Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
The mask
dusk arising said:
Mostly loved ones are accepting of the beast within the mask but strangers? If they saw the pleasure of encounters they may think me strange. Oh and the sheer joy of young childrens effervescence... unmasked my enjoyment could be misunderstood as the most evil of intent lurking.... a mask yes, I wear my mask.... society kind of demands one.
I found your poem thought provoking.
November 13th, 2021 06:13
dusk arising said:
Mostly loved ones are accepting of the beast within the mask but strangers? If they saw the pleasure of encounters they may think me strange. Oh and the sheer joy of young childrens effervescence... unmasked my enjoyment could be misunderstood as the most evil of intent lurking.... a mask yes, I wear my mask.... society kind of demands one.
I found your poem thought provoking.
November 13th, 2021 06:13
Oh mother! What a plight!!!
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed and smiling big behind my mask .................... :)
November 13th, 2021 05:55
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed and smiling big behind my mask .................... :)
November 13th, 2021 05:55
Dandelion
Sherbs said:
This is fantastic! I don’t know why people dislike dandelions and call them weeds. I love them and think they’re entitled to be called a ‘flower’. They have this extraordinary ability to transform themselves. How amazing is that?!
November 13th, 2021 03:28
Sherbs said:
This is fantastic! I don’t know why people dislike dandelions and call them weeds. I love them and think they’re entitled to be called a ‘flower’. They have this extraordinary ability to transform themselves. How amazing is that?!
November 13th, 2021 03:28
Oh mother! What a plight!!!
Vamsi Sudha said:
haha !! wonderful poem on teeth too. You can write on teeth too...its amazing...!!! enjoyed Spiller..!!
November 12th, 2021 19:13
Vamsi Sudha said:
haha !! wonderful poem on teeth too. You can write on teeth too...its amazing...!!! enjoyed Spiller..!!
November 12th, 2021 19:13
Oh mother! What a plight!!!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I certainly like your writing 🙂 but I’m sorry if you have had any bad news .
I like how you expressed yourself in this one
November 12th, 2021 12:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I certainly like your writing 🙂 but I’m sorry if you have had any bad news .
I like how you expressed yourself in this one
November 12th, 2021 12:42
Dandelion
Neville said:
Made me smile .. and the colour you brought to my grey November morn was indeed a heart-warming and pleasant surprise ... muchly enjoyed ..
November 12th, 2021 03:44
Neville said:
Made me smile .. and the colour you brought to my grey November morn was indeed a heart-warming and pleasant surprise ... muchly enjoyed ..
November 12th, 2021 03:44
Dandelion
L. B. Mek said:
strange time of the year to read about Dandelions
but then again, the Rose of all weeds
has a habit of overcoming its obstacles...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 11th, 2021 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
strange time of the year to read about Dandelions
but then again, the Rose of all weeds
has a habit of overcoming its obstacles...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 11th, 2021 04:43
Dandelion
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, I have always though dandelions were wonderful.
Andy
November 11th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, I have always though dandelions were wonderful.
Andy
November 11th, 2021 01:37
Dandelion
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem … love this ! Nicely expressed words 🙂🙂
November 11th, 2021 01:08
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem … love this ! Nicely expressed words 🙂🙂
November 11th, 2021 01:08
Dandelion
Vamsi Sudha said:
I was swayed away with happiness like a dandelion reading your poem !!
The last paragraph rocked !!
This was a great line \"Carrying on inheritance to all nooks\" described the dandelion crisply.
November 10th, 2021 22:24
Vamsi Sudha said:
I was swayed away with happiness like a dandelion reading your poem !!
The last paragraph rocked !!
This was a great line \"Carrying on inheritance to all nooks\" described the dandelion crisply.
November 10th, 2021 22:24
Smoker
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite a picturesque poem Spiller !! You seem to write your pomes on smoke too. Anything is a piece of poem for a poet : )) Wonderful....
November 10th, 2021 22:19
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite a picturesque poem Spiller !! You seem to write your pomes on smoke too. Anything is a piece of poem for a poet : )) Wonderful....
November 10th, 2021 22:19
Falling the cliff to fly
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like your choice of words in this one !
A great read 🙂
November 9th, 2021 14:00
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like your choice of words in this one !
A great read 🙂
November 9th, 2021 14:00
Smoker
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We need more awareness raising pieces like this one in arts spaces. An important message here writer. Kudos well deserved.
November 9th, 2021 13:35
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We need more awareness raising pieces like this one in arts spaces. An important message here writer. Kudos well deserved.
November 9th, 2021 13:35
Smoker
Paul Bell said:
The air has got cleaner, but the seas are still a dumping ground by ships sailing our seas. Every time you eat a fish now, they\'ll be plastic in it.
November 9th, 2021 13:18
Paul Bell said:
The air has got cleaner, but the seas are still a dumping ground by ships sailing our seas. Every time you eat a fish now, they\'ll be plastic in it.
November 9th, 2021 13:18
Rosy shades
Goldfinch60 said:
We can see life in many shades of colour spilleronsheet but to my way in life now all is looked upon in rose coloured ways, life is good.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
We can see life in many shades of colour spilleronsheet but to my way in life now all is looked upon in rose coloured ways, life is good.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 01:54
Rosy shades
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another Good one from you !! You ended it wonderfully...
\"Watching the sunset with different shades of life\" .....
November 8th, 2021 13:24
Vamsi Sudha said:
Another Good one from you !! You ended it wonderfully...
\"Watching the sunset with different shades of life\" .....
November 8th, 2021 13:24
Rosy shades
Paul Bell said:
Always think when I hear the phrase, rose coloured glasses. Someone is ignoring the fact that someone else knows something they don\'t want heard.
November 8th, 2021 12:56
Paul Bell said:
Always think when I hear the phrase, rose coloured glasses. Someone is ignoring the fact that someone else knows something they don\'t want heard.
November 8th, 2021 12:56
Rosy shades
L. B. Mek said:
this is how best to utilise, your capacity
for insightful empathy, dear poet
(cultivate this unique Poetic voice
and you\'ll ink wonderful works, of immense merit sooner than later)
thank you! for choosing to share
(these lines below, encompass your whole poem succinctly
less is more, as they say
and remember to allow for breaks
so the rhythm of your flow
doesn\'t diminish
the value of your poignant lines,
allow your reader
a chance, to appreciate your wording):
\'When, was the empath in you
born?
Now, that smile of yours
isn’t simple, anymore;
It’s full of praise;
At times, it’s smirk of satire
it’s a love - farewell
At times, its full of hatred
*a smile of cheer
at times
it’s vengeance, a covert smile
hiding tears in the eyes
at times, it\'s a fake smile
why did you choose to wear
that, rosy: shade?
Did your *life\'s education, grant you
did *your experiences teach you
or is it *inevitability\'s
after-effect of *clueless, adulting?
When, did rosy shades
become:
your Choice
*in life...)
November 8th, 2021 07:24
L. B. Mek said:
this is how best to utilise, your capacity
for insightful empathy, dear poet
(cultivate this unique Poetic voice
and you\'ll ink wonderful works, of immense merit sooner than later)
thank you! for choosing to share
(these lines below, encompass your whole poem succinctly
less is more, as they say
and remember to allow for breaks
so the rhythm of your flow
doesn\'t diminish
the value of your poignant lines,
allow your reader
a chance, to appreciate your wording):
\'When, was the empath in you
born?
Now, that smile of yours
isn’t simple, anymore;
It’s full of praise;
At times, it’s smirk of satire
it’s a love - farewell
At times, its full of hatred
*a smile of cheer
at times
it’s vengeance, a covert smile
hiding tears in the eyes
at times, it\'s a fake smile
why did you choose to wear
that, rosy: shade?
Did your *life\'s education, grant you
did *your experiences teach you
or is it *inevitability\'s
after-effect of *clueless, adulting?
When, did rosy shades
become:
your Choice
*in life...)
November 8th, 2021 07:24
Rosy shades
Lorna said:
Thanks you Spills for a new word (to me) Vibgyor. Your poem sadly reflects growing up/adulthood I guess. What a shame that we do.
November 8th, 2021 06:01
Lorna said:
Thanks you Spills for a new word (to me) Vibgyor. Your poem sadly reflects growing up/adulthood I guess. What a shame that we do.
November 8th, 2021 06:01
Rosy shades
dusk arising said:
It occurred to me that the writer had \"begun to see through a glass darkly\".
How initial familiarity becomes a complex familiarity as time takes it\'s course and our own history creates visions which reflect in our face from those shaded eyes before us.
November 8th, 2021 05:47
dusk arising said:
It occurred to me that the writer had \"begun to see through a glass darkly\".
How initial familiarity becomes a complex familiarity as time takes it\'s course and our own history creates visions which reflect in our face from those shaded eyes before us.
November 8th, 2021 05:47
Rosy shades
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Reminds me of a song \"These rose colored glasses that I\'m looking through...\" A truth of life. Nice one, fellow poet.
November 8th, 2021 04:58
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Reminds me of a song \"These rose colored glasses that I\'m looking through...\" A truth of life. Nice one, fellow poet.
November 8th, 2021 04:58
Rosy shades
kitty the naughty poet said:
A really pleasant read. Thank you for sharing fellow writer.
November 8th, 2021 04:51
kitty the naughty poet said:
A really pleasant read. Thank you for sharing fellow writer.
November 8th, 2021 04:51
Walking endlessly
Vamsi Sudha said:
Every Move we make has a purpose, nothing happens in world by chance. So lets wait for the beautiful ending.
Your expression was wonderful in these lines..
walking endlessly with a weeping heart
to a singing soul
from a tired smile
to panda eyes ..
Really liked the Panda Eyes expression, so apt and a great simile...:))
thanks spiller, your spill of daily poems everyday in a daily tonic for me..thank you !!
November 7th, 2021 12:00
Vamsi Sudha said:
Every Move we make has a purpose, nothing happens in world by chance. So lets wait for the beautiful ending.
Your expression was wonderful in these lines..
walking endlessly with a weeping heart
to a singing soul
from a tired smile
to panda eyes ..
Really liked the Panda Eyes expression, so apt and a great simile...:))
thanks spiller, your spill of daily poems everyday in a daily tonic for me..thank you !!
November 7th, 2021 12:00
The lady
CuteCrescent said:
Amazing!! The way you express your thoughts is incredible!! Keep shining @spilleronsheet!!
You have a long way to go ahead🤞🤞🤩
November 7th, 2021 11:25
CuteCrescent said:
Amazing!! The way you express your thoughts is incredible!! Keep shining @spilleronsheet!!
You have a long way to go ahead🤞🤞🤩
November 7th, 2021 11:25
The lady
Lorna said:
Finding another soul in sync..... loved this one Spills....
November 7th, 2021 08:59
Lorna said:
Finding another soul in sync..... loved this one Spills....
November 7th, 2021 08:59
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