Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
H.E.L.L.E.N. (Hellen Greer) (WoWza!)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read nicely done
August 21st, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read nicely done
August 21st, 2024 09:20
L.O.V.E. (Love)
sorenbarrett said:
True in my mind and that\'s all that matters. Loved it
August 20th, 2024 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
True in my mind and that\'s all that matters. Loved it
August 20th, 2024 05:02
L.O.V.E. (Love)
rrodriguez said:
Nice done. I see you do acrostics, too. Check out the one I did with the word ennui. Be blessed!
August 19th, 2024 20:47
rrodriguez said:
Nice done. I see you do acrostics, too. Check out the one I did with the word ennui. Be blessed!
August 19th, 2024 20:47
K.Y.L.A.T.E.K. (Dr.:Kyla~Tek)
jarcher54 said:
Yes, the last line is like a jack-in-the-box popping out! Nice move sir.
August 18th, 2024 11:39
jarcher54 said:
Yes, the last line is like a jack-in-the-box popping out! Nice move sir.
August 18th, 2024 11:39
K.Y.L.A.T.E.K. (Dr.:Kyla~Tek)
sorenbarrett said:
The last word caught me by surprise sending a message. Nicely done
August 18th, 2024 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
The last word caught me by surprise sending a message. Nicely done
August 18th, 2024 06:50
D.A.I.S.H.A. (Dai~Sha)
Mase ♪ said:
Cool to twist the words and imagine all the possible meanings this poem can uphold.
Good write Jerry!
July 28th, 2024 13:21
Mase ♪ said:
Cool to twist the words and imagine all the possible meanings this poem can uphold.
Good write Jerry!
July 28th, 2024 13:21
M.O.N.T.I.K.A. (Montika)
sorenbarrett said:
Qualities that make a desirable personality. Nicely done
June 9th, 2024 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Qualities that make a desirable personality. Nicely done
June 9th, 2024 08:34
C.H.A.L.I.N.K. (Cha-Link)
Mutley Ravishes said:
Jerry, are you alluding to people\'s poor boxing skills when it comes to dealing with jabs?
June 2nd, 2024 18:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
Jerry, are you alluding to people\'s poor boxing skills when it comes to dealing with jabs?
June 2nd, 2024 18:58
Z.A.Y.(Zay)
L. B. Mek said:
Zealous, Fantasy
Our Communion
Yearning
4 All Star Energy..
(meh.. not our best
but hey we\'re keeping the steak going
what more reward can we claim)
Stay UP brotha from anotha
winter\'s cloud\'s gAtheRing
we best get those UmbRellAs
Up, nice and EarlY!
October 2nd, 2023 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
Zealous, Fantasy
Our Communion
Yearning
4 All Star Energy..
(meh.. not our best
but hey we\'re keeping the steak going
what more reward can we claim)
Stay UP brotha from anotha
winter\'s cloud\'s gAtheRing
we best get those UmbRellAs
Up, nice and EarlY!
October 2nd, 2023 05:07
B.E.S.T.E.S.T.(Bestest)
L. B. Mek said:
BESTEST
BE a Poet
Brave enough
to ink Creativity
free of Artistry\'s
Shackles..
unique Poet\'s like you
brotha from anotha
stay You, stay True!
Make those Ladiez
witness your steadfast
spine!
ink On
September 25th, 2023 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
BESTEST
BE a Poet
Brave enough
to ink Creativity
free of Artistry\'s
Shackles..
unique Poet\'s like you
brotha from anotha
stay You, stay True!
Make those Ladiez
witness your steadfast
spine!
ink On
September 25th, 2023 05:39
F.I.N.G.(Fing)
L. B. Mek said:
Necromancer, as Anathema
to Gorgeous nature,
Inviting, a Fantasy
as Escapism, within Barbarianz
Agez
(meh, I tried)
lol
hope you had good week brotha
hv a mythological weekend
no lore, just dimension slips
September 22nd, 2023 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
Necromancer, as Anathema
to Gorgeous nature,
Inviting, a Fantasy
as Escapism, within Barbarianz
Agez
(meh, I tried)
lol
hope you had good week brotha
hv a mythological weekend
no lore, just dimension slips
September 22nd, 2023 06:13
P.T.A.E.A.H.(Ptaeah)
L. B. Mek said:
Assassin\'s of Heart
Elevated, Amorous
Tempting
Harlequin Pussycats
...
oh nice one partner, we vibing on this one my friend
took me like minutes, easy street
stay Up brother, from anotha
never let them
see you limping, make that bob
glide, Easy paths
our Mind\'s loaded with Glocks
for all their BullSht and Vice!
September 15th, 2023 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
Assassin\'s of Heart
Elevated, Amorous
Tempting
Harlequin Pussycats
...
oh nice one partner, we vibing on this one my friend
took me like minutes, easy street
stay Up brother, from anotha
never let them
see you limping, make that bob
glide, Easy paths
our Mind\'s loaded with Glocks
for all their BullSht and Vice!
September 15th, 2023 06:53
C.H.A.O.S.(Chaos)
L. B. Mek said:
Chaos is beyond gender
its a purity of universality
Chaos a need
Chaos a curse
in the hands of a child, chaos
is impossibility\'s demise
mother nature\'s most potent
servant, chaos..
September 11th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Chaos is beyond gender
its a purity of universality
Chaos a need
Chaos a curse
in the hands of a child, chaos
is impossibility\'s demise
mother nature\'s most potent
servant, chaos..
September 11th, 2023 05:34
D.A.R.Q.U.E.(Darque)
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of that 300 film
with ephors and oracle
that erotic driven scene of portent
crazy, your words were so potent
crisp clean imagery
such an intriguing read, thank you!
September 8th, 2023 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of that 300 film
with ephors and oracle
that erotic driven scene of portent
crazy, your words were so potent
crisp clean imagery
such an intriguing read, thank you!
September 8th, 2023 05:45
H.E.E.N.A.(Heena The Laughing Hyena)
L. B. Mek said:
ok, you won
I\'ve got nowhere to go with airtight
yeah, I will admit
I gave-up before trying, but hey
knowing our limits
is a necessity skill, to survive..
lol
stay-UP! oh most Uni\'Q\' Poet
September 4th, 2023 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
ok, you won
I\'ve got nowhere to go with airtight
yeah, I will admit
I gave-up before trying, but hey
knowing our limits
is a necessity skill, to survive..
lol
stay-UP! oh most Uni\'Q\' Poet
September 4th, 2023 05:50
M.A.K.H.A.N.(Ma-Khan)
L. B. Mek said:
Nikita assassin vibes
Aesthetic trappings
HER Infamy
Killer Misunderstood
Deathly mercy her gift
(ok, ok
this was easier
since I\'ve been watching back
Maggie Q\'s Nikita
that and Jessica Alba\'s Dark Angel
so underrated)
September 1st, 2023 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
Nikita assassin vibes
Aesthetic trappings
HER Infamy
Killer Misunderstood
Deathly mercy her gift
(ok, ok
this was easier
since I\'ve been watching back
Maggie Q\'s Nikita
that and Jessica Alba\'s Dark Angel
so underrated)
September 1st, 2023 05:21
GUSH
L. B. Mek said:
in my head this is a love song
to blueberry\'s
and there\'s nothing you can do
to change my mind...
\'Purples Of Mystic Berries, Ripened\'
lol
(wonderfully unique, as-ever
dear gifted Poet, thank you)
August 28th, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
in my head this is a love song
to blueberry\'s
and there\'s nothing you can do
to change my mind...
\'Purples Of Mystic Berries, Ripened\'
lol
(wonderfully unique, as-ever
dear gifted Poet, thank you)
August 28th, 2023 04:53
L.L.E.J.L.A.(Llejla)
jarcher54 said:
Quite a pyramid you\'ve built there... oh my... I cannot handle her. But I want to!!
August 18th, 2023 00:44
jarcher54 said:
Quite a pyramid you\'ve built there... oh my... I cannot handle her. But I want to!!
August 18th, 2023 00:44
B.R.A.V.O.(Bravo)
L. B. Mek said:
Belated
Reverie
Admissions
Vanquishing
Omnipresence
of Love, sadly
(another fun one, dear poet)
thank you
stay safe, i\'ll brb in a few weeks
August 4th, 2023 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
Belated
Reverie
Admissions
Vanquishing
Omnipresence
of Love, sadly
(another fun one, dear poet)
thank you
stay safe, i\'ll brb in a few weeks
August 4th, 2023 06:25
G.O.L.D.R.A.M.A.I.(Goldra-Mai)
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
(hardest yet, by far
i tried my friend)
lol
(Anarchy. Dragon of Dungeons.
Maintaining. Rogue. Assassin.
Original. Lover. Intricately. Glorious.
Goldra-Mai, inspiring
poetic testimony to She-Barbarian might
in the ageZ oV mythological delight)
July 31st, 2023 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
(hardest yet, by far
i tried my friend)
lol
(Anarchy. Dragon of Dungeons.
Maintaining. Rogue. Assassin.
Original. Lover. Intricately. Glorious.
Goldra-Mai, inspiring
poetic testimony to She-Barbarian might
in the ageZ oV mythological delight)
July 31st, 2023 05:55
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