Comments received on poems by Rozina



The Stethoscope
spilleronsheet said:

This is so true dear Rozina….all are alike… and human nature with overthinking and googling is scared to visit a doctor…once they do they find it wasn’t an elephant but ant…generally an issue of lifestyle problems…

May 3rd, 2022 03:26

Flights Of Fancy
spilleronsheet said:

Poetry comes impromptu to you dear Rozina…you are so good at it…rhyming is the most difficult thing to get..all the potteries that I have written it’s hardly been once that I could rhyme…with you it comes naturally and it’s so fun to read your poetry…I am always awestruck by the way you can manage all genres of poetry….you take keen notice of the issues in society, like the “Gossiping” it surely was very essential… and this is so beautiful dear Rozina….I really liked the birds…I sure resonate the most with the sparrow….and the picture that complements the poetry also so good….in your lines, I can see that everyone can find a space in between…thanks for penning such wonderful poetries….keep writing and sharing them…

May 2nd, 2022 21:32

Flights Of Fancy
sorenbarrett said:

Well rhymed and entertaining that is what it is about. Well done

May 1st, 2022 16:34

Flights Of Fancy
Neville said:


Having crafted these words, which I am sure would not have been an easy feat (the rhyming is so perfectly precise) ..it would have been a crhyme not to have posted them .. I think this whole page is much more than a flight of fancy .. it is a labour of love and you Roz are a very generous individual for gifting it to us ... we are indeed very lucky to have you among us ... Neville ................... x


May 1st, 2022 02:29

Flights Of Fancy
Accidental Poet said:

Satisfaction begins in each poet. As others here have said, don\'t let anyone criticize your words Rozina. We learn from reading poetry, we live for writing poetry. I love the drawings of the birds. You\'re a multitalented artist. 😊

April 30th, 2022 08:50

Flights Of Fancy
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

We all write in different ways .. keep writing 🙂 I really like your poem and I love birds too .. I hardly ever rhyme

April 30th, 2022 01:00

Flights Of Fancy
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words are wonderful Rozina. Those birds are in our lives as are all the words that we all write.

Andy

April 30th, 2022 00:57

Flights Of Fancy
Michael Edwards said:

Well said - there is a diverse range of poems here on Mps from a diverse and talented bunch of poets - and you are sure up there with us all.

April 29th, 2022 11:25

Flights Of Fancy
Rocky Lagou said:

This was wonderful Rozina, I\'d also like to praise you here on MPS. You\'re words never fail to impress and that ending truly hit my tickle bone. You had me laughing with your footnote, \"I send them to my daughter who explains them to me!\" I can relate too though, sometimes you really have to go digging with some poems. Glad you feel at home here among great poets!


April 29th, 2022 10:37

Flights Of Fancy
Distant View said:

There is nothing wrong with simple or straightforward rhyme, Rozina. And a poem with a lucid message is a good thing, I would say. I enjoyed this poem full of humour and joy!

April 29th, 2022 06:49

Flights Of Fancy
L. B. Mek said:

there really is no hierarchy, in Poetry
there just can\'t be
of all the artforms
Poetry
is just so, so subjective..
so Please
write whatever you want
as long as it\'s sincere
never let peoples, response
validate, its worth to you..
if you enjoy it, then its done the job
anything else, is surplus
however welcome..
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

April 29th, 2022 05:01

Flights Of Fancy
Saxon Crow said:

Roz there is no shame in finding your own poetic voice. The poetry you write comes from you and so we all feel trepidation when we basically share aspects of our soul with others. That aside, I really enjoyed your poem. It was first rate and glad you mentioned crow haha. Carry on writing dear poet you are just as amazing as everyone else here.

April 29th, 2022 04:53

Flights Of Fancy
dusk arising said:

Your poem today is great fun and i enjoyed reading it, i burst out laughing at the seed bag trophy. Rhyming can be great fun.

April 29th, 2022 03:21

Flights Of Fancy
Fay Slimm. said:

A gem of a bird-verse Rozina which has birthed my first smile of the day - top marks for a fine write of your impressively rhymed touches of humour is this \" Flight into Fancy\"

April 29th, 2022 03:12

Flights Of Fancy
Paul Bell said:

Spot on, it\'s getting the words down, and how they all crunch together.
I always find work gets in the way of writing a classic. lol

April 29th, 2022 03:08

My Mum
sorenbarrett said:

What a wonderful tribute to a strong woman. I can not even imagine losing one let alone three daughters. A wonderful write.

April 27th, 2022 19:52

Down Under
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of reunion with family. Something that most of us can identify with. Well done

April 27th, 2022 06:12

Gossiping
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Rozina. Gossip can be fun if taken in a light hearted way.

Andy


April 26th, 2022 00:29

Gossiping
sorenbarrett said:

Communication is so complicated that even between two people misunderstandings frequently occur, let alone as more people get added to the chain. Great poem.

April 25th, 2022 20:17

Gossiping
dusk arising said:

I think we all gossip though not in a malicious way, that\'s the reserve of a precious few thankfully.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading your post today. This one of the great things about MPS we get to see creative minds writing on subjects which surprise and please. What a varied and talented bunch we are.

April 25th, 2022 13:03

Gossiping
Rocky Lagou said:

Talk about it! Gossiping is just embedded in some, and it\'s downright annoying. Thanks for the entertainment though!


April 25th, 2022 10:20

Gossiping
Neville said:


Ppssst dont you believe it Roz ..

ps ... I dont like it either but love todays offering, in fact, I am pretty sure this now counts as one of my absolute favouwrite Rozina\'s .. but dont tell a soul ................ Neville


April 25th, 2022 07:52

Gossiping
L. B. Mek said:

\'Apparently, men can gossip more than women (read in a women\'s magazine)!\'..
you\'re just so naturally, Awesome
I do declare, dear cherished Poet..
thank you!
this inked wisdom, was a delightful
read..


April 25th, 2022 07:22

Gossiping
Christina8 said:

Gossip and backbiting can be very dangerous and hurtful like you convey well in your message. We played the same game as children though i believe we called it something else. Great poem!

April 25th, 2022 06:25

Gossiping
Distant View said:

Funny, but true to life! We used to call it \"Chinese whispers\" when we were children. I suppose that particular term is politically incorrect these days! I enjoyed the read!

April 25th, 2022 06:22

Gossiping
spilleronsheet said:

Kudos dear Rozina, for the essential topic you chose, that did make me giggle but how tragic its true….the fake nuisance can cause huge distress…a havoc to too many innocents…and the trivia about gossips, LOL…

April 25th, 2022 05:57

Gossiping
Draven said:

A very clever and witty write!

April 25th, 2022 05:41

S P L I T
Neville said:



.. if this little beauty was inspired by a newspaper article, then I seriously take my hat off to you Roz ... okay, so it\'s your hat ... x


April 25th, 2022 02:43

Coffee
sorenbarrett said:

I could smell it brewing. Well written and organized as well as rhyme. Well done

April 24th, 2022 20:29

Coffee
Neville said:


Strong n black is just what the doctor ordered .. and hold the sugar, tis surely the only way to start a new day .... Neville

April 24th, 2022 01:01

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