Comments received on poems by Jerry Wayne Lawrence
Lady:Venus
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Real Nice Cut, Brother: L.B. Yeah, Mr.: Kweli & I Were Mos Def On The Same Vibe. Thank Ya 4 Yet Another Magnificent Response. Please, Stay Up, My Brother.
May 19th, 2022 13:01
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Real Nice Cut, Brother: L.B. Yeah, Mr.: Kweli & I Were Mos Def On The Same Vibe. Thank Ya 4 Yet Another Magnificent Response. Please, Stay Up, My Brother.
May 19th, 2022 13:01
Lady:Venus
L. B. Mek said:
have you heard the song \'broken glass\' by talib kweli?
in which a small town, Venus
meets, harsh fate
in that unfair
of ambition\'s, city strife
in the face of callous, ill-fate..
\'Dreams shattered like broken glass
Press ignore it and your hopes get broken fast
You complain for the life you supposed to have
But when you try to make plans, god is known to laugh\'..
(if you get a sec, check it out
there\'s a thread between your words
and his lyrics - well maybe
at least, I think?
or that\'s just my distorted reading
of your wonderful poetry)
lol
May 19th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
have you heard the song \'broken glass\' by talib kweli?
in which a small town, Venus
meets, harsh fate
in that unfair
of ambition\'s, city strife
in the face of callous, ill-fate..
\'Dreams shattered like broken glass
Press ignore it and your hopes get broken fast
You complain for the life you supposed to have
But when you try to make plans, god is known to laugh\'..
(if you get a sec, check it out
there\'s a thread between your words
and his lyrics - well maybe
at least, I think?
or that\'s just my distorted reading
of your wonderful poetry)
lol
May 19th, 2022 04:58
Agent:B
L. B. Mek said:
\'B for Blindfolded..
don\'t get it twisted
its Ignorance: by design
as
our everyday reality
and secrecy, as our agent
of choice
giving us enough, room
to act all bewildered and offended
in the face of Truth...\'
lol
there\'s so much depth, to your ink
dear Poet
May 16th, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'B for Blindfolded..
don\'t get it twisted
its Ignorance: by design
as
our everyday reality
and secrecy, as our agent
of choice
giving us enough, room
to act all bewildered and offended
in the face of Truth...\'
lol
there\'s so much depth, to your ink
dear Poet
May 16th, 2022 06:09
H.E.I.D.I.
L. B. Mek said:
Helplessly
Enraptured
Infatuated,
Daringly
Initiated...
(and so their story, begins..)
funtastic! dear Poet
thank you
May 16th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
Helplessly
Enraptured
Infatuated,
Daringly
Initiated...
(and so their story, begins..)
funtastic! dear Poet
thank you
May 16th, 2022 04:50
N.A.N.
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
N.A.N.
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write \'ewwwww!\' but luckily I saw your comments box. Phew!
May 14th, 2022 21:27
S.M.O.K.E.
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldnt\'ve of said it better myself. Smoking is a literal death sentence.
May 13th, 2022 08:21
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldnt\'ve of said it better myself. Smoking is a literal death sentence.
May 13th, 2022 08:21
S.M.O.K.E.
L. B. Mek said:
Koncurt
of
Koncious
Klemency
Ceen
to
UnKorC
Kreativity\'s
Ceeness..
lost, to imagination\'s smog
as our escapist, moody
Smoke...
(always enjoy your bold
creativity
write-on! brotha from anotha)
May 13th, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
Koncurt
of
Koncious
Klemency
Ceen
to
UnKorC
Kreativity\'s
Ceeness..
lost, to imagination\'s smog
as our escapist, moody
Smoke...
(always enjoy your bold
creativity
write-on! brotha from anotha)
May 13th, 2022 04:22
On Electric Avenue
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Bless U 4 Saying So, Fellow Poet. lol
May 11th, 2022 16:24
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Bless U 4 Saying So, Fellow Poet. lol
May 11th, 2022 16:24
Princess:Mermaiden
L. B. Mek said:
if you find her, drop a word
brotha
let her sister, swim my way
my way
way!
so she can make my life\'s waters, sway
way
my way!
lol
May 9th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
if you find her, drop a word
brotha
let her sister, swim my way
my way
way!
so she can make my life\'s waters, sway
way
my way!
lol
May 9th, 2022 05:42
Yin/Yang Theory (Current Thoughtstream)
L. B. Mek said:
The late Great! \'MF Doom\'
alive and well, in our little MPS
more power to you brother
say it like you see it
no holds barred, Poetry
at its eloquent, extreme..
\'Cram 4 The Final Final.\'
4 Eva! till that Finale
song:
\'Sometimes he rhyme quick, sometimes he rhyme slow
Or vice versa
Whip up a slice of nice verse pie
Hit it on the first try
Villain: the worst guy
Spot hot tracks like spot a pair of fat asses
Shots of the scotch from out of square shot glasses
And he won\'t stop \'til he got the masses
And show \'em what they know not through flows of hot molasses
Do it like the robot to headspin to boogaloo
Took a few minutes to convince the average bug-a-boo
It\'s ugly, like look at you
It\'s a damn shame
Just remember ALL CAPS when you spell the man name
And you know it like a poet...\'
May 5th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
The late Great! \'MF Doom\'
alive and well, in our little MPS
more power to you brother
say it like you see it
no holds barred, Poetry
at its eloquent, extreme..
\'Cram 4 The Final Final.\'
4 Eva! till that Finale
song:
\'Sometimes he rhyme quick, sometimes he rhyme slow
Or vice versa
Whip up a slice of nice verse pie
Hit it on the first try
Villain: the worst guy
Spot hot tracks like spot a pair of fat asses
Shots of the scotch from out of square shot glasses
And he won\'t stop \'til he got the masses
And show \'em what they know not through flows of hot molasses
Do it like the robot to headspin to boogaloo
Took a few minutes to convince the average bug-a-boo
It\'s ugly, like look at you
It\'s a damn shame
Just remember ALL CAPS when you spell the man name
And you know it like a poet...\'
May 5th, 2022 05:45
F.A.L.L.
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderful Jerry! I always love your acrostics, they\'re so clever and witty. Stay safe!
April 29th, 2022 10:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderful Jerry! I always love your acrostics, they\'re so clever and witty. Stay safe!
April 29th, 2022 10:29
Valkyrie
L. B. Mek said:
ain\'t it though?!
(your author\'s comment)..
maybe I\'ll get tickets
to a H.E.R. concert
and
she\'ll be waiting, hair
all in a flurry
shaking it, like her momma
gave her curves, an expiry date
and her heart, beats
to a \'Pantieless & Braless.\' rhythm
of free flowing, choices in life
and we\'ll, together
\'Toast 40\'s Or Champagnes 2 Her Splendid.\'
(Brilliant!, dear Poet)
April 25th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
ain\'t it though?!
(your author\'s comment)..
maybe I\'ll get tickets
to a H.E.R. concert
and
she\'ll be waiting, hair
all in a flurry
shaking it, like her momma
gave her curves, an expiry date
and her heart, beats
to a \'Pantieless & Braless.\' rhythm
of free flowing, choices in life
and we\'ll, together
\'Toast 40\'s Or Champagnes 2 Her Splendid.\'
(Brilliant!, dear Poet)
April 25th, 2022 06:28
P.O.W.E.R.
L. B. Mek said:
\'our modernity
is the majority, poor
building
the shoddy houses
of the minority, rich
and calling it progress
for earning barely 10%
of their creations, worth..\'
POWER, indeed!
(another one that hit home
thank you, dear poet)
April 21st, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'our modernity
is the majority, poor
building
the shoddy houses
of the minority, rich
and calling it progress
for earning barely 10%
of their creations, worth..\'
POWER, indeed!
(another one that hit home
thank you, dear poet)
April 21st, 2022 04:44
R.O.L.L.
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m going to try and pen something,
titled:
\'in Regard to Lamentations
for our Love\'s, Disregard\'
thank you for sparking my imagination
once again, dear poet
April 19th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m going to try and pen something,
titled:
\'in Regard to Lamentations
for our Love\'s, Disregard\'
thank you for sparking my imagination
once again, dear poet
April 19th, 2022 04:57
L.A.I.R.
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
This is very good, living alone in reality is better than living in a busy dream...Easter Blessings!
tchau...Cassia
April 17th, 2022 10:22
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
This is very good, living alone in reality is better than living in a busy dream...Easter Blessings!
tchau...Cassia
April 17th, 2022 10:22
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
U R Entirely Right, My Good Reader. I Thank U, Most Kindly. Luck & Blessings On Your Every Endeavor, My Friend.
April 15th, 2022 15:54
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
U R Entirely Right, My Good Reader. I Thank U, Most Kindly. Luck & Blessings On Your Every Endeavor, My Friend.
April 15th, 2022 15:54
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
yes!! May 2022 be a total revival
from the ashes and smoke
we are awaken in infinite survival
tchau....Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 14:52
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Jerry
yes!! May 2022 be a total revival
from the ashes and smoke
we are awaken in infinite survival
tchau....Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 14:52
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Again, 4 Reading, Mr. Mek. I Just Put The Poems 2gether From There I Leave It 2 Whatever Your Thoughts Conspire On. U Got My Pleasant Message Already. I\'m Always Appreciative Of Your Everpoetic Responses & Only Send U A Multitude Of Proper Blessings.
April 15th, 2022 09:48
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Thanks, Again, 4 Reading, Mr. Mek. I Just Put The Poems 2gether From There I Leave It 2 Whatever Your Thoughts Conspire On. U Got My Pleasant Message Already. I\'m Always Appreciative Of Your Everpoetic Responses & Only Send U A Multitude Of Proper Blessings.
April 15th, 2022 09:48
Revival \'22 (Random Thought)
L. B. Mek said:
if only
Orpheus and Eurydice
hadn\'t looked back
and that accursed Sun, hadn\'t
appeared so untimely, bright..
lol
\'if, and when\'
a starting line
\'stop-gap\', trapping
to our dreams..
(an intriguing read, as ever
a lot went over my head, especially that title
but as always, there was enough
for me to engage with and appreciate..
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
April 15th, 2022 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
if only
Orpheus and Eurydice
hadn\'t looked back
and that accursed Sun, hadn\'t
appeared so untimely, bright..
lol
\'if, and when\'
a starting line
\'stop-gap\', trapping
to our dreams..
(an intriguing read, as ever
a lot went over my head, especially that title
but as always, there was enough
for me to engage with and appreciate..
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
April 15th, 2022 04:20
On
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
My Friend & Fellow Poet, I\'m N The Spirit Again 4 Having Been Able 2 Touch U So Deeply. The Things We Say While We Live Where We Live. Your Response Is The Dopest Indeed. lol
April 14th, 2022 09:37
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
My Friend & Fellow Poet, I\'m N The Spirit Again 4 Having Been Able 2 Touch U So Deeply. The Things We Say While We Live Where We Live. Your Response Is The Dopest Indeed. lol
April 14th, 2022 09:37
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