Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Mere Carbon
Caring dove said:
Makes me think of emptiness … atleast that’s my thoughts whilst reading this poem … that feeling of emptiness we get , when we just want to feel so much more
A nice writing )
December 8th, 2021 02:30
Caring dove said:
Makes me think of emptiness … atleast that’s my thoughts whilst reading this poem … that feeling of emptiness we get , when we just want to feel so much more
A nice writing )
December 8th, 2021 02:30
I asked myself
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Smile everyday , that we are alive and able to lead a wonderful life given by Almighty !!
Life is parcel of everything. Savor each phase of journey , but don\'t stay long on it !! No life is without turbulence, believe me. Its how we take it and move on in life. !!!
A wonderful write as usual ! Really made my heart heavy.
December 7th, 2021 03:39
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !! Smile everyday , that we are alive and able to lead a wonderful life given by Almighty !!
Life is parcel of everything. Savor each phase of journey , but don\'t stay long on it !! No life is without turbulence, believe me. Its how we take it and move on in life. !!!
A wonderful write as usual ! Really made my heart heavy.
December 7th, 2021 03:39
I asked myself
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always be ourselves spilleronsheet.
I have a philosophy of life \"If you do not like the way I am, that is your problem, not mine!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always be ourselves spilleronsheet.
I have a philosophy of life \"If you do not like the way I am, that is your problem, not mine!\"
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:44
I asked myself
Neville said:
say it like it is .. anything else is self deception .. I like this a lot .. now learn to be kind to yourself .. you really do deserve it ................. x
December 6th, 2021 10:09
Neville said:
say it like it is .. anything else is self deception .. I like this a lot .. now learn to be kind to yourself .. you really do deserve it ................. x
December 6th, 2021 10:09
I asked myself
Caring dove said:
An expressive writing , spiller ) it’s important to speak our truth and express our pain , and that’s your truth … you write poetry for yourself , I guess and if others like it then great .
It feels helpful to me to write
December 6th, 2021 06:09
Caring dove said:
An expressive writing , spiller ) it’s important to speak our truth and express our pain , and that’s your truth … you write poetry for yourself , I guess and if others like it then great .
It feels helpful to me to write
December 6th, 2021 06:09
Living with a scar
dusk arising said:
So true. There are scars still quite alive in me from all through my life. Some are from my own stupidity and make me cringe to this day.
December 2nd, 2021 09:10
dusk arising said:
So true. There are scars still quite alive in me from all through my life. Some are from my own stupidity and make me cringe to this day.
December 2nd, 2021 09:10
Living with a scar
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You tell the story so well, dear poet, that one does not need to have had first hand experience to identify with it. It took me there. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2021 07:29
Garth Rakumakoe said:
You tell the story so well, dear poet, that one does not need to have had first hand experience to identify with it. It took me there. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2021 07:29
Living with a scar
L. B. Mek said:
\'freedom of choice\'
is having the capacity, to write
anything at all
but still choosing to write words
that only add
to the mountainous levels
of suffering
already depicted, in this world..
do not tempt fate, dear poet
if misery is all
that you: Choose
to see,
that overwhelming feeling
may soon become
your sea of dependency...
\'fight!
fight to glimpse, that shard of hope
in your life
even if it be just a glimmer
of the sunrays, reflecting
on the barrel
of ill-fated consequence
blanking-out, your view
of the horizon\'s in life\'
(you need not ask many
to realise
that misery
sure loves company)
December 2nd, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'freedom of choice\'
is having the capacity, to write
anything at all
but still choosing to write words
that only add
to the mountainous levels
of suffering
already depicted, in this world..
do not tempt fate, dear poet
if misery is all
that you: Choose
to see,
that overwhelming feeling
may soon become
your sea of dependency...
\'fight!
fight to glimpse, that shard of hope
in your life
even if it be just a glimmer
of the sunrays, reflecting
on the barrel
of ill-fated consequence
blanking-out, your view
of the horizon\'s in life\'
(you need not ask many
to realise
that misery
sure loves company)
December 2nd, 2021 04:46
Living with a scar
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry , spiller … life can really cause us such misery and emotional pain . I can truly relate as I have been through so much . Sometimes I feel peaceful but then grief comes in again, over how unfair life has been .
I guess we can try to heal and move forward but I guess the sadness may stay a little / re surface
A well expressed , good poem ..
December 2nd, 2021 02:21
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry , spiller … life can really cause us such misery and emotional pain . I can truly relate as I have been through so much . Sometimes I feel peaceful but then grief comes in again, over how unfair life has been .
I guess we can try to heal and move forward but I guess the sadness may stay a little / re surface
A well expressed , good poem ..
December 2nd, 2021 02:21
Living with a scar
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Some Scars are very deep and they leave a everlasting mark in our lives. !! But lets look forward and move on.
A flower plucked leaves a mark, but the plant will not stop flowering and giving its freshness to the world. Lets take this in our lives too...Nature is our forever tutor !!
Very Deep Poem and I understand you wrote from depths of your heart !!!
December 2nd, 2021 02:08
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Some Scars are very deep and they leave a everlasting mark in our lives. !! But lets look forward and move on.
A flower plucked leaves a mark, but the plant will not stop flowering and giving its freshness to the world. Lets take this in our lives too...Nature is our forever tutor !!
Very Deep Poem and I understand you wrote from depths of your heart !!!
December 2nd, 2021 02:08
Wandering, to just find dismay
Paul Bell said:
I think man never stops looking for the answers, and I think if he does, he would be better off killing himself.
Life truly is a mystery, and we all love mysterious.
November 30th, 2021 14:09
Paul Bell said:
I think man never stops looking for the answers, and I think if he does, he would be better off killing himself.
Life truly is a mystery, and we all love mysterious.
November 30th, 2021 14:09
Wandering, to just find dismay
Neville said:
yes, absolutely beautiful but seriously sad ......................................... a gentle hug sent on its way ... x
November 30th, 2021 11:00
Neville said:
yes, absolutely beautiful but seriously sad ......................................... a gentle hug sent on its way ... x
November 30th, 2021 11:00
Wandering, to just find dismay
L. B. Mek said:
emotively worded, a poignant read
\'questing for Our, who
in the what
we, strive to believe\'
thanks for sharing!
November 30th, 2021 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
emotively worded, a poignant read
\'questing for Our, who
in the what
we, strive to believe\'
thanks for sharing!
November 30th, 2021 06:34
Rewrite the slate
Lorna said:
Well said and the hardest thing ever is to quietly live inside oneself and not let others too far in to disturb peace of mind -
November 30th, 2021 05:41
Lorna said:
Well said and the hardest thing ever is to quietly live inside oneself and not let others too far in to disturb peace of mind -
November 30th, 2021 05:41
Rewrite the slate
L. B. Mek said:
powerful! your zeal and belief
in these words you share
just jumps-off the page,
such positive and inspiring themes!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(but, allow me to indulge
in a little commoner, love
see, I don\'t think we\'re all
meant to forge our names
in the annals of humanity
some of us
can find solace, in being
one of the group, a member
that shines, once in a while
just enough
to know, our lives are worthy
of existence\'s, abundant gifts
without, having to feel
like the sun, rises
just for us...) lol
November 30th, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
powerful! your zeal and belief
in these words you share
just jumps-off the page,
such positive and inspiring themes!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(but, allow me to indulge
in a little commoner, love
see, I don\'t think we\'re all
meant to forge our names
in the annals of humanity
some of us
can find solace, in being
one of the group, a member
that shines, once in a while
just enough
to know, our lives are worthy
of existence\'s, abundant gifts
without, having to feel
like the sun, rises
just for us...) lol
November 30th, 2021 05:35
Wandering, to just find dismay
Lorna said:
Sometimes just sit, breath and remember things. Those journeys are your own .... so many questions are overwhelming but answers come with time.
November 30th, 2021 05:20
Lorna said:
Sometimes just sit, breath and remember things. Those journeys are your own .... so many questions are overwhelming but answers come with time.
November 30th, 2021 05:20
Wandering, to just find dismay
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words spilleronsheet but that oasis is within you and will be before you soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words spilleronsheet but that oasis is within you and will be before you soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:48
Wandering, to just find dismay
Vamsi Sudha said:
A gloomy one from you !! A different shade of life. Very well expressed. Heart Touching indeed. !!
You Wandering has stopped at MPS..:)
And there is no Dismay ,
As at MPS life is a Bright RAY !!
November 30th, 2021 02:47
Vamsi Sudha said:
A gloomy one from you !! A different shade of life. Very well expressed. Heart Touching indeed. !!
You Wandering has stopped at MPS..:)
And there is no Dismay ,
As at MPS life is a Bright RAY !!
November 30th, 2021 02:47
Wandering, to just find dismay
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry your feeling sad , spiller ( a nicely expressed poem .
November 30th, 2021 02:41
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry your feeling sad , spiller ( a nicely expressed poem .
November 30th, 2021 02:41
Wandering, to just find dismay
dusk arising said:
Reading your words today has made me want to pass on a piece of wisdom. Stop searching for answers, those answers will only come when you are ready to receive them.
November 30th, 2021 02:38
dusk arising said:
Reading your words today has made me want to pass on a piece of wisdom. Stop searching for answers, those answers will only come when you are ready to receive them.
November 30th, 2021 02:38
Rewrite the slate
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, Nirvana is within us all when we listen to our inner selves.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, Nirvana is within us all when we listen to our inner selves.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:58
Rewrite the slate
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Peace rests in us and the ultimate goal is to attain Nirvana. Very Well Said..
Life is a testing ground for us. A Ore of Gold Shines brightly only after its put to flames. So let the flames burn us, to purify us wholly externally and internally. Be a spectator and watch the play of the Almighty !!
One more touching one from you !!!
November 29th, 2021 23:30
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Peace rests in us and the ultimate goal is to attain Nirvana. Very Well Said..
Life is a testing ground for us. A Ore of Gold Shines brightly only after its put to flames. So let the flames burn us, to purify us wholly externally and internally. Be a spectator and watch the play of the Almighty !!
One more touching one from you !!!
November 29th, 2021 23:30
The king, his kingdom and its fiefdom
Neville said:
Gadzooks .. a fascinating account of kings & fiefs .. you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a good tale with a historical flavour ...................... a fief fit for a king methinks ....................... N
November 28th, 2021 15:01
Neville said:
Gadzooks .. a fascinating account of kings & fiefs .. you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a good tale with a historical flavour ...................... a fief fit for a king methinks ....................... N
November 28th, 2021 15:01
The king, his kingdom and its fiefdom
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the Queen now, handing out property left right and centre, giving Prince Andy one with a big garden since he\'s got a lot of time on his hands. I myself will hand my Fief down to my local bar, thus paying my over due bar bill.
November 28th, 2021 12:31
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the Queen now, handing out property left right and centre, giving Prince Andy one with a big garden since he\'s got a lot of time on his hands. I myself will hand my Fief down to my local bar, thus paying my over due bar bill.
November 28th, 2021 12:31
The king, his kingdom and its fiefdom
orchidee said:
Good write S.
There\'s the controversial verse, omitted from \'All things bright and beautiful\'. It goes something like:
The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate
God ordained them all.....
And ordered their estate.
November 28th, 2021 02:54
orchidee said:
Good write S.
There\'s the controversial verse, omitted from \'All things bright and beautiful\'. It goes something like:
The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate
God ordained them all.....
And ordered their estate.
November 28th, 2021 02:54
I wonder
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The wonder of wonders... What lies beyond... Don\'t we all wish we could explore... - A time travel this... Kudos to you. Very well written.
November 27th, 2021 13:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The wonder of wonders... What lies beyond... Don\'t we all wish we could explore... - A time travel this... Kudos to you. Very well written.
November 27th, 2021 13:13
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