Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
Z.A.Y.(Zay)
L. B. Mek said:
Zealous, Fantasy
Our Communion
Yearning
4 All Star Energy..
(meh.. not our best
but hey we\'re keeping the steak going
what more reward can we claim)
Stay UP brotha from anotha
winter\'s cloud\'s gAtheRing
we best get those UmbRellAs
Up, nice and EarlY!
October 2nd, 2023 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
Zealous, Fantasy
Our Communion
Yearning
4 All Star Energy..
(meh.. not our best
but hey we\'re keeping the steak going
what more reward can we claim)
Stay UP brotha from anotha
winter\'s cloud\'s gAtheRing
we best get those UmbRellAs
Up, nice and EarlY!
October 2nd, 2023 05:07
B.E.S.T.E.S.T.(Bestest)
L. B. Mek said:
BESTEST
BE a Poet
Brave enough
to ink Creativity
free of Artistry\'s
Shackles..
unique Poet\'s like you
brotha from anotha
stay You, stay True!
Make those Ladiez
witness your steadfast
spine!
ink On
September 25th, 2023 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
BESTEST
BE a Poet
Brave enough
to ink Creativity
free of Artistry\'s
Shackles..
unique Poet\'s like you
brotha from anotha
stay You, stay True!
Make those Ladiez
witness your steadfast
spine!
ink On
September 25th, 2023 05:39
F.I.N.G.(Fing)
L. B. Mek said:
Necromancer, as Anathema
to Gorgeous nature,
Inviting, a Fantasy
as Escapism, within Barbarianz
Agez
(meh, I tried)
lol
hope you had good week brotha
hv a mythological weekend
no lore, just dimension slips
September 22nd, 2023 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
Necromancer, as Anathema
to Gorgeous nature,
Inviting, a Fantasy
as Escapism, within Barbarianz
Agez
(meh, I tried)
lol
hope you had good week brotha
hv a mythological weekend
no lore, just dimension slips
September 22nd, 2023 06:13
P.T.A.E.A.H.(Ptaeah)
L. B. Mek said:
Assassin\'s of Heart
Elevated, Amorous
Tempting
Harlequin Pussycats
...
oh nice one partner, we vibing on this one my friend
took me like minutes, easy street
stay Up brother, from anotha
never let them
see you limping, make that bob
glide, Easy paths
our Mind\'s loaded with Glocks
for all their BullSht and Vice!
September 15th, 2023 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
Assassin\'s of Heart
Elevated, Amorous
Tempting
Harlequin Pussycats
...
oh nice one partner, we vibing on this one my friend
took me like minutes, easy street
stay Up brother, from anotha
never let them
see you limping, make that bob
glide, Easy paths
our Mind\'s loaded with Glocks
for all their BullSht and Vice!
September 15th, 2023 06:53
C.H.A.O.S.(Chaos)
L. B. Mek said:
Chaos is beyond gender
its a purity of universality
Chaos a need
Chaos a curse
in the hands of a child, chaos
is impossibility\'s demise
mother nature\'s most potent
servant, chaos..
September 11th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
Chaos is beyond gender
its a purity of universality
Chaos a need
Chaos a curse
in the hands of a child, chaos
is impossibility\'s demise
mother nature\'s most potent
servant, chaos..
September 11th, 2023 05:34
D.A.R.Q.U.E.(Darque)
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of that 300 film
with ephors and oracle
that erotic driven scene of portent
crazy, your words were so potent
crisp clean imagery
such an intriguing read, thank you!
September 8th, 2023 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of that 300 film
with ephors and oracle
that erotic driven scene of portent
crazy, your words were so potent
crisp clean imagery
such an intriguing read, thank you!
September 8th, 2023 05:45
H.E.E.N.A.(Heena The Laughing Hyena)
L. B. Mek said:
ok, you won
I\'ve got nowhere to go with airtight
yeah, I will admit
I gave-up before trying, but hey
knowing our limits
is a necessity skill, to survive..
lol
stay-UP! oh most Uni\'Q\' Poet
September 4th, 2023 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
ok, you won
I\'ve got nowhere to go with airtight
yeah, I will admit
I gave-up before trying, but hey
knowing our limits
is a necessity skill, to survive..
lol
stay-UP! oh most Uni\'Q\' Poet
September 4th, 2023 05:50
M.A.K.H.A.N.(Ma-Khan)
L. B. Mek said:
Nikita assassin vibes
Aesthetic trappings
HER Infamy
Killer Misunderstood
Deathly mercy her gift
(ok, ok
this was easier
since I\'ve been watching back
Maggie Q\'s Nikita
that and Jessica Alba\'s Dark Angel
so underrated)
September 1st, 2023 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
Nikita assassin vibes
Aesthetic trappings
HER Infamy
Killer Misunderstood
Deathly mercy her gift
(ok, ok
this was easier
since I\'ve been watching back
Maggie Q\'s Nikita
that and Jessica Alba\'s Dark Angel
so underrated)
September 1st, 2023 05:21
GUSH
L. B. Mek said:
in my head this is a love song
to blueberry\'s
and there\'s nothing you can do
to change my mind...
\'Purples Of Mystic Berries, Ripened\'
lol
(wonderfully unique, as-ever
dear gifted Poet, thank you)
August 28th, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
in my head this is a love song
to blueberry\'s
and there\'s nothing you can do
to change my mind...
\'Purples Of Mystic Berries, Ripened\'
lol
(wonderfully unique, as-ever
dear gifted Poet, thank you)
August 28th, 2023 04:53
L.L.E.J.L.A.(Llejla)
jarcher54 said:
Quite a pyramid you\'ve built there... oh my... I cannot handle her. But I want to!!
August 18th, 2023 00:44
jarcher54 said:
Quite a pyramid you\'ve built there... oh my... I cannot handle her. But I want to!!
August 18th, 2023 00:44
B.R.A.V.O.(Bravo)
L. B. Mek said:
Belated
Reverie
Admissions
Vanquishing
Omnipresence
of Love, sadly
(another fun one, dear poet)
thank you
stay safe, i\'ll brb in a few weeks
August 4th, 2023 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
Belated
Reverie
Admissions
Vanquishing
Omnipresence
of Love, sadly
(another fun one, dear poet)
thank you
stay safe, i\'ll brb in a few weeks
August 4th, 2023 06:25
G.O.L.D.R.A.M.A.I.(Goldra-Mai)
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
(hardest yet, by far
i tried my friend)
lol
(Anarchy. Dragon of Dungeons.
Maintaining. Rogue. Assassin.
Original. Lover. Intricately. Glorious.
Goldra-Mai, inspiring
poetic testimony to She-Barbarian might
in the ageZ oV mythological delight)
July 31st, 2023 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
(hardest yet, by far
i tried my friend)
lol
(Anarchy. Dragon of Dungeons.
Maintaining. Rogue. Assassin.
Original. Lover. Intricately. Glorious.
Goldra-Mai, inspiring
poetic testimony to She-Barbarian might
in the ageZ oV mythological delight)
July 31st, 2023 05:55
T.R.E.A.T.(Treat)
L. B. Mek said:
taciturn, toxic, twisted
revealing, rampant, regret
Endangered
archaic, acidic, affluence
triggering, terminations
music videos, as exploitation enablers
(lol
that video would not be made
in todays era of PC woketivist
tyrannical cancel culture)
a good challenge, great fun
sorry for twisting the narrative
didn\'t mean to be negative
just my natural cynical trait
lol
thank you dear poet
July 28th, 2023 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
taciturn, toxic, twisted
revealing, rampant, regret
Endangered
archaic, acidic, affluence
triggering, terminations
music videos, as exploitation enablers
(lol
that video would not be made
in todays era of PC woketivist
tyrannical cancel culture)
a good challenge, great fun
sorry for twisting the narrative
didn\'t mean to be negative
just my natural cynical trait
lol
thank you dear poet
July 28th, 2023 06:44
O.K.W.A.L.E.E.D.(OK Waleed)
Ok Waleed said:
Wow this is incredible thank you. Continue being you
July 20th, 2023 02:19
Ok Waleed said:
Wow this is incredible thank you. Continue being you
July 20th, 2023 02:19
F.O.D.D.R.A.(Foddra)
L. B. Mek said:
guess we better stock up on our
floribunda plants
those barbarian queens will need
offsetting scenic roses
to finesse their draconianly ruthless
reputations..
(2 for 2, let\'s go, lol
what fun
thank you my friend)
July 17th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
guess we better stock up on our
floribunda plants
those barbarian queens will need
offsetting scenic roses
to finesse their draconianly ruthless
reputations..
(2 for 2, let\'s go, lol
what fun
thank you my friend)
July 17th, 2023 05:27
D.A.Y.L.A.(Dayla)
L. B. Mek said:
My life\'s Amorous gift
Lively, while sick in winter
Youthful even in her granny diapers
The Angel of reprieve in my life
Cooking up something Delicious
to let her know how much I still love
my Barbarian queen...
(lol
fun times, thanks for inspiring me
stay safe dear Poet)
July 14th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
My life\'s Amorous gift
Lively, while sick in winter
Youthful even in her granny diapers
The Angel of reprieve in my life
Cooking up something Delicious
to let her know how much I still love
my Barbarian queen...
(lol
fun times, thanks for inspiring me
stay safe dear Poet)
July 14th, 2023 05:27
L.E.E.S.H.A.(Leesha)
Michael Edwards said:
I had the best partner I could wish for - this sums her up beautifully.
July 9th, 2023 00:29
Michael Edwards said:
I had the best partner I could wish for - this sums her up beautifully.
July 9th, 2023 00:29
Lovette
L. B. Mek said:
a song in the making
words just roll of the tongue
like a buttered tongue twister
or a chorus hook
you just can\'t get out of your mind
lol
showcasing great skills, dear Poet
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
a song in the making
words just roll of the tongue
like a buttered tongue twister
or a chorus hook
you just can\'t get out of your mind
lol
showcasing great skills, dear Poet
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 04:38
L.O.V.E.(Love)
L. B. Mek said:
when love was love
and we dreamed of girls
that had yet to learn
to wear makeup, on their heart\'s
to hide the bruises from those fools
that came before us
June 23rd, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
when love was love
and we dreamed of girls
that had yet to learn
to wear makeup, on their heart\'s
to hide the bruises from those fools
that came before us
June 23rd, 2023 04:05
X
L. B. Mek said:
Jeri Ryan
Borg Queen to an entire star trek generation
now that\'s a legacy!
lol
\'Revere, Her, Of The Renown U So Regard\'
June 19th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
Jeri Ryan
Borg Queen to an entire star trek generation
now that\'s a legacy!
lol
\'Revere, Her, Of The Renown U So Regard\'
June 19th, 2023 03:47
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