Comments received on poems by spilleronsheet
A new faith, a new vigour
Nicky Byrd said:
I liked this one a lot, was there any inspiration to it?
October 15th, 2021 08:29
Nicky Byrd said:
I liked this one a lot, was there any inspiration to it?
October 15th, 2021 08:29
Lost belonging
L. B. Mek said:
although it still has more potential for refinement, this is a wonderful read..
and its timeless message is one that offers both insight, and a subtle suggestion to a hopeful path,
(Time, in all we\'ve lost
where we may, reclaim
that, which they stole
in the guise of care..)
love these lines:
\'those, were the words
heard outside
to the lost
innocence, holding inside
how to enjoy,
the worldly pleasures?
the mind
seems chaotic inside
wondering about uncertainties in life
to the lost
happiness, without reason
why it chose the reasonable wisdom, to be only saddened
with grief
what seems good in growing up
what seems empowered
to hold papers, papers in green
stuffed in pocket inside
alas, it can’t buy
the lost time\'
(thanks for sharing
you have wonderful style and a strong poetic voice,
I look forward to reading more of your work)
October 15th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
although it still has more potential for refinement, this is a wonderful read..
and its timeless message is one that offers both insight, and a subtle suggestion to a hopeful path,
(Time, in all we\'ve lost
where we may, reclaim
that, which they stole
in the guise of care..)
love these lines:
\'those, were the words
heard outside
to the lost
innocence, holding inside
how to enjoy,
the worldly pleasures?
the mind
seems chaotic inside
wondering about uncertainties in life
to the lost
happiness, without reason
why it chose the reasonable wisdom, to be only saddened
with grief
what seems good in growing up
what seems empowered
to hold papers, papers in green
stuffed in pocket inside
alas, it can’t buy
the lost time\'
(thanks for sharing
you have wonderful style and a strong poetic voice,
I look forward to reading more of your work)
October 15th, 2021 04:30
What matters
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams becoem reality in your life.
Andy
October 15th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams becoem reality in your life.
Andy
October 15th, 2021 00:44
What matters
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words I couldn\'t help thinking of the song \'Crazy\' by Seal
whose lyrics include:
\'Miracles will happen as we trip
But we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We get a little crazy
No we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We are a little crazy\'
(I relate with the feelings you portray really well)
a good read, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
reading your words I couldn\'t help thinking of the song \'Crazy\' by Seal
whose lyrics include:
\'Miracles will happen as we trip
But we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We get a little crazy
No we\'re never gonna survive, unless
We are a little crazy\'
(I relate with the feelings you portray really well)
a good read, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 04:54
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