Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
J.S.A.U.J.J.A. (Jsaujja)
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'m lost my friend
I ended up at the \'or something\'
lol
definitely thought you were discussing runway prowess
for a bit
😎
December 9th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'m lost my friend
I ended up at the \'or something\'
lol
definitely thought you were discussing runway prowess
for a bit
😎
December 9th, 2022 05:33
Dr.:P.R.I.Z.M.
L. B. Mek said:
(prismatic characters
equipped with superhuman possibilities
existing within 2d limitations
yet, wondrous to behold
within realms of our limitless imaginations)
another fun read, thanks for sharing
December 5th, 2022 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
(prismatic characters
equipped with superhuman possibilities
existing within 2d limitations
yet, wondrous to behold
within realms of our limitless imaginations)
another fun read, thanks for sharing
December 5th, 2022 05:23
J.A.S.M.I.N.E. (Jasmine)
L. B. Mek said:
huh?
I got lost halfway
so its
\'Jazzy\' - groove
\'Allowing.\' - for
\'Sexual.\' - frivolity, as
\'Mandatory.\' - necessity
\'Inviting.\' - ???
lol
just having fun, my friend
hope you have a weekend, filled
with Georgina Campbell dreams
😎
December 2nd, 2022 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
huh?
I got lost halfway
so its
\'Jazzy\' - groove
\'Allowing.\' - for
\'Sexual.\' - frivolity, as
\'Mandatory.\' - necessity
\'Inviting.\' - ???
lol
just having fun, my friend
hope you have a weekend, filled
with Georgina Campbell dreams
😎
December 2nd, 2022 05:41
J.A.S.P.E.R. (Jasper)
L. B. Mek said:
well \'sensuously\' is defo going into my limited vocabulary...
lol
thank you!
December 2nd, 2022 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
well \'sensuously\' is defo going into my limited vocabulary...
lol
thank you!
December 2nd, 2022 05:14
C.O.L.A. (Cola)
L. B. Mek said:
amen! dear Poet
(a can of salvation
sparkles of bubbles on tongues, as sensation
sweet serenade taste, to swallow our lament
manufactured in capitalist bulk
devoured n treasured in serene
moments of oneness, with self
to thee, dear Cola can
dear monument of youthful zeal
we toast and cheer
a delectable sip, at a time!)
November 28th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
amen! dear Poet
(a can of salvation
sparkles of bubbles on tongues, as sensation
sweet serenade taste, to swallow our lament
manufactured in capitalist bulk
devoured n treasured in serene
moments of oneness, with self
to thee, dear Cola can
dear monument of youthful zeal
we toast and cheer
a delectable sip, at a time!)
November 28th, 2022 05:58
T.E.E.G.R.A. (Teegra)
L. B. Mek said:
I thought this was fire and ice, related lore
then hip hop took me on a wild curve
so had to surrender and accept
this one\'s taken a Concorde over me head
still, was fun trying to figure it out
lol
November 25th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
I thought this was fire and ice, related lore
then hip hop took me on a wild curve
so had to surrender and accept
this one\'s taken a Concorde over me head
still, was fun trying to figure it out
lol
November 25th, 2022 04:58
Love Potion No. 3
L. B. Mek said:
funny, I\'ve never found credibility
in that fantasy lore of a love potion
i think
it\'s because i\'m too literal, at times
and so
I can\'t get over the thought of how complex
love becomes
then i ponder what diverse ingredients
could recreate such an effect
and i\'m like
\'nah, that doesn\'t register\'
lol
(a fun read, thank you friend)
November 14th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
funny, I\'ve never found credibility
in that fantasy lore of a love potion
i think
it\'s because i\'m too literal, at times
and so
I can\'t get over the thought of how complex
love becomes
then i ponder what diverse ingredients
could recreate such an effect
and i\'m like
\'nah, that doesn\'t register\'
lol
(a fun read, thank you friend)
November 14th, 2022 04:39
Attempts & Adjustments
L. B. Mek said:
\' I Find It Best 2 Feel Lucky I\'m Living & Let That B That.\'
\'Format My Soul 2 Offer Aid Over Hurt.\'
\'Crumb Found Far Better Than Food Stolen.\'
Amen!
(I read and learn dear Poet)
November 11th, 2022 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
\' I Find It Best 2 Feel Lucky I\'m Living & Let That B That.\'
\'Format My Soul 2 Offer Aid Over Hurt.\'
\'Crumb Found Far Better Than Food Stolen.\'
Amen!
(I read and learn dear Poet)
November 11th, 2022 06:33
Special
L. B. Mek said:
\'Feeling It From Physical 2 Soulful.\'
Amen!
such empowering sentiments, imbued in your words, dear poet
(i feel, we\'re all special
in our own way, yet
we only really get to recognise
this fact
when others acknowledge it for us..
to think, how much of our plaguing
issues
would be solved if we could utter
similar words to that mirror reflection
and be able to trust ourselves, enough
to empower our own sense of worth...
November 7th, 2022 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'Feeling It From Physical 2 Soulful.\'
Amen!
such empowering sentiments, imbued in your words, dear poet
(i feel, we\'re all special
in our own way, yet
we only really get to recognise
this fact
when others acknowledge it for us..
to think, how much of our plaguing
issues
would be solved if we could utter
similar words to that mirror reflection
and be able to trust ourselves, enough
to empower our own sense of worth...
November 7th, 2022 04:47
Jammja
L. B. Mek said:
theme and topic went over my head, but this line jumped out to me:
\'Swan Of Whatever Pond.\'
what a great wording
\'she, that pool of spotlight
in every room her steps highlight
be it in pitch black or a winking moonlight\'
(a sample of how long it would take me to word
what you manged in four words)
lol
November 4th, 2022 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
theme and topic went over my head, but this line jumped out to me:
\'Swan Of Whatever Pond.\'
what a great wording
\'she, that pool of spotlight
in every room her steps highlight
be it in pitch black or a winking moonlight\'
(a sample of how long it would take me to word
what you manged in four words)
lol
November 4th, 2022 05:13
HALLOWEEN EVIL
orchidee said:
Oohh, not today, thank you! lol. Rather, All Saints Day the following day - called Hallowmas. Nothing to do with creepy masses of the evil variety though!
I was just brewing some eye of toad, and leg of frog. summat like that. It don\'t taste too good though. Want to join me for dinner?!
October 29th, 2022 02:02
orchidee said:
Oohh, not today, thank you! lol. Rather, All Saints Day the following day - called Hallowmas. Nothing to do with creepy masses of the evil variety though!
I was just brewing some eye of toad, and leg of frog. summat like that. It don\'t taste too good though. Want to join me for dinner?!
October 29th, 2022 02:02
V.A.M.P.
L. B. Mek said:
you want some true horror to contemplate over this Halloween weekend, my friend
look-up the origins of the Dracula myth
you\'ll be shocked at the corpse laden Princess roots, you\'ll dig up
lol
have fun
October 28th, 2022 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
you want some true horror to contemplate over this Halloween weekend, my friend
look-up the origins of the Dracula myth
you\'ll be shocked at the corpse laden Princess roots, you\'ll dig up
lol
have fun
October 28th, 2022 06:05
T.I.T.A.N.
L. B. Mek said:
(how many of history\'s heroines
and amazonian ladies
have been purposefully ignored, by insidious design
from humanity\'s \'collective\' annals
and wall scratchings
that we\'re left with mere sci-fi
and comic book caricatures
for our daughters to aspire towards...)
I bet there was a lady that could kick Achiles\'
weak ankle(d) ass!
lol
indeed, wise Poet
may we ever celebrate
all our nameless, Barbarian queens!
October 24th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
(how many of history\'s heroines
and amazonian ladies
have been purposefully ignored, by insidious design
from humanity\'s \'collective\' annals
and wall scratchings
that we\'re left with mere sci-fi
and comic book caricatures
for our daughters to aspire towards...)
I bet there was a lady that could kick Achiles\'
weak ankle(d) ass!
lol
indeed, wise Poet
may we ever celebrate
all our nameless, Barbarian queens!
October 24th, 2022 05:15
F.R.E.E.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'Framing
Righteous
Elation
Eloquently\'
(loving the positive vibes, dear Poet)
October 24th, 2022 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'Framing
Righteous
Elation
Eloquently\'
(loving the positive vibes, dear Poet)
October 24th, 2022 04:01
N.U.T.
L. B. Mek said:
\'spiritual\'
lol
put a smile on my face so early in the day
thank you, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'spiritual\'
lol
put a smile on my face so early in the day
thank you, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:38
Hey, Helicopter
shaa said:
I enjoy your writing although I get lost with the numbers so I tend to skip them, cant help but feel I\'m missing important messages when I do
September 12th, 2022 03:05
shaa said:
I enjoy your writing although I get lost with the numbers so I tend to skip them, cant help but feel I\'m missing important messages when I do
September 12th, 2022 03:05
Unheard Whim
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sensitive write, J.W.
\'Quiet Tale of Incarceration\"
You have the title of a fine epic poem there or a novel.
September 10th, 2022 13:56
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sensitive write, J.W.
\'Quiet Tale of Incarceration\"
You have the title of a fine epic poem there or a novel.
September 10th, 2022 13:56
Melony
LittleTalks said:
I could not help but smile while reading this with a rap beat in my head...well done
August 27th, 2022 15:40
LittleTalks said:
I could not help but smile while reading this with a rap beat in my head...well done
August 27th, 2022 15:40
Wind & Rain
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(and she looks-up, searching
but in-place of stars and wonder\'s
there\'s just satellite debris
glaring back, in that dull
of a restless night
as-if stating loud, in her mind
even up here, its all just sht
others throw out
while others, still
can barely dream and aspire
to reach)
August 18th, 2022 01:15
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(and she looks-up, searching
but in-place of stars and wonder\'s
there\'s just satellite debris
glaring back, in that dull
of a restless night
as-if stating loud, in her mind
even up here, its all just sht
others throw out
while others, still
can barely dream and aspire
to reach)
August 18th, 2022 01:15
T.A.R.G.E.T.
L. B. Mek said:
Tools
Acquired
Readymade
\'to\'
Germinate
Evermore
Tragedy
.
.
.
(have a great weekend, dear Poet
stay cool, stuck by the fridge
my motto for weekend summers)
lol
August 12th, 2022 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
Tools
Acquired
Readymade
\'to\'
Germinate
Evermore
Tragedy
.
.
.
(have a great weekend, dear Poet
stay cool, stuck by the fridge
my motto for weekend summers)
lol
August 12th, 2022 03:30
M.A.Z.E./B.O.X.
L. B. Mek said:
this is so true, dear Poet
its like daydreaming in-to reality
our own bleak labyrinth, only
we\'re wide awake
and despairingly, aware!
August 11th, 2022 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
this is so true, dear Poet
its like daydreaming in-to reality
our own bleak labyrinth, only
we\'re wide awake
and despairingly, aware!
August 11th, 2022 02:47
Revenges Of Planet X
L. B. Mek said:
reading these poignant words, dear Poet
made me want to recommend to you
(if you haven\'t read it yet)
a short book by Douglas Adam
titled
\'Dirk Gently\'s Holistic Detective Agency\'
the first book in the series..
in that story line, you\'ll find
a theme that very closely
matches your poetry\'s, wisdom:
\'\"Let This B The Lesson Of Our Ultimate Power!\" Speaks A Confident Planet X Leaving The Losers B...\'
\'\"Rush 2 Rebuilding: U.N.I.T.Y. Is The Ultimate Prophecy!\" Planet X States Calmly While Escaping 2wards The Freedoms Of Saturn & The Moon\'
(may be worthwhile, for us to contemplate
the notion that those heralded, Aliens
may just be as callous
as we pathetic, humans)
August 9th, 2022 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
reading these poignant words, dear Poet
made me want to recommend to you
(if you haven\'t read it yet)
a short book by Douglas Adam
titled
\'Dirk Gently\'s Holistic Detective Agency\'
the first book in the series..
in that story line, you\'ll find
a theme that very closely
matches your poetry\'s, wisdom:
\'\"Let This B The Lesson Of Our Ultimate Power!\" Speaks A Confident Planet X Leaving The Losers B...\'
\'\"Rush 2 Rebuilding: U.N.I.T.Y. Is The Ultimate Prophecy!\" Planet X States Calmly While Escaping 2wards The Freedoms Of Saturn & The Moon\'
(may be worthwhile, for us to contemplate
the notion that those heralded, Aliens
may just be as callous
as we pathetic, humans)
August 9th, 2022 03:18
GAMMATHANON
L. B. Mek said:
\'Survive Only 2 Curse Being Able 2 Do So.\'..
what a whirlwind of a read, you
at your imaginative and profound best
dear Poet!
(you know
story goes, satan
that father of devil and demon
lore
was supposedly an arch angel
once
who - so, despised humanity
it gave up, such a high position
to show, its God
how worthless we were of his
kindness and patience..
\'or so the story goes\'
knowing this, makes me laugh
at the absurdity of humanity
our chosen, evolution
equates, to fearing/celebrating
all-thing evil, satanic and devilish
while refuting
the existence of goodness, godliness
and moral virtues...
surely
when we tried to kill, those deities
we should start
with the Hades\' of myth
and theological, lore..
I mean
its like celebrating Hitler
and denouncing Gandhi..
a little, flipped
our logic: be...)
lol
August 9th, 2022 01:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Survive Only 2 Curse Being Able 2 Do So.\'..
what a whirlwind of a read, you
at your imaginative and profound best
dear Poet!
(you know
story goes, satan
that father of devil and demon
lore
was supposedly an arch angel
once
who - so, despised humanity
it gave up, such a high position
to show, its God
how worthless we were of his
kindness and patience..
\'or so the story goes\'
knowing this, makes me laugh
at the absurdity of humanity
our chosen, evolution
equates, to fearing/celebrating
all-thing evil, satanic and devilish
while refuting
the existence of goodness, godliness
and moral virtues...
surely
when we tried to kill, those deities
we should start
with the Hades\' of myth
and theological, lore..
I mean
its like celebrating Hitler
and denouncing Gandhi..
a little, flipped
our logic: be...)
lol
August 9th, 2022 01:34
S.H.A.G.R.O.N. (Sha-Gron)
L. B. Mek said:
ah, ok
a character\'s, characteristics
got lost there for a bit
lol
thanks for the puzzle, dear poet
got my lazy brain in-gear for a bit
August 5th, 2022 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
ah, ok
a character\'s, characteristics
got lost there for a bit
lol
thanks for the puzzle, dear poet
got my lazy brain in-gear for a bit
August 5th, 2022 02:27
J.E.E.B.R.A.
L. B. Mek said:
angel-\'lique\'
lol
yeah, all angels on earth
have a \'lique\', quality
about them..
like all our demon-\'esque\'
friend and families..
those amazing-lic strangers
far too much
in but a glimpse
to feel, entirely
fool-\'proof\', pivot-\'less\'
of fate..
(lol
forgive me, dear poet
had a little fun with this one)
August 2nd, 2022 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
angel-\'lique\'
lol
yeah, all angels on earth
have a \'lique\', quality
about them..
like all our demon-\'esque\'
friend and families..
those amazing-lic strangers
far too much
in but a glimpse
to feel, entirely
fool-\'proof\', pivot-\'less\'
of fate..
(lol
forgive me, dear poet
had a little fun with this one)
August 2nd, 2022 04:47
Roses
L. B. Mek said:
\'give them their flowers
while they yet, still breathe
and
can smell, that fragrance
of a beating, sweet Nature\'..
(well erm, friend
I rate that you making sure no one gets left out
I just hope this list, doesn\'t leak..)
lol
a fun read, thank you!
August 1st, 2022 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'give them their flowers
while they yet, still breathe
and
can smell, that fragrance
of a beating, sweet Nature\'..
(well erm, friend
I rate that you making sure no one gets left out
I just hope this list, doesn\'t leak..)
lol
a fun read, thank you!
August 1st, 2022 03:07
Roses
L. B. Mek said:
\'give them their flowers
while they yet, still breathe
and
can smell, that fragrance
of a beating, sweet Nature\'..
(well erm, friend
I rate that you making sure no one gets left out
I just hope this list, doesn\'t leak..)
lol
a fun read, thank you!
August 1st, 2022 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'give them their flowers
while they yet, still breathe
and
can smell, that fragrance
of a beating, sweet Nature\'..
(well erm, friend
I rate that you making sure no one gets left out
I just hope this list, doesn\'t leak..)
lol
a fun read, thank you!
August 1st, 2022 03:07
The Ultimate System
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(could literally spend a few fun filled minutes
guessing at all the references;
and that\'s just at the surface level..)
\'This Whole Affair Has Made It 2 Far 2 Serious.
Furious Combat From A Place That Almost Totally Defied The System\'s Programming Did This.\'
July 28th, 2022 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(could literally spend a few fun filled minutes
guessing at all the references;
and that\'s just at the surface level..)
\'This Whole Affair Has Made It 2 Far 2 Serious.
Furious Combat From A Place That Almost Totally Defied The System\'s Programming Did This.\'
July 28th, 2022 03:38
Rachel
L. B. Mek said:
\'Groove, I Now Do, N My Fly Nu Whip\'
lmao!
across the road, but yeah
best greet her in your whip
let me pause to insta my image nation
this is what i foresee:
(squatting by your car
in the summer heat
paying a kid, for getting you
a change of shirt and water
every 5 mins
and eventually, when kid
is rich enough to outsource the work
to his bro\'s, she
oblivious
walks out...
you
change shirt, gulp down
your fears
jump into that leather seat
which immediately begins
frying your $ss, so bad
you no longer fear, hellfire..
and squirming from left
to right, sautéed cheek
you, drive around the block
just to pull up by her side
and call out, \'Ayo Rachel\'
despairing, loud
only
she, used to catcalls
all day, long
from wannabees, in their rentals
has her ears blockaded
by trojan beats
loader, than any noise
trying to ensnare her
so with her, head down
completely ignores
your red raw, panting face
screaming your heart out
till
you pass out, crash
and
have the kids, roll you back home
at double the rate...)
dude, \'You\'ve got Game!\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
July 25th, 2022 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'Groove, I Now Do, N My Fly Nu Whip\'
lmao!
across the road, but yeah
best greet her in your whip
let me pause to insta my image nation
this is what i foresee:
(squatting by your car
in the summer heat
paying a kid, for getting you
a change of shirt and water
every 5 mins
and eventually, when kid
is rich enough to outsource the work
to his bro\'s, she
oblivious
walks out...
you
change shirt, gulp down
your fears
jump into that leather seat
which immediately begins
frying your $ss, so bad
you no longer fear, hellfire..
and squirming from left
to right, sautéed cheek
you, drive around the block
just to pull up by her side
and call out, \'Ayo Rachel\'
despairing, loud
only
she, used to catcalls
all day, long
from wannabees, in their rentals
has her ears blockaded
by trojan beats
loader, than any noise
trying to ensnare her
so with her, head down
completely ignores
your red raw, panting face
screaming your heart out
till
you pass out, crash
and
have the kids, roll you back home
at double the rate...)
dude, \'You\'ve got Game!\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
July 25th, 2022 04:06
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