Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet



Innocent rain
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Spiller, Let the Innocent rain wash away the past stale events for a new sprout in life....
Time for a new beginning.. !!

December 13th, 2021 13:04

Tears of joy
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Spiller, You are spilling positivity now. That\'s good to see, things are getting greener and tears are precious.........They surely make the dried pastures greener !! Good one :)

December 13th, 2021 12:59

Tears of joy
dusk arising said:

Nice poem but deffo goes against human nature. We instinctively cry after the event as tiny children, a hard habit to break.

December 13th, 2021 11:24

Tears of joy
woundedheart said:

Indeed tears are to be joyous but also to self clean the impurities from our eyes in Ernest and metaphorically. Love the poem very sweet.

December 13th, 2021 08:30

A painting on the wall
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true spilleronsheet, art brings something into your heart that cannot be explained. I am a member of the Ashmolean Museum an art gallery in Oxford and I could, and have, spent hours looking at the art there.
In the boardroom of the place I worked before retiring there was a print of Mark Rothko\'s Orange and Red which I managed to procure when we moved to a new building, I see so much in it.

Andy

December 13th, 2021 01:47

Bereft souls
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Not all gifts come wrapped in a box. Some are just words that speak to hearts. This piece is one such.

December 12th, 2021 12:26

Bereft souls
Paul Bell said:

Probably in our human existence, the last two years have been the worse, and going into next year doesn\'t look to be any better. Maybe a time to rejoice, which may sound strange, but as humans, that what we do.

December 12th, 2021 08:10

Bereft souls
Lorna said:

The sad side of the holiday season is what I read here SOS. Great job.....

December 12th, 2021 05:54

Bereft souls
orchidee said:

Good write S.

December 12th, 2021 02:58

Bereft souls
Goldfinch60 said:

Such an emotive write spilleronsheet.

Andy

December 12th, 2021 01:28

Bereft souls
Rozina said:

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

December 11th, 2021 22:11

Bereft souls
Neville said:


I\'m gonna take the easy option and just echo what woundedheart just posted about this your very lovely & most recent posting ............ Neville


December 11th, 2021 15:49

Bereft souls
woundedheart said:

Bittersweet tones but beautifully penned ✌

December 11th, 2021 14:03

Innocent rain
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words spilleronsheet, time shows us so many things in our life but we must also be assured that tomorrow will be a better day.

Andy

December 11th, 2021 01:38

Innocent rain
woundedheart said:

Paper boats and pooh sticks damn I miss yesterday. Your tear drops only adding to the puddles to be splashed in the streams to be jumped the lakes to swim in but I\'d prefere them to be the happy ones as sad ones are so salty. Great reminiscence poem

December 10th, 2021 12:09

Innocent rain
Lorna said:

Poignant time passages... thanks.

December 10th, 2021 10:41

If can’t wade off, be the brook
Paul Bell said:

I think the answer is up in the big sky awaiting, and I\'m thinking the answer will be so easy you\'ll probably murder the angel for telling you. I myself am still searching, mind you.

December 9th, 2021 16:09

If can’t wade off, be the brook
Lorna said:

Best way! There really isn\'t any sense to life is there! Just go with the flow!

December 9th, 2021 14:51

If can’t wade off, be the brook
Neville said:


say it like it should be .. and always ..
but be sure to reflect on those golden moments as well as those grey ones .............. N

December 9th, 2021 12:00

If can’t wade off, be the brook
Rozina said:

A lovely poem.

December 9th, 2021 05:50

If can’t wade off, be the brook
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
\'acceptance, is ever
the First: step\'

December 9th, 2021 04:55

If can’t wade off, be the brook
woundedheart said:

Surrender to be the willow. Great advise bend but never break weathering the storm of life. Lovely write.

December 9th, 2021 04:09

If can’t wade off, be the brook
dusk arising said:

Be in harmony with your surroundings is the answer i think.

December 9th, 2021 02:09

Mere Carbon
Goldfinch60 said:

We may be just carbon and water but each day of our lives we sparkle like diamonds as we are still here.

Andy

December 9th, 2021 01:21

Mere Carbon
Lorna said:

And we can burn carbon! Makes a wonderful barbeque...... who needs thee diamonds..... let\'s be useful and burn for heat!

December 8th, 2021 12:08

Mere Carbon
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear spiller !!
You brought the base of Diamond, Carbon. Every carbon does not turn to be a diamond. Carbon in high stress and heat turns out a diamond.
Same way....let the carbon of you turn to be diamond !! its time now, you have taken the heat and stress !! You are turning a diamond soon...:)

December 8th, 2021 02:50

Mere Carbon
dusk arising said:

It\'s what we are, carbon and water. Oh and there\'s that spirit thing too. But what an incredible thing carbon is.... we are stardust.

A thought provoking piece spiller.

December 8th, 2021 02:46

Mere Carbon
orchidee said:

Good write S.

December 8th, 2021 02:40

Mere Carbon
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Makes me think of emptiness … atleast that’s my thoughts whilst reading this poem … that feeling of emptiness we get , when we just want to feel so much more

A nice writing )

December 8th, 2021 02:30

I asked myself
Rozina said:

A very meaningful poem. Thank you.

December 7th, 2021 04:50



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