Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
Visit to outside
Neville said:
To coin a phrase, you have just writ the tooth the whole tooth and nothing but the tooth ............ or very nearly .... maybe ...................... am coming down with cabin fever methinks :)
November 16th, 2021 04:00
Neville said:
To coin a phrase, you have just writ the tooth the whole tooth and nothing but the tooth ............ or very nearly .... maybe ...................... am coming down with cabin fever methinks :)
November 16th, 2021 04:00
Visit to outside
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write spilleronsheet. To be trapped inside for so long is mindbending. I have always though on how fortunate I am in being able to go out every day into the wonder of Nature, (and croquet of course).
I hope all is well with you soon and the glory of the outside comes back.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write spilleronsheet. To be trapped inside for so long is mindbending. I have always though on how fortunate I am in being able to go out every day into the wonder of Nature, (and croquet of course).
I hope all is well with you soon and the glory of the outside comes back.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:40
Visit to outside
Rozina said:
We have survived. Thank you for sharing your poem.
November 15th, 2021 21:41
Rozina said:
We have survived. Thank you for sharing your poem.
November 15th, 2021 21:41
Visit to outside
Vamsi Sudha said:
Let each tear drop of yours turn to wonderful poetry. Poetry is a an expression of Emotions when felt very deeply !! So keep writing, because everyone is not a poet !!
November 15th, 2021 13:53
Vamsi Sudha said:
Let each tear drop of yours turn to wonderful poetry. Poetry is a an expression of Emotions when felt very deeply !! So keep writing, because everyone is not a poet !!
November 15th, 2021 13:53
Visit to outside
L. B. Mek said:
lol, I\'m sorry
I couldn\'t help but find humour in your wry cynicism, of our recent reality\'s
absurd hypocrisy
(if we don\'t laugh-away
our frustrations;
we cry, engulfed
by our infuriation)...
such a relatable write, thanks for sharing!
really liked these lines:
\'alas
one day
the time is ripe
they finally greet the morning starlight
only to dismay
the visit to doctor beside
for a slight fever
in a curiosity
what it shall be
which germ attacks oneself
ahhhh
relief
Its the changing season
subsides back to bed
glaring at the flat roof instead
few days pass
as receding waves
days of illness are back again
now it’s a visit to a dentist instead\'
November 15th, 2021 08:19
L. B. Mek said:
lol, I\'m sorry
I couldn\'t help but find humour in your wry cynicism, of our recent reality\'s
absurd hypocrisy
(if we don\'t laugh-away
our frustrations;
we cry, engulfed
by our infuriation)...
such a relatable write, thanks for sharing!
really liked these lines:
\'alas
one day
the time is ripe
they finally greet the morning starlight
only to dismay
the visit to doctor beside
for a slight fever
in a curiosity
what it shall be
which germ attacks oneself
ahhhh
relief
Its the changing season
subsides back to bed
glaring at the flat roof instead
few days pass
as receding waves
days of illness are back again
now it’s a visit to a dentist instead\'
November 15th, 2021 08:19
Visit to outside
orchidee said:
You got your coat (and hat too maybe?). You getting out more, as they say?! heehee.
I had to get my coat. I overstayed my welcome at a friend\'s. Well. I only wanted to show them my 10 albums of holiday pics! Doh!
November 15th, 2021 06:12
orchidee said:
You got your coat (and hat too maybe?). You getting out more, as they say?! heehee.
I had to get my coat. I overstayed my welcome at a friend\'s. Well. I only wanted to show them my 10 albums of holiday pics! Doh!
November 15th, 2021 06:12
Visit to outside
Paul Bell said:
Now is the time to get out and spread oneself on society. Or, as my doctor says, send me a picture of your health, and I\'ll set you free.
November 15th, 2021 05:28
Paul Bell said:
Now is the time to get out and spread oneself on society. Or, as my doctor says, send me a picture of your health, and I\'ll set you free.
November 15th, 2021 05:28
Visit to outside
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey, you been reading my diary mate? This is the boring life i have been living for months due to my health situation. One hopes for better days ahead.
November 15th, 2021 05:21
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey, you been reading my diary mate? This is the boring life i have been living for months due to my health situation. One hopes for better days ahead.
November 15th, 2021 05:21
On my side
Goldfinch60 said:
With the light in your life spilleronsheet she will always be with you.
Andy
November 15th, 2021 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
With the light in your life spilleronsheet she will always be with you.
Andy
November 15th, 2021 02:06
On my side
Caring dove said:
I like this writing of yours ) sometimes we can worry about what the future holds .., but we all need comfort and not to be left alone in the dark
November 14th, 2021 12:33
Caring dove said:
I like this writing of yours ) sometimes we can worry about what the future holds .., but we all need comfort and not to be left alone in the dark
November 14th, 2021 12:33
The mask
Paul Bell said:
I must admit, it is the norm. On the plus side, got a mask for everyday now. I think if we get through this year, we\'ll be okay.
November 13th, 2021 14:14
Paul Bell said:
I must admit, it is the norm. On the plus side, got a mask for everyday now. I think if we get through this year, we\'ll be okay.
November 13th, 2021 14:14
The mask
dusk arising said:
Mostly loved ones are accepting of the beast within the mask but strangers? If they saw the pleasure of encounters they may think me strange. Oh and the sheer joy of young childrens effervescence... unmasked my enjoyment could be misunderstood as the most evil of intent lurking.... a mask yes, I wear my mask.... society kind of demands one.
I found your poem thought provoking.
November 13th, 2021 06:13
dusk arising said:
Mostly loved ones are accepting of the beast within the mask but strangers? If they saw the pleasure of encounters they may think me strange. Oh and the sheer joy of young childrens effervescence... unmasked my enjoyment could be misunderstood as the most evil of intent lurking.... a mask yes, I wear my mask.... society kind of demands one.
I found your poem thought provoking.
November 13th, 2021 06:13
Oh mother! What a plight!!!
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed and smiling big behind my mask .................... :)
November 13th, 2021 05:55
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed and smiling big behind my mask .................... :)
November 13th, 2021 05:55
Dandelion
Sherbs said:
This is fantastic! I don’t know why people dislike dandelions and call them weeds. I love them and think they’re entitled to be called a ‘flower’. They have this extraordinary ability to transform themselves. How amazing is that?!
November 13th, 2021 03:28
Sherbs said:
This is fantastic! I don’t know why people dislike dandelions and call them weeds. I love them and think they’re entitled to be called a ‘flower’. They have this extraordinary ability to transform themselves. How amazing is that?!
November 13th, 2021 03:28
Oh mother! What a plight!!!
Vamsi Sudha said:
haha !! wonderful poem on teeth too. You can write on teeth too...its amazing...!!! enjoyed Spiller..!!
November 12th, 2021 19:13
Vamsi Sudha said:
haha !! wonderful poem on teeth too. You can write on teeth too...its amazing...!!! enjoyed Spiller..!!
November 12th, 2021 19:13
Oh mother! What a plight!!!
Caring dove said:
I certainly like your writing 🙂 but I’m sorry if you have had any bad news .
I like how you expressed yourself in this one
November 12th, 2021 12:42
Caring dove said:
I certainly like your writing 🙂 but I’m sorry if you have had any bad news .
I like how you expressed yourself in this one
November 12th, 2021 12:42
Dandelion
Neville said:
Made me smile .. and the colour you brought to my grey November morn was indeed a heart-warming and pleasant surprise ... muchly enjoyed ..
November 12th, 2021 03:44
Neville said:
Made me smile .. and the colour you brought to my grey November morn was indeed a heart-warming and pleasant surprise ... muchly enjoyed ..
November 12th, 2021 03:44
Dandelion
L. B. Mek said:
strange time of the year to read about Dandelions
but then again, the Rose of all weeds
has a habit of overcoming its obstacles...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 11th, 2021 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
strange time of the year to read about Dandelions
but then again, the Rose of all weeds
has a habit of overcoming its obstacles...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 11th, 2021 04:43
Dandelion
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, I have always though dandelions were wonderful.
Andy
November 11th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words spilleronsheet, I have always though dandelions were wonderful.
Andy
November 11th, 2021 01:37
Dandelion
Caring dove said:
Great poem … love this ! Nicely expressed words 🙂🙂
November 11th, 2021 01:08
Caring dove said:
Great poem … love this ! Nicely expressed words 🙂🙂
November 11th, 2021 01:08
Dandelion
Vamsi Sudha said:
I was swayed away with happiness like a dandelion reading your poem !!
The last paragraph rocked !!
This was a great line \"Carrying on inheritance to all nooks\" described the dandelion crisply.
November 10th, 2021 22:24
Vamsi Sudha said:
I was swayed away with happiness like a dandelion reading your poem !!
The last paragraph rocked !!
This was a great line \"Carrying on inheritance to all nooks\" described the dandelion crisply.
November 10th, 2021 22:24
Smoker
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite a picturesque poem Spiller !! You seem to write your pomes on smoke too. Anything is a piece of poem for a poet : )) Wonderful....
November 10th, 2021 22:19
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite a picturesque poem Spiller !! You seem to write your pomes on smoke too. Anything is a piece of poem for a poet : )) Wonderful....
November 10th, 2021 22:19
Falling the cliff to fly
Caring dove said:
Really like your choice of words in this one !
A great read 🙂
November 9th, 2021 14:00
Caring dove said:
Really like your choice of words in this one !
A great read 🙂
November 9th, 2021 14:00
Smoker
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We need more awareness raising pieces like this one in arts spaces. An important message here writer. Kudos well deserved.
November 9th, 2021 13:35
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We need more awareness raising pieces like this one in arts spaces. An important message here writer. Kudos well deserved.
November 9th, 2021 13:35
Smoker
Paul Bell said:
The air has got cleaner, but the seas are still a dumping ground by ships sailing our seas. Every time you eat a fish now, they\'ll be plastic in it.
November 9th, 2021 13:18
Paul Bell said:
The air has got cleaner, but the seas are still a dumping ground by ships sailing our seas. Every time you eat a fish now, they\'ll be plastic in it.
November 9th, 2021 13:18
Rosy shades
Goldfinch60 said:
We can see life in many shades of colour spilleronsheet but to my way in life now all is looked upon in rose coloured ways, life is good.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
We can see life in many shades of colour spilleronsheet but to my way in life now all is looked upon in rose coloured ways, life is good.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 01:54
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