Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Bereft souls
Neville said:
I\'m gonna take the easy option and just echo what woundedheart just posted about this your very lovely & most recent posting ............ Neville
December 11th, 2021 15:49
Neville said:
I\'m gonna take the easy option and just echo what woundedheart just posted about this your very lovely & most recent posting ............ Neville
December 11th, 2021 15:49
Innocent rain
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, time shows us so many things in our life but we must also be assured that tomorrow will be a better day.
Andy
December 11th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, time shows us so many things in our life but we must also be assured that tomorrow will be a better day.
Andy
December 11th, 2021 01:38
Innocent rain
woundedheart said:
Paper boats and pooh sticks damn I miss yesterday. Your tear drops only adding to the puddles to be splashed in the streams to be jumped the lakes to swim in but I\'d prefere them to be the happy ones as sad ones are so salty. Great reminiscence poem
December 10th, 2021 12:09
woundedheart said:
Paper boats and pooh sticks damn I miss yesterday. Your tear drops only adding to the puddles to be splashed in the streams to be jumped the lakes to swim in but I\'d prefere them to be the happy ones as sad ones are so salty. Great reminiscence poem
December 10th, 2021 12:09
If can’t wade off, be the brook
Paul Bell said:
I think the answer is up in the big sky awaiting, and I\'m thinking the answer will be so easy you\'ll probably murder the angel for telling you. I myself am still searching, mind you.
December 9th, 2021 16:09
Paul Bell said:
I think the answer is up in the big sky awaiting, and I\'m thinking the answer will be so easy you\'ll probably murder the angel for telling you. I myself am still searching, mind you.
December 9th, 2021 16:09
If can’t wade off, be the brook
Lorna said:
Best way! There really isn\'t any sense to life is there! Just go with the flow!
December 9th, 2021 14:51
Lorna said:
Best way! There really isn\'t any sense to life is there! Just go with the flow!
December 9th, 2021 14:51
If can’t wade off, be the brook
Neville said:
say it like it should be .. and always ..
but be sure to reflect on those golden moments as well as those grey ones .............. N
December 9th, 2021 12:00
Neville said:
say it like it should be .. and always ..
but be sure to reflect on those golden moments as well as those grey ones .............. N
December 9th, 2021 12:00
If can’t wade off, be the brook
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'acceptance, is ever
the First: step\'
December 9th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'acceptance, is ever
the First: step\'
December 9th, 2021 04:55
If can’t wade off, be the brook
woundedheart said:
Surrender to be the willow. Great advise bend but never break weathering the storm of life. Lovely write.
December 9th, 2021 04:09
woundedheart said:
Surrender to be the willow. Great advise bend but never break weathering the storm of life. Lovely write.
December 9th, 2021 04:09
If can’t wade off, be the brook
dusk arising said:
Be in harmony with your surroundings is the answer i think.
December 9th, 2021 02:09
dusk arising said:
Be in harmony with your surroundings is the answer i think.
December 9th, 2021 02:09
Mere Carbon
Goldfinch60 said:
We may be just carbon and water but each day of our lives we sparkle like diamonds as we are still here.
Andy
December 9th, 2021 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
We may be just carbon and water but each day of our lives we sparkle like diamonds as we are still here.
Andy
December 9th, 2021 01:21
Mere Carbon
Lorna said:
And we can burn carbon! Makes a wonderful barbeque...... who needs thee diamonds..... let\'s be useful and burn for heat!
December 8th, 2021 12:08
Lorna said:
And we can burn carbon! Makes a wonderful barbeque...... who needs thee diamonds..... let\'s be useful and burn for heat!
December 8th, 2021 12:08
Mere Carbon
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear spiller !!
You brought the base of Diamond, Carbon. Every carbon does not turn to be a diamond. Carbon in high stress and heat turns out a diamond.
Same way....let the carbon of you turn to be diamond !! its time now, you have taken the heat and stress !! You are turning a diamond soon...:)
December 8th, 2021 02:50
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear spiller !!
You brought the base of Diamond, Carbon. Every carbon does not turn to be a diamond. Carbon in high stress and heat turns out a diamond.
Same way....let the carbon of you turn to be diamond !! its time now, you have taken the heat and stress !! You are turning a diamond soon...:)
December 8th, 2021 02:50
Mere Carbon
dusk arising said:
It\'s what we are, carbon and water. Oh and there\'s that spirit thing too. But what an incredible thing carbon is.... we are stardust.
A thought provoking piece spiller.
December 8th, 2021 02:46
dusk arising said:
It\'s what we are, carbon and water. Oh and there\'s that spirit thing too. But what an incredible thing carbon is.... we are stardust.
A thought provoking piece spiller.
December 8th, 2021 02:46
Mere Carbon
Caring dove said:
Makes me think of emptiness … atleast that’s my thoughts whilst reading this poem … that feeling of emptiness we get , when we just want to feel so much more
A nice writing )
December 8th, 2021 02:30
Caring dove said:
Makes me think of emptiness … atleast that’s my thoughts whilst reading this poem … that feeling of emptiness we get , when we just want to feel so much more
A nice writing )
December 8th, 2021 02:30
I asked myself
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Smile everyday , that we are alive and able to lead a wonderful life given by Almighty !!
Life is parcel of everything. Savor each phase of journey , but don\'t stay long on it !! No life is without turbulence, believe me. Its how we take it and move on in life. !!!
A wonderful write as usual ! Really made my heart heavy.
December 7th, 2021 03:39
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Smile everyday , that we are alive and able to lead a wonderful life given by Almighty !!
Life is parcel of everything. Savor each phase of journey , but don\'t stay long on it !! No life is without turbulence, believe me. Its how we take it and move on in life. !!!
A wonderful write as usual ! Really made my heart heavy.
December 7th, 2021 03:39
I asked myself
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always be ourselves spilleronsheet.
I have a philosophy of life \"If you do not like the way I am, that is your problem, not mine!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always be ourselves spilleronsheet.
I have a philosophy of life \"If you do not like the way I am, that is your problem, not mine!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:44
I asked myself
Neville said:
say it like it is .. anything else is self deception .. I like this a lot .. now learn to be kind to yourself .. you really do deserve it ................. x
December 6th, 2021 10:09
Neville said:
say it like it is .. anything else is self deception .. I like this a lot .. now learn to be kind to yourself .. you really do deserve it ................. x
December 6th, 2021 10:09
I asked myself
Caring dove said:
An expressive writing , spiller ) it’s important to speak our truth and express our pain , and that’s your truth … you write poetry for yourself , I guess and if others like it then great .
It feels helpful to me to write
December 6th, 2021 06:09
Caring dove said:
An expressive writing , spiller ) it’s important to speak our truth and express our pain , and that’s your truth … you write poetry for yourself , I guess and if others like it then great .
It feels helpful to me to write
December 6th, 2021 06:09
Living with a scar
dusk arising said:
So true. There are scars still quite alive in me from all through my life. Some are from my own stupidity and make me cringe to this day.
December 2nd, 2021 09:10
dusk arising said:
So true. There are scars still quite alive in me from all through my life. Some are from my own stupidity and make me cringe to this day.
December 2nd, 2021 09:10
Living with a scar
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You tell the story so well, dear poet, that one does not need to have had first hand experience to identify with it. It took me there. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2021 07:29
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You tell the story so well, dear poet, that one does not need to have had first hand experience to identify with it. It took me there. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2021 07:29
Living with a scar
L. B. Mek said:
\'freedom of choice\'
is having the capacity, to write
anything at all
but still choosing to write words
that only add
to the mountainous levels
of suffering
already depicted, in this world..
do not tempt fate, dear poet
if misery is all
that you: Choose
to see,
that overwhelming feeling
may soon become
your sea of dependency...
\'fight!
fight to glimpse, that shard of hope
in your life
even if it be just a glimmer
of the sunrays, reflecting
on the barrel
of ill-fated consequence
blanking-out, your view
of the horizon\'s in life\'
(you need not ask many
to realise
that misery
sure loves company)
December 2nd, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'freedom of choice\'
is having the capacity, to write
anything at all
but still choosing to write words
that only add
to the mountainous levels
of suffering
already depicted, in this world..
do not tempt fate, dear poet
if misery is all
that you: Choose
to see,
that overwhelming feeling
may soon become
your sea of dependency...
\'fight!
fight to glimpse, that shard of hope
in your life
even if it be just a glimmer
of the sunrays, reflecting
on the barrel
of ill-fated consequence
blanking-out, your view
of the horizon\'s in life\'
(you need not ask many
to realise
that misery
sure loves company)
December 2nd, 2021 04:46
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