Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
Beach Bum
L. B. Mek said:
is this the follow up, to that \'thong song\'
lol
thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2022 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
is this the follow up, to that \'thong song\'
lol
thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2022 05:06
B.L.O.O.D.
Rocky Lagou said:
You encapsulated family so freaking well 😅 You honestly said it all with this one poem! I commend you for your genius insights! 💖
February 28th, 2022 14:18
Rocky Lagou said:
You encapsulated family so freaking well 😅 You honestly said it all with this one poem! I commend you for your genius insights! 💖
February 28th, 2022 14:18
Skull Lounge
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I like the word replacements, gives it a different vibe than if it were just the words, almost less mature in a way, and I like the fantasy imagery!
February 23rd, 2022 14:46
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I like the word replacements, gives it a different vibe than if it were just the words, almost less mature in a way, and I like the fantasy imagery!
February 23rd, 2022 14:46
Kryztal
Rocky Lagou said:
Oh adolescence! Dumb and in love. I love your syntax and the way you write certain words. Unique and fresh! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Oh adolescence! Dumb and in love. I love your syntax and the way you write certain words. Unique and fresh! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:45
Bad Chick
Bragee said:
Nothing makes a man more poetic than the appreciation of a beautiful woman
February 20th, 2022 12:23
Bragee said:
Nothing makes a man more poetic than the appreciation of a beautiful woman
February 20th, 2022 12:23
Treasure Lynn
Rocky Lagou said:
Fun poem. That first love moment is for sure an ecstatic emotion. Bravo! 💖
February 17th, 2022 11:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Fun poem. That first love moment is for sure an ecstatic emotion. Bravo! 💖
February 17th, 2022 11:25
Misty
L. B. Mek said:
a proposal? hope you got the answer you wanted.. 🤞
different, as always
and as enjoyable, as ever
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 15th, 2022 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
a proposal? hope you got the answer you wanted.. 🤞
different, as always
and as enjoyable, as ever
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 15th, 2022 04:55
Lunara-Shile, Goddess-Slayer
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks Kindly, My Good Friend.
February 8th, 2022 13:31
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks Kindly, My Good Friend.
February 8th, 2022 13:31
Lunara-Shile, Goddess-Slayer
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ghastly Nasty Declares Ogrishly On Behalf Of Her Sexy.\'
you have such a way with phrasing
thanks for sharing, haunting creativity
February 8th, 2022 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ghastly Nasty Declares Ogrishly On Behalf Of Her Sexy.\'
you have such a way with phrasing
thanks for sharing, haunting creativity
February 8th, 2022 05:02
M\'lel
Buzz Bray said:
Oooooooh dark imagery! I agree with the previous reviewer. Powerful stuff!
February 4th, 2022 14:02
Buzz Bray said:
Oooooooh dark imagery! I agree with the previous reviewer. Powerful stuff!
February 4th, 2022 14:02
M\'lel
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
M\'lel
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
Rocky Lagou said:
I liked the sinister vibe of this poem. Also the wording and syntax is unique, I like it.👍
February 4th, 2022 13:35
Sharlinde
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! I love it! An ambivalent feeling amid the family life pictured. Tough the choices we make.
January 29th, 2022 16:58
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! I love it! An ambivalent feeling amid the family life pictured. Tough the choices we make.
January 29th, 2022 16:58
Werewolf
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Your Very Welcome, My Friend. I, Thought Pinque Would B More Fitting 4 A She-Wolf. Call It Comic Books. lol
January 27th, 2022 15:04
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Your Very Welcome, My Friend. I, Thought Pinque Would B More Fitting 4 A She-Wolf. Call It Comic Books. lol
January 27th, 2022 15:04
Werewolf
L. B. Mek said:
but I ask, why pink? lol
in my younger days I was always on the lycan side, of the vampire tropes
so I enjoyed this read, thanks for sharing
a fun read
January 27th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
but I ask, why pink? lol
in my younger days I was always on the lycan side, of the vampire tropes
so I enjoyed this read, thanks for sharing
a fun read
January 27th, 2022 04:26
Decision
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Right. lol Thank You, Again, 4 Paying Such Good Attention.
January 20th, 2022 15:51
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Right. lol Thank You, Again, 4 Paying Such Good Attention.
January 20th, 2022 15:51
Decision
L. B. Mek said:
this should be titled:
\'how covid lock downs
can f\'ck
with peoples sense of reality!\'
lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing
(yes aliens are everywhere
they just happen to look and sound very human
but the way they, \'don\'t\' - think...
yeah that\'s hella ALIEN, to me)
January 20th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
this should be titled:
\'how covid lock downs
can f\'ck
with peoples sense of reality!\'
lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing
(yes aliens are everywhere
they just happen to look and sound very human
but the way they, \'don\'t\' - think...
yeah that\'s hella ALIEN, to me)
January 20th, 2022 05:04
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