer is the tool required to get your point over. People tend to take notice when a sledgehammer is pulled from the holster. Plus, it makes you smile just that little bit more.
October 17th, 2021 08:18
Rewind
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, that connectivity should be there for us all and all will be wonderful in our lives.
Andy
October 17th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, that connectivity should be there for us all and all will be wonderful in our lives.
Andy
October 17th, 2021 00:21
A new faith, a new vigour
Paul Bell said:
I think humans spend so much time searching faith, not realising it\'s within them. In saying that, humans have been searching since day dot.
October 16th, 2021 03:35
Paul Bell said:
I think humans spend so much time searching faith, not realising it\'s within them. In saying that, humans have been searching since day dot.
October 16th, 2021 03:35
A new faith, a new vigour
spilleronsheet said:
There sure is
But I am still in process
And the process never stops
Maybe it shall rest
Only when laying in the grave
I believe we shall always amend and make new faiths and discard the old ones that hold us behind
October 15th, 2021 09:03
spilleronsheet said:
There sure is
But I am still in process
And the process never stops
Maybe it shall rest
Only when laying in the grave
I believe we shall always amend and make new faiths and discard the old ones that hold us behind
October 15th, 2021 09:03
A new faith, a new vigour
Nicky Byrd said:
I liked this one a lot, was there any inspiration to it?
October 15th, 2021 08:29
Nicky Byrd said:
I liked this one a lot, was there any inspiration to it?
October 15th, 2021 08:29
Lost belonging
L. B. Mek said:
although it still has more potential for refinement, this is a wonderful read..
and its timeless message is one that offers both insight, and a subtle suggestion to a hopeful path,
(Time, in all we\'ve lost
where we may, reclaim
that, which they stole
in the guise of care..)
love these lines:
\'those, were the words
heard outside
to the lost
innocence, holding inside
how to enjoy,
the worldly pleasures?
the mind
seems chaotic inside
wondering about uncertainties in life
to the lost
happiness, without reason
why it chose the reasonable wisdom, to be only saddened
with grief
what seems good in growing up
what seems empowered
to hold papers, papers in green
stuffed in pocket inside
alas, it can’t buy
the lost time\'
(thanks for sharing
you have wonderful style and a strong poetic voice,
I look forward to reading more of your work)
October 15th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
although it still has more potential for refinement, this is a wonderful read..
and its timeless message is one that offers both insight, and a subtle suggestion to a hopeful path,
(Time, in all we\'ve lost
where we may, reclaim
that, which they stole
in the guise of care..)
love these lines:
\'those, were the words
heard outside
to the lost
innocence, holding inside
how to enjoy,
the worldly pleasures?
the mind
seems chaotic inside
wondering about uncertainties in life
to the lost
happiness, without reason
why it chose the reasonable wisdom, to be only saddened
with grief
what seems good in growing up
what seems empowered
to hold papers, papers in green
stuffed in pocket inside
alas, it can’t buy
the lost time\'
(thanks for sharing
you have wonderful style and a strong poetic voice,
I look forward to reading more of your work)
October 15th, 2021 04:30
What matters
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams becoem reality in your life.
Andy
October 15th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams becoem reality in your life.
Andy
October 15th, 2021 00:44
What matters
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words I couldn\'t help thinking of the song \'Crazy\' by Seal
whose lyrics include:
\'Miracles will happen as we trip
But we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We get a little crazy
No we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We are a little crazy\'
(I relate with the feelings you portray really well)
a good read, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words I couldn\'t help thinking of the song \'Crazy\' by Seal
whose lyrics include:
\'Miracles will happen as we trip
But we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We get a little crazy
No we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We are a little crazy\'
(I relate with the feelings you portray really well)
a good read, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 04:54
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