Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The letters
L. B. Mek said:
we smile at words
with empty hands,
we type our well wishes
devoid of distinctive
penmanship traits..
we click send and hope for a reply
knowing, all our wishes
have been whittled down
to binary relationships
and we\'ve forgotten so much
we assume
this, is as good it can get
in life...
(a lament for Time\'s
deemed archaic
but yearned for, by those
who know)
thanks for sharing, a really good message
but still a little room for poetic refinement, dear poet
(\'who types the letter now
who calligraphs *by hand, inside
who laces them *with well wishes,
*those long gone letters, waiting
in the post box, outside
*now, with technology at its peak
where an alphabet is typed
*and instantaneously
reaches the receiver on, the other side
no longer
*do we get coarse sheets
drenched
with a persons scent, inside*\')
December 17th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
we smile at words
with empty hands,
we type our well wishes
devoid of distinctive
penmanship traits..
we click send and hope for a reply
knowing, all our wishes
have been whittled down
to binary relationships
and we\'ve forgotten so much
we assume
this, is as good it can get
in life...
(a lament for Time\'s
deemed archaic
but yearned for, by those
who know)
thanks for sharing, a really good message
but still a little room for poetic refinement, dear poet
(\'who types the letter now
who calligraphs *by hand, inside
who laces them *with well wishes,
*those long gone letters, waiting
in the post box, outside
*now, with technology at its peak
where an alphabet is typed
*and instantaneously
reaches the receiver on, the other side
no longer
*do we get coarse sheets
drenched
with a persons scent, inside*\')
December 17th, 2021 05:38
The letters
Rozina said:
Serendipity. I was decluttering and found very old beautifully written letters from my Dad. I was studying overseas then. Your lovely poem brought back memories.
December 17th, 2021 04:28
Rozina said:
Serendipity. I was decluttering and found very old beautifully written letters from my Dad. I was studying overseas then. Your lovely poem brought back memories.
December 17th, 2021 04:28
Amber light
SureshG said:
You have a way of stitching words together, that are spell binding
December 16th, 2021 21:28
SureshG said:
You have a way of stitching words together, that are spell binding
December 16th, 2021 21:28
Amber light
Rozina said:
I’ll be looking over my shoulder tonight. I’d better not look into a mirror too in case I see a shadow behind me. Spooky! Thanks for sharing!
December 16th, 2021 19:04
Rozina said:
I’ll be looking over my shoulder tonight. I’d better not look into a mirror too in case I see a shadow behind me. Spooky! Thanks for sharing!
December 16th, 2021 19:04
Amber light
woundedheart said:
Dark and eerie poem leaves the reader wondering is this auto biographical or simply the fear to leap for fear of falling.
December 16th, 2021 14:15
woundedheart said:
Dark and eerie poem leaves the reader wondering is this auto biographical or simply the fear to leap for fear of falling.
December 16th, 2021 14:15
Amber light
Neville said:
this is horrorful ........................... :)
December 16th, 2021 13:51
Neville said:
this is horrorful ........................... :)
December 16th, 2021 13:51
Amber light
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautiful, gothic Poe like piece here spilleronsheet.
I love the way you\'ve weaved the stillness of night and the active nature of the dawn together.
Bravo and I hope all is well!
December 16th, 2021 13:50
AuburnScribbler said:
A beautiful, gothic Poe like piece here spilleronsheet.
I love the way you\'ve weaved the stillness of night and the active nature of the dawn together.
Bravo and I hope all is well!
December 16th, 2021 13:50
Two fragrances
L. B. Mek said:
the interconnectivity of matter
the likenesses in all humanity
the abundant disparity in universality,
a surreal depiction
a poetic dialectic
a serenely scenic scene..
(what a wonderful read
great to see your imagination
playing around with wordplay,
a brilliantly creative write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 16th, 2021 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
the interconnectivity of matter
the likenesses in all humanity
the abundant disparity in universality,
a surreal depiction
a poetic dialectic
a serenely scenic scene..
(what a wonderful read
great to see your imagination
playing around with wordplay,
a brilliantly creative write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 16th, 2021 03:24
Two fragrances
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we get inspiration from many on this site.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, we get inspiration from many on this site.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:55
Two fragrances
Rozina said:
Beautiful. The inspired and the inspirer, thank you. I am learning so much from here.
December 15th, 2021 18:15
Rozina said:
Beautiful. The inspired and the inspirer, thank you. I am learning so much from here.
December 15th, 2021 18:15
Two fragrances
woundedheart said:
Wonderful piece inspired i feel by something we both read earlier but penned with elegance and panache you have a real way with words my friend, pray pen on ✒
December 15th, 2021 13:33
woundedheart said:
Wonderful piece inspired i feel by something we both read earlier but penned with elegance and panache you have a real way with words my friend, pray pen on ✒
December 15th, 2021 13:33
A circle of confusion
Neville said:
as we journey along this rocky path we must learn to take the rough with the smooth .. a mighty fine poem to read and reflect upon .. full marks from me my friend ....... N x
December 15th, 2021 12:20
Neville said:
as we journey along this rocky path we must learn to take the rough with the smooth .. a mighty fine poem to read and reflect upon .. full marks from me my friend ....... N x
December 15th, 2021 12:20
A circle of confusion
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the greatest circle is the one we live on. This brings wonderment, and at times, total confusion, but would we have it any other way.
December 15th, 2021 06:24
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the greatest circle is the one we live on. This brings wonderment, and at times, total confusion, but would we have it any other way.
December 15th, 2021 06:24
A circle of confusion
Rozina said:
So very true that some problems go round and round, never seem to end leaving us confused and down. Yet others are resolved quite simply! Great lines.
December 15th, 2021 01:17
Rozina said:
So very true that some problems go round and round, never seem to end leaving us confused and down. Yet others are resolved quite simply! Great lines.
December 15th, 2021 01:17
A circle of confusion
Vamsi Sudha said:
Circle of Confusion !! What a wonderful correlation.
Circles don\'t end, but you can surely come out of the circle with your centrifugal force of optimism.
So break the the centripetal force of confusion and its time, to see the life beyond the Circle of Confusion.
Amazing write and your poem touches the depths of your inner core. !! Thanks Spiller !!
December 14th, 2021 23:22
Vamsi Sudha said:
Circle of Confusion !! What a wonderful correlation.
Circles don\'t end, but you can surely come out of the circle with your centrifugal force of optimism.
So break the the centripetal force of confusion and its time, to see the life beyond the Circle of Confusion.
Amazing write and your poem touches the depths of your inner core. !! Thanks Spiller !!
December 14th, 2021 23:22
A circle of confusion
woundedheart said:
What goes around comes around just like fashion every 30yrs or so the mini skirt returns. Love theme very thought provoking and deep.
December 14th, 2021 12:43
woundedheart said:
What goes around comes around just like fashion every 30yrs or so the mini skirt returns. Love theme very thought provoking and deep.
December 14th, 2021 12:43
Tears of joy
Lorna said:
So what could tears do about it.... great line! Really got to me SOS.... sweet resignation.
December 14th, 2021 05:57
Lorna said:
So what could tears do about it.... great line! Really got to me SOS.... sweet resignation.
December 14th, 2021 05:57
Tears of joy
Goldfinch60 said:
Tears of joy are so wonderful in our lives spilleronsheet, may they ever be so.
Andy
December 14th, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Tears of joy are so wonderful in our lives spilleronsheet, may they ever be so.
Andy
December 14th, 2021 01:43
Innocent rain
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Let the Innocent rain wash away the past stale events for a new sprout in life....
Time for a new beginning.. !!
December 13th, 2021 13:04
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, Let the Innocent rain wash away the past stale events for a new sprout in life....
Time for a new beginning.. !!
December 13th, 2021 13:04
Tears of joy
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You are spilling positivity now. That\'s good to see, things are getting greener and tears are precious.........They surely make the dried pastures greener !! Good one :)
December 13th, 2021 12:59
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Spiller, You are spilling positivity now. That\'s good to see, things are getting greener and tears are precious.........They surely make the dried pastures greener !! Good one :)
December 13th, 2021 12:59
Tears of joy
dusk arising said:
Nice poem but deffo goes against human nature. We instinctively cry after the event as tiny children, a hard habit to break.
December 13th, 2021 11:24
dusk arising said:
Nice poem but deffo goes against human nature. We instinctively cry after the event as tiny children, a hard habit to break.
December 13th, 2021 11:24
Tears of joy
woundedheart said:
Indeed tears are to be joyous but also to self clean the impurities from our eyes in Ernest and metaphorically. Love the poem very sweet.
December 13th, 2021 08:30
woundedheart said:
Indeed tears are to be joyous but also to self clean the impurities from our eyes in Ernest and metaphorically. Love the poem very sweet.
December 13th, 2021 08:30
A painting on the wall
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true spilleronsheet, art brings something into your heart that cannot be explained. I am a member of the Ashmolean Museum an art gallery in Oxford and I could, and have, spent hours looking at the art there.
In the boardroom of the place I worked before retiring there was a print of Mark Rothko\'s Orange and Red which I managed to procure when we moved to a new building, I see so much in it.
Andy
December 13th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true spilleronsheet, art brings something into your heart that cannot be explained. I am a member of the Ashmolean Museum an art gallery in Oxford and I could, and have, spent hours looking at the art there.
In the boardroom of the place I worked before retiring there was a print of Mark Rothko\'s Orange and Red which I managed to procure when we moved to a new building, I see so much in it.
Andy
December 13th, 2021 01:47
Bereft souls
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Not all gifts come wrapped in a box. Some are just words that speak to hearts. This piece is one such.
December 12th, 2021 12:26
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Not all gifts come wrapped in a box. Some are just words that speak to hearts. This piece is one such.
December 12th, 2021 12:26
Bereft souls
Paul Bell said:
Probably in our human existence, the last two years have been the worse, and going into next year doesn\'t look to be any better. Maybe a time to rejoice, which may sound strange, but as humans, that what we do.
December 12th, 2021 08:10
Paul Bell said:
Probably in our human existence, the last two years have been the worse, and going into next year doesn\'t look to be any better. Maybe a time to rejoice, which may sound strange, but as humans, that what we do.
December 12th, 2021 08:10
Bereft souls
Lorna said:
The sad side of the holiday season is what I read here SOS. Great job.....
December 12th, 2021 05:54
Lorna said:
The sad side of the holiday season is what I read here SOS. Great job.....
December 12th, 2021 05:54
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