Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Romp (acrostic)
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
A great Acrostic!! π―
Got flashbacks from
days gone by! π³
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
November 12th, 2024 15:08
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
A great Acrostic!! π―
Got flashbacks from
days gone by! π³
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
November 12th, 2024 15:08
Romp (acrostic)
David Wakeling said:
Short and sweet. It sums up childhood. Its a wonder we survived
November 12th, 2024 15:05
David Wakeling said:
Short and sweet. It sums up childhood. Its a wonder we survived
November 12th, 2024 15:05
Differences
FrasMac said:
Clever and thought provoking juxtapositions, makes for mental gymnastics in the reader.
November 12th, 2024 12:44
FrasMac said:
Clever and thought provoking juxtapositions, makes for mental gymnastics in the reader.
November 12th, 2024 12:44
Differences
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Soren. Works on so many levels.
November 12th, 2024 10:44
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Soren. Works on so many levels.
November 12th, 2024 10:44
Romp (acrostic)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful acrostic my friend that rings true of many a romp in my childhood years! Well done! πΉπ
November 12th, 2024 07:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful acrostic my friend that rings true of many a romp in my childhood years! Well done! πΉπ
November 12th, 2024 07:07
Romp (acrostic)
arqios said:
Not to mention the thick or cut lips and cauliflower ears!
November 12th, 2024 05:34
arqios said:
Not to mention the thick or cut lips and cauliflower ears!
November 12th, 2024 05:34
Romp (acrostic)
Neville said:
and did we listen .. nah\' not on your nelly ..
November 12th, 2024 04:45
Neville said:
and did we listen .. nah\' not on your nelly ..
November 12th, 2024 04:45
Differences
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites do attract in many cases soren.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites do attract in many cases soren.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:14
Differences
Thad Wilk said:
So many changes in this
World π their be!! π±
Sooo thought provoking, π€
fantastic imagery!!! π―
Best regards my friend! βοΈ. Thad
November 11th, 2024 20:51
Thad Wilk said:
So many changes in this
World π their be!! π±
Sooo thought provoking, π€
fantastic imagery!!! π―
Best regards my friend! βοΈ. Thad
November 11th, 2024 20:51
Differences
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP, so beautiful she says to herself, not knowing she attracts the opposite - flies! lol. Well, I feed her garbage from the sewers, so that\'s why there are flies around her! lol. It\'s all true this, ya know. heehee.
November 11th, 2024 12:39
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP, so beautiful she says to herself, not knowing she attracts the opposite - flies! lol. Well, I feed her garbage from the sewers, so that\'s why there are flies around her! lol. It\'s all true this, ya know. heehee.
November 11th, 2024 12:39
Differences
Cassie58 said:
The state of the world as is. Some great imagery here to reflect the differences. So nicely illustrated.
November 11th, 2024 08:21
Cassie58 said:
The state of the world as is. Some great imagery here to reflect the differences. So nicely illustrated.
November 11th, 2024 08:21
Differences
arqios said:
What a mash up of images and symbols! A feast to revel inβ¦. A poem not to be taken too lightly!
November 11th, 2024 05:38
arqios said:
What a mash up of images and symbols! A feast to revel inβ¦. A poem not to be taken too lightly!
November 11th, 2024 05:38
Differences
Neville said:
I suspect many of those differences are a sign of the times rather than just tricks of the light .. but well worth noting .. Neville
November 11th, 2024 04:59
Neville said:
I suspect many of those differences are a sign of the times rather than just tricks of the light .. but well worth noting .. Neville
November 11th, 2024 04:59
Differences
Teddy.15 said:
I see so many things in here from cultural difference to opposites attracting, the world feels much like a square peg in a round hole right now, so much to reflect on. Always a pleasure Sir. πΉ
November 11th, 2024 04:53
Teddy.15 said:
I see so many things in here from cultural difference to opposites attracting, the world feels much like a square peg in a round hole right now, so much to reflect on. Always a pleasure Sir. πΉ
November 11th, 2024 04:53
Hidden (it is what it is)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren may we all avoid that sin.
Andy
November 11th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren may we all avoid that sin.
Andy
November 11th, 2024 02:25
Hidden (it is what it is)
Neville said:
This is really quite brilliant .. and serves as yet another reminder of why I first fell in love with this craft .. Neville
November 11th, 2024 01:58
Neville said:
This is really quite brilliant .. and serves as yet another reminder of why I first fell in love with this craft .. Neville
November 11th, 2024 01:58
Hidden (it is what it is)
arqios said:
All that makes us human, bound and discredited.
November 10th, 2024 17:05
arqios said:
All that makes us human, bound and discredited.
November 10th, 2024 17:05
Hidden (it is what it is)
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent powerful and a huge statement for all who seek freedom πΉ
November 10th, 2024 06:37
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent powerful and a huge statement for all who seek freedom πΉ
November 10th, 2024 06:37
Whispers
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary imagery, a dark and delicious write dearest sorrenbarret πΉ whispers indeed. π€
November 9th, 2024 09:39
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary imagery, a dark and delicious write dearest sorrenbarret πΉ whispers indeed. π€
November 9th, 2024 09:39
Whispers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
βThoughts written in dream\'s dark inkβ love this line and the whole poem! Well done my friend!
November 9th, 2024 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
βThoughts written in dream\'s dark inkβ love this line and the whole poem! Well done my friend!
November 9th, 2024 08:45
Glass prison
Neville said:
I like the second half of todays gift so very much .. indeed, it is really quite memorable ..
November 9th, 2024 04:40
Neville said:
I like the second half of todays gift so very much .. indeed, it is really quite memorable ..
November 9th, 2024 04:40
Glass prison
Rin the Magnificent said:
Lovely poem, showing that there\'s a thin line betwixt admiring beauty - free in nature -
and watching it slowly decay, once pluck\'d for our private amusement, admiration, gratification.
One ought to ponder: do we really need to destroy beauty to admire its fleeting grace?
Wonderfully written, Soren. Take care!
November 9th, 2024 03:48
Rin the Magnificent said:
Lovely poem, showing that there\'s a thin line betwixt admiring beauty - free in nature -
and watching it slowly decay, once pluck\'d for our private amusement, admiration, gratification.
One ought to ponder: do we really need to destroy beauty to admire its fleeting grace?
Wonderfully written, Soren. Take care!
November 9th, 2024 03:48
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