Comments received on poems by Rozina
How Do They Do It?
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Make your dream your mission Rozina. To quote the Blues Brothers,\"I\'m on a mission from God\"🌩🌞✌️🌹🕊🤗🤗🤗
February 10th, 2022 23:53
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Make your dream your mission Rozina. To quote the Blues Brothers,\"I\'m on a mission from God\"🌩🌞✌️🌹🕊🤗🤗🤗
February 10th, 2022 23:53
How Do They Do It?
Lorna said:
Great dream! But what a hard one! Not only have to write well but have to come up with tricky twisty clever plots - I\'ll read it when you\'re ready!
February 8th, 2022 15:22
Lorna said:
Great dream! But what a hard one! Not only have to write well but have to come up with tricky twisty clever plots - I\'ll read it when you\'re ready!
February 8th, 2022 15:22
How Do They Do It?
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that your dream will come to fruition Rozina, we all have a book inside of us.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that your dream will come to fruition Rozina, we all have a book inside of us.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 01:48
How Do They Do It?
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! All us writers dream of writing that \"magnum opus\" that really gets a reader to think.👍
February 7th, 2022 14:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! All us writers dream of writing that \"magnum opus\" that really gets a reader to think.👍
February 7th, 2022 14:12
The Street Sweeper
AuburnScribbler said:
A very heartwarming poem here Rozina, with a flawless rhythm and rhyme.
I\'m glad that there was a happy ending to it, as such a prolonged sense of division and dissatisfaction brought on by the frustrating way humanity operates, is just plain stupid in my opinion.
So, here\'s to the Sweeper!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 7th, 2022 11:05
AuburnScribbler said:
A very heartwarming poem here Rozina, with a flawless rhythm and rhyme.
I\'m glad that there was a happy ending to it, as such a prolonged sense of division and dissatisfaction brought on by the frustrating way humanity operates, is just plain stupid in my opinion.
So, here\'s to the Sweeper!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 7th, 2022 11:05
How Do They Do It?
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, and the voiced frustrations are so relatable
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(if you\'re interested
what genuinely helps me is to reduce my targets
so instead of writing a whole novel
I\'ll focus on coming up with a character
write out her/his or other
details, down to their eyelash length
then, try and and write a page of them doing something related to the kinda story I want to tell
and then rinse-n-repeat
it may only be a lengthier poem or short story
I end up with
but it\'s a good way to motivate yourself
into writing something longer
at a different time..
February 7th, 2022 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, and the voiced frustrations are so relatable
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(if you\'re interested
what genuinely helps me is to reduce my targets
so instead of writing a whole novel
I\'ll focus on coming up with a character
write out her/his or other
details, down to their eyelash length
then, try and and write a page of them doing something related to the kinda story I want to tell
and then rinse-n-repeat
it may only be a lengthier poem or short story
I end up with
but it\'s a good way to motivate yourself
into writing something longer
at a different time..
February 7th, 2022 06:34
How Do They Do It?
Paul Bell said:
I\'m just going down the ghostwriter route myself. In saying that, I\'m still waiting for him or her to appear.
February 7th, 2022 06:00
Paul Bell said:
I\'m just going down the ghostwriter route myself. In saying that, I\'m still waiting for him or her to appear.
February 7th, 2022 06:00
How Do They Do It?
dusk arising said:
A great choice of subject because I\'m pretty sure many of us on MPS would share the thoughts you express here. I like the humour woven into this. A very entertaining and pleasing read for me.
February 7th, 2022 03:51
dusk arising said:
A great choice of subject because I\'m pretty sure many of us on MPS would share the thoughts you express here. I like the humour woven into this. A very entertaining and pleasing read for me.
February 7th, 2022 03:51
Fat Cat
Rozina said:
Thank you. I’m trying to improve my drawings with daily practice - sometimes not too atrocious!
February 6th, 2022 19:56
Rozina said:
Thank you. I’m trying to improve my drawings with daily practice - sometimes not too atrocious!
February 6th, 2022 19:56
The Street Sweeper
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often but sometimes there are kind people who put a smile on others faces with the kindness they give.
Andy
February 5th, 2022 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often but sometimes there are kind people who put a smile on others faces with the kindness they give.
Andy
February 5th, 2022 01:21
The Street Sweeper
Rozina said:
I read of the deaths of Vietnamese people in a trailer and women from Eastern Europe promised riches in UK. It’s terrible that all over the world this inhumanity continues. Thank you for your comments.
February 4th, 2022 18:26
Rozina said:
I read of the deaths of Vietnamese people in a trailer and women from Eastern Europe promised riches in UK. It’s terrible that all over the world this inhumanity continues. Thank you for your comments.
February 4th, 2022 18:26
The Street Sweeper
Paul Bell said:
Not a lot changes in the world,.Britain is rife with people duped into coming in with promises.
February 4th, 2022 10:57
Paul Bell said:
Not a lot changes in the world,.Britain is rife with people duped into coming in with promises.
February 4th, 2022 10:57
The Street Sweeper
Rozina said:
He is now much more comfortable and seems happy. He’s very hard working. Thank you for your comments.
February 4th, 2022 09:02
Rozina said:
He is now much more comfortable and seems happy. He’s very hard working. Thank you for your comments.
February 4th, 2022 09:02
The Street Sweeper
dusk arising said:
The trafficking of slave labour is still rife. Especially for young women/girls.
Your piece brings us to think about this unpopular subject for it is something we should be ashamed of to play host to albeit in ignorance. We could do more.
February 4th, 2022 08:38
dusk arising said:
The trafficking of slave labour is still rife. Especially for young women/girls.
Your piece brings us to think about this unpopular subject for it is something we should be ashamed of to play host to albeit in ignorance. We could do more.
February 4th, 2022 08:38
The Street Sweeper
Rozina said:
Very true. By humans to humans. Thank you for your comments.
February 4th, 2022 06:08
Rozina said:
Very true. By humans to humans. Thank you for your comments.
February 4th, 2022 06:08
The Street Sweeper
Doggerel Dave said:
The exact scenario you describe in your first two stanzas exists everywhere Rozina, as you are fully aware. Dangerous unsafe working conditions, paid a pittance for men. Same for women with various kinds of sexual slavery an additional element. Nowhere is free of it, with very few happy endings.
Your footnote says it all.
February 4th, 2022 06:04
Doggerel Dave said:
The exact scenario you describe in your first two stanzas exists everywhere Rozina, as you are fully aware. Dangerous unsafe working conditions, paid a pittance for men. Same for women with various kinds of sexual slavery an additional element. Nowhere is free of it, with very few happy endings.
Your footnote says it all.
February 4th, 2022 06:04
Fat Cat
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
LMAO😂😂😂 one of the many cats I\'ve had over the years was named Fat Cat Fred😂 Oh my god,you just brought back so many great memories Rozina😘💖🤗🌹🕊 Animals are just like people,each with their own personality😼
February 3rd, 2022 00:41
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
LMAO😂😂😂 one of the many cats I\'ve had over the years was named Fat Cat Fred😂 Oh my god,you just brought back so many great memories Rozina😘💖🤗🌹🕊 Animals are just like people,each with their own personality😼
February 3rd, 2022 00:41
Fat Cat
Doggerel Dave said:
Consider yourself lucky Warhol doesn\'t reside with you. Don\'t you prefer to run your establishment your way? This may not be the case if you belonged to Puss.
Please keep on sweeping your lines this way, Rozina - great fun.
February 2nd, 2022 01:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Consider yourself lucky Warhol doesn\'t reside with you. Don\'t you prefer to run your establishment your way? This may not be the case if you belonged to Puss.
Please keep on sweeping your lines this way, Rozina - great fun.
February 2nd, 2022 01:44
I Am Woman
Neville said:
what a great shout out & anthem for all of you out there with two X chromosomes ............................ N x
February 1st, 2022 03:45
Neville said:
what a great shout out & anthem for all of you out there with two X chromosomes ............................ N x
February 1st, 2022 03:45
Fat Cat
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rozina. Cats always look down on us humans, they are so arrogant.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Rozina. Cats always look down on us humans, they are so arrogant.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 01:58
Fat Cat
Paul Bell said:
It\'s a cat\'s life.
That\'s why cats are cool.
In saying that, they do have a habit of bringing pigeons back.
January 31st, 2022 14:09
Paul Bell said:
It\'s a cat\'s life.
That\'s why cats are cool.
In saying that, they do have a habit of bringing pigeons back.
January 31st, 2022 14:09
The Michelin Baby
Leisa Niamh said:
Very touching and a happy ending. Love really is the answer.
January 31st, 2022 12:39
Leisa Niamh said:
Very touching and a happy ending. Love really is the answer.
January 31st, 2022 12:39
Fat Cat
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun read - not that cats are my favourite animals.
January 31st, 2022 10:06
Michael Edwards said:
Great fun read - not that cats are my favourite animals.
January 31st, 2022 10:06
Fat Cat
AuburnScribbler said:
I really liked reading this Rozina, a very enjoyable comical back and forth from yourself and Big Warhol.
I hope that a boot camp will aid your fat little friend soon!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 09:56
AuburnScribbler said:
I really liked reading this Rozina, a very enjoyable comical back and forth from yourself and Big Warhol.
I hope that a boot camp will aid your fat little friend soon!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 09:56
Fat Cat
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, thank you
at least more entertainment, than that last
Cats film, CGI monstrosity 😨
lol
January 31st, 2022 07:29
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, thank you
at least more entertainment, than that last
Cats film, CGI monstrosity 😨
lol
January 31st, 2022 07:29
Fat Cat
Neville said:
I could use Big Warhol for a day or two ... living in the country like I do we have lots of often unwelcome furry things visiting ............ very mice Roz & rats ya lot for now .. :)
January 31st, 2022 04:32
Neville said:
I could use Big Warhol for a day or two ... living in the country like I do we have lots of often unwelcome furry things visiting ............ very mice Roz & rats ya lot for now .. :)
January 31st, 2022 04:32
Of Patients And Patience
AuburnScribbler said:
A fantastic write here Rozina, with an effortless enjoyable flow.
Also, the fact that you used to work in healthcare, I take my hat off to you, and this poem truly outlines the hardship in trying to help others, of which, I\'m sure they are very thankful to you for your efforts. I like the sketch of yourself as well, though you may have been hiding, you were probably also observing, from a mentor, thus, the next time, you would know exactly what to do.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 30th, 2022 07:56
AuburnScribbler said:
A fantastic write here Rozina, with an effortless enjoyable flow.
Also, the fact that you used to work in healthcare, I take my hat off to you, and this poem truly outlines the hardship in trying to help others, of which, I\'m sure they are very thankful to you for your efforts. I like the sketch of yourself as well, though you may have been hiding, you were probably also observing, from a mentor, thus, the next time, you would know exactly what to do.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 30th, 2022 07:56
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