Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Parting Wish
Neville said:
not only an impressive poem and plea but also significantly enjoyed .. Neville
July 25th, 2023 13:09
Neville said:
not only an impressive poem and plea but also significantly enjoyed .. Neville
July 25th, 2023 13:09
Parting Wish
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
It brought on a swoon, but it\'s me sheltered life! lol.
July 25th, 2023 08:27
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
It brought on a swoon, but it\'s me sheltered life! lol.
July 25th, 2023 08:27
Sewer of the soul
L. B. Mek said:
\'To the silver tongue do not rush\'
(each lie
we sale to ourselves, become
a corrosive taint on our souls)
Brilliant imagery, dear Poet
thank you!
July 24th, 2023 02:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'To the silver tongue do not rush\'
(each lie
we sale to ourselves, become
a corrosive taint on our souls)
Brilliant imagery, dear Poet
thank you!
July 24th, 2023 02:25
Nothing more
L. B. Mek said:
a fitting tribute to those
who invested their crimson ink
to inspire, generations..
(loved reading this my friend
your bring out
that poet geek in me) lol
July 24th, 2023 02:22
L. B. Mek said:
a fitting tribute to those
who invested their crimson ink
to inspire, generations..
(loved reading this my friend
your bring out
that poet geek in me) lol
July 24th, 2023 02:22
Sewer of the soul
orchidee said:
And - in olden days they chucked it out of their windows to the street below. Poor people who were passing by just then! Yuk!
July 24th, 2023 01:46
orchidee said:
And - in olden days they chucked it out of their windows to the street below. Poor people who were passing by just then! Yuk!
July 24th, 2023 01:46
Sewer of the soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren but my sewer was emptied a long time ago.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren but my sewer was emptied a long time ago.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:51
Nothing more
Bella Shepard said:
So eloquently written dear friend, in effortless, flowing rhyme from line to line. I love the way you have addressed each beloved poet in terms of such endearment, and humility. Your modesty does you justice, but your talent can\'t help but shine forth. This is truly a fav!
July 22nd, 2023 13:32
Bella Shepard said:
So eloquently written dear friend, in effortless, flowing rhyme from line to line. I love the way you have addressed each beloved poet in terms of such endearment, and humility. Your modesty does you justice, but your talent can\'t help but shine forth. This is truly a fav!
July 22nd, 2023 13:32
Lost on a mobius strip
sorenbarrett said:
L.B your comments stimulate more thought than the poem or writing it. Thank you so much for your poignant thoughts friend.
July 22nd, 2023 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
L.B your comments stimulate more thought than the poem or writing it. Thank you so much for your poignant thoughts friend.
July 22nd, 2023 10:10
Killing a Ladybug
L. B. Mek said:
well, science
in its purest form
is (like philosophy)
a, most humble
aspect of our species,
where we readily admit
we know nothing at all
and unchain our innate
inquisitive traits
(well then
if we\'re admitting
we don\'t know, what is
or what works, best
why not make a chain necklace
with a four leaf clover
and offer it to our lover
and then maybe we tattoo
a few rabbit foots
and horse shoes
all over us, you know
just in case, something
work to our favour..)
lol
a deeply meaningful concept
you\'ve introduced for our
contemplation treat, thank you!
oh wise Poet
a fun read as well, cheers 🍻
July 21st, 2023 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
well, science
in its purest form
is (like philosophy)
a, most humble
aspect of our species,
where we readily admit
we know nothing at all
and unchain our innate
inquisitive traits
(well then
if we\'re admitting
we don\'t know, what is
or what works, best
why not make a chain necklace
with a four leaf clover
and offer it to our lover
and then maybe we tattoo
a few rabbit foots
and horse shoes
all over us, you know
just in case, something
work to our favour..)
lol
a deeply meaningful concept
you\'ve introduced for our
contemplation treat, thank you!
oh wise Poet
a fun read as well, cheers 🍻
July 21st, 2023 03:35
Lost on a mobius strip
L. B. Mek said:
\'should one resist or go with the flow?
Truth a ghostly, unfathomable game\'
\'A single dimension, the rest an illusion\'
\'intuition evaporated into the turmoil of one\'s mind\'
(this searching poem, attesting
to that innate, fallible dichotomy
in selfhood\'s, mirages
we, who curate what to identify
as truth
believing our eyes, asserting dominance
on existence
while witnessing a millennium old spec of light
as the stars we\'re afforded in life)
Brilliant!
July 21st, 2023 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'should one resist or go with the flow?
Truth a ghostly, unfathomable game\'
\'A single dimension, the rest an illusion\'
\'intuition evaporated into the turmoil of one\'s mind\'
(this searching poem, attesting
to that innate, fallible dichotomy
in selfhood\'s, mirages
we, who curate what to identify
as truth
believing our eyes, asserting dominance
on existence
while witnessing a millennium old spec of light
as the stars we\'re afforded in life)
Brilliant!
July 21st, 2023 03:25
Two sides
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'I love the beauty in this world
all that is still clean
all the people that are kind
the new growth that is green\'
(who needs coffee or a red bull
when your words, gift us
wings,
recycling the ugly in our lives
to curate words of beauty
what an inspirational endeavour)
I read and learn my wise friend
July 21st, 2023 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'I love the beauty in this world
all that is still clean
all the people that are kind
the new growth that is green\'
(who needs coffee or a red bull
when your words, gift us
wings,
recycling the ugly in our lives
to curate words of beauty
what an inspirational endeavour)
I read and learn my wise friend
July 21st, 2023 03:18
Killing a Ladybug
Goldfinch60 said:
I am not that superstitious soren. My daughter was born 13th January, one of the houses that Joyce and I lived in was Number 13. Fine words though as there are many that are superstitious.
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I am not that superstitious soren. My daughter was born 13th January, one of the houses that Joyce and I lived in was Number 13. Fine words though as there are many that are superstitious.
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:39
Killing a Ladybug
orchidee said:
Now, nope, never carried a rabbit\'s foot. Not seen any 3-legged rabbits about, thankfully!
July 20th, 2023 11:42
orchidee said:
Now, nope, never carried a rabbit\'s foot. Not seen any 3-legged rabbits about, thankfully!
July 20th, 2023 11:42
Killing a Ladybug
orchidee said:
Now a black cat crossing me path was not lucky for me - I tripped over it and fell down a hole! Doh! (I made that up).
We have a black cat, and a tabby cat as pets.
It seems it differs in different countries - in some places it\'s unlucky.
Not that I believe in \'luck\' in rambling on here!
July 20th, 2023 11:41
orchidee said:
Now a black cat crossing me path was not lucky for me - I tripped over it and fell down a hole! Doh! (I made that up).
We have a black cat, and a tabby cat as pets.
It seems it differs in different countries - in some places it\'s unlucky.
Not that I believe in \'luck\' in rambling on here!
July 20th, 2023 11:41
Lost on a mobius strip
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Is that the same thing as those strips, where one twists it, then cuts it in half down the centre, and tapes it together to become twice as long but half the breadth? If you follow my ramblings. lol.
Yes, I studied a little of old Mobius.
July 20th, 2023 00:59
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Is that the same thing as those strips, where one twists it, then cuts it in half down the centre, and tapes it together to become twice as long but half the breadth? If you follow my ramblings. lol.
Yes, I studied a little of old Mobius.
July 20th, 2023 00:59
Lost on a mobius strip
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Soren, many things in life are becoming undistinguishable.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Soren, many things in life are becoming undistinguishable.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:36
Two sides
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally agree with you soren, nature is wonderful and will one day lead us all to a wonderful place in our lives.
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally agree with you soren, nature is wonderful and will one day lead us all to a wonderful place in our lives.
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:21
The Scarecrow
L. B. Mek said:
effortless flow
rich with vivid and unique imagery
a great write! dear Poet
\'unseasoned loneliness tastes bland
salted with a handful of dirt
the sun smelled cold
In the blackness of its light
came the music of silence\'
July 17th, 2023 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
effortless flow
rich with vivid and unique imagery
a great write! dear Poet
\'unseasoned loneliness tastes bland
salted with a handful of dirt
the sun smelled cold
In the blackness of its light
came the music of silence\'
July 17th, 2023 03:06
Broken Albatross
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
infuriated passion, purposed
to inform with poetic eloquence
(I read and learn)
July 17th, 2023 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
infuriated passion, purposed
to inform with poetic eloquence
(I read and learn)
July 17th, 2023 03:03
The Scarecrow
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time I did, I felt that I found a clue to the nature of the scarecrow\'s suffering, in the illusion of life. My interpretation may be off, but I loved the mental exercise. Thank you dear friend, you always keep me thinking.
July 16th, 2023 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time I did, I felt that I found a clue to the nature of the scarecrow\'s suffering, in the illusion of life. My interpretation may be off, but I loved the mental exercise. Thank you dear friend, you always keep me thinking.
July 16th, 2023 13:52
Broken Albatross
Bobby O said:
Atrocious atrocities always arrive abominably. It’s there though, that whole ignorance is bliss thing never lasted long enough for me,
Like Sly said, if you dance to the music you’re gonna have to pay to the piper.
July 15th, 2023 12:31
Bobby O said:
Atrocious atrocities always arrive abominably. It’s there though, that whole ignorance is bliss thing never lasted long enough for me,
Like Sly said, if you dance to the music you’re gonna have to pay to the piper.
July 15th, 2023 12:31
Fear\'s enslavement
L. B. Mek said:
fear is misunderstood
it isn\'t a weakness or a hurdle
it\'s a state of mind, designed
by our evolutionary prerequisite\'s
to help us survive, if we but learn
to utilise it, instead
of wagging a war against it..
(but what do i know)
Bella was right \'Powerful\', indeed
thank you! dear Poet
July 14th, 2023 02:23
L. B. Mek said:
fear is misunderstood
it isn\'t a weakness or a hurdle
it\'s a state of mind, designed
by our evolutionary prerequisite\'s
to help us survive, if we but learn
to utilise it, instead
of wagging a war against it..
(but what do i know)
Bella was right \'Powerful\', indeed
thank you! dear Poet
July 14th, 2023 02:23
Corps of a fool
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,\'
July 14th, 2023 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,\'
July 14th, 2023 02:16
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