Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
M\'lel
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
M\'lel
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
Sharlinde
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! I love it! An ambivalent feeling amid the family life pictured. Tough the choices we make.
January 29th, 2022 16:58
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! I love it! An ambivalent feeling amid the family life pictured. Tough the choices we make.
January 29th, 2022 16:58
Werewolf
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Your Very Welcome, My Friend. I, Thought Pinque Would B More Fitting 4 A She-Wolf. Call It Comic Books. lol
January 27th, 2022 15:04
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Your Very Welcome, My Friend. I, Thought Pinque Would B More Fitting 4 A She-Wolf. Call It Comic Books. lol
January 27th, 2022 15:04
Werewolf
L. B. Mek said:
but I ask, why pink? lol
in my younger days I was always on the lycan side, of the vampire tropes
so I enjoyed this read, thanks for sharing
a fun read
January 27th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
but I ask, why pink? lol
in my younger days I was always on the lycan side, of the vampire tropes
so I enjoyed this read, thanks for sharing
a fun read
January 27th, 2022 04:26
Decision
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Right. lol Thank You, Again, 4 Paying Such Good Attention.
January 20th, 2022 15:51
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Right. lol Thank You, Again, 4 Paying Such Good Attention.
January 20th, 2022 15:51
Decision
L. B. Mek said:
this should be titled:
\'how covid lock downs
can f\'ck
with peoples sense of reality!\'
lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing
(yes aliens are everywhere
they just happen to look and sound very human
but the way they, \'don\'t\' - think...
yeah that\'s hella ALIEN, to me)
January 20th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
this should be titled:
\'how covid lock downs
can f\'ck
with peoples sense of reality!\'
lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing
(yes aliens are everywhere
they just happen to look and sound very human
but the way they, \'don\'t\' - think...
yeah that\'s hella ALIEN, to me)
January 20th, 2022 05:04
Friday
Buzz Bray said:
..the power to get through next week. Very well said!
January 14th, 2022 19:54
Buzz Bray said:
..the power to get through next week. Very well said!
January 14th, 2022 19:54
Next Component
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks. Well Put, Mr. Mek. The Scenario, U, Expressed, Is Utterly The Koolest. lol
January 14th, 2022 12:40
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks. Well Put, Mr. Mek. The Scenario, U, Expressed, Is Utterly The Koolest. lol
January 14th, 2022 12:40
Next Component
L. B. Mek said:
if Ironman and Batman
could have, bonded
questing, for a soulful
relationship
with their life\'s: Superwoman...
lol
(a fun read, thanks for sharing)
January 13th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
if Ironman and Batman
could have, bonded
questing, for a soulful
relationship
with their life\'s: Superwoman...
lol
(a fun read, thanks for sharing)
January 13th, 2022 04:35
Moogamoomba & Stakisda
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liebchens & Gats\' eh? lol
a very, edgy
take on \'love\'..
thanks for sharing
an intriguing read, I bow
to your vocabulary\'s, prowess
January 11th, 2022 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Liebchens & Gats\' eh? lol
a very, edgy
take on \'love\'..
thanks for sharing
an intriguing read, I bow
to your vocabulary\'s, prowess
January 11th, 2022 06:11
Mistress:Diaspora
Buzz Bray said:
Love is the risk of everything. I like the use of the word \'diaspora.\' Bringing together disparate souls, form only God knows where or why. Sensual and powerful words. Nicely done!
January 10th, 2022 21:19
Buzz Bray said:
Love is the risk of everything. I like the use of the word \'diaspora.\' Bringing together disparate souls, form only God knows where or why. Sensual and powerful words. Nicely done!
January 10th, 2022 21:19
Mistress:Diaspora
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank U 4 Such A Sincere Compliment, My Friend. Best Of Luck 2 U.
January 10th, 2022 16:46
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank U 4 Such A Sincere Compliment, My Friend. Best Of Luck 2 U.
January 10th, 2022 16:46
Mistress:Diaspora
L. B. Mek said:
\'falling in love
while being, displaced\',
often, love is far removed
form the reality
we know and survive
\'Diaspora\': indeed...!
(just a gem of a concept
I feel you did really well
to bridge, such differing
metaphors and themes;
words worth contemplating
long, after we\'ve finished reading)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 10th, 2022 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'falling in love
while being, displaced\',
often, love is far removed
form the reality
we know and survive
\'Diaspora\': indeed...!
(just a gem of a concept
I feel you did really well
to bridge, such differing
metaphors and themes;
words worth contemplating
long, after we\'ve finished reading)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 10th, 2022 07:00
Blue Jacket
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank You 2 The Utmost Of Greatly, Esteemed Peer. May Your New Year B Filled With Happiness & Blessings As Well.
January 7th, 2022 12:41
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I Thank You 2 The Utmost Of Greatly, Esteemed Peer. May Your New Year B Filled With Happiness & Blessings As Well.
January 7th, 2022 12:41
Blue Jacket
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy
this kind of focused poetry
a topic, so personal
and somewhat random
yet, \'a slice of life\'
unfurled, deep dived
and presented, poetically relatable
for all to delve within,
in such a succinct
yet poignantly detailed write..
(you really showcase
how much effort, you\'ve put in
to this inking thing, we do
as your practised skill, overflows
and demonstrates the ease
with which you roll your thoughts
in-to eloquently worded, art
still, the hardest skill
known to humanity)
thanks for sharing
and H appy N ew Y ear, dear poet
January 7th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy
this kind of focused poetry
a topic, so personal
and somewhat random
yet, \'a slice of life\'
unfurled, deep dived
and presented, poetically relatable
for all to delve within,
in such a succinct
yet poignantly detailed write..
(you really showcase
how much effort, you\'ve put in
to this inking thing, we do
as your practised skill, overflows
and demonstrates the ease
with which you roll your thoughts
in-to eloquently worded, art
still, the hardest skill
known to humanity)
thanks for sharing
and H appy N ew Y ear, dear poet
January 7th, 2022 05:34
Nefertiti
Buzz Bray said:
Sounds like you\'re a lucky man. Good use of language.
January 5th, 2022 11:42
Buzz Bray said:
Sounds like you\'re a lucky man. Good use of language.
January 5th, 2022 11:42
Radiation\'s Scepters
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks 4 Reading, My Friend.
December 27th, 2021 15:52
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks 4 Reading, My Friend.
December 27th, 2021 15:52
The Princess Theory
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thank U, My Friend. I, Appreciate Ur Keeping Up With Me As Well As Ur Feedback. B Kool.
December 20th, 2021 12:14
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thank U, My Friend. I, Appreciate Ur Keeping Up With Me As Well As Ur Feedback. B Kool.
December 20th, 2021 12:14
The Princess Theory
L. B. Mek said:
although it comes-off, a little bitter
in tone
there is genuine depth, to your
insightful commentary..
really well written
in your unique style
thanks for sharing
December 20th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
although it comes-off, a little bitter
in tone
there is genuine depth, to your
insightful commentary..
really well written
in your unique style
thanks for sharing
December 20th, 2021 05:21
Buffet
L. B. Mek said:
all you can cram on to a plate
where height and weight is your only limit, what\'s there to ponder
grab your forklift and begin hauling..
reminds me of broke college days
where \'all you can eat\' restaurants
were our oasis in life, lol
(thanks for sharing
a fun read)
December 16th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
all you can cram on to a plate
where height and weight is your only limit, what\'s there to ponder
grab your forklift and begin hauling..
reminds me of broke college days
where \'all you can eat\' restaurants
were our oasis in life, lol
(thanks for sharing
a fun read)
December 16th, 2021 04:39
After 12 A.M.
L. B. Mek said:
incoherent dreaming, worded
surrealist
must have been a fun write
letting your imagination, go so wild
thanks for sharing
December 13th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
incoherent dreaming, worded
surrealist
must have been a fun write
letting your imagination, go so wild
thanks for sharing
December 13th, 2021 04:41
Segmentation
jark said:
I fucking Love the typing style of this, literally segmenting the words and adding emphasis on words and letters. Beautiful!
December 10th, 2021 20:48
jark said:
I fucking Love the typing style of this, literally segmenting the words and adding emphasis on words and letters. Beautiful!
December 10th, 2021 20:48
Inevitability
L. B. Mek said:
\'this too shall pass\'
of fortitude, acceptance and
gratitude
for our small gifts in life,
worded in your quirky style
a lovely read,
\'thanK-S 4 Choo-
zing 2 S hare\'
December 9th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'this too shall pass\'
of fortitude, acceptance and
gratitude
for our small gifts in life,
worded in your quirky style
a lovely read,
\'thanK-S 4 Choo-
zing 2 S hare\'
December 9th, 2021 04:49
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