Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence



TIMEFAULT
L. B. Mek said:

really find your style, such a refreshing reading experience
especially, when you\'re introducing
a subject or character
you personally, connect with..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

March 21st, 2022 05:46

11:11
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

U R Very Right, Fellow Poet. Thanks, Again, 4 Both Reading & Kind Response.

March 11th, 2022 09:52

11:11
L. B. Mek said:

\'School, Is A Obscenity That Makes Anybody Cuss.\'
sadly, so true
but it shouldn\'t have to be, for many
it\'s where they find their lifelong friends
and chosen path of life...
thanks for sharing

March 11th, 2022 05:35

HOTSPOT
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Right, My Friend. lol Thanx 4 Reading, Again.

March 8th, 2022 11:10

HOTSPOT
L. B. Mek said:

you\'re just trying to get \'Hotspot\' stuck in peoples minds
like an irritating pop song lyric, lol

March 8th, 2022 05:29

Krissy
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

lol Thank U, Esteemed Peer.

March 7th, 2022 11:39

Krissy
L. B. Mek said:

such a weird way to word a dedication
(borderline chauvinistic) lol
yet still, strangely sincere and engrossing..
as always
such an intriguing read, dear poet
thanks for sharing

March 7th, 2022 06:58

Wars Of The Witchblades
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks Kindly 4 Enjoying. Have A Good 1, My Friend.

March 4th, 2022 13:56

Wars Of The Witchblades
Rocky Lagou said:

Amen! Feminine power! Yes!! ✨🙌

March 4th, 2022 13:53

D.A.G.G.E.R.
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks, My Friend.

March 2nd, 2022 13:33

D.A.G.G.E.R.
Rocky Lagou said:

Good one!

March 2nd, 2022 10:25

Beach Bum
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

lol Your Very Welcome, My Friend.

March 1st, 2022 09:21

Beach Bum
L. B. Mek said:

is this the follow up, to that \'thong song\'
lol
thanks for sharing

March 1st, 2022 05:06

B.L.O.O.D.
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks Kindly, Friend.

February 28th, 2022 17:14

B.L.O.O.D.
Rocky Lagou said:

You encapsulated family so freaking well 😅 You honestly said it all with this one poem! I commend you for your genius insights! 💖

February 28th, 2022 14:18

Skull Lounge
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks Kindly, My Friend.

February 23rd, 2022 17:35

Skull Lounge
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

I like the word replacements, gives it a different vibe than if it were just the words, almost less mature in a way, and I like the fantasy imagery!

February 23rd, 2022 14:46

Kryztal
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks Kindly, Good Reader.

February 22nd, 2022 12:41

Kryztal
Rocky Lagou said:

Oh adolescence! Dumb and in love. I love your syntax and the way you write certain words. Unique and fresh! 💖

February 22nd, 2022 11:45

Bad Chick
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Correct, g\'buddy. Thanks 4 Reading.

February 20th, 2022 13:52

Bad Chick
Bragee said:

Nothing makes a man more poetic than the appreciation of a beautiful woman

February 20th, 2022 12:23

Treasure Lynn
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks, Good Reader.

February 17th, 2022 14:37

Treasure Lynn
Rocky Lagou said:

Fun poem. That first love moment is for sure an ecstatic emotion. Bravo! 💖

February 17th, 2022 11:25

Misty
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks Kindly, My Friend.

February 15th, 2022 12:27

Misty
L. B. Mek said:

a proposal? hope you got the answer you wanted.. 🤞
different, as always
and as enjoyable, as ever
thanks for sharing, dear poet

February 15th, 2022 04:55

Afternoon Shopping
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks Deeply, Friend.

February 8th, 2022 15:44

Afternoon Shopping
Rocky Lagou said:

Ohh this was a snazzy one! Good job!

February 8th, 2022 14:26

Lunara-Shile, Goddess-Slayer
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:

Thanks Kindly, My Good Friend.

February 8th, 2022 13:31

Lunara-Shile, Goddess-Slayer
L. B. Mek said:

\'Ghastly Nasty Declares Ogrishly On Behalf Of Her Sexy.\'
you have such a way with phrasing
thanks for sharing, haunting creativity

February 8th, 2022 05:02

M\'lel
Buzz Bray said:

Oooooooh dark imagery! I agree with the previous reviewer. Powerful stuff!

February 4th, 2022 14:02

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