Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The Albatross
Paul Bell said:
The albatross sure gets a bad wrap.
Even before it flies, it seems to be destined to fall.
July 25th, 2026 10:12
Paul Bell said:
The albatross sure gets a bad wrap.
Even before it flies, it seems to be destined to fall.
July 25th, 2026 10:12
The Albatross
Teddy.15 said:
There is a deep loneliness in this, and wings we need to escape yet plunging would suggest loss of hope. A beautiful emotional and image rich poem. 🌹
July 15th, 2026 07:41
Teddy.15 said:
There is a deep loneliness in this, and wings we need to escape yet plunging would suggest loss of hope. A beautiful emotional and image rich poem. 🌹
July 15th, 2026 07:41
The Albatross
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly beautiful it carries the reader on wings even if ever so briefly. a fave
July 15th, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly beautiful it carries the reader on wings even if ever so briefly. a fave
July 15th, 2026 05:35
Am I qualified to be ?
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like the day you\'re born, the judgement starts, and unfortunetely, through life it never stops.
We even judge ourselves, good or bad, and we know how that turns out at times.
July 12th, 2026 05:09
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like the day you\'re born, the judgement starts, and unfortunetely, through life it never stops.
We even judge ourselves, good or bad, and we know how that turns out at times.
July 12th, 2026 05:09
Am I qualified to be ?
sorenbarrett said:
A most important question, who is to judge competency? How does one judge, credentials, outcomes, word of mouth, licensing? None seem sufficient. Well written.
June 27th, 2026 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most important question, who is to judge competency? How does one judge, credentials, outcomes, word of mouth, licensing? None seem sufficient. Well written.
June 27th, 2026 17:26
Am I qualified to be ?
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the theme of self-doubt and societal judgment. It presents a series of characters, each symbolizing various aspects of life where individuals feel inadequate or unqualified.
June 27th, 2026 16:09
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the theme of self-doubt and societal judgment. It presents a series of characters, each symbolizing various aspects of life where individuals feel inadequate or unqualified.
June 27th, 2026 16:09
success and failure
Paul Bell said:
Destiny most times is being in the right place at the right time.
Failure on the other hand, maybe a delayed success.
This is why me and the tortoise have a mutual respect.
June 18th, 2026 07:26
Paul Bell said:
Destiny most times is being in the right place at the right time.
Failure on the other hand, maybe a delayed success.
This is why me and the tortoise have a mutual respect.
June 18th, 2026 07:26
success and failure
sorenbarrett said:
Free choice vs destiny an old question unresolved. And if so be it destiny who chose it? Who sets the clock of determinism and then why even try. With such no glory or salvation only what is meant to be. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Free choice vs destiny an old question unresolved. And if so be it destiny who chose it? Who sets the clock of determinism and then why even try. With such no glory or salvation only what is meant to be. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 05:43
The sky, the stars and the waning moon
2781 said:
And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteous as the stars for ever and ever.
February 27th, 2026 08:26
2781 said:
And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteous as the stars for ever and ever.
February 27th, 2026 08:26
The sky, the stars and the waning moon
sorenbarrett said:
In that vastness that expands on all sides even below blocked from our view all things exist. A lovely write
February 27th, 2026 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
In that vastness that expands on all sides even below blocked from our view all things exist. A lovely write
February 27th, 2026 06:25
The sky, the stars and the waning moon
Teddy.15 said:
What is lost can always be found even if in a different form. 🌹
February 27th, 2026 06:03
Teddy.15 said:
What is lost can always be found even if in a different form. 🌹
February 27th, 2026 06:03
The lopsided
sorenbarrett said:
Brave, gritty, it calls out and in metaphor between building and person it knits a story of life. Nicely done and a fave
January 23rd, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Brave, gritty, it calls out and in metaphor between building and person it knits a story of life. Nicely done and a fave
January 23rd, 2026 05:02
Solemn nights
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Buddy,
Always cheerful to read your lines and let\'s welcome Autumn with your wonderful poem... Let it be an Autumn of Nature but a spring in our lives always.
October 12th, 2025 00:51
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Buddy,
Always cheerful to read your lines and let\'s welcome Autumn with your wonderful poem... Let it be an Autumn of Nature but a spring in our lives always.
October 12th, 2025 00:51
Solemn nights
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very creative and enjoyable way to describe the arrival of Autumn, enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 17:24
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very creative and enjoyable way to describe the arrival of Autumn, enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 17:24
Solemn nights
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful description of the coming of Autumn a fave
October 11th, 2025 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful description of the coming of Autumn a fave
October 11th, 2025 15:36
Invisible hands
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Always touching to heart and not leaving anything in your poetic art....
July 19th, 2025 06:49
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Always touching to heart and not leaving anything in your poetic art....
July 19th, 2025 06:49
Awaiting
Neville said:
this is so cool and that summative line is to die for my friend .. excellent ink .. Neville
July 10th, 2025 04:46
Neville said:
this is so cool and that summative line is to die for my friend .. excellent ink .. Neville
July 10th, 2025 04:46
Awaiting
sorenbarrett said:
Bad outcomes and uncertainty prompt questions after the fact. I hear those questions that have no answers and as rocks in a washing machine cause a lot of noise and do no good. Well written
June 10th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Bad outcomes and uncertainty prompt questions after the fact. I hear those questions that have no answers and as rocks in a washing machine cause a lot of noise and do no good. Well written
June 10th, 2025 04:37
Validation
Poetic Licence said:
If there is a answer can only be a parent or someone in love, interesting and enjoyable read
May 31st, 2025 05:42
Poetic Licence said:
If there is a answer can only be a parent or someone in love, interesting and enjoyable read
May 31st, 2025 05:42
Validation
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem in true poetic form that leads the reader to stop and think. My answer ONE WHO LOVES
May 31st, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem in true poetic form that leads the reader to stop and think. My answer ONE WHO LOVES
May 31st, 2025 04:26
Tropical easterlies
Poetic Licence said:
The mental and physical impact nature can have on our well being, nicely written
April 12th, 2025 01:41
Poetic Licence said:
The mental and physical impact nature can have on our well being, nicely written
April 12th, 2025 01:41
Tropical easterlies
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording in this loved how butterflies came after anxieties were mentioned. Very nice
April 11th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording in this loved how butterflies came after anxieties were mentioned. Very nice
April 11th, 2025 14:42
Cold heart
sorenbarrett said:
In few words the image is painted and comes to life. Well done
April 11th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
In few words the image is painted and comes to life. Well done
April 11th, 2025 09:02
Delusions
sorenbarrett said:
With a theme of being oneself this poem uses rhyme to take the reader on a journey.
April 4th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
With a theme of being oneself this poem uses rhyme to take the reader on a journey.
April 4th, 2025 03:40
Invisible hands
Poetic Licence said:
Anxiety is always hanging around, and it appears to only need the faintest invitation to reep it\'s havoc, nicely written and expressed, enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
Anxiety is always hanging around, and it appears to only need the faintest invitation to reep it\'s havoc, nicely written and expressed, enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 02:14
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