Comments received on poems by Rozina



A Senryu Attempt
Rozina said:

Thank you for the words of encouragement.

February 27th, 2022 17:47

A Senryu Attempt
Paul Bell said:

You\'re doing great.
For some reason I always think, linguist is a dirty word. lol

February 27th, 2022 06:43

How Do They Do It?
Rozina said:

Thank you for the encouragement. 11 chapters - that’s great. You’ve started so you need to find that motivation to do 1 page a day or 1 paragraph a day and keep moving. I’m now enjoying poetry so I’ll delay my blockbuster a bit more!

February 26th, 2022 06:09

How Do They Do It?
Neville said:


Maybe we should form a cult after all, I have the very same ambition .. I am eleven chapters in already but it has taken me years to get there .. it has a very psychiatric orientated flavour ................. smashing bit of self revelation again Roz thank you .... :)


February 26th, 2022 05:16

Mirror Mirror On The Wall
Rozina said:

Paul Bell had offered to take Mrs B out for me, but he also asked whether she’s cute! Thank you!

February 26th, 2022 03:34

A Senryu Attempt
Michael Edwards said:

Welcome to the world of the 575s - I prefer to avoid calling them by their formal names as they come with strict albeit questionable rules - I just stick to the syllable count which many ignore. Anyway this is great write, but as you say, it\'s nowhere as easy as it looks.

February 26th, 2022 03:24

Mirror Mirror On The Wall
Neville said:


You are so very good at these autobiographical self disclosure sharing poems ....................

p.s If Mrs. B get on ya wick, I know a good hitman who might be able to help .. he owes me a few favours too so it wont cost nowt ... :)


February 26th, 2022 03:12

A Senryu Attempt
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Rozina.

Andy

February 26th, 2022 01:35

A Senryu Attempt
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

It\'s hard to see it as hard until you attempt to write it. I haven\'t even bothered yet.

February 25th, 2022 12:22

A Senryu Attempt
dusk arising said:

A great lesson contained in just those three lines \"from little acorns mighty oak trees grow\".
A Very clever, well thought out, piece of writing Rozina.

February 25th, 2022 10:41

A Senryu Attempt
L. B. Mek said:

\'but what depth, they hold
three lines of enduring Love
a Mother\'s: beauty\'
(great write!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
well worth the effort and wait)

February 25th, 2022 06:20

A Senryu Attempt
Rozina said:

Thank you for your encouragement Teddy. As I said to Neville, as soon as I had posted it I thought of alternative words I could have used. Will keep practising.

February 25th, 2022 05:10

A Senryu Attempt
Neville said:



tricky little bugga\'s aint they, but they can be amongst the most beautiful of poetic forms .. be proud, this aint bad at all Roz .... :)


February 25th, 2022 03:43

The Street Sweeper
Neville said:


unfortunately, the point you make here & so very well can be seen throughout the world .. I applaud the way you have incorporated this fact throughout .. it may not create the mass awareness the issue deserves, but hey, Rome wasn\'t built in a day, was it .... Neville


February 24th, 2022 02:30

Limerick Attempts
sorenbarrett said:

I enjoyed you limericks they were fun and light hearted as limericks should be.

February 23rd, 2022 19:53

A Sonnet Attempt
Paul Bell said:

You are officially a Sonneter now.
My love is like a red, red rose.
She drank the wine, and is now comatose.


February 23rd, 2022 10:11

A Sonnet Attempt
Rocky Lagou said:

This was a lovely poem Rozina. I find writing in fixed forms a little oppressing 😅 so that\'s why I stick with free verse for most of my writing but this was a marvel. Kudos to you! 💖

February 23rd, 2022 09:48

A Sonnet Attempt
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for this rose-scented sonnet attempt - top marks Rozina..

February 23rd, 2022 09:01

A Sonnet Attempt
Neville said:


although I have never been tempted to try & craft one myself, I have a reasonable understanding of their composition & can appreciate not only their crafting and beauty .. but appreciate a good one when I see/read one .. and this Roz is a very fine example .. it gets my vote ............ Neville


February 23rd, 2022 03:22

A Sonnet Attempt
FallenAngel1🕊 said:

I very much enjoyed this Rozina! I too like how the Rose looks like a queen.🌹🕊🌞

February 23rd, 2022 02:56

A Sonnet Attempt
Goldfinch60 said:

Sonnet attempt passed with flying colours Rozina.

Andy

February 23rd, 2022 02:49

A Sonnet Attempt
Caring dove said:

Really like this .. I like your mention of the rose being like a queen and the bond of the rose the land .. very nice !

February 23rd, 2022 02:00

A Garden Of Joy
Rozina said:

Thank you Neville.

February 22nd, 2022 04:37

A Garden Of Joy
Neville said:


Being something of an amateur horticulturist & keen gardener myself, my journey down the page was a real treat Roz .. thank you ... Neville

February 22nd, 2022 03:36

Doctor Google
Rozina said:

Hahaha thank you Andy.

February 21st, 2022 05:06

Doctor Google
Goldfinch60 said:

So many people use Google nowadays it is a pity when I ask him for my name he doesn\'t remember either. LOL

Andy

February 21st, 2022 01:58

A Garden Of Joy
rrodriguez said:

Enjoyable read... thank you for sharing. I, too, enjoy gardening, enjoying the beauty of the colors of the flowers.

February 20th, 2022 18:35

Doctor Google
Solar Impulse_1912 said:

A very cool poem Rozina! How often do I google things I afterwards think I didn\'t really want to know... My latin-teacher at school in the 1990\'s used to call it \'Kloaka maxima\'. He was certainly of an older generation. And yes, I had to google \'luddites\' too. Thank you for that new word Neville.
Solar-Impulse aka Bettina


February 20th, 2022 09:20

Doctor Google
orchidee said:

Good write R.
Always (or sometimes?) dangerous to call up Dr Google for medical help. We become hypochondriacs!

February 20th, 2022 08:39

Doctor Google
Neville said:


this is not just a poem of the moment/times, it is an education too .. So pay attention all us Luddites .. I guess some, if at all interested may need to Google Luddite ............................. :)


February 20th, 2022 05:33



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