Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence

Ok Waleed said:

Isn’t treesh a slang word for slut?

March 26th, 2023 12:59

L. B. Mek said:

\'what flavour ice cream, as dream\'
\'totalitarian, in our harvested ideal\'

March 24th, 2023 06:29

L. B. Mek said:

\'A sip of poetic brevity, cherishing life\'s surreal\'

March 24th, 2023 06:26

Cynthia Seven said:

Its such a heart warming bond between the two

March 23rd, 2023 01:11

L. B. Mek said:

(four years a worthy reward for intentions
anchored upon a heart\'s choice, intent)
such a fun read and a uniquely intimate dedication
thanks for sharing, my friend

March 17th, 2023 04:48

2781 said:

Don\'t trust the Jezebel

March 17th, 2023 01:39

jarcher54 said:

I think I registered her too!

March 17th, 2023 00:10

Hidden Meaning
L. B. Mek said:

love this!
\'Stare @ Me & I\'ll Stare @ U.
True Treasures Under A Ol\' Rug.
Hug, Whomever, 4 The Last Time.
Dime Rolling Down His Outstretched & Inclined Arm.\'

March 13th, 2023 04:45

David Wakeling said:

This makes no sense to me.You need to read some real poets and try again

March 11th, 2023 01:45

Ok Waleed said:

What about Lover

March 9th, 2023 00:35

L. B. Mek said:

(forgive me, I couldn\'t help myself
thanks for inspiring me, dear Poet)
\'Horrid. Callously. Savage.
Echo. Abominable.
Kindred Killer.
Radiating. Animosity.\'
Till, fate sneezes
Nature roars and all is silence
Rebirth of life, like lava rich
Critters and birds, sandwiching
Chakra, in every gust of Gaia\'s
She our Barbarian Queen
As anchor to hope\'s, mercy
That harmony
Between, coin flip winds
of callous, destiny...

March 6th, 2023 06:04

L. B. Mek said:

this is deep, dear poet
\'dew drops\', that highlight
true worth
in wise eyes, that choose
to see, beyond...

March 3rd, 2023 06:45

L. B. Mek said:

your writing uniquifies poetic
such a refreshingly quirky style
words that ignite ink
without pretentious, refrain
or overworked, rhyme
delivering a slice of life
from the lens of a wise, awareness
unfiltered and bold..
thank you! for being you
may you never change
dear cherished Poet

February 24th, 2023 06:12

mvvenkataraman said:

In the name Mistress itself is added the word \"Stress\" rightly and magically!

February 19th, 2023 06:02

Addy said:

It a unique style of writing i havent seen. nice poem!

February 18th, 2023 07:47

Ra-Yope, The Eagle
Parisab said:

A great fun and great read
Are your poems

February 17th, 2023 15:59

L. B. Mek said:

(reminds me of talib kweli\'s lyrics
to \'broken glass\'
only in fantasy, they get to be all powerful Amazonian
heroines, in reality
seldom is that rabbit hole, storyline
empowered with happy endings...)
sorry for my bleak interpretation my friend

February 17th, 2023 05:21

Ra-Yope, The Eagle
2781 said:

Certainly is, ha.

February 15th, 2023 00:52

L. B. Mek said:

indeed, this be the ugly reality
we like to forget..
\'while the lucky wine n dine
on date nights
somewhere else, thousands
with only horror\'s tears
as their salty, sips of life\'
(but kind friend
never forget empathy, in your depictions
art is art, and stark depictions
a necessity to awaken
delusional, herded minds
when our topic is so close
to reality
a tender touch, goes a long way
or so I think)
but what do i know

February 13th, 2023 05:10

L. B. Mek said:

a great read my friend
this be how I like my love poetry
stark lines of realisable, reality
(ring in our valentine dreams
sip a little of moonlight\'s tease
that time of year, Spring
awakening our romantic, feats)

February 13th, 2023 04:00

Pretty Heart
L. B. Mek said:

\'Spark Me, Again, Pretty Heart As We Stargaze Comfortably On This Deck.

Check Her: She\'s Dazzling. Sparkling Beauty, All Mine. Pretty Heart.\'
(there\'s such a synchronicity
between these words
and my latest feeble effort
you, serenading Spring
and I, an alternate reality

February 10th, 2023 06:15

L. B. Mek said:

there\'s a gentle \'Kristy\' breeze
in the air, refreshing scents
of blooming\'s promise, waiting
to blossom and please\'
(too cheesy? sorry i tried my friend
btw care to elaborate on kristy?)

February 10th, 2023 06:11

Ok Waleed said:

Terrorizing seems to conflict the entire other attributes

February 10th, 2023 01:11

Parisab said:

What a fantastical vision of spring!

February 9th, 2023 12:48

Pretty Heart
2781 said:

Lucky man.

February 8th, 2023 02:22

L. B. Mek said:

\'attraction and gargoyle
a new pairing for me\'
actually, my friend
I have a bone to pick with whoever first designed
those gargoyle, templates
it annoys me, most of them
have wolf or dog facial features
especially those medieval ones
I know there are a vastly diverse
range of gargoyles
but an unusual amount
have dog like facial features...
a warping theme of guardians?
sorry just some random thoughts

February 6th, 2023 05:36

L. B. Mek said:

are you starting a one man war
with an entire country, dear poet?
you got your spy balloons ready
but on a more significant, note
its crazy how toxicity
is so often a magnetic element
of those irresistible
vices and self-harming traits
we are drawn to, time n again

February 6th, 2023 05:01

L. B. Mek said:

(great flow, like the broken rhythm
of \'sent\' \'stress\' and \'annihilates\'
such a trademark of your unique
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(walks in, takes one look
picks me out
and thus, my life begins;
what a dream
to anchor
my hopes within)

February 3rd, 2023 05:52

Ok Waleed said:

Why do you type like this what structure is this called

January 31st, 2023 01:20

L. B. Mek said:

kinky, with bite
that leaves a mark, I bet...
(all I had , my friend
forgive me)

January 30th, 2023 04:41

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