Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Living with a scar
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry , spiller … life can really cause us such misery and emotional pain . I can truly relate as I have been through so much . Sometimes I feel peaceful but then grief comes in again, over how unfair life has been .
I guess we can try to heal and move forward but I guess the sadness may stay a little / re surface
A well expressed , good poem ..
December 2nd, 2021 02:21
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry , spiller … life can really cause us such misery and emotional pain . I can truly relate as I have been through so much . Sometimes I feel peaceful but then grief comes in again, over how unfair life has been .
I guess we can try to heal and move forward but I guess the sadness may stay a little / re surface
A well expressed , good poem ..
December 2nd, 2021 02:21
Living with a scar
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Some Scars are very deep and they leave a everlasting mark in our lives. !! But lets look forward and move on.
A flower plucked leaves a mark, but the plant will not stop flowering and giving its freshness to the world. Lets take this in our lives too...Nature is our forever tutor !!
Very Deep Poem and I understand you wrote from depths of your heart !!!
December 2nd, 2021 02:08
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller !!
Some Scars are very deep and they leave a everlasting mark in our lives. !! But lets look forward and move on.
A flower plucked leaves a mark, but the plant will not stop flowering and giving its freshness to the world. Lets take this in our lives too...Nature is our forever tutor !!
Very Deep Poem and I understand you wrote from depths of your heart !!!
December 2nd, 2021 02:08
Wandering, to just find dismay
Paul Bell said:
I think man never stops looking for the answers, and I think if he does, he would be better off killing himself.
Life truly is a mystery, and we all love mysterious.
November 30th, 2021 14:09
Paul Bell said:
I think man never stops looking for the answers, and I think if he does, he would be better off killing himself.
Life truly is a mystery, and we all love mysterious.
November 30th, 2021 14:09
Wandering, to just find dismay
Neville said:
yes, absolutely beautiful but seriously sad ......................................... a gentle hug sent on its way ... x
November 30th, 2021 11:00
Neville said:
yes, absolutely beautiful but seriously sad ......................................... a gentle hug sent on its way ... x
November 30th, 2021 11:00
Wandering, to just find dismay
L. B. Mek said:
emotively worded, a poignant read
\'questing for Our, who
in the what
we, strive to believe\'
thanks for sharing!
November 30th, 2021 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
emotively worded, a poignant read
\'questing for Our, who
in the what
we, strive to believe\'
thanks for sharing!
November 30th, 2021 06:34
Rewrite the slate
Lorna said:
Well said and the hardest thing ever is to quietly live inside oneself and not let others too far in to disturb peace of mind -
November 30th, 2021 05:41
Lorna said:
Well said and the hardest thing ever is to quietly live inside oneself and not let others too far in to disturb peace of mind -
November 30th, 2021 05:41
Rewrite the slate
L. B. Mek said:
powerful! your zeal and belief
in these words you share
just jumps-off the page,
such positive and inspiring themes!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(but, allow me to indulge
in a little commoner, love
see, I don\'t think we\'re all
meant to forge our names
in the annals of humanity
some of us
can find solace, in being
one of the group, a member
that shines, once in a while
just enough
to know, our lives are worthy
of existence\'s, abundant gifts
without, having to feel
like the sun, rises
just for us...) lol
November 30th, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
powerful! your zeal and belief
in these words you share
just jumps-off the page,
such positive and inspiring themes!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(but, allow me to indulge
in a little commoner, love
see, I don\'t think we\'re all
meant to forge our names
in the annals of humanity
some of us
can find solace, in being
one of the group, a member
that shines, once in a while
just enough
to know, our lives are worthy
of existence\'s, abundant gifts
without, having to feel
like the sun, rises
just for us...) lol
November 30th, 2021 05:35
Wandering, to just find dismay
Lorna said:
Sometimes just sit, breath and remember things. Those journeys are your own .... so many questions are overwhelming but answers come with time.
November 30th, 2021 05:20
Lorna said:
Sometimes just sit, breath and remember things. Those journeys are your own .... so many questions are overwhelming but answers come with time.
November 30th, 2021 05:20
Wandering, to just find dismay
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words spilleronsheet but that oasis is within you and will be before you soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words spilleronsheet but that oasis is within you and will be before you soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:48
Wandering, to just find dismay
Vamsi Sudha said:
A gloomy one from you !! A different shade of life. Very well expressed. Heart Touching indeed. !!
You Wandering has stopped at MPS..:)
And there is no Dismay ,
As at MPS life is a Bright RAY !!
November 30th, 2021 02:47
Vamsi Sudha said:
A gloomy one from you !! A different shade of life. Very well expressed. Heart Touching indeed. !!
You Wandering has stopped at MPS..:)
And there is no Dismay ,
As at MPS life is a Bright RAY !!
November 30th, 2021 02:47
Wandering, to just find dismay
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry your feeling sad , spiller ( a nicely expressed poem .
November 30th, 2021 02:41
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry your feeling sad , spiller ( a nicely expressed poem .
November 30th, 2021 02:41
Wandering, to just find dismay
dusk arising said:
Reading your words today has made me want to pass on a piece of wisdom. Stop searching for answers, those answers will only come when you are ready to receive them.
November 30th, 2021 02:38
dusk arising said:
Reading your words today has made me want to pass on a piece of wisdom. Stop searching for answers, those answers will only come when you are ready to receive them.
November 30th, 2021 02:38
Rewrite the slate
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, Nirvana is within us all when we listen to our inner selves.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
True words spilleronsheet, Nirvana is within us all when we listen to our inner selves.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:58
Rewrite the slate
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Peace rests in us and the ultimate goal is to attain Nirvana. Very Well Said..
Life is a testing ground for us. A Ore of Gold Shines brightly only after its put to flames. So let the flames burn us, to purify us wholly externally and internally. Be a spectator and watch the play of the Almighty !!
One more touching one from you !!!
November 29th, 2021 23:30
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller,
Peace rests in us and the ultimate goal is to attain Nirvana. Very Well Said..
Life is a testing ground for us. A Ore of Gold Shines brightly only after its put to flames. So let the flames burn us, to purify us wholly externally and internally. Be a spectator and watch the play of the Almighty !!
One more touching one from you !!!
November 29th, 2021 23:30
The king, his kingdom and its fiefdom
Neville said:
Gadzooks .. a fascinating account of kings & fiefs .. you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a good tale with a historical flavour ...................... a fief fit for a king methinks ....................... N
November 28th, 2021 15:01
Neville said:
Gadzooks .. a fascinating account of kings & fiefs .. you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a good tale with a historical flavour ...................... a fief fit for a king methinks ....................... N
November 28th, 2021 15:01
The king, his kingdom and its fiefdom
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the Queen now, handing out property left right and centre, giving Prince Andy one with a big garden since he\'s got a lot of time on his hands. I myself will hand my Fief down to my local bar, thus paying my over due bar bill.
November 28th, 2021 12:31
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the Queen now, handing out property left right and centre, giving Prince Andy one with a big garden since he\'s got a lot of time on his hands. I myself will hand my Fief down to my local bar, thus paying my over due bar bill.
November 28th, 2021 12:31
The king, his kingdom and its fiefdom
orchidee said:
Good write S.
There\'s the controversial verse, omitted from \'All things bright and beautiful\'. It goes something like:
The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate
God ordained them all.....
And ordered their estate.
November 28th, 2021 02:54
orchidee said:
Good write S.
There\'s the controversial verse, omitted from \'All things bright and beautiful\'. It goes something like:
The rich man in his castle
The poor man at his gate
God ordained them all.....
And ordered their estate.
November 28th, 2021 02:54
I wonder
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The wonder of wonders... What lies beyond... Don\'t we all wish we could explore... - A time travel this... Kudos to you. Very well written.
November 27th, 2021 13:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The wonder of wonders... What lies beyond... Don\'t we all wish we could explore... - A time travel this... Kudos to you. Very well written.
November 27th, 2021 13:13
I wonder
Fay Slimm. said:
A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding idea of surreal - - great last stanza to set the mind working at what we do not yet know.
November 26th, 2021 16:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding idea of surreal - - great last stanza to set the mind working at what we do not yet know.
November 26th, 2021 16:28
I wonder
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m gonna be looking for that wormhole till I die cause there\'s a few things that need fixing up back there in the good ole past. Just kidding, I wouldn\'t change it for the world. This read was wonderful, much enjoyed.
November 26th, 2021 10:26
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m gonna be looking for that wormhole till I die cause there\'s a few things that need fixing up back there in the good ole past. Just kidding, I wouldn\'t change it for the world. This read was wonderful, much enjoyed.
November 26th, 2021 10:26
I wonder
L. B. Mek said:
just needs a little editing
but otherwise, this is a brilliant write! dear poet
sci-fi, poetry at its captivatingly wondrous - finest, lol
\'when we loose our capacity
to wonder and dream
humanity\'s finality: begins\'
November 26th, 2021 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
just needs a little editing
but otherwise, this is a brilliant write! dear poet
sci-fi, poetry at its captivatingly wondrous - finest, lol
\'when we loose our capacity
to wonder and dream
humanity\'s finality: begins\'
November 26th, 2021 06:13
I wonder
Paul Bell said:
I would be surprised if there wasn\'t life elsewhere. Our earth is pretty perfect, as if it was built that way. Mind you, at the end of life at the mistake reading, got a feeling the line will be long.
November 26th, 2021 05:09
Paul Bell said:
I would be surprised if there wasn\'t life elsewhere. Our earth is pretty perfect, as if it was built that way. Mind you, at the end of life at the mistake reading, got a feeling the line will be long.
November 26th, 2021 05:09
Only if
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A beautiful write, dear Poet. I love it. Thank you.
November 26th, 2021 05:05
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A beautiful write, dear Poet. I love it. Thank you.
November 26th, 2021 05:05
I wonder
Neville said:
my word my friend .. it seems we think similarly ... my mental muscle is now more than satisfied having been rigorously exercised this morning .. even though we don\'t yet have all the answers ... there aint nothing to stop us from dreaming .. is there .... a stellar post spilleronsheet and one I feel sure I shall return to and ponder over .... thank you .. Neville
November 26th, 2021 03:46
Neville said:
my word my friend .. it seems we think similarly ... my mental muscle is now more than satisfied having been rigorously exercised this morning .. even though we don\'t yet have all the answers ... there aint nothing to stop us from dreaming .. is there .... a stellar post spilleronsheet and one I feel sure I shall return to and ponder over .... thank you .. Neville
November 26th, 2021 03:46
Only if
orchidee said:
Only if I would stop singing. I never do, lol. Though it\'s torture for everyone else! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:40
orchidee said:
Only if I would stop singing. I never do, lol. Though it\'s torture for everyone else! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:40
I wonder
orchidee said:
You could take a No.7 bus and find out. It goes to the Milky Way, so I hear! heehee.
Light is said to be waves and particles. Maybe the particles make up the waves? I\'m no scientist though.
November 26th, 2021 02:38
orchidee said:
You could take a No.7 bus and find out. It goes to the Milky Way, so I hear! heehee.
Light is said to be waves and particles. Maybe the particles make up the waves? I\'m no scientist though.
November 26th, 2021 02:38
I wonder
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , this is a Masterpiece in your writeup till date. !!
You are a person of Expression and Exploration. You have touched on so many science facts, which are real mysteries till date ..
\"I am at awe at your spread of knowledge. These 2 para\'s touched me straight --
I wonder
how dark the universe is
is it darker than the feelings a human hide
I wonder
if light travels and bends
telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose \"
Fantabulous Expression !!!
November 26th, 2021 02:19
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , this is a Masterpiece in your writeup till date. !!
You are a person of Expression and Exploration. You have touched on so many science facts, which are real mysteries till date ..
\"I am at awe at your spread of knowledge. These 2 para\'s touched me straight --
I wonder
how dark the universe is
is it darker than the feelings a human hide
I wonder
if light travels and bends
telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose \"
Fantabulous Expression !!!
November 26th, 2021 02:19
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