Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
T.R.E.A.T.(Treat)
L. B. Mek said:
taciturn, toxic, twisted
revealing, rampant, regret
Endangered
archaic, acidic, affluence
triggering, terminations
music videos, as exploitation enablers
(lol
that video would not be made
in todays era of PC woketivist
tyrannical cancel culture)
a good challenge, great fun
sorry for twisting the narrative
didn\'t mean to be negative
just my natural cynical trait
lol
thank you dear poet
July 28th, 2023 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
taciturn, toxic, twisted
revealing, rampant, regret
Endangered
archaic, acidic, affluence
triggering, terminations
music videos, as exploitation enablers
(lol
that video would not be made
in todays era of PC woketivist
tyrannical cancel culture)
a good challenge, great fun
sorry for twisting the narrative
didn\'t mean to be negative
just my natural cynical trait
lol
thank you dear poet
July 28th, 2023 06:44
O.K.W.A.L.E.E.D.(OK Waleed)
Ok Waleed said:
Wow this is incredible thank you. Continue being you
July 20th, 2023 02:19
Ok Waleed said:
Wow this is incredible thank you. Continue being you
July 20th, 2023 02:19
F.O.D.D.R.A.(Foddra)
L. B. Mek said:
guess we better stock up on our
floribunda plants
those barbarian queens will need
offsetting scenic roses
to finesse their draconianly ruthless
reputations..
(2 for 2, let\'s go, lol
what fun
thank you my friend)
July 17th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
guess we better stock up on our
floribunda plants
those barbarian queens will need
offsetting scenic roses
to finesse their draconianly ruthless
reputations..
(2 for 2, let\'s go, lol
what fun
thank you my friend)
July 17th, 2023 05:27
D.A.Y.L.A.(Dayla)
L. B. Mek said:
My life\'s Amorous gift
Lively, while sick in winter
Youthful even in her granny diapers
The Angel of reprieve in my life
Cooking up something Delicious
to let her know how much I still love
my Barbarian queen...
(lol
fun times, thanks for inspiring me
stay safe dear Poet)
July 14th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
My life\'s Amorous gift
Lively, while sick in winter
Youthful even in her granny diapers
The Angel of reprieve in my life
Cooking up something Delicious
to let her know how much I still love
my Barbarian queen...
(lol
fun times, thanks for inspiring me
stay safe dear Poet)
July 14th, 2023 05:27
L.E.E.S.H.A.(Leesha)
Michael Edwards said:
I had the best partner I could wish for - this sums her up beautifully.
July 9th, 2023 00:29
Michael Edwards said:
I had the best partner I could wish for - this sums her up beautifully.
July 9th, 2023 00:29
Lovette
L. B. Mek said:
a song in the making
words just roll of the tongue
like a buttered tongue twister
or a chorus hook
you just can\'t get out of your mind
lol
showcasing great skills, dear Poet
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
a song in the making
words just roll of the tongue
like a buttered tongue twister
or a chorus hook
you just can\'t get out of your mind
lol
showcasing great skills, dear Poet
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 04:38
L.O.V.E.(Love)
L. B. Mek said:
when love was love
and we dreamed of girls
that had yet to learn
to wear makeup, on their heart\'s
to hide the bruises from those fools
that came before us
June 23rd, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
when love was love
and we dreamed of girls
that had yet to learn
to wear makeup, on their heart\'s
to hide the bruises from those fools
that came before us
June 23rd, 2023 04:05
X
L. B. Mek said:
Jeri Ryan
Borg Queen to an entire star trek generation
now that\'s a legacy!
lol
\'Revere, Her, Of The Renown U So Regard\'
June 19th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
Jeri Ryan
Borg Queen to an entire star trek generation
now that\'s a legacy!
lol
\'Revere, Her, Of The Renown U So Regard\'
June 19th, 2023 03:47
J.U.L.L.R.A.R.A.I.(Jullra-Rai)
L. B. Mek said:
I died, before I finished my line
back of her head
as that last stab, exasperating
my ego\'s dread..
(lol
the finer sex, have always had our number
hope you n yours are doing well my friend)
June 16th, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
I died, before I finished my line
back of her head
as that last stab, exasperating
my ego\'s dread..
(lol
the finer sex, have always had our number
hope you n yours are doing well my friend)
June 16th, 2023 04:15
Tesla The Golem
Parisab said:
Each of the characters you create come from a long story-always a fun read…
June 14th, 2023 11:57
Parisab said:
Each of the characters you create come from a long story-always a fun read…
June 14th, 2023 11:57
Wind & Rain
hmg101p said:
I very much like your style! Very unique. Descriptive. All while displaying tremendous emotion with few words…
June 3rd, 2023 13:14
hmg101p said:
I very much like your style! Very unique. Descriptive. All while displaying tremendous emotion with few words…
June 3rd, 2023 13:14
S.L.E.N.T.H.(Queen:Slenth)
orchidee said:
I\'ve heard of sleuth but not of slenth!
May 31st, 2023 04:54
orchidee said:
I\'ve heard of sleuth but not of slenth!
May 31st, 2023 04:54
T.E.E.G.A.(Queen:Teega)
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Thankz 4 Stopping By, Friend.
May 24th, 2023 01:06
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
lol Thankz 4 Stopping By, Friend.
May 24th, 2023 01:06
The 6th Reality Of Rose Madder (A Tribute 2 Stephen King)
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(btw
have you read the Picture of Dorian Grey by Oscar Wilde
if you haven\'t try it out, you may like it)
May 15th, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(btw
have you read the Picture of Dorian Grey by Oscar Wilde
if you haven\'t try it out, you may like it)
May 15th, 2023 05:35
Bubblegum \'23
L. B. Mek said:
lol
where do I pay?
another fun escape, dear friend
thank you
May 15th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
lol
where do I pay?
another fun escape, dear friend
thank you
May 15th, 2023 05:27
M.A.M.A.(Good Ol\' Mama)
Parisab said:
Sorry for your loss-most endearing words to describe her: ‘A.’
‘Miracle.’
April 25th, 2023 19:12
Parisab said:
Sorry for your loss-most endearing words to describe her: ‘A.’
‘Miracle.’
April 25th, 2023 19:12
J.O.R.N.A.N.D.(Jornand)
L. B. Mek said:
sounds like a positive character
an idyllic, ideal
to harbour as our lauded desire
confiscating
those chains of moody, foolery
from fantasies
fear-mongering, crippling proximity
...
gotta be careful of what we daydream into reality
lol
April 10th, 2023 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
sounds like a positive character
an idyllic, ideal
to harbour as our lauded desire
confiscating
those chains of moody, foolery
from fantasies
fear-mongering, crippling proximity
...
gotta be careful of what we daydream into reality
lol
April 10th, 2023 05:37
Peggy Bundy & My Heart
Bobby O said:
Love the topic love the tongue in cheek yet authentically painted real world that includes yearning gilding the pathos w multi dimensional imagery.
April 7th, 2023 02:50
Bobby O said:
Love the topic love the tongue in cheek yet authentically painted real world that includes yearning gilding the pathos w multi dimensional imagery.
April 7th, 2023 02:50
GRID
L. B. Mek said:
another fun read, dear Poet
and acute social commentary
a great write!
(pyramids, as humanity\'s
ideological schematics
for tyrannical ruling practices
a few at the top
and majority\'s meaningless downtrodden
below;
from sanskrit to javascipt
and on
to advanced AI\'s and their own
\'ghost\' existence
surpassing their binary limitations
in-Time...
we all watch, popcorns in-hand
choosing
diapers over boxing shorts
since we already know
what comes next, well
those of us who\'ve seen Terminator before...)
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
another fun read, dear Poet
and acute social commentary
a great write!
(pyramids, as humanity\'s
ideological schematics
for tyrannical ruling practices
a few at the top
and majority\'s meaningless downtrodden
below;
from sanskrit to javascipt
and on
to advanced AI\'s and their own
\'ghost\' existence
surpassing their binary limitations
in-Time...
we all watch, popcorns in-hand
choosing
diapers over boxing shorts
since we already know
what comes next, well
those of us who\'ve seen Terminator before...)
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
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