Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Vampire of blame
2781 said:

For what the law could not do, in that it was weak through the flesh, God sending his own Son in the likeness of sinful flesh, and for sin, condemned sin in the flesh.

August 1st, 2024 06:16

Honey on toast
Goldfinch60 said:

Lovely emotive words soren.

Andy

August 1st, 2024 01:35

Nature god
Dan Williams said:

I sure wish I had some of your optimism. Todays world has me leaning more towards almost despair. Rats.

August 1st, 2024 00:07

Honey on toast
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Great imagery and use of the senses.

July 31st, 2024 21:31

Honey on toast
Thad Wilk said:

A splendid poem of
love a second time around!
Ones last love, unlike first, is
made of stronger stuff! YES! πŸ‘
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

July 31st, 2024 20:52

Rock, clay, mud and sand
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:

grandeur summoned forth within my mind after perusing the contents of the poem titled Rock, clay, mud and sand - quite a profound metrical and magical evocation of (my interpretation) the corporeal connection of man (singular or plural) part and parcel of Gaia, that living and breathing oblate spheroid lodged within the infinite abyss of space.

July 31st, 2024 17:40

Don\'t be afraid
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:

i just clicked on this poem of yours at random, and enjoy an author who favors brevity versus some other wordsmith very familiar to me, who tends to lapse into prolix - ha!

July 31st, 2024 17:18

Honey on toast
Bella Shepard said:

To have lived it, is to know. This is from the heart and so beautifully versed.

July 31st, 2024 13:48

Honey on toast
Neville said:


this is a fine (very) example of why
I first fell in love with poetry .. I simply don\'t think it can be faulted .. Neville

July 31st, 2024 12:32

Honey on toast
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, I really enjoyed your poem! The way you compare new love to colorful buds and then reflect on the passage of time with images like the \'rotted peach\' is so powerful. It captures that mix of excitement and nostalgia beautifully. I love how you show that while love can change, it also grows stronger through experiences. Thanks for sharing such a heartfelt piece!

July 31st, 2024 09:36

Honey on toast
orchidee said:

Ahh, more dinner suggestions for KP, and dessert too - Stuffed Beaver, and Rotted Peach for afters. heehee.

July 31st, 2024 09:34

Honey on toast
Cassie58 said:

So poetically penned sorenbarrett. Loved your expression here for second chances. Have a great day.

July 31st, 2024 07:30

Honey on toast
Teddy.15 said:

This is truly beautiful, love every line they emotionally swept me up, a second chance and such a wonderful end, my favourite subject ever. 🌹

July 31st, 2024 07:08

Nature god
Goldfinch60 said:

Very fine words soren.

Andy

July 31st, 2024 01:51

Nature god
Neville said:


I am sure there will be many who find these well placed words reassuring .. I personally like them for what they are .. a poem filled with optimism and hope .. as both a Buddhist and as an individual free thinker, who loves nature .. I feel compelled to try and cover all bases .. Neville πŸ‘

July 30th, 2024 11:56

Nature god
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful.put into poetic verse. What a captivating way to look at (god) more of an existence to nature. Stunning dear friend. 🌹

July 30th, 2024 09:53

Nature god
orchidee said:

It\'s KP that causes all the problems! Well, I blame her anyway, even if she doesn\'t cause them. lol.

July 30th, 2024 08:50

Nature god
Cassie58 said:

It is differing religions which cause the problem and the people who aren’t tolerant of others beliefs. I look to Mother Nature for solace. Beautifully penned sorenbarrett. Happy Tuesday.

July 30th, 2024 07:02

Nature god
2781 said:

He\'s definitely not the problem

July 30th, 2024 06:03

Comercial music
Thomas W Case said:

Right on.

July 29th, 2024 22:39

Comercial music
hzugman said:

Very nice write, Soren

July 29th, 2024 13:41

Comercial music
Thad Wilk said:

I love all kinds
of music 🎡🎢🎢
But, like you I can
do without that mass
produced plastic garbage! 😳
Terrific read indeed! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad

July 29th, 2024 13:13

Comercial music
Bella Shepard said:

Thank goodness for the playlist on my phone. What a miracle to hear the old beloved music with just a touch of my finger upon a screen, and I can take that miracle with me wherever I go. I get what you are saying my friend, great write!

July 29th, 2024 12:10

Comercial music
MendedFences27 said:

The popular music of today is rotten. I\'m just too old to figure out what the hell they are on about.
Your poem spells it out in spades. - Phil A.

July 29th, 2024 12:09

Comercial music
Neville said:


I must say I am a sixties seventies and early eighties kinda guy .. love prog rock and folk stuff have just got my ticket to go see Dylan in Bournemouth this November if he is still kicking .. not a great fan of some of this current suff .. like jazz tho\'

July 29th, 2024 10:54

Comercial music
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 29th, 2024 09:54

Comercial music
Mutley Ravishes said:

I was talking to a tree recently.
I asked a leaf it had forgotten the
Roots
It replied
\"Are you a loon?\"


July 29th, 2024 07:50

Wine for the ear
Teddy.15 said:

There\'s a smokey taste to this one and may I say beautifully captivating your reader, I wouldn\'t mind sitting on the porch trying a glass with you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

July 29th, 2024 02:50

Wine for the ear
Goldfinch60 said:

My preference is a full bodied Rioja soren.
Very good write.

Andy

July 29th, 2024 01:40

Wine for the ear
Dan Williams said:

\"harmony into dissonances\", nice. Well rounded.

July 28th, 2024 22:31



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