Comments received on poems by AnAlpaca
Merry Christmas?
Draven said:
Nicely written. I agree with yellowrose - just another day
December 27th, 2021 04:30
Draven said:
Nicely written. I agree with yellowrose - just another day
December 27th, 2021 04:30
Merry Christmas?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It may be Christmas but with those of us with problems / sadness … it’s just another day ,
I’ve had a rubbish day .. meant to be enjoyable isn’t it
A good poem )
December 25th, 2021 16:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It may be Christmas but with those of us with problems / sadness … it’s just another day ,
I’ve had a rubbish day .. meant to be enjoyable isn’t it
A good poem )
December 25th, 2021 16:43
The End
Draven said:
This is wonderfully written Alpaca. You\'ve conveyed such dread but rounded it up really well at the end.
December 25th, 2021 06:04
Draven said:
This is wonderfully written Alpaca. You\'ve conveyed such dread but rounded it up really well at the end.
December 25th, 2021 06:04
The End
James Michael said:
The ending brings this well written poem together incredibly well. Walking into the sun at the end of life corresponds with many beliefs.
Possibly changing ‘to be gained’ to, to gain, would be a better fit. It would match the rhyming of the other lines.
December 24th, 2021 20:02
James Michael said:
The ending brings this well written poem together incredibly well. Walking into the sun at the end of life corresponds with many beliefs.
Possibly changing ‘to be gained’ to, to gain, would be a better fit. It would match the rhyming of the other lines.
December 24th, 2021 20:02
Dear Love
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s another side to that pain
years later, and if you\'re still searching
you\'ll be hoping, you could still remember
what it felt like, to be hurt by love..
so I advise you, young poet
don\'t waste too much time
on being angry, search
for the next opportunity
try to move on, endlessly
fear the day
when love is but a mirage
and your feeling\'s are numb...
thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s another side to that pain
years later, and if you\'re still searching
you\'ll be hoping, you could still remember
what it felt like, to be hurt by love..
so I advise you, young poet
don\'t waste too much time
on being angry, search
for the next opportunity
try to move on, endlessly
fear the day
when love is but a mirage
and your feeling\'s are numb...
thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2021 04:36
Not Today
Lorna said:
Yes continuing on but slight wish to follow him no? I\'ve felt that.... good shorty.....
December 12th, 2021 06:05
Lorna said:
Yes continuing on but slight wish to follow him no? I\'ve felt that.... good shorty.....
December 12th, 2021 06:05
Not Today
woundedheart said:
Very dramatic poem the imagery and subject matter and indeed we all have said not today at least once in our lives
December 11th, 2021 13:16
woundedheart said:
Very dramatic poem the imagery and subject matter and indeed we all have said not today at least once in our lives
December 11th, 2021 13:16
Not Today
Draven said:
Excellent Poem. And very powerful message of continuing on.
December 11th, 2021 13:08
Draven said:
Excellent Poem. And very powerful message of continuing on.
December 11th, 2021 13:08
Rejection
screaming goat. said:
I really like this one! Great rhyme and rhythm, great job! And, rejection is tough, but I promise you will get over it. I did.
December 10th, 2021 15:29
screaming goat. said:
I really like this one! Great rhyme and rhythm, great job! And, rejection is tough, but I promise you will get over it. I did.
December 10th, 2021 15:29
Alone
woundedheart said:
A tape replaying. .. Love that line the way memories are remembered. A very bittersweet poem but written with feeling.
December 9th, 2021 10:54
woundedheart said:
A tape replaying. .. Love that line the way memories are remembered. A very bittersweet poem but written with feeling.
December 9th, 2021 10:54
Rant
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy
how many words we have to say
while alone with our thought\'s
yet how inarticulate we feel
while trying to get them across
to someone, we once were convinced
was our gifted soulmate in life...
(grab hold to something real
and find an avenue for release
then just hold on: hold on
with every ounce of sanity
you can muster,
remember, there are worse experiences
in this chaotically indifferent, existence...
Hold on!
December 9th, 2021 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy
how many words we have to say
while alone with our thought\'s
yet how inarticulate we feel
while trying to get them across
to someone, we once were convinced
was our gifted soulmate in life...
(grab hold to something real
and find an avenue for release
then just hold on: hold on
with every ounce of sanity
you can muster,
remember, there are worse experiences
in this chaotically indifferent, existence...
Hold on!
December 9th, 2021 04:19
Handyman
dusk arising said:
You can do all these things for somebody but.... whether it has the desired effect or not is largely out of your hands..... go gentle on both of you.
December 7th, 2021 16:09
dusk arising said:
You can do all these things for somebody but.... whether it has the desired effect or not is largely out of your hands..... go gentle on both of you.
December 7th, 2021 16:09
Handyman
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words , nice ! 🙂
December 7th, 2021 12:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words , nice ! 🙂
December 7th, 2021 12:47
The Family\'s Lie
Draven said:
Thank you for sharing this story with us. These are some strong and very relatable words. xx
December 6th, 2021 19:15
Draven said:
Thank you for sharing this story with us. These are some strong and very relatable words. xx
December 6th, 2021 19:15
Blank
melellendixon said:
Very relatable. Describes such a situation very well...like a constant sting that only gets worse. You have excellent word choice.
December 6th, 2021 11:07
melellendixon said:
Very relatable. Describes such a situation very well...like a constant sting that only gets worse. You have excellent word choice.
December 6th, 2021 11:07
Blank
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to empty your mind, and before you know it, you\'re back.
December 6th, 2021 10:56
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to empty your mind, and before you know it, you\'re back.
December 6th, 2021 10:56
Lost Soul
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad writing but nicely expressed
December 4th, 2021 13:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad writing but nicely expressed
December 4th, 2021 13:26
Tears
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Poet !! Nice one. I too did write about the Tears, pls check my poem on TEARS .. :)
December 2nd, 2021 12:13
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Poet !! Nice one. I too did write about the Tears, pls check my poem on TEARS .. :)
December 2nd, 2021 12:13
Spring\'s Song
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice refreshing One Poet !! Really got me fresh !! :)
December 1st, 2021 08:50
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice refreshing One Poet !! Really got me fresh !! :)
December 1st, 2021 08:50
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