Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
We Need A Hero
L. B. Mek said:
we sure do
or, just something
to give us hope
of a coming, of one..
\'Enhanced By The Cybernetics
That Make Her So Sleek.\'
like your creativity\'s poetics, dear poet
another fun read
June 2nd, 2022 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
we sure do
or, just something
to give us hope
of a coming, of one..
\'Enhanced By The Cybernetics
That Make Her So Sleek.\'
like your creativity\'s poetics, dear poet
another fun read
June 2nd, 2022 04:15
P.O.R.T.A.L.
L. B. Mek said:
huh, a zombie apocalypse b-movie
...
the walking dead?
(that\'s how desperate Hollywood is)
ideas for b-movies
are mainstream successes....
lol
long may it devolve and regress
the scripts/shows are truly, pathetic
but watching Hollywood\'s, demise
is great fun
especially with me butter caramel
popcorn
and Tennessee whisky, in-hand
and while i\'m at it, can i order more
slap happy, testorone willy\'s pls
(signed, thanks in advance
a belly fool, sceptic)
dear Poet, not sure
you can excuse Herd mindset\'s
as being, imprisoned
see
like their cattle, kin
they spend a lot of time, grazing
on wide open fields
getting, fattened-up
for that bitter twist, of fate\'s knife
but, they simply choose
to keep their head down
following each other\'s, rectums
allowing
to be shat on, endlessly
cos the feeding, be easy....!
May 31st, 2022 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
huh, a zombie apocalypse b-movie
...
the walking dead?
(that\'s how desperate Hollywood is)
ideas for b-movies
are mainstream successes....
lol
long may it devolve and regress
the scripts/shows are truly, pathetic
but watching Hollywood\'s, demise
is great fun
especially with me butter caramel
popcorn
and Tennessee whisky, in-hand
and while i\'m at it, can i order more
slap happy, testorone willy\'s pls
(signed, thanks in advance
a belly fool, sceptic)
dear Poet, not sure
you can excuse Herd mindset\'s
as being, imprisoned
see
like their cattle, kin
they spend a lot of time, grazing
on wide open fields
getting, fattened-up
for that bitter twist, of fate\'s knife
but, they simply choose
to keep their head down
following each other\'s, rectums
allowing
to be shat on, endlessly
cos the feeding, be easy....!
May 31st, 2022 04:36
Gaunzew (The Witch)
L. B. Mek said:
worth the read, just for the
\'Gaunzew\'
is it a character or morphed word?
(in my head I\'m pronouncing it
as G uan zew, and its so fun
with a solemn bushi era tone and accent)
lol
thanks for the chuckles, dear poet
(sorry if my humorous take
seems rude, or disrespectful
was never my intention)
May 27th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
worth the read, just for the
\'Gaunzew\'
is it a character or morphed word?
(in my head I\'m pronouncing it
as G uan zew, and its so fun
with a solemn bushi era tone and accent)
lol
thanks for the chuckles, dear poet
(sorry if my humorous take
seems rude, or disrespectful
was never my intention)
May 27th, 2022 05:20
Doll-Gree
L. B. Mek said:
reading this
an image of Halle Berry
(the actor that never was!
the fckry of her getting that first Oscar
is such a stain on all black actresses, before n after
\'in my unhumble and unrepentant
opinionated, opinion\')
playing storm in X-Men
and that brilliant CGI
of her gliding up to the sky
with glowing eyes..
(that\'s the kinda of empowered
feminine image
your words portrayed
well, to me at least)
thanks for sharing, dear poet U Niq!
another fun read:
\'Unique
4 The Wisdom That Cements
Her Sovereign.
Power Herself: B N Awe
As Her
Mighty Fist Levels Another Wall.\'
Doll-Gree.\'
May 26th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
reading this
an image of Halle Berry
(the actor that never was!
the fckry of her getting that first Oscar
is such a stain on all black actresses, before n after
\'in my unhumble and unrepentant
opinionated, opinion\')
playing storm in X-Men
and that brilliant CGI
of her gliding up to the sky
with glowing eyes..
(that\'s the kinda of empowered
feminine image
your words portrayed
well, to me at least)
thanks for sharing, dear poet U Niq!
another fun read:
\'Unique
4 The Wisdom That Cements
Her Sovereign.
Power Herself: B N Awe
As Her
Mighty Fist Levels Another Wall.\'
Doll-Gree.\'
May 26th, 2022 05:44
Bedtyme
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing
sorry for my opinionated, rambling
I just think in 2022
we should have gotten over
all this silly, depictions
of sex, set aside
animalistic actions of lust
they really
have nothing in common!
from their outset of inspiration
to that part of themselves
they seek gratification, for...
it\'s like assuming
running and walking are the same;
ask your lungs
they ain\'t!
and with sex
ask your Heart
it will clarify the differences for you!)
\'the warping of eroticism, exists
in the mind\'s of those, imaginations
viewing, that intimacy of attraction
from the exiled, borders
of vengeful, loneliness..
where-as
those, in Love
see it for what it is, simply
tow individuals
expressing their chemistry and affection
physically...
nothing more
n
nothing less, either..
and to them, other\'s opinion
of their natural, actions
mean nothing
as it should be...\'
\'sex, is not a sin!\'
May 24th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing
sorry for my opinionated, rambling
I just think in 2022
we should have gotten over
all this silly, depictions
of sex, set aside
animalistic actions of lust
they really
have nothing in common!
from their outset of inspiration
to that part of themselves
they seek gratification, for...
it\'s like assuming
running and walking are the same;
ask your lungs
they ain\'t!
and with sex
ask your Heart
it will clarify the differences for you!)
\'the warping of eroticism, exists
in the mind\'s of those, imaginations
viewing, that intimacy of attraction
from the exiled, borders
of vengeful, loneliness..
where-as
those, in Love
see it for what it is, simply
tow individuals
expressing their chemistry and affection
physically...
nothing more
n
nothing less, either..
and to them, other\'s opinion
of their natural, actions
mean nothing
as it should be...\'
\'sex, is not a sin!\'
May 24th, 2022 06:28
C.E.N.S.U.R.E.
L. B. Mek said:
Extremity\'s
Rendering
Unforeseen
Sagacity
Now
Enhanced...
(so much self-insight, dear poet
what a skill, you strive to cultivate)
I read and learn
May 24th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
Extremity\'s
Rendering
Unforeseen
Sagacity
Now
Enhanced...
(so much self-insight, dear poet
what a skill, you strive to cultivate)
I read and learn
May 24th, 2022 05:12
Bdraujj
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Again, 4 Reading, My Friend. It\'s Just A Made-Up Girl Name, Nothing More. Again, U Honor Me With The Blessings Of Your Enhanced Realizations. Again, I\'m Uplifted. Please, Stay Kool, L.B.
May 23rd, 2022 22:51
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Again, 4 Reading, My Friend. It\'s Just A Made-Up Girl Name, Nothing More. Again, U Honor Me With The Blessings Of Your Enhanced Realizations. Again, I\'m Uplifted. Please, Stay Kool, L.B.
May 23rd, 2022 22:51
Bdraujj
L. B. Mek said:
Cosmic, as
humble eyes, looking, up
and staring at those stars
looking back at endless millennia\'s
of fantastical, Time
a fantasy reality, we take for granted..
then amass, amusement
at our supposedly
far-fetched, fantasy tales..
(fantasy, is merely
imagined reality, waiting
to be realised)..
thank you! dear poet
another puzzle of a read, intriguing
from title, and I must ask
what\'s it mean? is it just
a character name or syllables you surgical morphed..
lol
May 23rd, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
Cosmic, as
humble eyes, looking, up
and staring at those stars
looking back at endless millennia\'s
of fantastical, Time
a fantasy reality, we take for granted..
then amass, amusement
at our supposedly
far-fetched, fantasy tales..
(fantasy, is merely
imagined reality, waiting
to be realised)..
thank you! dear poet
another puzzle of a read, intriguing
from title, and I must ask
what\'s it mean? is it just
a character name or syllables you surgical morphed..
lol
May 23rd, 2022 04:35
Ol\' Vz. Young
jarcher54 said:
JW, quite an intriguing dream! I don\'t know if I like it but your bold diction and inventiveness are interesting... PS You are not \"aging\" at 44! Welcome!
May 21st, 2022 15:42
jarcher54 said:
JW, quite an intriguing dream! I don\'t know if I like it but your bold diction and inventiveness are interesting... PS You are not \"aging\" at 44! Welcome!
May 21st, 2022 15:42
Lady:Venus
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Real Nice Cut, Brother: L.B. Yeah, Mr.: Kweli & I Were Mos Def On The Same Vibe. Thank Ya 4 Yet Another Magnificent Response. Please, Stay Up, My Brother.
May 19th, 2022 13:01
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Real Nice Cut, Brother: L.B. Yeah, Mr.: Kweli & I Were Mos Def On The Same Vibe. Thank Ya 4 Yet Another Magnificent Response. Please, Stay Up, My Brother.
May 19th, 2022 13:01
Lady:Venus
L. B. Mek said:
have you heard the song \'broken glass\' by talib kweli?
in which a small town, Venus
meets, harsh fate
in that unfair
of ambition\'s, city strife
in the face of callous, ill-fate..
\'Dreams shattered like broken glass
Press ignore it and your hopes get broken fast
You complain for the life you supposed to have
But when you try to make plans, god is known to laugh\'..
(if you get a sec, check it out
there\'s a thread between your words
and his lyrics - well maybe
at least, I think?
or that\'s just my distorted reading
of your wonderful poetry)
lol
May 19th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
have you heard the song \'broken glass\' by talib kweli?
in which a small town, Venus
meets, harsh fate
in that unfair
of ambition\'s, city strife
in the face of callous, ill-fate..
\'Dreams shattered like broken glass
Press ignore it and your hopes get broken fast
You complain for the life you supposed to have
But when you try to make plans, god is known to laugh\'..
(if you get a sec, check it out
there\'s a thread between your words
and his lyrics - well maybe
at least, I think?
or that\'s just my distorted reading
of your wonderful poetry)
lol
May 19th, 2022 04:58
Agent:B
L. B. Mek said:
\'B for Blindfolded..
don\'t get it twisted
its Ignorance: by design
as
our everyday reality
and secrecy, as our agent
of choice
giving us enough, room
to act all bewildered and offended
in the face of Truth...\'
lol
there\'s so much depth, to your ink
dear Poet
May 16th, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'B for Blindfolded..
don\'t get it twisted
its Ignorance: by design
as
our everyday reality
and secrecy, as our agent
of choice
giving us enough, room
to act all bewildered and offended
in the face of Truth...\'
lol
there\'s so much depth, to your ink
dear Poet
May 16th, 2022 06:09
H.E.I.D.I.
L. B. Mek said:
Helplessly
Enraptured
Infatuated,
Daringly
Initiated...
(and so their story, begins..)
funtastic! dear Poet
thank you
May 16th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
Helplessly
Enraptured
Infatuated,
Daringly
Initiated...
(and so their story, begins..)
funtastic! dear Poet
thank you
May 16th, 2022 04:50
N.A.N.
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
N.A.N.
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
S.M.O.K.E.
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldnt\'ve of said it better myself. Smoking is a literal death sentence.
May 13th, 2022 08:21
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldnt\'ve of said it better myself. Smoking is a literal death sentence.
May 13th, 2022 08:21
S.M.O.K.E.
L. B. Mek said:
Koncurt
of
Koncious
Klemency
Ceen
to
UnKorC
Kreativity\'s
Ceeness..
lost, to imagination\'s smog
as our escapist, moody
Smoke...
(always enjoy your bold
creativity
write-on! brotha from anotha)
May 13th, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
Koncurt
of
Koncious
Klemency
Ceen
to
UnKorC
Kreativity\'s
Ceeness..
lost, to imagination\'s smog
as our escapist, moody
Smoke...
(always enjoy your bold
creativity
write-on! brotha from anotha)
May 13th, 2022 04:22
On Electric Avenue
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Bless U 4 Saying So, Fellow Poet. lol
May 11th, 2022 16:24
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Bless U 4 Saying So, Fellow Poet. lol
May 11th, 2022 16:24
Princess:Mermaiden
L. B. Mek said:
if you find her, drop a word
brotha
let her sister, swim my way
my way
way!
so she can make my life\'s waters, sway
way
my way!
lol
May 9th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
if you find her, drop a word
brotha
let her sister, swim my way
my way
way!
so she can make my life\'s waters, sway
way
my way!
lol
May 9th, 2022 05:42
Yin/Yang Theory (Current Thoughtstream)
L. B. Mek said:
The late Great! \'MF Doom\'
alive and well, in our little MPS
more power to you brother
say it like you see it
no holds barred, Poetry
at its eloquent, extreme..
\'Cram 4 The Final Final.\'
4 Eva! till that Finale
song:
\'Sometimes he rhyme quick, sometimes he rhyme slow
Or vice versa
Whip up a slice of nice verse pie
Hit it on the first try
Villain: the worst guy
Spot hot tracks like spot a pair of fat asses
Shots of the scotch from out of square shot glasses
And he won\'t stop \'til he got the masses
And show \'em what they know not through flows of hot molasses
Do it like the robot to headspin to boogaloo
Took a few minutes to convince the average bug-a-boo
It\'s ugly, like look at you
It\'s a damn shame
Just remember ALL CAPS when you spell the man name
And you know it like a poet...\'
May 5th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
The late Great! \'MF Doom\'
alive and well, in our little MPS
more power to you brother
say it like you see it
no holds barred, Poetry
at its eloquent, extreme..
\'Cram 4 The Final Final.\'
4 Eva! till that Finale
song:
\'Sometimes he rhyme quick, sometimes he rhyme slow
Or vice versa
Whip up a slice of nice verse pie
Hit it on the first try
Villain: the worst guy
Spot hot tracks like spot a pair of fat asses
Shots of the scotch from out of square shot glasses
And he won\'t stop \'til he got the masses
And show \'em what they know not through flows of hot molasses
Do it like the robot to headspin to boogaloo
Took a few minutes to convince the average bug-a-boo
It\'s ugly, like look at you
It\'s a damn shame
Just remember ALL CAPS when you spell the man name
And you know it like a poet...\'
May 5th, 2022 05:45
F.A.L.L.
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderful Jerry! I always love your acrostics, they\'re so clever and witty. Stay safe!
April 29th, 2022 10:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderful Jerry! I always love your acrostics, they\'re so clever and witty. Stay safe!
April 29th, 2022 10:29
Valkyrie
L. B. Mek said:
ain\'t it though?!
(your author\'s comment)..
maybe I\'ll get tickets
to a H.E.R. concert
and
she\'ll be waiting, hair
all in a flurry
shaking it, like her momma
gave her curves, an expiry date
and her heart, beats
to a \'Pantieless & Braless.\' rhythm
of free flowing, choices in life
and we\'ll, together
\'Toast 40\'s Or Champagnes 2 Her Splendid.\'
(Brilliant!, dear Poet)
April 25th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
ain\'t it though?!
(your author\'s comment)..
maybe I\'ll get tickets
to a H.E.R. concert
and
she\'ll be waiting, hair
all in a flurry
shaking it, like her momma
gave her curves, an expiry date
and her heart, beats
to a \'Pantieless & Braless.\' rhythm
of free flowing, choices in life
and we\'ll, together
\'Toast 40\'s Or Champagnes 2 Her Splendid.\'
(Brilliant!, dear Poet)
April 25th, 2022 06:28
P.O.W.E.R.
L. B. Mek said:
\'our modernity
is the majority, poor
building
the shoddy houses
of the minority, rich
and calling it progress
for earning barely 10%
of their creations, worth..\'
POWER, indeed!
(another one that hit home
thank you, dear poet)
April 21st, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'our modernity
is the majority, poor
building
the shoddy houses
of the minority, rich
and calling it progress
for earning barely 10%
of their creations, worth..\'
POWER, indeed!
(another one that hit home
thank you, dear poet)
April 21st, 2022 04:44
R.O.L.L.
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m going to try and pen something,
titled:
\'in Regard to Lamentations
for our Love\'s, Disregard\'
thank you for sparking my imagination
once again, dear poet
April 19th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m going to try and pen something,
titled:
\'in Regard to Lamentations
for our Love\'s, Disregard\'
thank you for sparking my imagination
once again, dear poet
April 19th, 2022 04:57
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