Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Hanging by fingernails
gray0328 said:
The lottery of the universe paints a vivid image. And for years of alcohol and drug abuse I spun the wheel of chance, only to land on the gift of sobriety which gives me the winning ticket. I really enjoy your work.
December 24th, 2023 13:56
gray0328 said:
The lottery of the universe paints a vivid image. And for years of alcohol and drug abuse I spun the wheel of chance, only to land on the gift of sobriety which gives me the winning ticket. I really enjoy your work.
December 24th, 2023 13:56
Rights that are left
gray0328 said:
We have the right to choose between hate and love and the choices determine our destiny. Fine write.
December 24th, 2023 13:44
gray0328 said:
We have the right to choose between hate and love and the choices determine our destiny. Fine write.
December 24th, 2023 13:44
Eye of a madman
gray0328 said:
Great opening lines. Your words inspire my words. Thank You
December 24th, 2023 13:34
gray0328 said:
Great opening lines. Your words inspire my words. Thank You
December 24th, 2023 13:34
A tooth ache
gray0328 said:
Great read I just took a Leatherman to one of my last teeth two days ago and if not for the dishrag in my mouth, I would have surely waken the dead. I really enjoy your poems. Merry Christmas 🎄
December 24th, 2023 13:31
gray0328 said:
Great read I just took a Leatherman to one of my last teeth two days ago and if not for the dishrag in my mouth, I would have surely waken the dead. I really enjoy your poems. Merry Christmas 🎄
December 24th, 2023 13:31
Age
Neville said:
I just popped in & wanted to send my seasonal best to you and yours, but having read todays offering I now also want to congratulate you on it before I have another senior moment .. Neville 🎅🎄🍒🍾⭐👍
December 24th, 2023 07:30
Neville said:
I just popped in & wanted to send my seasonal best to you and yours, but having read todays offering I now also want to congratulate you on it before I have another senior moment .. Neville 🎅🎄🍒🍾⭐👍
December 24th, 2023 07:30
Age
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Goldfinch and I on here are millions of years old, so we say - eccentric?! lol.
December 24th, 2023 05:42
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Goldfinch and I on here are millions of years old, so we say - eccentric?! lol.
December 24th, 2023 05:42
Na serra
orchidee said:
A fine write SB - reaches for \'translate\' option. lol.
Bit of French there?! Erm, was I any good at languages? Doh! heehee.
December 23rd, 2023 12:54
orchidee said:
A fine write SB - reaches for \'translate\' option. lol.
Bit of French there?! Erm, was I any good at languages? Doh! heehee.
December 23rd, 2023 12:54
The seed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those seeds of time are so meaningful to us.
Andy
December 23rd, 2023 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those seeds of time are so meaningful to us.
Andy
December 23rd, 2023 01:35
Strive on
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is full of joy soren so all will remember that.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart is full of joy soren so all will remember that.
Andy
December 21st, 2023 02:25
Questions of another type
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave I appreciate the review
December 19th, 2023 21:54
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Dave I appreciate the review
December 19th, 2023 21:54
Questions of another type
Doggerel Dave said:
Took more than one read to get into the core/cores of your meaning/meanings Soren. Images will stay for a goodly while.
December 19th, 2023 20:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Took more than one read to get into the core/cores of your meaning/meanings Soren. Images will stay for a goodly while.
December 19th, 2023 20:21
Surrender
Doggerel Dave said:
Could well make it to a tombstone, Soren. A polished piece on polished marble
December 12th, 2023 15:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Could well make it to a tombstone, Soren. A polished piece on polished marble
December 12th, 2023 15:59
A tooth ache
Natalie Gladmir said:
I\'m very sorry, but judging by these truthful lines, you suffered very much. Please take proper care of yourself. Health is a great treasure.
December 5th, 2023 16:08
Natalie Gladmir said:
I\'m very sorry, but judging by these truthful lines, you suffered very much. Please take proper care of yourself. Health is a great treasure.
December 5th, 2023 16:08
Ghost of a dream
Doggerel Dave said:
Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the desire for \'a savior with a slaves behavior\' was present. The need to exert power and control for its own sake as a desirable way of interacting with others brings forth some almost-homicidal tendencies in me.
Message wrapped up in plenty of poetic metaphor which took, for me, some unravelling but worth the effort, Soren.
December 2nd, 2023 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the desire for \'a savior with a slaves behavior\' was present. The need to exert power and control for its own sake as a desirable way of interacting with others brings forth some almost-homicidal tendencies in me.
Message wrapped up in plenty of poetic metaphor which took, for me, some unravelling but worth the effort, Soren.
December 2nd, 2023 19:19
Eye of a madman
joshi said:
What was yesterday is not today,
notes must change for the music to play...
this is definitely going on my insta and I will mention you in CAPS.
I was expecting this to be a perspective poem but whatever it is, in the end it\'s a work of art.
November 25th, 2023 09:24
joshi said:
What was yesterday is not today,
notes must change for the music to play...
this is definitely going on my insta and I will mention you in CAPS.
I was expecting this to be a perspective poem but whatever it is, in the end it\'s a work of art.
November 25th, 2023 09:24
Eye of a madman
arqios said:
It makes one think how costly this business really is! Thanks for sharing. Good to be reading you again.
November 25th, 2023 08:47
arqios said:
It makes one think how costly this business really is! Thanks for sharing. Good to be reading you again.
November 25th, 2023 08:47
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