Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
I wonder
Fay Slimm. said:
A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding idea of surreal - - great last stanza to set the mind working at what we do not yet know.
November 26th, 2021 16:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding idea of surreal - - great last stanza to set the mind working at what we do not yet know.
November 26th, 2021 16:28
I wonder
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m gonna be looking for that wormhole till I die cause there\'s a few things that need fixing up back there in the good ole past. Just kidding, I wouldn\'t change it for the world. This read was wonderful, much enjoyed.
November 26th, 2021 10:26
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m gonna be looking for that wormhole till I die cause there\'s a few things that need fixing up back there in the good ole past. Just kidding, I wouldn\'t change it for the world. This read was wonderful, much enjoyed.
November 26th, 2021 10:26
I wonder
L. B. Mek said:
just needs a little editing
but otherwise, this is a brilliant write! dear poet
sci-fi, poetry at its captivatingly wondrous - finest, lol
\'when we loose our capacity
to wonder and dream
humanity\'s finality: begins\'
November 26th, 2021 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
just needs a little editing
but otherwise, this is a brilliant write! dear poet
sci-fi, poetry at its captivatingly wondrous - finest, lol
\'when we loose our capacity
to wonder and dream
humanity\'s finality: begins\'
November 26th, 2021 06:13
I wonder
Paul Bell said:
I would be surprised if there wasn\'t life elsewhere. Our earth is pretty perfect, as if it was built that way. Mind you, at the end of life at the mistake reading, got a feeling the line will be long.
November 26th, 2021 05:09
Paul Bell said:
I would be surprised if there wasn\'t life elsewhere. Our earth is pretty perfect, as if it was built that way. Mind you, at the end of life at the mistake reading, got a feeling the line will be long.
November 26th, 2021 05:09
Only if
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A beautiful write, dear Poet. I love it. Thank you.
November 26th, 2021 05:05
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A beautiful write, dear Poet. I love it. Thank you.
November 26th, 2021 05:05
I wonder
Neville said:
my word my friend .. it seems we think similarly ... my mental muscle is now more than satisfied having been rigorously exercised this morning .. even though we don\'t yet have all the answers ... there aint nothing to stop us from dreaming .. is there .... a stellar post spilleronsheet and one I feel sure I shall return to and ponder over .... thank you .. Neville
November 26th, 2021 03:46
Neville said:
my word my friend .. it seems we think similarly ... my mental muscle is now more than satisfied having been rigorously exercised this morning .. even though we don\'t yet have all the answers ... there aint nothing to stop us from dreaming .. is there .... a stellar post spilleronsheet and one I feel sure I shall return to and ponder over .... thank you .. Neville
November 26th, 2021 03:46
Only if
orchidee said:
Only if I would stop singing. I never do, lol. Though it\'s torture for everyone else! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:40
orchidee said:
Only if I would stop singing. I never do, lol. Though it\'s torture for everyone else! heehee.
November 26th, 2021 02:40
I wonder
orchidee said:
You could take a No.7 bus and find out. It goes to the Milky Way, so I hear! heehee.
Light is said to be waves and particles. Maybe the particles make up the waves? I\'m no scientist though.
November 26th, 2021 02:38
orchidee said:
You could take a No.7 bus and find out. It goes to the Milky Way, so I hear! heehee.
Light is said to be waves and particles. Maybe the particles make up the waves? I\'m no scientist though.
November 26th, 2021 02:38
I wonder
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , this is a Masterpiece in your writeup till date. !!
You are a person of Expression and Exploration. You have touched on so many science facts, which are real mysteries till date ..
\"I am at awe at your spread of knowledge. These 2 para\'s touched me straight --
I wonder
how dark the universe is
is it darker than the feelings a human hide
I wonder
if light travels and bends
telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose \"
Fantabulous Expression !!!
November 26th, 2021 02:19
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller , this is a Masterpiece in your writeup till date. !!
You are a person of Expression and Exploration. You have touched on so many science facts, which are real mysteries till date ..
\"I am at awe at your spread of knowledge. These 2 para\'s touched me straight --
I wonder
how dark the universe is
is it darker than the feelings a human hide
I wonder
if light travels and bends
telling me to sever the ego for the loved ones I chose \"
Fantabulous Expression !!!
November 26th, 2021 02:19
Only if
Goldfinch60 said:
If only? One of the most asked questions in our life spilleronsheet.
Andy
November 26th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
If only? One of the most asked questions in our life spilleronsheet.
Andy
November 26th, 2021 01:51
Only if
Neville said:
I hope you dont publicise the inspiration or reason behind these intriguing words ... they are so good on their own without any explanation that may or may not in itself impact upon the subjective opinion and views of the reader ...
You certainly held my attention and had me thinking long after I had finished reading my friend ............ .............................. Neville
November 25th, 2021 17:14
Neville said:
I hope you dont publicise the inspiration or reason behind these intriguing words ... they are so good on their own without any explanation that may or may not in itself impact upon the subjective opinion and views of the reader ...
You certainly held my attention and had me thinking long after I had finished reading my friend ............ .............................. Neville
November 25th, 2021 17:14
Only if
dusk arising said:
Reads like the regret after a very young love was halted by parental influence... if only.... Life is full of \"if only\'s\" which to be honest is great for the inventive poetic mind..... plenty of \"if only\'s\" to create in poems letting our hopes, dreams, fears run wild.
Would be interested in reading what the \"if only\" is relating to your post today.
November 25th, 2021 16:06
dusk arising said:
Reads like the regret after a very young love was halted by parental influence... if only.... Life is full of \"if only\'s\" which to be honest is great for the inventive poetic mind..... plenty of \"if only\'s\" to create in poems letting our hopes, dreams, fears run wild.
Would be interested in reading what the \"if only\" is relating to your post today.
November 25th, 2021 16:06
Only if
Caring dove said:
I wish for a lot of things .., if only my past had been happier , is one of them . Life can feel so sad at times, and we just wish for so many things …
November 25th, 2021 14:54
Caring dove said:
I wish for a lot of things .., if only my past had been happier , is one of them . Life can feel so sad at times, and we just wish for so many things …
November 25th, 2021 14:54
The invisible hands
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Oops !! I missed seeing this poetry of yours...
Invisible Hands take the Visible Load..
And of course you are not Alone Behold !!
Just wonder, how wearisome the world would have been. You really add the pinch of color to the world !! Amazing as usual. !!!
November 24th, 2021 10:05
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Oops !! I missed seeing this poetry of yours...
Invisible Hands take the Visible Load..
And of course you are not Alone Behold !!
Just wonder, how wearisome the world would have been. You really add the pinch of color to the world !! Amazing as usual. !!!
November 24th, 2021 10:05
First meeting
Garth Rakumakoe said:
So their love stayed strong and stayed there, in their hearts, always... The symbolism is so exquisite! - Definitely a favorite for me.
November 24th, 2021 06:02
Garth Rakumakoe said:
So their love stayed strong and stayed there, in their hearts, always... The symbolism is so exquisite! - Definitely a favorite for me.
November 24th, 2021 06:02
Trust in thyself
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome Spiller !! Trust A wonderful feeling which should not be Rusted by time !!!
November 23rd, 2021 21:51
Vamsi Sudha said:
Awesome Spiller !! Trust A wonderful feeling which should not be Rusted by time !!!
November 23rd, 2021 21:51
First meeting
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was amazing Spiller !! A love poetry from you ..
This was the real touching line
\"she answered with smile
the one which isn’t plucked over time \"
what an endearing expression. Stunned at your creativity and your expression..
.Keep writing and let us be submerged in your flow of expression :)
November 23rd, 2021 21:48
Vamsi Sudha said:
That was amazing Spiller !! A love poetry from you ..
This was the real touching line
\"she answered with smile
the one which isn’t plucked over time \"
what an endearing expression. Stunned at your creativity and your expression..
.Keep writing and let us be submerged in your flow of expression :)
November 23rd, 2021 21:48
First meeting
Neville said:
this has more than just a ring of truth to its name & what a wonderful memory shared .. I like it .. I like it a lot ................................... Neville
November 23rd, 2021 16:39
Neville said:
this has more than just a ring of truth to its name & what a wonderful memory shared .. I like it .. I like it a lot ................................... Neville
November 23rd, 2021 16:39
First meeting
kitty the naughty poet said:
Really lovely words. I enjoyed reading this, so thank you for sharing :)
November 23rd, 2021 16:03
kitty the naughty poet said:
Really lovely words. I enjoyed reading this, so thank you for sharing :)
November 23rd, 2021 16:03
First meeting
Paul Bell said:
Some destinies are just that, waiting on time that should come, but never really making it, even when destiny dictates that it should. This truly is what real life is.
November 23rd, 2021 15:33
Paul Bell said:
Some destinies are just that, waiting on time that should come, but never really making it, even when destiny dictates that it should. This truly is what real life is.
November 23rd, 2021 15:33
First meeting
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , spiller 🙂 I like the flow of this one ,.. nicely expressed
November 23rd, 2021 14:56
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , spiller 🙂 I like the flow of this one ,.. nicely expressed
November 23rd, 2021 14:56
Trust in thyself
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true spilleronsheet, that trust in yourself can lead to a most wonderful life,
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true spilleronsheet, that trust in yourself can lead to a most wonderful life,
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:14
Trust in thyself
Paul Bell said:
I think if you asked a hundred people who they trusted, 99 would say between 2 and 3 I reckon.
November 22nd, 2021 12:51
Paul Bell said:
I think if you asked a hundred people who they trusted, 99 would say between 2 and 3 I reckon.
November 22nd, 2021 12:51
Trust in thyself
Neville said:
...... self awareness, insight & acceptance of what is, what\'s not and what maybe is key ... a very thought provoking poem indeed ....
November 22nd, 2021 08:26
Neville said:
...... self awareness, insight & acceptance of what is, what\'s not and what maybe is key ... a very thought provoking poem indeed ....
November 22nd, 2021 08:26
Trust in thyself
L. B. Mek said:
a faultless message
championing, self-accountability
and acceptance
to the inevitably, chaotic experience
of life..
(a great write, thanks for sharing)
November 22nd, 2021 07:42
L. B. Mek said:
a faultless message
championing, self-accountability
and acceptance
to the inevitably, chaotic experience
of life..
(a great write, thanks for sharing)
November 22nd, 2021 07:42
Trust in thyself
orchidee said:
A good write S.
With the spiritual side, I wouldn\'t want to trust entirely to myself in everything.
But to have no trust in oneself is surely to be un-confident, not take a step in anything, just rubbish oneself, etc.
November 22nd, 2021 06:59
orchidee said:
A good write S.
With the spiritual side, I wouldn\'t want to trust entirely to myself in everything.
But to have no trust in oneself is surely to be un-confident, not take a step in anything, just rubbish oneself, etc.
November 22nd, 2021 06:59
Late night
Neville said:
you have the gift of capturing moments that so often fill my own dark hours until I finally succumb & the words rattling around in my head take a well deserved break ...a very relatable post my friend ...
Neville
November 22nd, 2021 02:42
Neville said:
you have the gift of capturing moments that so often fill my own dark hours until I finally succumb & the words rattling around in my head take a well deserved break ...a very relatable post my friend ...
Neville
November 22nd, 2021 02:42
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