Comments received on poems by Ok Waleed



Iโ€™m sorry Mariam
Dahlia said:

Nice work fellow writer
how far one individual can understand and love
but in groups, well that\'s another story....Dahlia

April 17th, 2022 15:08

Most hated
Crowns4Christ said:

So incredibly true, what is all of that if your not happy or respected, I would also rather be poor and respected

April 16th, 2022 19:24

Most hated
Dahlia said:

exactly ๐Ÿ™Œ
priorities in order
we won\'t even take
shit when we go 6ft under..
Dahlia

April 16th, 2022 17:22

To the baby makers
Dahlia said:

LOL well since you asked,
a positive contributor to society!
because gender only defines part of the total person...Dahlia

April 15th, 2022 18:48

As far as a country goes
Rozina said:

Yes I agree.

April 13th, 2022 18:06

As far as a country goes
Dahlia said:

YES that\'s thruth
good job poet
Dahlia

April 13th, 2022 08:39

As far as a country goes
Saxon Crow said:

Absolutely

April 13th, 2022 04:08

How Iโ€™m rich but still poor
Dahlia said:

Hey OK Waleed ๐Ÿ–
what you added makes it even better
So fucken cool..๐Ÿ˜Ž


April 11th, 2022 17:57

Would you believe me
Dahlia said:

hey truth is truth
well penned
Dahlia

April 6th, 2022 12:44

God loves me
Dahlia said:

well penned, I\'ll vote 4 it to be in the upcoming book because why the fuck not...enjoyed...Dahlia

April 5th, 2022 11:31

Ramadan on April 1st
dean langmuir said:

Contribute away,take care

April 1st, 2022 08:49

Sorry but not really
Rocky Lagou said:

I prefer to avoid philosophy and connect myself with the PRESENT. Like yeah, we\'re all going to die, SO WHAT? I\'m not afraid of death because I\'m not afraid of life. To live, in a sense, is to accept and welcome that you are going to die. It\'s all a cycle and my bones will reunite with the earth and sprout new life.

March 31st, 2022 08:31

Sorry but not really
Paul Bell said:

Faith is being a decent human being.
Being human on the other hand is a real balancing act at times.


March 31st, 2022 04:45

I wanna drink my kidney away
orchidee said:

Not very sensible attitude to life., nor to others - expecting wife to give away one kidney to you.

March 30th, 2022 11:49

Procrastination doesnโ€™t stop success
dean langmuir said:

I go sideways when I\'m normal too,then I\'m ok,take care

March 20th, 2022 13:01

The poet who hates to read
dean langmuir said:

Waleed,keep being you.Poem on

March 19th, 2022 17:44

The poet who hates to read
Crowns4Christ said:

Sometimes that\'s where we can write our best pieces.,you don\'t have to like to read to be great with words

March 19th, 2022 17:23

Baby Plato
bellflower said:

Good paradoxes you have placed. A worthy composition.

March 18th, 2022 11:56

Baby Plato
dean langmuir said:

Good write.

March 18th, 2022 11:35

Baby Plato
Rocky Lagou said:

\"I canโ€™t believe

The wisest

mind

we know of our time

said โ€œI do not know anythingโ€
You killed it with that line! With that assurance you will surely become the next big thing! โœจ


March 18th, 2022 11:05

Us vs Them
dean langmuir said:

Thanks Ok,I am finding it very intriguing how much a few words can say.poem on.

March 16th, 2022 16:26

Us vs Them
Crowns4Christ said:

What about great memories

March 16th, 2022 16:20

Doc wrote my wife a script
Rocky Lagou said:

That\'s rough. But sober driving is prudent so it\'s the best choice.

March 14th, 2022 10:41

Currently enjoying my morning
Rocky Lagou said:

What a life! With that determination you will make it far!

March 14th, 2022 08:35

Currently enjoying my morning
dean langmuir said:

As I drink on my lean,I did that after my toke and my coffee

March 13th, 2022 16:24

How can you hate me
jenny.g said:

Gives them something to chew on ๐Ÿ˜‚

March 10th, 2022 17:41

I donโ€™t remember writing yesterday
Rocky Lagou said:

Honestly though. Preach the message! ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ’–โœจ

March 2nd, 2022 13:13

Why do you listen
Rocky Lagou said:

I honestly love this! I\'ve l always been such an \"old soul\" and I feel I\'m precocious for my age (I\'m only 16.) This is gold! โœจ

March 1st, 2022 10:34

This is why permaculture works
Rozina said:

3 very short lines that tell a full story! Wonderful!

March 1st, 2022 01:00

This is why permaculture works
Rocky Lagou said:

I love the way your poetry rolls off the tongue. It\'s so lively and vivid. Btw the message of this poem is so profound. Like wow you really said it all with these 3 lines. The world is a reciprocal system all relying on each other in order to function properly. The way you metaphorized that with cooking is ingenious. Bravo! (Btw you said this is going to be a \"ukhai\" to you upcoming book, so is a \'ukhai\' your own abstract form a haiku?) ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ‘€

February 28th, 2022 14:23

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