Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Tell me O moon
dusk arising said:
Oh Mr mystery moon, so many questions you pose. No answers other than your reassurance of consistency and pure beauty. It\'s enough, for you inspire so much.
Great poetry to open a romantic\'s heart.
October 23rd, 2021 11:55
dusk arising said:
Oh Mr mystery moon, so many questions you pose. No answers other than your reassurance of consistency and pure beauty. It\'s enough, for you inspire so much.
Great poetry to open a romantic\'s heart.
October 23rd, 2021 11:55
I told them
Lorna said:
A very clear entreaty asking to be heard .. loved it.
October 23rd, 2021 06:19
Lorna said:
A very clear entreaty asking to be heard .. loved it.
October 23rd, 2021 06:19
Tell me O moon
Lorna said:
She is so wise the moon and just sits and listens.......
October 23rd, 2021 06:09
Lorna said:
She is so wise the moon and just sits and listens.......
October 23rd, 2021 06:09
Tell me O moon
Neville said:
The inspiration behind these fine words is a celestial entity close to my own heart .. and of course, without the lunar element, neither we as individuals, nor this page could possibly exist ...
What a delightful introduction to your penpersonship skills ..
Neville :)
October 23rd, 2021 03:26
Neville said:
The inspiration behind these fine words is a celestial entity close to my own heart .. and of course, without the lunar element, neither we as individuals, nor this page could possibly exist ...
What a delightful introduction to your penpersonship skills ..
Neville :)
October 23rd, 2021 03:26
Tell me O moon
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words about a fabulous vision of the night sky.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words about a fabulous vision of the night sky.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 02:14
Tell me O moon
orchidee said:
Good write S.
The insanity is if we start seeing little green men on the moon, or see mice eating the moon. Well, it\'s made of cheese, as one rhyme says. lol.
October 23rd, 2021 02:13
orchidee said:
Good write S.
The insanity is if we start seeing little green men on the moon, or see mice eating the moon. Well, it\'s made of cheese, as one rhyme says. lol.
October 23rd, 2021 02:13
I told them
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, we are each our own person and I am sure that you will go into the simple life with joy and love.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words spilleronsheet, we are each our own person and I am sure that you will go into the simple life with joy and love.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:53
I told them
Paul Bell said:
No dreams, no journey, and I think, no life. Even if you fail in that dream, it takes you onto the next one, and who knows, that may be the one\' that sets you up for life.
October 22nd, 2021 16:40
Paul Bell said:
No dreams, no journey, and I think, no life. Even if you fail in that dream, it takes you onto the next one, and who knows, that may be the one\' that sets you up for life.
October 22nd, 2021 16:40
I chose
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words spilleronsheet, may that dream become real one day.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words spilleronsheet, may that dream become real one day.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:48
I chose
Paul Bell said:
The alter ego has been set free.
Well, at least till you wake up.
Aren\'t dreams great, even though they never make sense.
October 20th, 2021 13:16
Paul Bell said:
The alter ego has been set free.
Well, at least till you wake up.
Aren\'t dreams great, even though they never make sense.
October 20th, 2021 13:16
I Envy
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty is all around us but we sometime do not have time in our lives to realise it is there.
Andy
October 19th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That beauty is all around us but we sometime do not have time in our lives to realise it is there.
Andy
October 19th, 2021 00:44
I Envy
Paul Bell said:
I think they say you need nature to stay sane. Maybe it\'s because nature stays at the same pace, whereas we run around like headless chickens.
October 18th, 2021 11:19
Paul Bell said:
I think they say you need nature to stay sane. Maybe it\'s because nature stays at the same pace, whereas we run around like headless chickens.
October 18th, 2021 11:19
I Envy
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ! Really like this poem 🙂 nature is beautiful
October 18th, 2021 08:23
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ! Really like this poem 🙂 nature is beautiful
October 18th, 2021 08:23
I Envy
L. B. Mek said:
the truly absurd fact, is when you eventually get to realise
those very same \'aspects\' of existence, you envy
are looking back at you
envying, your sentient capacity
to communicate: your envy...
\'before we search for the bandages
to cover our inadequacies,
we must realise, our capacity to self correct
is that essential asset, we need to appreciate: Most!\'
(thanks for sharing,
an interesting subject)
October 18th, 2021 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
the truly absurd fact, is when you eventually get to realise
those very same \'aspects\' of existence, you envy
are looking back at you
envying, your sentient capacity
to communicate: your envy...
\'before we search for the bandages
to cover our inadequacies,
we must realise, our capacity to self correct
is that essential asset, we need to appreciate: Most!\'
(thanks for sharing,
an interesting subject)
October 18th, 2021 07:26
Withering
Paul Bell said:
The great thing these days is the people with great advice you never asked for. Sometimes a sledgehammer is the tool required to get your point over. People tend to take notice when a sledgehammer is pulled from the holster. Plus, it makes you smile just that little bit more.
October 17th, 2021 08:18
Paul Bell said:
The great thing these days is the people with great advice you never asked for. Sometimes a sledgehammer is the tool required to get your point over. People tend to take notice when a sledgehammer is pulled from the holster. Plus, it makes you smile just that little bit more.
October 17th, 2021 08:18
Rewind
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, that connectivity should be there for us all and all will be wonderful in our lives.
Andy
October 17th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, that connectivity should be there for us all and all will be wonderful in our lives.
Andy
October 17th, 2021 00:21
A new faith, a new vigour
Paul Bell said:
I think humans spend so much time searching faith, not realising it\'s within them. In saying that, humans have been searching since day dot.
October 16th, 2021 03:35
Paul Bell said:
I think humans spend so much time searching faith, not realising it\'s within them. In saying that, humans have been searching since day dot.
October 16th, 2021 03:35
A new faith, a new vigour
spilleronsheet said:
There sure is
But I am still in process
And the process never stops
Maybe it shall rest
Only when laying in the grave
I believe we shall always amend and make new faiths and discard the old ones that hold us behind
October 15th, 2021 09:03
spilleronsheet said:
There sure is
But I am still in process
And the process never stops
Maybe it shall rest
Only when laying in the grave
I believe we shall always amend and make new faiths and discard the old ones that hold us behind
October 15th, 2021 09:03
A new faith, a new vigour
Nicky Byrd said:
I liked this one a lot, was there any inspiration to it?
October 15th, 2021 08:29
Nicky Byrd said:
I liked this one a lot, was there any inspiration to it?
October 15th, 2021 08:29
Lost belonging
L. B. Mek said:
although it still has more potential for refinement, this is a wonderful read..
and its timeless message is one that offers both insight, and a subtle suggestion to a hopeful path,
(Time, in all we\'ve lost
where we may, reclaim
that, which they stole
in the guise of care..)
love these lines:
\'those, were the words
heard outside
to the lost
innocence, holding inside
how to enjoy,
the worldly pleasures?
the mind
seems chaotic inside
wondering about uncertainties in life
to the lost
happiness, without reason
why it chose the reasonable wisdom, to be only saddened
with grief
what seems good in growing up
what seems empowered
to hold papers, papers in green
stuffed in pocket inside
alas, it can’t buy
the lost time\'
(thanks for sharing
you have wonderful style and a strong poetic voice,
I look forward to reading more of your work)
October 15th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
although it still has more potential for refinement, this is a wonderful read..
and its timeless message is one that offers both insight, and a subtle suggestion to a hopeful path,
(Time, in all we\'ve lost
where we may, reclaim
that, which they stole
in the guise of care..)
love these lines:
\'those, were the words
heard outside
to the lost
innocence, holding inside
how to enjoy,
the worldly pleasures?
the mind
seems chaotic inside
wondering about uncertainties in life
to the lost
happiness, without reason
why it chose the reasonable wisdom, to be only saddened
with grief
what seems good in growing up
what seems empowered
to hold papers, papers in green
stuffed in pocket inside
alas, it can’t buy
the lost time\'
(thanks for sharing
you have wonderful style and a strong poetic voice,
I look forward to reading more of your work)
October 15th, 2021 04:30
What matters
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams becoem reality in your life.
Andy
October 15th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams becoem reality in your life.
Andy
October 15th, 2021 00:44
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