Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
L.A.I.R.
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
This is very good, living alone in reality is better than living in a busy dream...Easter Blessings!
tchau...Cassia
April 17th, 2022 10:22
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
This is very good, living alone in reality is better than living in a busy dream...Easter Blessings!
tchau...Cassia
April 17th, 2022 10:22
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
U R Entirely Right, My Good Reader. I Thank U, Most Kindly. Luck & Blessings On Your Every Endeavor, My Friend.
April 15th, 2022 15:54
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
U R Entirely Right, My Good Reader. I Thank U, Most Kindly. Luck & Blessings On Your Every Endeavor, My Friend.
April 15th, 2022 15:54
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
yes!! May 2022 be a total revival
from the ashes and smoke
we are awaken in infinite survival
tchau....Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 14:52
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
yes!! May 2022 be a total revival
from the ashes and smoke
we are awaken in infinite survival
tchau....Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 14:52
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Again, 4 Reading, Mr. Mek. I Just Put The Poems 2gether From There I Leave It 2 Whatever Your Thoughts Conspire On. U Got My Pleasant Message Already. I\'m Always Appreciative Of Your Everpoetic Responses & Only Send U A Multitude Of Proper Blessings.
April 15th, 2022 09:48
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Again, 4 Reading, Mr. Mek. I Just Put The Poems 2gether From There I Leave It 2 Whatever Your Thoughts Conspire On. U Got My Pleasant Message Already. I\'m Always Appreciative Of Your Everpoetic Responses & Only Send U A Multitude Of Proper Blessings.
April 15th, 2022 09:48
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
L. B. Mek said:
if only
Orpheus and Eurydice
hadn\'t looked back
and that accursed Sun, hadn\'t
appeared so untimely, bright..
lol
\'if, and when\'
a starting line
\'stop-gap\', trapping
to our dreams..
(an intriguing read, as ever
a lot went over my head, especially that title
but as always, there was enough
for me to engage with and appreciate..
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
April 15th, 2022 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
if only
Orpheus and Eurydice
hadn\'t looked back
and that accursed Sun, hadn\'t
appeared so untimely, bright..
lol
\'if, and when\'
a starting line
\'stop-gap\', trapping
to our dreams..
(an intriguing read, as ever
a lot went over my head, especially that title
but as always, there was enough
for me to engage with and appreciate..
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
April 15th, 2022 04:20
On
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
My Friend & Fellow Poet, I\'m N The Spirit Again 4 Having Been Able 2 Touch U So Deeply. The Things We Say While We Live Where We Live. Your Response Is The Dopest Indeed. lol
April 14th, 2022 09:37
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
My Friend & Fellow Poet, I\'m N The Spirit Again 4 Having Been Able 2 Touch U So Deeply. The Things We Say While We Live Where We Live. Your Response Is The Dopest Indeed. lol
April 14th, 2022 09:37
On
L. B. Mek said:
\'Slow...Slow Motion, Getting 2 The Real Hell Without The Tripping.\'
(found your words
to be such a cathartic read
and then my feeble reply
exploded from somewhere
its been brooding, deep within
thank you! dear Poet
stay true,
stay brave,
stay Awesome!)
\'and on, rolled and roughed up
sliced and laughed out of life\'s park
standing on those Warfield, corners
roadside, drive-by shootouts
as everyday
conversation topics, ice breakers
of first dates
\'you knew, who\'
\'nah, I knew who from last week\'s
body bag, counts\'
yeah, that grim street reality
only worthy of bulletins
when news of the world
is too placid..
yeah
we\'re \'Put on\'
made to dance, to a tune
that caged our hereditary lines
smile and say our P\'s and Q\'s
thankful
for the freedom we\'re afforded
like, here
children, seek your sky\'s
yeah, I know Truman sets
be the scope in our city limits
but hey, here
it\'s safe - they claim
we can grab a burger for a dollar
and smoke all we want
as long as we keep it all
grimy and downtown, aside
our bullet frenzy, reality..
(and we\'re supposed to be shocked
at war scenes on our screens
F\'ckrs!
there\'s more Blood of our kin
on our F\'cking STREETS!)
and on...
onwards, On
heading ever south, while climbing our hills of life
and on!!!\'
April 14th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'Slow...Slow Motion, Getting 2 The Real Hell Without The Tripping.\'
(found your words
to be such a cathartic read
and then my feeble reply
exploded from somewhere
its been brooding, deep within
thank you! dear Poet
stay true,
stay brave,
stay Awesome!)
\'and on, rolled and roughed up
sliced and laughed out of life\'s park
standing on those Warfield, corners
roadside, drive-by shootouts
as everyday
conversation topics, ice breakers
of first dates
\'you knew, who\'
\'nah, I knew who from last week\'s
body bag, counts\'
yeah, that grim street reality
only worthy of bulletins
when news of the world
is too placid..
yeah
we\'re \'Put on\'
made to dance, to a tune
that caged our hereditary lines
smile and say our P\'s and Q\'s
thankful
for the freedom we\'re afforded
like, here
children, seek your sky\'s
yeah, I know Truman sets
be the scope in our city limits
but hey, here
it\'s safe - they claim
we can grab a burger for a dollar
and smoke all we want
as long as we keep it all
grimy and downtown, aside
our bullet frenzy, reality..
(and we\'re supposed to be shocked
at war scenes on our screens
F\'ckrs!
there\'s more Blood of our kin
on our F\'cking STREETS!)
and on...
onwards, On
heading ever south, while climbing our hills of life
and on!!!\'
April 14th, 2022 04:26
A.P.R.I.L.
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Sincerely. Many Blessings 2 U, Good Reader.
April 13th, 2022 14:30
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Sincerely. Many Blessings 2 U, Good Reader.
April 13th, 2022 14:30
A.P.R.I.L.
Dahlia said:
very cool, Happy early or belated Birthday poet!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 12:47
Dahlia said:
very cool, Happy early or belated Birthday poet!
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 12:47
Comet
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Your Very Welcomes, My Friend. Peace & Blessings.
April 11th, 2022 09:55
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Your Very Welcomes, My Friend. Peace & Blessings.
April 11th, 2022 09:55
Comet
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, as always such great wordplay
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 11th, 2022 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, as always such great wordplay
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 11th, 2022 06:10
Floodgates
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
2 Glad 2 Hear It. You\'ve Made My Day. Bless U, Truly
March 31st, 2022 12:28
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
2 Glad 2 Hear It. You\'ve Made My Day. Bless U, Truly
March 31st, 2022 12:28
Floodgates
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Kindly. Overabundances Of Peace & Blessings.
March 31st, 2022 12:00
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Kindly. Overabundances Of Peace & Blessings.
March 31st, 2022 12:00
Drangoness:Kelly Vz. The Gumball Gunslinger
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I\'m Only Fulfilled 2 Have Been Able 2 Add 2 Your Life So Pleasantly, Friend & Fellow Poet. Stay Blessed & Safe.
March 31st, 2022 09:34
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
I\'m Only Fulfilled 2 Have Been Able 2 Add 2 Your Life So Pleasantly, Friend & Fellow Poet. Stay Blessed & Safe.
March 31st, 2022 09:34
Drangoness:Kelly Vz. The Gumball Gunslinger
L. B. Mek said:
\'Princess:Dreadlust\'
(your imaginative puns, never fail
to make me smile
then nod... and contemplate...)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'Princess:Dreadlust\'
(your imaginative puns, never fail
to make me smile
then nod... and contemplate...)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:44
Drangoness:Kelly Vz. The Gumball Gunslinger
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks Kindly, Familiar Reader. Bless U.
March 30th, 2022 16:48
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks Kindly, Familiar Reader. Bless U.
March 30th, 2022 16:48
Drangoness:Kelly Vz. The Gumball Gunslinger
Dahlia said:
This is very cool
enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
March 30th, 2022 16:20
Dahlia said:
This is very cool
enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
March 30th, 2022 16:20
The Soul\'s Agents
Dahlia said:
excellently penned,
happy weekend,
Dahlia Vitalia
March 26th, 2022 15:52
Dahlia said:
excellently penned,
happy weekend,
Dahlia Vitalia
March 26th, 2022 15:52
TIMEFAULT
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks Kindly, My Friend. All Your Sincere Feedback Has Been My Divine Inspiration. Please, Have A Blessed Day.
March 21st, 2022 09:47
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks Kindly, My Friend. All Your Sincere Feedback Has Been My Divine Inspiration. Please, Have A Blessed Day.
March 21st, 2022 09:47
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