Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
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L. B. Mek said:
if Ironman and Batman
could have, bonded
questing, for a soulful
relationship
with their life\'s: Superwoman...
lol
(a fun read, thanks for sharing)
January 13th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
if Ironman and Batman
could have, bonded
questing, for a soulful
relationship
with their life\'s: Superwoman...
lol
(a fun read, thanks for sharing)
January 13th, 2022 04:35
Moogamoomba & Stakisda
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liebchens & Gats\' eh? lol
a very, edgy
take on \'love\'..
thanks for sharing
an intriguing read, I bow
to your vocabulary\'s, prowess
January 11th, 2022 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liebchens & Gats\' eh? lol
a very, edgy
take on \'love\'..
thanks for sharing
an intriguing read, I bow
to your vocabulary\'s, prowess
January 11th, 2022 06:11
Mistress:Diaspora
Buzz Bray said:
Love is the risk of everything. I like the use of the word \'diaspora.\' Bringing together disparate souls, form only God knows where or why. Sensual and powerful words. Nicely done!
January 10th, 2022 21:19
Buzz Bray said:
Love is the risk of everything. I like the use of the word \'diaspora.\' Bringing together disparate souls, form only God knows where or why. Sensual and powerful words. Nicely done!
January 10th, 2022 21:19
Mistress:Diaspora
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank U 4 Such A Sincere Compliment, My Friend. Best Of Luck 2 U.
January 10th, 2022 16:46
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank U 4 Such A Sincere Compliment, My Friend. Best Of Luck 2 U.
January 10th, 2022 16:46
Mistress:Diaspora
L. B. Mek said:
\'falling in love
while being, displaced\',
often, love is far removed
form the reality
we know and survive
\'Diaspora\': indeed...!
(just a gem of a concept
I feel you did really well
to bridge, such differing
metaphors and themes;
words worth contemplating
long, after we\'ve finished reading)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 10th, 2022 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'falling in love
while being, displaced\',
often, love is far removed
form the reality
we know and survive
\'Diaspora\': indeed...!
(just a gem of a concept
I feel you did really well
to bridge, such differing
metaphors and themes;
words worth contemplating
long, after we\'ve finished reading)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 10th, 2022 07:00
Blue Jacket
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank You 2 The Utmost Of Greatly, Esteemed Peer. May Your New Year B Filled With Happiness & Blessings As Well.
January 7th, 2022 12:41
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank You 2 The Utmost Of Greatly, Esteemed Peer. May Your New Year B Filled With Happiness & Blessings As Well.
January 7th, 2022 12:41
Blue Jacket
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy
this kind of focused poetry
a topic, so personal
and somewhat random
yet, \'a slice of life\'
unfurled, deep dived
and presented, poetically relatable
for all to delve within,
in such a succinct
yet poignantly detailed write..
(you really showcase
how much effort, you\'ve put in
to this inking thing, we do
as your practised skill, overflows
and demonstrates the ease
with which you roll your thoughts
in-to eloquently worded, art
still, the hardest skill
known to humanity)
thanks for sharing
and H appy N ew Y ear, dear poet
January 7th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy
this kind of focused poetry
a topic, so personal
and somewhat random
yet, \'a slice of life\'
unfurled, deep dived
and presented, poetically relatable
for all to delve within,
in such a succinct
yet poignantly detailed write..
(you really showcase
how much effort, you\'ve put in
to this inking thing, we do
as your practised skill, overflows
and demonstrates the ease
with which you roll your thoughts
in-to eloquently worded, art
still, the hardest skill
known to humanity)
thanks for sharing
and H appy N ew Y ear, dear poet
January 7th, 2022 05:34
Nefertiti
Buzz Bray said:
Sounds like you\'re a lucky man. Good use of language.
January 5th, 2022 11:42
Buzz Bray said:
Sounds like you\'re a lucky man. Good use of language.
January 5th, 2022 11:42
Radiation\'s Scepters
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks 4 Reading, My Friend.
December 27th, 2021 15:52
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks 4 Reading, My Friend.
December 27th, 2021 15:52
The Princess Theory
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thank U, My Friend. I, Appreciate Ur Keeping Up With Me As Well As Ur Feedback. B Kool.
December 20th, 2021 12:14
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thank U, My Friend. I, Appreciate Ur Keeping Up With Me As Well As Ur Feedback. B Kool.
December 20th, 2021 12:14
The Princess Theory
L. B. Mek said:
although it comes-off, a little bitter
in tone
there is genuine depth, to your
insightful commentary..
really well written
in your unique style
thanks for sharing
December 20th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
although it comes-off, a little bitter
in tone
there is genuine depth, to your
insightful commentary..
really well written
in your unique style
thanks for sharing
December 20th, 2021 05:21
Buffet
L. B. Mek said:
all you can cram on to a plate
where height and weight is your only limit, what\'s there to ponder
grab your forklift and begin hauling..
reminds me of broke college days
where \'all you can eat\' restaurants
were our oasis in life, lol
(thanks for sharing
a fun read)
December 16th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
all you can cram on to a plate
where height and weight is your only limit, what\'s there to ponder
grab your forklift and begin hauling..
reminds me of broke college days
where \'all you can eat\' restaurants
were our oasis in life, lol
(thanks for sharing
a fun read)
December 16th, 2021 04:39
After 12 A.M.
L. B. Mek said:
incoherent dreaming, worded
surrealist
must have been a fun write
letting your imagination, go so wild
thanks for sharing
December 13th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
incoherent dreaming, worded
surrealist
must have been a fun write
letting your imagination, go so wild
thanks for sharing
December 13th, 2021 04:41
Segmentation
jark said:
I fucking Love the typing style of this, literally segmenting the words and adding emphasis on words and letters. Beautiful!
December 10th, 2021 20:48
jark said:
I fucking Love the typing style of this, literally segmenting the words and adding emphasis on words and letters. Beautiful!
December 10th, 2021 20:48
Inevitability
L. B. Mek said:
\'this too shall pass\'
of fortitude, acceptance and
gratitude
for our small gifts in life,
worded in your quirky style
a lovely read,
\'thanK-S 4 Choo-
zing 2 S hare\'
December 9th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'this too shall pass\'
of fortitude, acceptance and
gratitude
for our small gifts in life,
worded in your quirky style
a lovely read,
\'thanK-S 4 Choo-
zing 2 S hare\'
December 9th, 2021 04:49
Alliance
L. B. Mek said:
as-ever, really clever
a fun read, thanks for sharing
November 25th, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
as-ever, really clever
a fun read, thanks for sharing
November 25th, 2021 04:42
Sunday
Sharkylang said:
What the hell is this? This is an insult to the English language. The opposite of poetry.
November 21st, 2021 20:12
Sharkylang said:
What the hell is this? This is an insult to the English language. The opposite of poetry.
November 21st, 2021 20:12
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