Comments received on poems by Rozina



\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
spilleronsheet said:

A bitter truth
A strong satire
A wilful humour
And the sad mentality of few
You wove so many emotions too
A great one dear Rozina
It was fun to read this poetry

January 19th, 2022 02:14

\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
Goldfinch60 said:

Some people are like this and it always brings me back to something I read many years ago.
A new waiter was laying out the tables for important people and he asked the manager where to put the names of the people as they were all so important. The manager said:

\"The people that care don\'t matter, the people that matter don\'t care.\"

Andy

January 19th, 2022 01:53

\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
Neville said:


We are a strange lot aint we, us humans ..........
a great tale told terribly well .. its a funny old world innit ..... :) Neville

January 18th, 2022 16:14

\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
GypsyLady said:

this is a fun portrayal of a common problem...too many people live way beyond their means in order to do this...

January 18th, 2022 08:42

\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
L. B. Mek said:

watch the Oscar winning film \'Parasite\', if you haven\'t yet
unveils it all
so depressingly, relatable..
(a wonderful exposition
of a topic, most find too scary
to contemplate
for its unwanted insinuations
towards, our very own life \'choices\'...)
thanks for sharing


January 18th, 2022 08:04

\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
Paul Bell said:

I want that much to keep up with the Joneses, I\'m changing my name to Smith. Actually, I had a neighbour like that, what a pain in the ass she was.

January 18th, 2022 06:47

\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
Fay Slimm. said:

Am giggling at your portrayal of people who live for luxury and being served........... yes I would say \"no thanks\" too if that lifestyle were ever offered - -- great piece of telling it just like it is - - thanks too Rozina for sharing the very apt image of your red door penthouse with its own copter pad.

January 18th, 2022 05:46

\'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses
dusk arising said:

I\'ve heard about that too but never met anyone who was actually like that.

Enjoyed reading your story here.

January 18th, 2022 04:32

The Gift Of Life
Neville said:


the gift of life is the most precious gift one can give or for that matter, to receive .. I have an old school friend who gave a kidney to his sister fifteen years ago last month ... well penned my friend ......... N


January 17th, 2022 10:55

The Gift Of Life
Rozina said:

True. Thank you.

January 16th, 2022 18:24

The Gift Of Life
Accidental Poet said:

A mother\'s love for her child knows no end. πŸ’•

January 16th, 2022 11:43

The Gift Of Life
Rozina said:

Yes absolutely. Thank you.

January 16th, 2022 03:37

The Gift Of Life
Goldfinch60 said:

Giving the gift of life to others is so important to so many.

Andy

January 16th, 2022 01:36

The Moon and The Lamppost
RickthePoetWarrior said:

Great imagination and poem.

January 16th, 2022 01:03

The Gift Of Life
FallenAngel1πŸ•Š said:

\"No person stands so tall as when they stoop to help a child\" From the movie Slither,1973. In the movie it\'s \"man\",but I thought it only appropriate to change it. But that\'s neither here nor there. I understand this happened to a mother and her child,but I thought it to still be a great quote for this little gem you\'ve penned so well here RozinaπŸ˜€ Bravo!🌹 Take a bow and shine bright 🌟

January 15th, 2022 12:50

The Gift Of Life
Paul Bell said:

I would imagine anyone getting that phone call to say a donor has been found must go through all sorts of life scenarios. A mother and child are special, mind you.

January 15th, 2022 09:53

The Gift Of Life
woundedheart said:

I am a full organ donor so loved this poem. πŸ’Ÿ

January 15th, 2022 05:42

Genes And Traits
Rozina said:

Yes I have met such people. Thank you for reading. Appreciate your comments.

January 15th, 2022 02:00

Yin and Yang
Rozina said:

Thank you.

January 15th, 2022 01:57

Genes And Traits
Doggerel Dave said:

That second stanza is something else - I don\'t want to unpick it... It has a truth there which is best expressed where it is...

January 15th, 2022 00:46

Yin and Yang
Doggerel Dave said:

There\'s a lot of depth in what appears to be very light verse.
Glad I found it - eventually.


January 15th, 2022 00:30

S P L I T
Chris Duffy said:

Loved this Rosina.

We be all been there.

Loverly write.

January 13th, 2022 12:23

S P L I T
Chris Duffy said:

Loved this Rosina.

We be all been there.

Loverly write.

January 13th, 2022 12:23

Hop On Hop Off
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Rozina, may that bus ride never end.

Andy

January 13th, 2022 02:00

Hop On Hop Off
Michael Edwards said:

Original and a great read - super stuff.

January 12th, 2022 08:54

Hop On Hop Off
Rozina said:

Have not heard of that tour company Shanks pony. I see the red or blue double decker tourist buses being used the most. I love the markets and the parks best of all.

January 12th, 2022 07:03

Hop On Hop Off
Paul Bell said:

That\'s the benefit of busing, there\'s a pub at every stop. Big Ben is on the left, the Red Lion is on the right.
Ok, stuff Big Ben. lol

January 12th, 2022 06:06

Hop On Hop Off
AuburnScribbler said:

A wonderful scene you\'ve written here Rozina, I love the subtle comedy within the stanzas as the journey progresses.

I hope that you have another wondrous bus ride soon.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

January 12th, 2022 06:01

Hop On Hop Off
dusk arising said:

LOL I loved reading this.

January 12th, 2022 05:53

To Rhyme Or Not To Rhyme
GardenDelights said:

Both poems are quite beautiful...each in their own distinct style. I understand your frustration with rhyming, i have felt it myself more than once.

January 11th, 2022 16:21

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