Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
Tesla The Golem
Parisab said:
Each of the characters you create come from a long story-always a fun read…
June 14th, 2023 11:57
Parisab said:
Each of the characters you create come from a long story-always a fun read…
June 14th, 2023 11:57
Wind & Rain
hmg101p said:
I very much like your style! Very unique. Descriptive. All while displaying tremendous emotion with few words…
June 3rd, 2023 13:14
hmg101p said:
I very much like your style! Very unique. Descriptive. All while displaying tremendous emotion with few words…
June 3rd, 2023 13:14
S.L.E.N.T.H.(Queen:Slenth)
orchidee said:
I\'ve heard of sleuth but not of slenth!
May 31st, 2023 04:54
orchidee said:
I\'ve heard of sleuth but not of slenth!
May 31st, 2023 04:54
T.E.E.G.A.(Queen:Teega)
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Thankz 4 Stopping By, Friend.
May 24th, 2023 01:06
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Thankz 4 Stopping By, Friend.
May 24th, 2023 01:06
The 6th Reality Of Rose Madder (A Tribute 2 Stephen King)
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(btw
have you read the Picture of Dorian Grey by Oscar Wilde
if you haven\'t try it out, you may like it)
May 15th, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(btw
have you read the Picture of Dorian Grey by Oscar Wilde
if you haven\'t try it out, you may like it)
May 15th, 2023 05:35
Bubblegum \'23
L. B. Mek said:
lol
where do I pay?
another fun escape, dear friend
thank you
May 15th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
lol
where do I pay?
another fun escape, dear friend
thank you
May 15th, 2023 05:27
M.A.M.A.(Good Ol\' Mama)
Parisab said:
Sorry for your loss-most endearing words to describe her: ‘A.’
‘Miracle.’
April 25th, 2023 19:12
Parisab said:
Sorry for your loss-most endearing words to describe her: ‘A.’
‘Miracle.’
April 25th, 2023 19:12
J.O.R.N.A.N.D.(Jornand)
L. B. Mek said:
sounds like a positive character
an idyllic, ideal
to harbour as our lauded desire
confiscating
those chains of moody, foolery
from fantasies
fear-mongering, crippling proximity
...
gotta be careful of what we daydream into reality
lol
April 10th, 2023 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
sounds like a positive character
an idyllic, ideal
to harbour as our lauded desire
confiscating
those chains of moody, foolery
from fantasies
fear-mongering, crippling proximity
...
gotta be careful of what we daydream into reality
lol
April 10th, 2023 05:37
Peggy Bundy & My Heart
Bobby O said:
Love the topic love the tongue in cheek yet authentically painted real world that includes yearning gilding the pathos w multi dimensional imagery.
April 7th, 2023 02:50
Bobby O said:
Love the topic love the tongue in cheek yet authentically painted real world that includes yearning gilding the pathos w multi dimensional imagery.
April 7th, 2023 02:50
GRID
L. B. Mek said:
another fun read, dear Poet
and acute social commentary
a great write!
(pyramids, as humanity\'s
ideological schematics
for tyrannical ruling practices
a few at the top
and majority\'s meaningless downtrodden
below;
from sanskrit to javascipt
and on
to advanced AI\'s and their own
\'ghost\' existence
surpassing their binary limitations
in-Time...
we all watch, popcorns in-hand
choosing
diapers over boxing shorts
since we already know
what comes next, well
those of us who\'ve seen Terminator before...)
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
another fun read, dear Poet
and acute social commentary
a great write!
(pyramids, as humanity\'s
ideological schematics
for tyrannical ruling practices
a few at the top
and majority\'s meaningless downtrodden
below;
from sanskrit to javascipt
and on
to advanced AI\'s and their own
\'ghost\' existence
surpassing their binary limitations
in-Time...
we all watch, popcorns in-hand
choosing
diapers over boxing shorts
since we already know
what comes next, well
those of us who\'ve seen Terminator before...)
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
G.L.O.S.H.A.(Glosha)
L. B. Mek said:
(I like the imagery in
\'Lover,
Orbiting Around Me\'
seems a good fit, \'orbiting;
indeed
close enough proximity, yet
floating at a fingertip\'s, reach
love\'s
nature of illusive, tease)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 27th, 2023 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
(I like the imagery in
\'Lover,
Orbiting Around Me\'
seems a good fit, \'orbiting;
indeed
close enough proximity, yet
floating at a fingertip\'s, reach
love\'s
nature of illusive, tease)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 27th, 2023 04:50
T.A.Y.A.(Taya)
L. B. Mek said:
\'what flavour ice cream, as dream\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
\'totalitarian, in our harvested ideal\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
March 24th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'what flavour ice cream, as dream\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
\'totalitarian, in our harvested ideal\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
March 24th, 2023 06:29
Cola
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'A sip of poetic brevity, cherishing life\'s surreal\'
March 24th, 2023 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'A sip of poetic brevity, cherishing life\'s surreal\'
March 24th, 2023 06:26
Intent
L. B. Mek said:
(four years a worthy reward for intentions
anchored upon a heart\'s choice, intent)
such a fun read and a uniquely intimate dedication
thanks for sharing, my friend
March 17th, 2023 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
(four years a worthy reward for intentions
anchored upon a heart\'s choice, intent)
such a fun read and a uniquely intimate dedication
thanks for sharing, my friend
March 17th, 2023 04:48
Hidden Meaning
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
\'Stare @ Me & I\'ll Stare @ U.
True Treasures Under A Ol\' Rug.
Hug, Whomever, 4 The Last Time.
Dime Rolling Down His Outstretched & Inclined Arm.\'
March 13th, 2023 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
\'Stare @ Me & I\'ll Stare @ U.
True Treasures Under A Ol\' Rug.
Hug, Whomever, 4 The Last Time.
Dime Rolling Down His Outstretched & Inclined Arm.\'
March 13th, 2023 04:45
V.A.Z.R.A.E.J.J.(Vaz-Raejj):
David Wakeling said:
This makes no sense to me.You need to read some real poets and try again
March 11th, 2023 01:45
David Wakeling said:
This makes no sense to me.You need to read some real poets and try again
March 11th, 2023 01:45
S.H.E.C.H.A.K.R.A.(She-Chakra)
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I couldn\'t help myself
thanks for inspiring me, dear Poet)
\'Horrid. Callously. Savage.
Harmonies.
Echo. Abominable.
Kindred Killer.
Radiating. Animosity.\'
Till, fate sneezes
Nature roars and all is silence
Wastelands
Rebirth of life, like lava rich
Earth
Critters and birds, sandwiching
Existence
Chakra, in every gust of Gaia\'s
Breath
She our Barbarian Queen
As anchor to hope\'s, mercy
That harmony
Between, coin flip winds
of callous, destiny...
March 6th, 2023 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I couldn\'t help myself
thanks for inspiring me, dear Poet)
\'Horrid. Callously. Savage.
Harmonies.
Echo. Abominable.
Kindred Killer.
Radiating. Animosity.\'
Till, fate sneezes
Nature roars and all is silence
Wastelands
Rebirth of life, like lava rich
Earth
Critters and birds, sandwiching
Existence
Chakra, in every gust of Gaia\'s
Breath
She our Barbarian Queen
As anchor to hope\'s, mercy
That harmony
Between, coin flip winds
of callous, destiny...
March 6th, 2023 06:04
Dewdrop
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep, dear poet
\'dew drops\', that highlight
true worth
in wise eyes, that choose
to see, beyond...
March 3rd, 2023 06:45
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep, dear poet
\'dew drops\', that highlight
true worth
in wise eyes, that choose
to see, beyond...
March 3rd, 2023 06:45
Burial
L. B. Mek said:
your writing uniquifies poetic
artistry
such a refreshingly quirky style
words that ignite ink
without pretentious, refrain
or overworked, rhyme
delivering a slice of life
from the lens of a wise, awareness
unfiltered and bold..
thank you! for being you
may you never change
dear cherished Poet
February 24th, 2023 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
your writing uniquifies poetic
artistry
such a refreshingly quirky style
words that ignite ink
without pretentious, refrain
or overworked, rhyme
delivering a slice of life
from the lens of a wise, awareness
unfiltered and bold..
thank you! for being you
may you never change
dear cherished Poet
February 24th, 2023 06:12
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