Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Only if
Goldfinch60 said:
If only? One of the most asked questions in our life spilleronsheet.
Andy
November 26th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
If only? One of the most asked questions in our life spilleronsheet.
Andy
November 26th, 2021 01:51
Only if
Neville said:
I hope you dont publicise the inspiration or reason behind these intriguing words ... they are so good on their own without any explanation that may or may not in itself impact upon the subjective opinion and views of the reader ...
You certainly held my attention and had me thinking long after I had finished reading my friend ............ .............................. Neville
November 25th, 2021 17:14
Neville said:
I hope you dont publicise the inspiration or reason behind these intriguing words ... they are so good on their own without any explanation that may or may not in itself impact upon the subjective opinion and views of the reader ...
You certainly held my attention and had me thinking long after I had finished reading my friend ............ .............................. Neville
November 25th, 2021 17:14
Only if
dusk arising said:
Reads like the regret after a very young love was halted by parental influence... if only.... Life is full of \"if only\'s\" which to be honest is great for the inventive poetic mind..... plenty of \"if only\'s\" to create in poems letting our hopes, dreams, fears run wild.
Would be interested in reading what the \"if only\" is relating to your post today.
November 25th, 2021 16:06
dusk arising said:
Reads like the regret after a very young love was halted by parental influence... if only.... Life is full of \"if only\'s\" which to be honest is great for the inventive poetic mind..... plenty of \"if only\'s\" to create in poems letting our hopes, dreams, fears run wild.
Would be interested in reading what the \"if only\" is relating to your post today.
November 25th, 2021 16:06
Only if
Caring dove said:
I wish for a lot of things .., if only my past had been happier , is one of them . Life can feel so sad at times, and we just wish for so many things …
November 25th, 2021 14:54
Caring dove said:
I wish for a lot of things .., if only my past had been happier , is one of them . Life can feel so sad at times, and we just wish for so many things …
November 25th, 2021 14:54
The invisible hands
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Oops !! I missed seeing this poetry of yours...
Invisible Hands take the Visible Load..
And of course you are not Alone Behold !!
Just wonder, how wearisome the world would have been. You really add the pinch of color to the world !! Amazing as usual. !!!
November 24th, 2021 10:05
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Oops !! I missed seeing this poetry of yours...
Invisible Hands take the Visible Load..
And of course you are not Alone Behold !!
Just wonder, how wearisome the world would have been. You really add the pinch of color to the world !! Amazing as usual. !!!
November 24th, 2021 10:05
First meeting
Garth Rakumakoe said:
So their love stayed strong and stayed there, in their hearts, always... The symbolism is so exquisite! - Definitely a favorite for me.
November 24th, 2021 06:02
Garth Rakumakoe said:
So their love stayed strong and stayed there, in their hearts, always... The symbolism is so exquisite! - Definitely a favorite for me.
November 24th, 2021 06:02
Trust in thyself
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome Spiller !! Trust A wonderful feeling which should not be Rusted by time !!!
November 23rd, 2021 21:51
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome Spiller !! Trust A wonderful feeling which should not be Rusted by time !!!
November 23rd, 2021 21:51
First meeting
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was amazing Spiller !! A love poetry from you ..
This was the real touching line
\"she answered with smile
the one which isn’t plucked over time \"
what an endearing expression. Stunned at your creativity and your expression..
.Keep writing and let us be submerged in your flow of expression :)
November 23rd, 2021 21:48
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was amazing Spiller !! A love poetry from you ..
This was the real touching line
\"she answered with smile
the one which isn’t plucked over time \"
what an endearing expression. Stunned at your creativity and your expression..
.Keep writing and let us be submerged in your flow of expression :)
November 23rd, 2021 21:48
First meeting
Neville said:
this has more than just a ring of truth to its name & what a wonderful memory shared .. I like it .. I like it a lot ................................... Neville
November 23rd, 2021 16:39
Neville said:
this has more than just a ring of truth to its name & what a wonderful memory shared .. I like it .. I like it a lot ................................... Neville
November 23rd, 2021 16:39
First meeting
kitty the naughty poet said:
Really lovely words. I enjoyed reading this, so thank you for sharing :)
November 23rd, 2021 16:03
kitty the naughty poet said:
Really lovely words. I enjoyed reading this, so thank you for sharing :)
November 23rd, 2021 16:03
First meeting
Paul Bell said:
Some destinies are just that, waiting on time that should come, but never really making it, even when destiny dictates that it should. This truly is what real life is.
November 23rd, 2021 15:33
Paul Bell said:
Some destinies are just that, waiting on time that should come, but never really making it, even when destiny dictates that it should. This truly is what real life is.
November 23rd, 2021 15:33
First meeting
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , spiller 🙂 I like the flow of this one ,.. nicely expressed
November 23rd, 2021 14:56
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , spiller 🙂 I like the flow of this one ,.. nicely expressed
November 23rd, 2021 14:56
Trust in thyself
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true spilleronsheet, that trust in yourself can lead to a most wonderful life,
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true spilleronsheet, that trust in yourself can lead to a most wonderful life,
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:14
Trust in thyself
Paul Bell said:
I think if you asked a hundred people who they trusted, 99 would say between 2 and 3 I reckon.
November 22nd, 2021 12:51
Paul Bell said:
I think if you asked a hundred people who they trusted, 99 would say between 2 and 3 I reckon.
November 22nd, 2021 12:51
Trust in thyself
Neville said:
...... self awareness, insight & acceptance of what is, what\'s not and what maybe is key ... a very thought provoking poem indeed ....
November 22nd, 2021 08:26
Neville said:
...... self awareness, insight & acceptance of what is, what\'s not and what maybe is key ... a very thought provoking poem indeed ....
November 22nd, 2021 08:26
Trust in thyself
L. B. Mek said:
a faultless message
championing, self-accountability
and acceptance
to the inevitably, chaotic experience
of life..
(a great write, thanks for sharing)
November 22nd, 2021 07:42
L. B. Mek said:
a faultless message
championing, self-accountability
and acceptance
to the inevitably, chaotic experience
of life..
(a great write, thanks for sharing)
November 22nd, 2021 07:42
Trust in thyself
orchidee said:
A good write S.
With the spiritual side, I wouldn\'t want to trust entirely to myself in everything.
But to have no trust in oneself is surely to be un-confident, not take a step in anything, just rubbish oneself, etc.
November 22nd, 2021 06:59
orchidee said:
A good write S.
With the spiritual side, I wouldn\'t want to trust entirely to myself in everything.
But to have no trust in oneself is surely to be un-confident, not take a step in anything, just rubbish oneself, etc.
November 22nd, 2021 06:59
Late night
Neville said:
you have the gift of capturing moments that so often fill my own dark hours until I finally succumb & the words rattling around in my head take a well deserved break ...a very relatable post my friend ...
Neville
November 22nd, 2021 02:42
Neville said:
you have the gift of capturing moments that so often fill my own dark hours until I finally succumb & the words rattling around in my head take a well deserved break ...a very relatable post my friend ...
Neville
November 22nd, 2021 02:42
Late night
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of wonder can often be formed within ourselves spilleronsheet. Very goo words.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of wonder can often be formed within ourselves spilleronsheet. Very goo words.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 02:35
Late night
Coyote said:
You capture the spirit of 3am brilliantly. Great write.
November 21st, 2021 18:47
Coyote said:
You capture the spirit of 3am brilliantly. Great write.
November 21st, 2021 18:47
Late night
dusk arising said:
The lonesome blues playing on ones mind is never a way to be at peace with the life of the night. Well described in your post today.
November 21st, 2021 11:02
dusk arising said:
The lonesome blues playing on ones mind is never a way to be at peace with the life of the night. Well described in your post today.
November 21st, 2021 11:02
Late night
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,..Your description was very picturesque...
You really feel when you write.. !! Good one again !!!
November 21st, 2021 09:41
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,..Your description was very picturesque...
You really feel when you write.. !! Good one again !!!
November 21st, 2021 09:41
Late night
Fay Slimm. said:
The movement you rouse in this on-going description of beating the blues when alone at night is fantastic and leaves this reader wanting to read it again and this time aloud - - first rate writing my friend.
November 21st, 2021 09:38
Fay Slimm. said:
The movement you rouse in this on-going description of beating the blues when alone at night is fantastic and leaves this reader wanting to read it again and this time aloud - - first rate writing my friend.
November 21st, 2021 09:38
The invisible hands
Paul Bell said:
The state of being alone, or being lonely. I sometimes think, humans have forgotten the earth they live in. We take it for granted she\'ll look after us, and she only asks the same back, even if you\'re only a little cog she still appreciates you.
November 20th, 2021 05:21
Paul Bell said:
The state of being alone, or being lonely. I sometimes think, humans have forgotten the earth they live in. We take it for granted she\'ll look after us, and she only asks the same back, even if you\'re only a little cog she still appreciates you.
November 20th, 2021 05:21
The invisible hands
Goldfinch60 said:
Those invisible hands can lift you into such wonderful places spilleronsheet and giving us words like these are bound to take you into those places.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Those invisible hands can lift you into such wonderful places spilleronsheet and giving us words like these are bound to take you into those places.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:44
The invisible hands
Caring dove said:
I really like this … ) nicely expressed , good choice of words 🙂 there is a sense of comfort in the words you write
November 19th, 2021 08:49
Caring dove said:
I really like this … ) nicely expressed , good choice of words 🙂 there is a sense of comfort in the words you write
November 19th, 2021 08:49
The invisible hands
Sharkylang said:
Could be good if it had any structure, rhyming, or punctuation.
November 19th, 2021 08:37
Sharkylang said:
Could be good if it had any structure, rhyming, or punctuation.
November 19th, 2021 08:37
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