Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
G.L.O.S.H.A.(Glosha)
L. B. Mek said:
(I like the imagery in
\'Lover,
Orbiting Around Me\'
seems a good fit, \'orbiting;
indeed
close enough proximity, yet
floating at a fingertip\'s, reach
love\'s
nature of illusive, tease)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 27th, 2023 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
(I like the imagery in
\'Lover,
Orbiting Around Me\'
seems a good fit, \'orbiting;
indeed
close enough proximity, yet
floating at a fingertip\'s, reach
love\'s
nature of illusive, tease)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 27th, 2023 04:50
T.A.Y.A.(Taya)
L. B. Mek said:
\'what flavour ice cream, as dream\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
\'totalitarian, in our harvested ideal\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
March 24th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'what flavour ice cream, as dream\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
\'totalitarian, in our harvested ideal\'
\'\'!Yes!\'\'
March 24th, 2023 06:29
Cola
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'A sip of poetic brevity, cherishing life\'s surreal\'
March 24th, 2023 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
\'A sip of poetic brevity, cherishing life\'s surreal\'
March 24th, 2023 06:26
Intent
L. B. Mek said:
(four years a worthy reward for intentions
anchored upon a heart\'s choice, intent)
such a fun read and a uniquely intimate dedication
thanks for sharing, my friend
March 17th, 2023 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
(four years a worthy reward for intentions
anchored upon a heart\'s choice, intent)
such a fun read and a uniquely intimate dedication
thanks for sharing, my friend
March 17th, 2023 04:48
Hidden Meaning
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
\'Stare @ Me & I\'ll Stare @ U.
True Treasures Under A Ol\' Rug.
Hug, Whomever, 4 The Last Time.
Dime Rolling Down His Outstretched & Inclined Arm.\'
March 13th, 2023 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
love this!
\'Stare @ Me & I\'ll Stare @ U.
True Treasures Under A Ol\' Rug.
Hug, Whomever, 4 The Last Time.
Dime Rolling Down His Outstretched & Inclined Arm.\'
March 13th, 2023 04:45
V.A.Z.R.A.E.J.J.(Vaz-Raejj):
David Wakeling said:
This makes no sense to me.You need to read some real poets and try again
March 11th, 2023 01:45
David Wakeling said:
This makes no sense to me.You need to read some real poets and try again
March 11th, 2023 01:45
S.H.E.C.H.A.K.R.A.(She-Chakra)
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I couldn\'t help myself
thanks for inspiring me, dear Poet)
\'Horrid. Callously. Savage.
Harmonies.
Echo. Abominable.
Kindred Killer.
Radiating. Animosity.\'
Till, fate sneezes
Nature roars and all is silence
Wastelands
Rebirth of life, like lava rich
Earth
Critters and birds, sandwiching
Existence
Chakra, in every gust of Gaia\'s
Breath
She our Barbarian Queen
As anchor to hope\'s, mercy
That harmony
Between, coin flip winds
of callous, destiny...
March 6th, 2023 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
(forgive me, I couldn\'t help myself
thanks for inspiring me, dear Poet)
\'Horrid. Callously. Savage.
Harmonies.
Echo. Abominable.
Kindred Killer.
Radiating. Animosity.\'
Till, fate sneezes
Nature roars and all is silence
Wastelands
Rebirth of life, like lava rich
Earth
Critters and birds, sandwiching
Existence
Chakra, in every gust of Gaia\'s
Breath
She our Barbarian Queen
As anchor to hope\'s, mercy
That harmony
Between, coin flip winds
of callous, destiny...
March 6th, 2023 06:04
Dewdrop
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep, dear poet
\'dew drops\', that highlight
true worth
in wise eyes, that choose
to see, beyond...
March 3rd, 2023 06:45
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep, dear poet
\'dew drops\', that highlight
true worth
in wise eyes, that choose
to see, beyond...
March 3rd, 2023 06:45
Burial
L. B. Mek said:
your writing uniquifies poetic
artistry
such a refreshingly quirky style
words that ignite ink
without pretentious, refrain
or overworked, rhyme
delivering a slice of life
from the lens of a wise, awareness
unfiltered and bold..
thank you! for being you
may you never change
dear cherished Poet
February 24th, 2023 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
your writing uniquifies poetic
artistry
such a refreshingly quirky style
words that ignite ink
without pretentious, refrain
or overworked, rhyme
delivering a slice of life
from the lens of a wise, awareness
unfiltered and bold..
thank you! for being you
may you never change
dear cherished Poet
February 24th, 2023 06:12
M.I.S.T.R.E.S.S.(Mistress)
mvvenkataraman said:
In the name Mistress itself is added the word \"Stress\" rightly and magically!
February 19th, 2023 06:02
mvvenkataraman said:
In the name Mistress itself is added the word \"Stress\" rightly and magically!
February 19th, 2023 06:02
\"Treasure\"
Addy said:
It a unique style of writing i havent seen. nice poem!
February 18th, 2023 07:47
Addy said:
It a unique style of writing i havent seen. nice poem!
February 18th, 2023 07:47
Mane
L. B. Mek said:
(reminds me of talib kweli\'s lyrics
to \'broken glass\'
only in fantasy, they get to be all powerful Amazonian
heroines, in reality
seldom is that rabbit hole, storyline
empowered with happy endings...)
sorry for my bleak interpretation my friend
February 17th, 2023 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
(reminds me of talib kweli\'s lyrics
to \'broken glass\'
only in fantasy, they get to be all powerful Amazonian
heroines, in reality
seldom is that rabbit hole, storyline
empowered with happy endings...)
sorry for my bleak interpretation my friend
February 17th, 2023 05:21
Captured
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, this be the ugly reality
we like to forget..
\'while the lucky wine n dine
on date nights
somewhere else, thousands
survive
with only horror\'s tears
as their salty, sips of life\'
(but kind friend
never forget empathy, in your depictions
art is art, and stark depictions
a necessity to awaken
delusional, herded minds
but
when our topic is so close
to reality
a tender touch, goes a long way
or so I think)
but what do i know
February 13th, 2023 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, this be the ugly reality
we like to forget..
\'while the lucky wine n dine
on date nights
somewhere else, thousands
survive
with only horror\'s tears
as their salty, sips of life\'
(but kind friend
never forget empathy, in your depictions
art is art, and stark depictions
a necessity to awaken
delusional, herded minds
but
when our topic is so close
to reality
a tender touch, goes a long way
or so I think)
but what do i know
February 13th, 2023 05:10
Starlight
L. B. Mek said:
a great read my friend
this be how I like my love poetry
stark lines of realisable, reality
(ring in our valentine dreams
sip a little of moonlight\'s tease
that time of year, Spring
awakening our romantic, feats)
February 13th, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
a great read my friend
this be how I like my love poetry
stark lines of realisable, reality
(ring in our valentine dreams
sip a little of moonlight\'s tease
that time of year, Spring
awakening our romantic, feats)
February 13th, 2023 04:00
Pretty Heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spark Me, Again, Pretty Heart As We Stargaze Comfortably On This Deck.
Check Her: She\'s Dazzling. Sparkling Beauty, All Mine. Pretty Heart.\'
(there\'s such a synchronicity
between these words
and my latest feeble effort
lol)
you, serenading Spring
and I, an alternate reality
fantasy
February 10th, 2023 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spark Me, Again, Pretty Heart As We Stargaze Comfortably On This Deck.
Check Her: She\'s Dazzling. Sparkling Beauty, All Mine. Pretty Heart.\'
(there\'s such a synchronicity
between these words
and my latest feeble effort
lol)
you, serenading Spring
and I, an alternate reality
fantasy
February 10th, 2023 06:15
Kristy
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
there\'s a gentle \'Kristy\' breeze
in the air, refreshing scents
of blooming\'s promise, waiting
to blossom and please\'
(too cheesy? sorry i tried my friend
lol
btw care to elaborate on kristy?)
February 10th, 2023 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
there\'s a gentle \'Kristy\' breeze
in the air, refreshing scents
of blooming\'s promise, waiting
to blossom and please\'
(too cheesy? sorry i tried my friend
lol
btw care to elaborate on kristy?)
February 10th, 2023 06:11
T.E.R.A.(Tera)
Ok Waleed said:
Terrorizing seems to conflict the entire other attributes
February 10th, 2023 01:11
Ok Waleed said:
Terrorizing seems to conflict the entire other attributes
February 10th, 2023 01:11
M.I.E.G.A.(Miega)
L. B. Mek said:
\'attraction and gargoyle
a new pairing for me\'
actually, my friend
I have a bone to pick with whoever first designed
those gargoyle, templates
it annoys me, most of them
have wolf or dog facial features
especially those medieval ones
why?
I know there are a vastly diverse
range of gargoyles
but an unusual amount
have dog like facial features...
a warping theme of guardians?
sorry just some random thoughts
lol
February 6th, 2023 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'attraction and gargoyle
a new pairing for me\'
actually, my friend
I have a bone to pick with whoever first designed
those gargoyle, templates
it annoys me, most of them
have wolf or dog facial features
especially those medieval ones
why?
I know there are a vastly diverse
range of gargoyles
but an unusual amount
have dog like facial features...
a warping theme of guardians?
sorry just some random thoughts
lol
February 6th, 2023 05:36
T.H.A.I.(Thai)
L. B. Mek said:
are you starting a one man war
with an entire country, dear poet?
you got your spy balloons ready
lol
but on a more significant, note
its crazy how toxicity
is so often a magnetic element
of those irresistible
vices and self-harming traits
we are drawn to, time n again
incomprehensibly...
February 6th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
are you starting a one man war
with an entire country, dear poet?
you got your spy balloons ready
lol
but on a more significant, note
its crazy how toxicity
is so often a magnetic element
of those irresistible
vices and self-harming traits
we are drawn to, time n again
incomprehensibly...
February 6th, 2023 05:01
Z.A.N.G.A.(Zanga)
L. B. Mek said:
(great flow, like the broken rhythm
of \'sent\' \'stress\' and \'annihilates\'
such a trademark of your unique
style)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(walks in, takes one look
picks me out
and thus, my life begins;
what a dream
to anchor
my hopes within)
February 3rd, 2023 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
(great flow, like the broken rhythm
of \'sent\' \'stress\' and \'annihilates\'
such a trademark of your unique
style)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(walks in, takes one look
picks me out
and thus, my life begins;
what a dream
to anchor
my hopes within)
February 3rd, 2023 05:52
Ethereal
Ok Waleed said:
Why do you type like this what structure is this called
January 31st, 2023 01:20
Ok Waleed said:
Why do you type like this what structure is this called
January 31st, 2023 01:20
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