Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Glory of naught
arqios said:
One of those reminiscences… and how they are so real and so fresh feeling, still!
December 29th, 2024 05:16
arqios said:
One of those reminiscences… and how they are so real and so fresh feeling, still!
December 29th, 2024 05:16
Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
But as each day lengthens
Within this New Year
The nights get shorter
And the shadows linger
Linger for life to be seen.
Andy
December 29th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
But as each day lengthens
Within this New Year
The nights get shorter
And the shadows linger
Linger for life to be seen.
Andy
December 29th, 2024 02:49
Shadows
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
December 28th, 2024 19:59
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
December 28th, 2024 19:59
Shadows
arqios said:
I myself have made acquaintance of existing in the grey, part shadow-part light. Very interesting to see that in poetry. Never fails to catch attention.
December 28th, 2024 19:02
arqios said:
I myself have made acquaintance of existing in the grey, part shadow-part light. Very interesting to see that in poetry. Never fails to catch attention.
December 28th, 2024 19:02
Shadows
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting rhyme technique. It is very much a song writer\'s style. All you need is a few guitar chords. Brilliant
December 28th, 2024 15:29
David Wakeling said:
This is an interesting rhyme technique. It is very much a song writer\'s style. All you need is a few guitar chords. Brilliant
December 28th, 2024 15:29
Shadows
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought provoking
write i must say!! 🤔
Have no fear, dark shadows
fade away
at the end of day! Love it!! 😍
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:45
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating and
thought provoking
write i must say!! 🤔
Have no fear, dark shadows
fade away
at the end of day! Love it!! 😍
Thanks for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:45
Shadows
Bella Shepard said:
A very enigmatic write my friend. It makes me wonder where the boundary of shadow ends and life begins, I think.
December 28th, 2024 12:24
Bella Shepard said:
A very enigmatic write my friend. It makes me wonder where the boundary of shadow ends and life begins, I think.
December 28th, 2024 12:24
Shadows
Neville said:
what\'s not to know, like or love there\'s nowt to fear in shadows no matter how dark nor deep .. .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 10:28
Neville said:
what\'s not to know, like or love there\'s nowt to fear in shadows no matter how dark nor deep .. .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 10:28
Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this poem Soren. In it, I love the the play with light and shadow, life and death, reflection and movement...each juxtaposition serving to give one a sense of the passage of time and, of course, the cyclical nature of existence. This is an existential poem at its best and the ending 🤯. Indeed, with the absence of light there are no shadows. Profoundly powerful my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this poem Soren. In it, I love the the play with light and shadow, life and death, reflection and movement...each juxtaposition serving to give one a sense of the passage of time and, of course, the cyclical nature of existence. This is an existential poem at its best and the ending 🤯. Indeed, with the absence of light there are no shadows. Profoundly powerful my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:21
Shadows
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to claim i fully understand it, but i have found it interesting and enjoyable to read, and will read again later.
December 28th, 2024 06:08
Poetic Licence said:
I am not going to claim i fully understand it, but i have found it interesting and enjoyable to read, and will read again later.
December 28th, 2024 06:08
Hole
Goldfinch60 said:
That well of love can have so many wonderful things down it soren.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That well of love can have so many wonderful things down it soren.
Andy
December 28th, 2024 02:46
Hole
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem
of a love 😍 gone astray! 😢
Artfully expressed my friend
in every way!!🏆
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:28
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching poem
of a love 😍 gone astray! 😢
Artfully expressed my friend
in every way!!🏆
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:28
Hole
David Wakeling said:
This is why I don\'t drink. I hate waking up in a dark well. Good poem
December 27th, 2024 18:32
David Wakeling said:
This is why I don\'t drink. I hate waking up in a dark well. Good poem
December 27th, 2024 18:32
Hole
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This...just wow! Soren! What a metaphor for love from the moment we fall onward...and, of course in that falling comes ups, downs, gains and loss...in unique proportions for each person...and, in the midst of it all, particularly loss, trying to make sense of it all and find, if any, inherent meaning to it all. That is what I get of out of this the first several reads, but my friend, this is a multifaceted masterpiece that rewards multiple reads and will, no doubt, invite multiple interpretations...all signaling the reader to what this is...a great piece of poetic art! Bravo, my friend! 🌹👏
December 27th, 2024 17:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This...just wow! Soren! What a metaphor for love from the moment we fall onward...and, of course in that falling comes ups, downs, gains and loss...in unique proportions for each person...and, in the midst of it all, particularly loss, trying to make sense of it all and find, if any, inherent meaning to it all. That is what I get of out of this the first several reads, but my friend, this is a multifaceted masterpiece that rewards multiple reads and will, no doubt, invite multiple interpretations...all signaling the reader to what this is...a great piece of poetic art! Bravo, my friend! 🌹👏
December 27th, 2024 17:30
Hole
Neville said:
it takes considerable skill to score a hole in one .. I\'m betting more occur by chance or by accident .. but are inevitably & nevertheless, more than welcome and celebrated to high heaven .. if that is where it is laid or set ... Neville
December 27th, 2024 11:51
Neville said:
it takes considerable skill to score a hole in one .. I\'m betting more occur by chance or by accident .. but are inevitably & nevertheless, more than welcome and celebrated to high heaven .. if that is where it is laid or set ... Neville
December 27th, 2024 11:51
Hole
arqios said:
It’s quite a challenge to search for personal meaning in the midst of despair. At least that’s the vibe I seem to be getting. And very moved by this poem as well!
December 27th, 2024 07:07
arqios said:
It’s quite a challenge to search for personal meaning in the midst of despair. At least that’s the vibe I seem to be getting. And very moved by this poem as well!
December 27th, 2024 07:07
Hole
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read this many times and each time I see different imagery, so very beautiful and what a metaphor on love, superb, top of the talent you are dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 27th, 2024 03:28
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read this many times and each time I see different imagery, so very beautiful and what a metaphor on love, superb, top of the talent you are dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 27th, 2024 03:28
Night
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always with us soren and can lead us into a wonderful life.
Andy
December 27th, 2024 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always with us soren and can lead us into a wonderful life.
Andy
December 27th, 2024 02:05
Night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. The night is both alluring and mysterious...capturing both our sense of adventure as well as danger. The two, as I see it, go hand in hand. In fact, there is much danger in life itself...and sometimes, truthfully, we are in most danger when we think we have things fully in view...in the light. The night, and darkness itself, keeps us grounded in how vulnerable we truly are...and that in, and of itself, can be very beautiful. Anyway, all musings coming forth out of reading a truly remarkable poem, Soren. Well, done! 🌹👏 Easy fave!
December 26th, 2024 16:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. The night is both alluring and mysterious...capturing both our sense of adventure as well as danger. The two, as I see it, go hand in hand. In fact, there is much danger in life itself...and sometimes, truthfully, we are in most danger when we think we have things fully in view...in the light. The night, and darkness itself, keeps us grounded in how vulnerable we truly are...and that in, and of itself, can be very beautiful. Anyway, all musings coming forth out of reading a truly remarkable poem, Soren. Well, done! 🌹👏 Easy fave!
December 26th, 2024 16:04
Night
David Wakeling said:
Wow now this is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout.real poetry. rhyme cadence metaphors it is all here.Well done
December 26th, 2024 15:04
David Wakeling said:
Wow now this is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout.real poetry. rhyme cadence metaphors it is all here.Well done
December 26th, 2024 15:04
Night
Poetic Licence said:
A Sultry Kiss of a Siren Breeze, what a wonderful line, enjoyed the read.
December 26th, 2024 06:12
Poetic Licence said:
A Sultry Kiss of a Siren Breeze, what a wonderful line, enjoyed the read.
December 26th, 2024 06:12
Night
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary imagery I saw it all, wow sorrenbarret you have out done your own poetry with this one, profound beauty. I am truly lucky that I see the magic of night most evenings here in Tuscany, I remember the first time I ever looked up at the sky at night, I almost fell over it was so beautiful 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:44
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary imagery I saw it all, wow sorrenbarret you have out done your own poetry with this one, profound beauty. I am truly lucky that I see the magic of night most evenings here in Tuscany, I remember the first time I ever looked up at the sky at night, I almost fell over it was so beautiful 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:44
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