Comments received on poems by Rozina
A Senryu Attempt
Paul Bell said:
You\'re doing great.
For some reason I always think, linguist is a dirty word. lol
February 27th, 2022 06:43
Paul Bell said:
You\'re doing great.
For some reason I always think, linguist is a dirty word. lol
February 27th, 2022 06:43
How Do They Do It?
Rozina said:
Thank you for the encouragement. 11 chapters - that’s great. You’ve started so you need to find that motivation to do 1 page a day or 1 paragraph a day and keep moving. I’m now enjoying poetry so I’ll delay my blockbuster a bit more!
February 26th, 2022 06:09
Rozina said:
Thank you for the encouragement. 11 chapters - that’s great. You’ve started so you need to find that motivation to do 1 page a day or 1 paragraph a day and keep moving. I’m now enjoying poetry so I’ll delay my blockbuster a bit more!
February 26th, 2022 06:09
How Do They Do It?
Neville said:
Maybe we should form a cult after all, I have the very same ambition .. I am eleven chapters in already but it has taken me years to get there .. it has a very psychiatric orientated flavour ................. smashing bit of self revelation again Roz thank you .... :)
February 26th, 2022 05:16
Neville said:
Maybe we should form a cult after all, I have the very same ambition .. I am eleven chapters in already but it has taken me years to get there .. it has a very psychiatric orientated flavour ................. smashing bit of self revelation again Roz thank you .... :)
February 26th, 2022 05:16
Mirror Mirror On The Wall
Rozina said:
Paul Bell had offered to take Mrs B out for me, but he also asked whether she’s cute! Thank you!
February 26th, 2022 03:34
Rozina said:
Paul Bell had offered to take Mrs B out for me, but he also asked whether she’s cute! Thank you!
February 26th, 2022 03:34
A Senryu Attempt
Michael Edwards said:
Welcome to the world of the 575s - I prefer to avoid calling them by their formal names as they come with strict albeit questionable rules - I just stick to the syllable count which many ignore. Anyway this is great write, but as you say, it\'s nowhere as easy as it looks.
February 26th, 2022 03:24
Michael Edwards said:
Welcome to the world of the 575s - I prefer to avoid calling them by their formal names as they come with strict albeit questionable rules - I just stick to the syllable count which many ignore. Anyway this is great write, but as you say, it\'s nowhere as easy as it looks.
February 26th, 2022 03:24
Mirror Mirror On The Wall
Neville said:
You are so very good at these autobiographical self disclosure sharing poems ....................
p.s If Mrs. B get on ya wick, I know a good hitman who might be able to help .. he owes me a few favours too so it wont cost nowt ... :)
February 26th, 2022 03:12
Neville said:
You are so very good at these autobiographical self disclosure sharing poems ....................
p.s If Mrs. B get on ya wick, I know a good hitman who might be able to help .. he owes me a few favours too so it wont cost nowt ... :)
February 26th, 2022 03:12
A Senryu Attempt
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
It\'s hard to see it as hard until you attempt to write it. I haven\'t even bothered yet.
February 25th, 2022 12:22
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
It\'s hard to see it as hard until you attempt to write it. I haven\'t even bothered yet.
February 25th, 2022 12:22
A Senryu Attempt
dusk arising said:
A great lesson contained in just those three lines \"from little acorns mighty oak trees grow\".
A Very clever, well thought out, piece of writing Rozina.
February 25th, 2022 10:41
dusk arising said:
A great lesson contained in just those three lines \"from little acorns mighty oak trees grow\".
A Very clever, well thought out, piece of writing Rozina.
February 25th, 2022 10:41
A Senryu Attempt
L. B. Mek said:
\'but what depth, they hold
three lines of enduring Love
a Mother\'s: beauty\'
(great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
well worth the effort and wait)
February 25th, 2022 06:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'but what depth, they hold
three lines of enduring Love
a Mother\'s: beauty\'
(great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
well worth the effort and wait)
February 25th, 2022 06:20
A Senryu Attempt
Rozina said:
Thank you for your encouragement Teddy. As I said to Neville, as soon as I had posted it I thought of alternative words I could have used. Will keep practising.
February 25th, 2022 05:10
Rozina said:
Thank you for your encouragement Teddy. As I said to Neville, as soon as I had posted it I thought of alternative words I could have used. Will keep practising.
February 25th, 2022 05:10
A Senryu Attempt
Neville said:
tricky little bugga\'s aint they, but they can be amongst the most beautiful of poetic forms .. be proud, this aint bad at all Roz .... :)
February 25th, 2022 03:43
Neville said:
tricky little bugga\'s aint they, but they can be amongst the most beautiful of poetic forms .. be proud, this aint bad at all Roz .... :)
February 25th, 2022 03:43
The Street Sweeper
Neville said:
unfortunately, the point you make here & so very well can be seen throughout the world .. I applaud the way you have incorporated this fact throughout .. it may not create the mass awareness the issue deserves, but hey, Rome wasn\'t built in a day, was it .... Neville
February 24th, 2022 02:30
Neville said:
unfortunately, the point you make here & so very well can be seen throughout the world .. I applaud the way you have incorporated this fact throughout .. it may not create the mass awareness the issue deserves, but hey, Rome wasn\'t built in a day, was it .... Neville
February 24th, 2022 02:30
Limerick Attempts
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed you limericks they were fun and light hearted as limericks should be.
February 23rd, 2022 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed you limericks they were fun and light hearted as limericks should be.
February 23rd, 2022 19:53
A Sonnet Attempt
Paul Bell said:
You are officially a Sonneter now.
My love is like a red, red rose.
She drank the wine, and is now comatose.
February 23rd, 2022 10:11
Paul Bell said:
You are officially a Sonneter now.
My love is like a red, red rose.
She drank the wine, and is now comatose.
February 23rd, 2022 10:11
A Sonnet Attempt
Rocky Lagou said:
This was a lovely poem Rozina. I find writing in fixed forms a little oppressing 😅 so that\'s why I stick with free verse for most of my writing but this was a marvel. Kudos to you! 💖
February 23rd, 2022 09:48
Rocky Lagou said:
This was a lovely poem Rozina. I find writing in fixed forms a little oppressing 😅 so that\'s why I stick with free verse for most of my writing but this was a marvel. Kudos to you! 💖
February 23rd, 2022 09:48
A Sonnet Attempt
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this rose-scented sonnet attempt - top marks Rozina..
February 23rd, 2022 09:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this rose-scented sonnet attempt - top marks Rozina..
February 23rd, 2022 09:01
A Sonnet Attempt
Neville said:
although I have never been tempted to try & craft one myself, I have a reasonable understanding of their composition & can appreciate not only their crafting and beauty .. but appreciate a good one when I see/read one .. and this Roz is a very fine example .. it gets my vote ............ Neville
February 23rd, 2022 03:22
Neville said:
although I have never been tempted to try & craft one myself, I have a reasonable understanding of their composition & can appreciate not only their crafting and beauty .. but appreciate a good one when I see/read one .. and this Roz is a very fine example .. it gets my vote ............ Neville
February 23rd, 2022 03:22
A Sonnet Attempt
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I very much enjoyed this Rozina! I too like how the Rose looks like a queen.🌹🕊🌞
February 23rd, 2022 02:56
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I very much enjoyed this Rozina! I too like how the Rose looks like a queen.🌹🕊🌞
February 23rd, 2022 02:56
A Sonnet Attempt
Goldfinch60 said:
Sonnet attempt passed with flying colours Rozina.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Sonnet attempt passed with flying colours Rozina.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:49
A Sonnet Attempt
Caring dove said:
Really like this .. I like your mention of the rose being like a queen and the bond of the rose the land .. very nice !
February 23rd, 2022 02:00
Caring dove said:
Really like this .. I like your mention of the rose being like a queen and the bond of the rose the land .. very nice !
February 23rd, 2022 02:00
A Garden Of Joy
Neville said:
Being something of an amateur horticulturist & keen gardener myself, my journey down the page was a real treat Roz .. thank you ... Neville
February 22nd, 2022 03:36
Neville said:
Being something of an amateur horticulturist & keen gardener myself, my journey down the page was a real treat Roz .. thank you ... Neville
February 22nd, 2022 03:36
Doctor Google
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people use Google nowadays it is a pity when I ask him for my name he doesn\'t remember either. LOL
Andy
February 21st, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people use Google nowadays it is a pity when I ask him for my name he doesn\'t remember either. LOL
Andy
February 21st, 2022 01:58
A Garden Of Joy
rrodriguez said:
Enjoyable read... thank you for sharing. I, too, enjoy gardening, enjoying the beauty of the colors of the flowers.
February 20th, 2022 18:35
rrodriguez said:
Enjoyable read... thank you for sharing. I, too, enjoy gardening, enjoying the beauty of the colors of the flowers.
February 20th, 2022 18:35
Doctor Google
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
A very cool poem Rozina! How often do I google things I afterwards think I didn\'t really want to know... My latin-teacher at school in the 1990\'s used to call it \'Kloaka maxima\'. He was certainly of an older generation. And yes, I had to google \'luddites\' too. Thank you for that new word Neville.
Solar-Impulse aka Bettina
February 20th, 2022 09:20
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
A very cool poem Rozina! How often do I google things I afterwards think I didn\'t really want to know... My latin-teacher at school in the 1990\'s used to call it \'Kloaka maxima\'. He was certainly of an older generation. And yes, I had to google \'luddites\' too. Thank you for that new word Neville.
Solar-Impulse aka Bettina
February 20th, 2022 09:20
Doctor Google
orchidee said:
Good write R.
Always (or sometimes?) dangerous to call up Dr Google for medical help. We become hypochondriacs!
February 20th, 2022 08:39
orchidee said:
Good write R.
Always (or sometimes?) dangerous to call up Dr Google for medical help. We become hypochondriacs!
February 20th, 2022 08:39
Doctor Google
Neville said:
this is not just a poem of the moment/times, it is an education too .. So pay attention all us Luddites .. I guess some, if at all interested may need to Google Luddite ............................. :)
February 20th, 2022 05:33
Neville said:
this is not just a poem of the moment/times, it is an education too .. So pay attention all us Luddites .. I guess some, if at all interested may need to Google Luddite ............................. :)
February 20th, 2022 05:33
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