Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
It’s painful
Paul Bell said:
When you fail, you fail alone.
Is that what they say.
Yet, I would say, no failure, no success.
October 31st, 2021 11:52
Paul Bell said:
When you fail, you fail alone.
Is that what they say.
Yet, I would say, no failure, no success.
October 31st, 2021 11:52
It’s painful
Fay Slimm. said:
Pain seems unavoidable on this world\'s indifferent stage of hypocrisy where aloofness holds centre stage - - a read for my list to read over again and thanks for sharing.
October 31st, 2021 11:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Pain seems unavoidable on this world\'s indifferent stage of hypocrisy where aloofness holds centre stage - - a read for my list to read over again and thanks for sharing.
October 31st, 2021 11:44
It’s painful
Neville said:
such insight is a wonderful gift .. but at what cost the pain of knowing ..
not only a great poem my friend, but in the write hands, a splendid teaching aid too ... N
October 31st, 2021 11:33
Neville said:
such insight is a wonderful gift .. but at what cost the pain of knowing ..
not only a great poem my friend, but in the write hands, a splendid teaching aid too ... N
October 31st, 2021 11:33
Heart cried but tears didn’t fall
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful heart touching poem !! A stage of life everyone have to face it sometime in their life...
Thanks
October 30th, 2021 12:31
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful heart touching poem !! A stage of life everyone have to face it sometime in their life...
Thanks
October 30th, 2021 12:31
Heart cried but tears didn’t fall
Paul Bell said:
Which route should we take in life, or is your life already mapped out for you. I think as humans, we\'re always searching for that answer. Maybe that\'s why we need to go back to the beginning to find it.
October 30th, 2021 06:39
Paul Bell said:
Which route should we take in life, or is your life already mapped out for you. I think as humans, we\'re always searching for that answer. Maybe that\'s why we need to go back to the beginning to find it.
October 30th, 2021 06:39
Heart cried but tears didn’t fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on trying and all will be well as your warrior moves on into a better life.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on trying and all will be well as your warrior moves on into a better life.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 02:48
Trust a mirror
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So expressive ! A very good way with words … I really like this 🙂 sometimes people break our trust and maybe sometimes we think that might keep happening … which is a sad thing ,
I don’t think trust should be broken , or a mirror either ..
But I like your idea and words in this one
October 30th, 2021 02:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So expressive ! A very good way with words … I really like this 🙂 sometimes people break our trust and maybe sometimes we think that might keep happening … which is a sad thing ,
I don’t think trust should be broken , or a mirror either ..
But I like your idea and words in this one
October 30th, 2021 02:32
Heart cried but tears didn’t fall
Rainbow said:
Very lovely poem . Sounds like it’s about someone tryin and tryin for there hearts desire and someone who never gives up
October 30th, 2021 02:19
Rainbow said:
Very lovely poem . Sounds like it’s about someone tryin and tryin for there hearts desire and someone who never gives up
October 30th, 2021 02:19
Heart cried but tears didn’t fall
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A sad writing but so expressive with strength at the end of your poem ! 🙂
October 30th, 2021 02:06
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A sad writing but so expressive with strength at the end of your poem ! 🙂
October 30th, 2021 02:06
The wrong train
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how these things can happen and you meet somebody quite by chance and get on so well with them. Very good words spilleronsheet.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how these things can happen and you meet somebody quite by chance and get on so well with them. Very good words spilleronsheet.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:19
The wrong train
Paul Bell said:
Good for the kids in later life when the questioned asked. Where did you meet.
October 29th, 2021 13:22
Paul Bell said:
Good for the kids in later life when the questioned asked. Where did you meet.
October 29th, 2021 13:22
The wrong train
L. B. Mek said:
needs a little editing, but your beautiful message is still delivered: invigorating and profound!
you have a wonderful tonality to your poetry, a very attractive style
just take your time, re-read your writes
edit them as best you can
and watch your poetry blossom!
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
needs a little editing, but your beautiful message is still delivered: invigorating and profound!
you have a wonderful tonality to your poetry, a very attractive style
just take your time, re-read your writes
edit them as best you can
and watch your poetry blossom!
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 05:57
The wrong train
Neville said:
............... DA said it all my friend .. I agree with every word and then some ..
October 29th, 2021 03:26
Neville said:
............... DA said it all my friend .. I agree with every word and then some ..
October 29th, 2021 03:26
The wrong train
dusk arising said:
Nice. Well constructed and superb punch line / message. i\'d be tempted to go all the way to the wrong destination too..... only to find she\'s married (wot, no ring) - devious!
October 29th, 2021 03:18
dusk arising said:
Nice. Well constructed and superb punch line / message. i\'d be tempted to go all the way to the wrong destination too..... only to find she\'s married (wot, no ring) - devious!
October 29th, 2021 03:18
Confusion lies
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write spilleronsheet, I do hope all is OK,.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write spilleronsheet, I do hope all is OK,.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:45
Confusion lies
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write spilleronsheet, I do hope all is OK,.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write spilleronsheet, I do hope all is OK,.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:36
Confusion lies
Paul Bell said:
Having had it, and the confusion that seems to follow it, mainly from government officials who don\'t operate from the same script. I can see why people are confused. Then again, letting the world into Britain really is giving covid a helping hand.
October 28th, 2021 06:38
Paul Bell said:
Having had it, and the confusion that seems to follow it, mainly from government officials who don\'t operate from the same script. I can see why people are confused. Then again, letting the world into Britain really is giving covid a helping hand.
October 28th, 2021 06:38
Confusion lies
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one !! liked these last lines.. confusion is high ,
body plays along with mind
insanity runs in poetry of mine
what stays
is confusion in mind
haha, But we are not confused, enjoyed your poetry....thank you..!!
October 28th, 2021 06:08
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one !! liked these last lines.. confusion is high ,
body plays along with mind
insanity runs in poetry of mine
what stays
is confusion in mind
haha, But we are not confused, enjoyed your poetry....thank you..!!
October 28th, 2021 06:08
Trust a mirror
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet, may those memories show your the good side of your life rather than the bad side.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words spilleronsheet, may those memories show your the good side of your life rather than the bad side.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:30
Trust a mirror
Neville said:
Ouch .. betrayal must surely rank among the most hurtful of behaviours .. and where trust is broken, not everyone of course finds it easy to forgive .. Your post today speaks volumes my friend ... N
October 27th, 2021 13:17
Neville said:
Ouch .. betrayal must surely rank among the most hurtful of behaviours .. and where trust is broken, not everyone of course finds it easy to forgive .. Your post today speaks volumes my friend ... N
October 27th, 2021 13:17
Trust a mirror
Zyphril said:
Really excellent piece here. I enjoyed it a lot.
October 27th, 2021 12:58
Zyphril said:
Really excellent piece here. I enjoyed it a lot.
October 27th, 2021 12:58
Trust a mirror
Paul Bell said:
The mirror always reflects.
Sometimes in your favour, sometimes not. The shattered mirror breaks the chain that can never be fixed.
October 27th, 2021 05:09
Paul Bell said:
The mirror always reflects.
Sometimes in your favour, sometimes not. The shattered mirror breaks the chain that can never be fixed.
October 27th, 2021 05:09
Trust a mirror
Vamsi Sudha said:
Trust a Mirror !! What a great simile.
Liked these lines of yours
\"but it doesn’t matter if it breaks too use the broken to reflect \"
Quite impressive Poet !!
October 27th, 2021 03:54
Vamsi Sudha said:
Trust a Mirror !! What a great simile.
Liked these lines of yours
\"but it doesn’t matter if it breaks too use the broken to reflect \"
Quite impressive Poet !!
October 27th, 2021 03:54
A letter of complaint
Neville said:
An epic portraiture of what is and what may always be .. or not maybe ..
time will tell .. I am keeping my fingers crossed for a favourable outcome ... N
October 26th, 2021 17:05
Neville said:
An epic portraiture of what is and what may always be .. or not maybe ..
time will tell .. I am keeping my fingers crossed for a favourable outcome ... N
October 26th, 2021 17:05
A letter of complaint
Nicky Byrd said:
I love your inspiration and personal quote for your poem. It is true we forget about what we do have rather than remember what we don\'t. Have a great day everyone and keep posting Spilleronsheet
October 26th, 2021 07:14
Nicky Byrd said:
I love your inspiration and personal quote for your poem. It is true we forget about what we do have rather than remember what we don\'t. Have a great day everyone and keep posting Spilleronsheet
October 26th, 2021 07:14
Wish upon
Paul Bell said:
No wishes and dreams, no life.
Some wishes may come true years later when the relevance is truly your time.
October 26th, 2021 03:59
Paul Bell said:
No wishes and dreams, no life.
Some wishes may come true years later when the relevance is truly your time.
October 26th, 2021 03:59
Distant lovers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very nice ! 🙂 liked the read )
October 25th, 2021 15:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very nice ! 🙂 liked the read )
October 25th, 2021 15:30
Wish upon
Nicky Byrd said:
I love the repetition in this piece. Keep posting!!
October 25th, 2021 12:27
Nicky Byrd said:
I love the repetition in this piece. Keep posting!!
October 25th, 2021 12:27
Wish upon
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of theological alignment;
this is a brilliantly life-affirming write, thank you
for choosing to share, dear poet
October 25th, 2021 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of theological alignment;
this is a brilliantly life-affirming write, thank you
for choosing to share, dear poet
October 25th, 2021 06:41
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