Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
M.I.S.T.R.E.S.S.(Mistress)
mvvenkataraman said:
In the name Mistress itself is added the word \"Stress\" rightly and magically!
February 19th, 2023 06:02
mvvenkataraman said:
In the name Mistress itself is added the word \"Stress\" rightly and magically!
February 19th, 2023 06:02
\"Treasure\"
Addy said:
It a unique style of writing i havent seen. nice poem!
February 18th, 2023 07:47
Addy said:
It a unique style of writing i havent seen. nice poem!
February 18th, 2023 07:47
Mane
L. B. Mek said:
(reminds me of talib kweli\'s lyrics
to \'broken glass\'
only in fantasy, they get to be all powerful Amazonian
heroines, in reality
seldom is that rabbit hole, storyline
empowered with happy endings...)
sorry for my bleak interpretation my friend
February 17th, 2023 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
(reminds me of talib kweli\'s lyrics
to \'broken glass\'
only in fantasy, they get to be all powerful Amazonian
heroines, in reality
seldom is that rabbit hole, storyline
empowered with happy endings...)
sorry for my bleak interpretation my friend
February 17th, 2023 05:21
Captured
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, this be the ugly reality
we like to forget..
\'while the lucky wine n dine
on date nights
somewhere else, thousands
survive
with only horror\'s tears
as their salty, sips of life\'
(but kind friend
never forget empathy, in your depictions
art is art, and stark depictions
a necessity to awaken
delusional, herded minds
but
when our topic is so close
to reality
a tender touch, goes a long way
or so I think)
but what do i know
February 13th, 2023 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, this be the ugly reality
we like to forget..
\'while the lucky wine n dine
on date nights
somewhere else, thousands
survive
with only horror\'s tears
as their salty, sips of life\'
(but kind friend
never forget empathy, in your depictions
art is art, and stark depictions
a necessity to awaken
delusional, herded minds
but
when our topic is so close
to reality
a tender touch, goes a long way
or so I think)
but what do i know
February 13th, 2023 05:10
Starlight
L. B. Mek said:
a great read my friend
this be how I like my love poetry
stark lines of realisable, reality
(ring in our valentine dreams
sip a little of moonlight\'s tease
that time of year, Spring
awakening our romantic, feats)
February 13th, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
a great read my friend
this be how I like my love poetry
stark lines of realisable, reality
(ring in our valentine dreams
sip a little of moonlight\'s tease
that time of year, Spring
awakening our romantic, feats)
February 13th, 2023 04:00
Pretty Heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spark Me, Again, Pretty Heart As We Stargaze Comfortably On This Deck.
Check Her: She\'s Dazzling. Sparkling Beauty, All Mine. Pretty Heart.\'
(there\'s such a synchronicity
between these words
and my latest feeble effort
lol)
you, serenading Spring
and I, an alternate reality
fantasy
February 10th, 2023 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Spark Me, Again, Pretty Heart As We Stargaze Comfortably On This Deck.
Check Her: She\'s Dazzling. Sparkling Beauty, All Mine. Pretty Heart.\'
(there\'s such a synchronicity
between these words
and my latest feeble effort
lol)
you, serenading Spring
and I, an alternate reality
fantasy
February 10th, 2023 06:15
Kristy
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
there\'s a gentle \'Kristy\' breeze
in the air, refreshing scents
of blooming\'s promise, waiting
to blossom and please\'
(too cheesy? sorry i tried my friend
lol
btw care to elaborate on kristy?)
February 10th, 2023 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
there\'s a gentle \'Kristy\' breeze
in the air, refreshing scents
of blooming\'s promise, waiting
to blossom and please\'
(too cheesy? sorry i tried my friend
lol
btw care to elaborate on kristy?)
February 10th, 2023 06:11
T.E.R.A.(Tera)
Ok Waleed said:
Terrorizing seems to conflict the entire other attributes
February 10th, 2023 01:11
Ok Waleed said:
Terrorizing seems to conflict the entire other attributes
February 10th, 2023 01:11
M.I.E.G.A.(Miega)
L. B. Mek said:
\'attraction and gargoyle
a new pairing for me\'
actually, my friend
I have a bone to pick with whoever first designed
those gargoyle, templates
it annoys me, most of them
have wolf or dog facial features
especially those medieval ones
why?
I know there are a vastly diverse
range of gargoyles
but an unusual amount
have dog like facial features...
a warping theme of guardians?
sorry just some random thoughts
lol
February 6th, 2023 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'attraction and gargoyle
a new pairing for me\'
actually, my friend
I have a bone to pick with whoever first designed
those gargoyle, templates
it annoys me, most of them
have wolf or dog facial features
especially those medieval ones
why?
I know there are a vastly diverse
range of gargoyles
but an unusual amount
have dog like facial features...
a warping theme of guardians?
sorry just some random thoughts
lol
February 6th, 2023 05:36
T.H.A.I.(Thai)
L. B. Mek said:
are you starting a one man war
with an entire country, dear poet?
you got your spy balloons ready
lol
but on a more significant, note
its crazy how toxicity
is so often a magnetic element
of those irresistible
vices and self-harming traits
we are drawn to, time n again
incomprehensibly...
February 6th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
are you starting a one man war
with an entire country, dear poet?
you got your spy balloons ready
lol
but on a more significant, note
its crazy how toxicity
is so often a magnetic element
of those irresistible
vices and self-harming traits
we are drawn to, time n again
incomprehensibly...
February 6th, 2023 05:01
Z.A.N.G.A.(Zanga)
L. B. Mek said:
(great flow, like the broken rhythm
of \'sent\' \'stress\' and \'annihilates\'
such a trademark of your unique
style)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(walks in, takes one look
picks me out
and thus, my life begins;
what a dream
to anchor
my hopes within)
February 3rd, 2023 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
(great flow, like the broken rhythm
of \'sent\' \'stress\' and \'annihilates\'
such a trademark of your unique
style)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(walks in, takes one look
picks me out
and thus, my life begins;
what a dream
to anchor
my hopes within)
February 3rd, 2023 05:52
Ethereal
Ok Waleed said:
Why do you type like this what structure is this called
January 31st, 2023 01:20
Ok Waleed said:
Why do you type like this what structure is this called
January 31st, 2023 01:20
Z.R.A.L.L.A.(Zralla)
L. B. Mek said:
kinky, with bite
that leaves a mark, I bet...
(all I had , my friend
forgive me)
lol
January 30th, 2023 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
kinky, with bite
that leaves a mark, I bet...
(all I had , my friend
forgive me)
lol
January 30th, 2023 04:41
V.E.L.G.R.A.(Velgra)
jarcher54 said:
If that\'s her name, I bet I can find her on google! I\'ll beware, though. Thanks for the warning!! (-:
January 29th, 2023 12:42
jarcher54 said:
If that\'s her name, I bet I can find her on google! I\'ll beware, though. Thanks for the warning!! (-:
January 29th, 2023 12:42
Sheena
jarcher54 said:
Her majesty must be a fierce individual! Was the husband an SOB?
January 28th, 2023 19:59
jarcher54 said:
Her majesty must be a fierce individual! Was the husband an SOB?
January 28th, 2023 19:59
Kitten \'23
jarcher54 said:
I do enjoy how free you are with the keyboard. Your poems are sculpture as much as anything.
January 28th, 2023 01:50
jarcher54 said:
I do enjoy how free you are with the keyboard. Your poems are sculpture as much as anything.
January 28th, 2023 01:50
T.I.M.E.(Time)
L. B. Mek said:
\'as an existential conception
Time
is a most wondrous entity
I too, agree
that True element of infinite
in all, existence\'..
loved this
thank you! my friend
(may lady infinite
visit you in your dreamful state
and ease those aches
our reality of strife, piles upon us
with each tick of life\'s
incessantly chaotic, clock...)
lol
🍻
\'till then, \'salut\' dear poet
thankful, be we
for those sips of escape\'
January 27th, 2023 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'as an existential conception
Time
is a most wondrous entity
I too, agree
that True element of infinite
in all, existence\'..
loved this
thank you! my friend
(may lady infinite
visit you in your dreamful state
and ease those aches
our reality of strife, piles upon us
with each tick of life\'s
incessantly chaotic, clock...)
lol
🍻
\'till then, \'salut\' dear poet
thankful, be we
for those sips of escape\'
January 27th, 2023 06:40
Necropolis \'23
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(this reminds me
of my first impressions of Sin City, the movie
such a morbid
yet enticingly stylistic depiction
embracing
that yearned fantastical
in our seemingly ensuing
dystopian, reality...)
\'Red Beauties Revel N Cerberus\' Duties.\'
I admire your depth of diverse lore
and how you interweave mythology
with modern fantasy
January 23rd, 2023 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(this reminds me
of my first impressions of Sin City, the movie
such a morbid
yet enticingly stylistic depiction
embracing
that yearned fantastical
in our seemingly ensuing
dystopian, reality...)
\'Red Beauties Revel N Cerberus\' Duties.\'
I admire your depth of diverse lore
and how you interweave mythology
with modern fantasy
January 23rd, 2023 06:26
Sleepers
L. B. Mek said:
\'Intense: This Is What I Owe:
I\'m \"A Accursed\" On The Run
From The Sleepers That Adore Me Most.\'
comic book/fantasy or grim reality?
sad to think
how many female rappers
make their start, in strip clubs
and granted
for they own it, proudly
they strut
ask for no pity party
they grind and find a way out
shine bright!
but fck
it\'s 2023, why is this \'a thing\'
to begin with...
\'Chance? Natural Chance? No. I Cut A Deal\'
is it cutting a deal, when poverty\'s
double barrelled, reality
is stuck in your face, from birth?
and those eyes, start to linger
on their hips after a certain age...
its all so fck\'d up
(sorry if I took this somewhere
far removed
from your intended meaning, my friend
you know how I get, forgive me
I mean no disrespect)
wonderfully insightful poetry, thanks for sharing
January 20th, 2023 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'Intense: This Is What I Owe:
I\'m \"A Accursed\" On The Run
From The Sleepers That Adore Me Most.\'
comic book/fantasy or grim reality?
sad to think
how many female rappers
make their start, in strip clubs
and granted
for they own it, proudly
they strut
ask for no pity party
they grind and find a way out
shine bright!
but fck
it\'s 2023, why is this \'a thing\'
to begin with...
\'Chance? Natural Chance? No. I Cut A Deal\'
is it cutting a deal, when poverty\'s
double barrelled, reality
is stuck in your face, from birth?
and those eyes, start to linger
on their hips after a certain age...
its all so fck\'d up
(sorry if I took this somewhere
far removed
from your intended meaning, my friend
you know how I get, forgive me
I mean no disrespect)
wonderfully insightful poetry, thanks for sharing
January 20th, 2023 06:54
Darque Note
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(trick, is
seldom do we realise, how much
of our inherited misery
helps to script, sculpt and tattoo
our reality
in that very creativity, we seek to escape within
CGI, graphics or words of ink
slaloming through life
as crush-dummy joyriders
or suited marathon climbers..
we chase our shadows
by click-baiting ourselves
upon glimpses of dreamless hope\'s
and hollow belief, upon wishes
that were smoke signals, long before
we ever put-out those birthday candles...)
forgive me my friend
I couldn\'t help but try and scribble a little poetic reply
Happy New Year brother, I loved reading this
some great lines:
\'Votes Of Shadows That Remember The Future Is Merely A Opaque Lie.\'
(motes, even)
January 13th, 2023 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(trick, is
seldom do we realise, how much
of our inherited misery
helps to script, sculpt and tattoo
our reality
in that very creativity, we seek to escape within
CGI, graphics or words of ink
slaloming through life
as crush-dummy joyriders
or suited marathon climbers..
we chase our shadows
by click-baiting ourselves
upon glimpses of dreamless hope\'s
and hollow belief, upon wishes
that were smoke signals, long before
we ever put-out those birthday candles...)
forgive me my friend
I couldn\'t help but try and scribble a little poetic reply
Happy New Year brother, I loved reading this
some great lines:
\'Votes Of Shadows That Remember The Future Is Merely A Opaque Lie.\'
(motes, even)
January 13th, 2023 05:49
Argentina
mvvenkataraman said:
I don\'t know if you talk about country Argentina
Or a person with the name Argentina,
Whatever it maybe, Argentina is my favorite,
I mean in football, but I avoid watching
As I can\'t bear seeing them losing!
January 12th, 2023 00:53
mvvenkataraman said:
I don\'t know if you talk about country Argentina
Or a person with the name Argentina,
Whatever it maybe, Argentina is my favorite,
I mean in football, but I avoid watching
As I can\'t bear seeing them losing!
January 12th, 2023 00:53
D.E.S.I.R.A. (Desira)
L. B. Mek said:
this, as abstract as bars from MC DOOM
may her rest in peace
(but really, how is this a love poem)
lol
thanks for sharing, hope you have a great festive season my friend
(in case we don\'t come across each other again this year)
December 16th, 2022 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
this, as abstract as bars from MC DOOM
may her rest in peace
(but really, how is this a love poem)
lol
thanks for sharing, hope you have a great festive season my friend
(in case we don\'t come across each other again this year)
December 16th, 2022 06:11
J.S.A.U.J.J.A. (Jsaujja)
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'m lost my friend
I ended up at the \'or something\'
lol
definitely thought you were discussing runway prowess
for a bit
😎
December 9th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'m lost my friend
I ended up at the \'or something\'
lol
definitely thought you were discussing runway prowess
for a bit
😎
December 9th, 2022 05:33
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