Comments received on poems by Rozina



Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
Neville said:


that could be a picture of me Roz .. I\'m bad half the time and nasty the other .. they say I take after me Dad n someone else\'s mother ..

I very much like your take on one of the now great classics .. one I might add that as a kid used to frighten me silly ............. Neville :)


March 8th, 2022 03:25

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
Paul Bell said:

This is me in the supermarket queue, slowly getting irritated and then turning green, and then going mad. What is wrong with these people.

March 7th, 2022 12:25

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
Rocky Lagou said:

What a gothic classic you\'ve given new life to! Great execution!

March 7th, 2022 09:22

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
dusk arising said:

I have known people who transform into quite different people after alcohol and or drugs. None were pleasant transformations.

Nice fun poetry.

March 7th, 2022 07:35

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, this
is sadly
far, too common
an occurrence..
and a tangible reason, to why
horror
is such a stalwart genre
of modernity\'s entertainment vehicles
because, for far too many people
its nightmarish depiction of reality
is one, they can relate to so easily..
at least far easier
than those fantastical, fantasy romcom\'s
with happy ending, tropes...
(a necessary and important write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)

March 7th, 2022 07:05

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
Doggerel Dave said:

Both Robert and Neil have it.
I would like to add though that alcohol is a factor in many cases of domestic violence of which, apparently. there are far too many.

March 7th, 2022 06:30

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
orchidee said:

A fine write R.

March 7th, 2022 02:40

Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Rozina and very true in many circumstances.

Andy

March 7th, 2022 02:31

BLOOD
Poetic Dan said:

Hopefully the more we write it the more we shall transcend into....
Thanks for being the gas to keep that fire burning

March 5th, 2022 02:42

BLOOD
Neville said:



I regularly donate a pint of blood and it bothers me not one single drop what colour race or creed the recipient is .. or for that matter, is not .................... 💖


March 4th, 2022 01:07

BLOOD
Laura🌻 said:

Rozina,

This is such a telling write.
Imagine being rushed in ER and in need of a transfusion. I wonder how many would question the donor’s religion, race/ethnicity, etc. whose blood is saving their life!

Thank you for sharing your .

Laura🌻

March 3rd, 2022 20:33

BLOOD
Rocky Lagou said:

Short but so punched with meaning and truth. Discrimination is a destructive thing and we must understand we\'re all humans despite our differences. Good job! 💖

March 3rd, 2022 10:22

BLOOD
Fay Slimm. said:

Dear Rozina - such a true statement on blood and a very significant question you pose too - thanks for sharing the facts re. blood with us dear poet friend.

March 3rd, 2022 07:19

BLOOD
L. B. Mek said:

(forgive me, I read your words
and couldn\'t help
inking a little scribbled reply,
thank you! for sharing such an important
and inspiring write, dear Poet)
you want to know
the peak of diabolical, futility
in blind Hate?
its watching-on, helplessly
as loving parents
refuse their children
blood transfusion
lifeline, treatment measures
because, someone
in their religion\'s hierarchy
translated with hypocrisy
that having blood mix
with another\'s
of differing faith\'s
or life choices
is a sin...
so this parents, with waterfall tears
watch, thinking
they\'re doing the right thing
while doctors rave and scream
and officials try to ward the child
and save a life
and you, just watch that EKG
flatline
and in you burns, this Pure hopeless
hate
for the sheer moronic
and vial stupidity of Humanity..
a little later
you sigh, heavily
and with hunched shoulders
look-up to that 8Ball sky
and thank the universe
your loved ones, avoided such a fate
by the mere chaotic absurdity
of your biological lottery...


March 3rd, 2022 06:05

BLOOD
Paul Bell said:

Being royal, I\'m actually blue bloodied, though naturally If I cut myself shaving, I\'m open to any old blood in my transfusion.

March 3rd, 2022 05:42

BLOOD
dusk arising said:

Love that picture, as soon as i saw it it made me laugh.

I\'m in total harmony with your sentiment here. Regardless of any surface differences we all bleed red blood. Why can\'t we all live together in peace and harmony.

March 3rd, 2022 04:47

BLOOD
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true words Rozina, if only people would realise that we are all one people.

Andy

March 3rd, 2022 02:51

Sleep?
Rozina said:

Thank you.

March 2nd, 2022 18:06

Sleep?
AuburnScribbler said:

A jovially penned poem here Rozina, but about a very important thing.

Though there are horrors to fight, and too many things to think about, sleep recharges the batteries, so I really endeavour to listen to my body.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

March 2nd, 2022 12:18

Sleep?
Neville said:


I love this Roz but envy anyone who manages that proverbial eight hours .. I\'m lucky to get four or five and they are rarely unbroken ........ the following zzzzz\'s by the way are horizontal & very tired NN\'s :)


March 1st, 2022 01:36

Sleep?
Doggerel Dave said:

Topic worthy of note, Rozina.
Threats from my public radio that anything less than 8 hours.... I\'m doomed... 6 hours and a hopeful afternoon nap has to do for me - then suddenly 8 and a half hours and I\'m disoriented for the rest of the day...
Fun read and great to know I\'m not alone.

February 28th, 2022 20:05

Sleep?
Poetic Dan said:

Can definitely relate to this even before my 2 year old and the others, sleep is more just passing out!

Lovely flow thank you

February 28th, 2022 15:27

Sleep?
spilleronsheet said:

Do tell me if you get remedy
I am in same boat as yours
Sleep is really a luxury
To those insomniac nights
With baggy eyes
Dreams looks like takes a fleet
And sleep abandons with every passing night
I truly got your struggles

February 28th, 2022 14:36

Sleep?
Paul Bell said:

You need the new Paul Bell sleep remedy, guaranteed to get you sleeping, once you pay the paltry sum of 1000 dollars for 31 tablets, 29 for a leap year.

February 28th, 2022 12:20

Sleep?
Rocky Lagou said:

Insomnia written so well! The last stanza was killer 😅! Very witty AND relatable!

February 28th, 2022 09:48

Sleep?
sorenbarrett said:

Loved your poem. Such an important topic and so common. Well written. Yes reading puts me to sleep too.

February 28th, 2022 08:17

Sleep?
L. B. Mek said:

Four hours sleep, feels
like an Olympic gold medal, to me
and so
I think we\'ve devolved
from
the \'age of anxiety\'
to
the \'age of insomniacs\'..
mass zombie movies, as mirror
to zombie states, we traverse
our lives...
lol
such a relatable read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet

February 28th, 2022 06:21

Sleep?
dusk arising said:

My CPAP machine has largely cured my insomnia. Prior to that i would read a book in bed until my eyes were shutting.

February 28th, 2022 03:17

Sleep?
Goldfinch60 said:

I don\'t have that problem, I had my eight and a half hours sleep last night and up at six this morning, my normal getting up time.

Andy

February 28th, 2022 02:58

A Senryu Attempt
Rozina said:

Thank you for the words of encouragement.

February 27th, 2022 20:54

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