Comments received on poems by Ok Waleed
Friends make therapy cheaper
Parisab said:
You’ve said it all in your three great stanzas
April 15th, 2023 22:03
Parisab said:
You’ve said it all in your three great stanzas
April 15th, 2023 22:03
We need more saunas
2781 said:
I love a sauna. Not sure about cooling off in the ice though.
April 14th, 2023 08:01
2781 said:
I love a sauna. Not sure about cooling off in the ice though.
April 14th, 2023 08:01
Allah Akbar
Parisab said:
Poetic take on the essence of God and what he intended for us-Well said dear poet
March 31st, 2023 23:35
Parisab said:
Poetic take on the essence of God and what he intended for us-Well said dear poet
March 31st, 2023 23:35
American Poop System
agocl said:
heartwarming. jokes aside, my brother is obssessed with moving to japan and this is one of the reasons he states
March 20th, 2023 11:59
agocl said:
heartwarming. jokes aside, my brother is obssessed with moving to japan and this is one of the reasons he states
March 20th, 2023 11:59
American Poop System
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice of topic. Waste disposal has become a luxury issue especially with the Japanese
March 19th, 2023 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice of topic. Waste disposal has become a luxury issue especially with the Japanese
March 19th, 2023 11:01
I want to pull away
orchidee said:
Sounds like you fell in a black hole - or about to? Doh!
March 18th, 2023 03:22
orchidee said:
Sounds like you fell in a black hole - or about to? Doh!
March 18th, 2023 03:22
The Burden of Poets
sorenbarrett said:
The only shame is if one is trying to keep these things a secret.
March 15th, 2023 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
The only shame is if one is trying to keep these things a secret.
March 15th, 2023 05:56
The Burden of Poets
orchidee said:
It\'s no shame to you, being one of the best poets - erm, so you say?! lol.
March 15th, 2023 03:15
orchidee said:
It\'s no shame to you, being one of the best poets - erm, so you say?! lol.
March 15th, 2023 03:15
I’ve finally put on a wedding ring
jewelwrites55 said:
\"How powerful is symbolism when it means nothing to me\" what a beautiful line, that is hauntingly true. Very well written. Also congratulations on marriage !
March 12th, 2023 12:30
jewelwrites55 said:
\"How powerful is symbolism when it means nothing to me\" what a beautiful line, that is hauntingly true. Very well written. Also congratulations on marriage !
March 12th, 2023 12:30
The Reply Button
Doggerel Dave said:
Perhaps you wouldn\'t mind telling me how I piss you off .... LOL.
(Editors note: Don\'t fall for this one - you have no idea what you are letting yourself in for!)
March 10th, 2023 22:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Perhaps you wouldn\'t mind telling me how I piss you off .... LOL.
(Editors note: Don\'t fall for this one - you have no idea what you are letting yourself in for!)
March 10th, 2023 22:06
The Reply Button
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t agree more, Ok.
I\'ll keep you in mind...😆 - no, seriously.
March 10th, 2023 21:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t agree more, Ok.
I\'ll keep you in mind...😆 - no, seriously.
March 10th, 2023 21:43
Selective outrage
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh I\'m far better than you - I hate human beings, but love myself...............!
March 8th, 2023 16:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh I\'m far better than you - I hate human beings, but love myself...............!
March 8th, 2023 16:52
What it takes to be great
orchidee said:
Now is it a haiku or not?! lol.
Has it got an iambic pentameters in it? - whatever they are?!
March 6th, 2023 03:27
orchidee said:
Now is it a haiku or not?! lol.
Has it got an iambic pentameters in it? - whatever they are?!
March 6th, 2023 03:27
What it takes to be great
Goldfinch60 said:
So better than I
You would truly like to be,
Well keep on trying.
This is the haiku format but it is more a senryu than haiku, haiku are about nature senryu are about human nature.
Andy
March 6th, 2023 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So better than I
You would truly like to be,
Well keep on trying.
This is the haiku format but it is more a senryu than haiku, haiku are about nature senryu are about human nature.
Andy
March 6th, 2023 02:52
The good life
orchidee said:
Ohh, you mean me! People bettering themselves to become more like me - number one! heehee.
Just call me Plato! lol.
March 5th, 2023 10:58
orchidee said:
Ohh, you mean me! People bettering themselves to become more like me - number one! heehee.
Just call me Plato! lol.
March 5th, 2023 10:58
Sometimes I get exhausted
rhmn_7 said:
Being damned to live is a great privilege, but not always a pleasant one of course..
March 5th, 2023 09:16
rhmn_7 said:
Being damned to live is a great privilege, but not always a pleasant one of course..
March 5th, 2023 09:16
Sometimes I get exhausted
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be there in your words Ok, just keep writing them and all will be well within you.
Andy
March 5th, 2023 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be there in your words Ok, just keep writing them and all will be well within you.
Andy
March 5th, 2023 02:58
Accepting my Flaws
2781 said:
I have trouble remembering what I just did, or what I am doing, sometimes. Moments are important to me.
March 4th, 2023 18:53
2781 said:
I have trouble remembering what I just did, or what I am doing, sometimes. Moments are important to me.
March 4th, 2023 18:53
Sometimes I get exhausted
2781 said:
Don\'t say you\'re damned, you\'re not meant to lie.
March 4th, 2023 16:05
2781 said:
Don\'t say you\'re damned, you\'re not meant to lie.
March 4th, 2023 16:05
Sometimes I get exhausted
orchidee said:
Ohh, but you said you were so great! Do great ones like you get headaches?! lol.
March 4th, 2023 12:50
orchidee said:
Ohh, but you said you were so great! Do great ones like you get headaches?! lol.
March 4th, 2023 12:50
I’ve Established Myself
orchidee said:
Yep, I expect you are all these things, but I won\'t fall down and worship ya. That\'s going too far! lol.
March 3rd, 2023 03:08
orchidee said:
Yep, I expect you are all these things, but I won\'t fall down and worship ya. That\'s going too far! lol.
March 3rd, 2023 03:08
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