Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fisherman\'s song
Neville said:
My mental muscle is thoughtfully exercised & lies aching for the next chapter & its own recovery .. Nice one too my friend .. Neville 😎👍
December 14th, 2024 12:58
Neville said:
My mental muscle is thoughtfully exercised & lies aching for the next chapter & its own recovery .. Nice one too my friend .. Neville 😎👍
December 14th, 2024 12:58
Fisherman\'s song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"It drips from a barbwire crown
A fisherman can never drown
Born of a virgin daughter
He walks on troubled water\"
Wow! These words cap off an already image-rich and deep poem. I know you are not a religious person, my dear friend Soren, but these words speak all levels of truth, especially spiritual truth. The Biblical references are masterful and serve the larger point of the poem without falling into the trap of being interpreted religiously...a fine line that you have walked with finesse, my friend. This is art...speaking truth...pure and simple. 🌹👏 Faved!
December 14th, 2024 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"It drips from a barbwire crown
A fisherman can never drown
Born of a virgin daughter
He walks on troubled water\"
Wow! These words cap off an already image-rich and deep poem. I know you are not a religious person, my dear friend Soren, but these words speak all levels of truth, especially spiritual truth. The Biblical references are masterful and serve the larger point of the poem without falling into the trap of being interpreted religiously...a fine line that you have walked with finesse, my friend. This is art...speaking truth...pure and simple. 🌹👏 Faved!
December 14th, 2024 10:51
Fisherman\'s song
Teddy.15 said:
Language so very carefully chosen for each image kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 14th, 2024 08:54
Teddy.15 said:
Language so very carefully chosen for each image kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 14th, 2024 08:54
Fisherman\'s song
rin said:
It was a thought-provoking poem. I may also need to consider what can be seen from the shadows of my thoughts.
December 14th, 2024 04:51
rin said:
It was a thought-provoking poem. I may also need to consider what can be seen from the shadows of my thoughts.
December 14th, 2024 04:51
Peace on earth, good will
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, trees are so important in our lives.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, trees are so important in our lives.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:44
Peace on earth, good will
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I literally had goosebumps. It effortlessly painted a picture of hope. Perhaps, that\'s the need of the day. Yes we are killing nature, but I have hope in her resilience
December 14th, 2024 01:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I literally had goosebumps. It effortlessly painted a picture of hope. Perhaps, that\'s the need of the day. Yes we are killing nature, but I have hope in her resilience
December 14th, 2024 01:35
Mist
Bobby O said:
Wish I had command of the metaphoric descriptive phrase the way you do - props my friend. Sun as a yolk - lets out thst in a tee shirt
December 14th, 2024 01:34
Bobby O said:
Wish I had command of the metaphoric descriptive phrase the way you do - props my friend. Sun as a yolk - lets out thst in a tee shirt
December 14th, 2024 01:34
Peace on earth, good will
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
thoughts and Christmas
wishes, that would be nice
if they came true! 👍
Eloquently penned my
friend thank you!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:15
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem
thoughts and Christmas
wishes, that would be nice
if they came true! 👍
Eloquently penned my
friend thank you!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 13th, 2024 23:15
Peace on earth, good will
Parisab said:
Ideals are fully received at this time (of the year:) May these loving messages be received …
December 13th, 2024 15:46
Parisab said:
Ideals are fully received at this time (of the year:) May these loving messages be received …
December 13th, 2024 15:46
Peace on earth, good will
Neville said:
it is a funny old world isn\'t it .. sad too much of the time .. I doubt that many of those who talk the talk really know what they are talking about or how their actions & inactions impact on others and indeed upon the world in general both directly & indirectly .. and I really do have a thing about trees 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 10:52
Neville said:
it is a funny old world isn\'t it .. sad too much of the time .. I doubt that many of those who talk the talk really know what they are talking about or how their actions & inactions impact on others and indeed upon the world in general both directly & indirectly .. and I really do have a thing about trees 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 10:52
Peace on earth, good will
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem that cuts the BS and gets straight to the truth. It\'s good will to \"men\"...but how can there be good will for humans if we fail to show good will to the earth? Provocative and true write! Well done, friend. 🌹👏
December 13th, 2024 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem that cuts the BS and gets straight to the truth. It\'s good will to \"men\"...but how can there be good will for humans if we fail to show good will to the earth? Provocative and true write! Well done, friend. 🌹👏
December 13th, 2024 08:18
Peace on earth, good will
Teddy.15 said:
I will definitely take a glass of this and say cheers 🥂 🌹 beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 13th, 2024 05:53
Teddy.15 said:
I will definitely take a glass of this and say cheers 🥂 🌹 beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 13th, 2024 05:53
Peace on earth, good will
orchidee said:
Some versions amend it to something like \'Peace on earth; good will to men with whom God is pleased\'. But He isn\'t pleased with those who go on sinning.
Yes, we should respect trees, etc. Many have been around longer than us, unless you\'re 100 million years old, like Goldfinch and I are! lol.
December 13th, 2024 03:23
orchidee said:
Some versions amend it to something like \'Peace on earth; good will to men with whom God is pleased\'. But He isn\'t pleased with those who go on sinning.
Yes, we should respect trees, etc. Many have been around longer than us, unless you\'re 100 million years old, like Goldfinch and I are! lol.
December 13th, 2024 03:23
Undeserving
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing those things that happen and slip passed us.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing those things that happen and slip passed us.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:16
Once there was a time
sheta said:
beautifully composed
i sounds like children
December 13th, 2024 00:15
sheta said:
beautifully composed
i sounds like children
December 13th, 2024 00:15
Undeserving
vicecream said:
I’ve always believed that the searing pain of guilt is itself the price to be paid for wrongdoing; that true justice is brought on by the internal process of feeling guilt, learning from it, and (hopefully) working through it into self forgiveness. It is human to make mistakes. Now what defines the future is how do we move forward from them
December 12th, 2024 09:32
vicecream said:
I’ve always believed that the searing pain of guilt is itself the price to be paid for wrongdoing; that true justice is brought on by the internal process of feeling guilt, learning from it, and (hopefully) working through it into self forgiveness. It is human to make mistakes. Now what defines the future is how do we move forward from them
December 12th, 2024 09:32
Undeserving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup…this is how it is! Contentment and happiness are ever fleeting, as expressed so poignantly in this poem! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup…this is how it is! Contentment and happiness are ever fleeting, as expressed so poignantly in this poem! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:07
Undeserving
Teddy.15 said:
What a way to see something fade. Memory or other kudos dear friend. 🌹
December 12th, 2024 04:11
Teddy.15 said:
What a way to see something fade. Memory or other kudos dear friend. 🌹
December 12th, 2024 04:11
Undeserving
Neville said:
Unfortunately, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles .. it\'s so unfair .. but not new, it just goes round and around .. perfect penmanship displayed .. Neville 👍
December 12th, 2024 04:10
Neville said:
Unfortunately, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles .. it\'s so unfair .. but not new, it just goes round and around .. perfect penmanship displayed .. Neville 👍
December 12th, 2024 04:10
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