Comments received on poems by Ok Waleed



I can care less about the news
Crowns4Christ said:

What we write and our prayers is our way of showing support for Ukraine and condemning the wicked

February 27th, 2022 14:59

To the people already developed
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! Yes! and...................................................................................................................................................................................................................Yes! Mental health must be a priority for development! Our world is currently engulfed in chaos and depression, but if we can see beyond that, and SHARE it with others as you imply in the poem, then we can surely pave the way to a better future. \"The Love Cycle!\" πŸ’–βœ¨βœ¨

February 25th, 2022 10:22

the fundamentals of depression
Rocky Lagou said:

Depression is definitely a self-destructive force. We need to to take your advice as a message for betterment. We can escape the cycle of torment! πŸ’–

February 24th, 2022 11:46

Good luck with that
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

I have a friend (multiple now that I consider it) that go through stuff like this a lot. Hell I felt it regularly, but just know that whatever is talking to you isn\'t worth listening to.

February 23rd, 2022 14:39

Good luck with that
Christina8 said:

This breaks my heart as I have written many a poem on my mental health issues also. This is a great poem and thank you for sharing it!

February 23rd, 2022 13:07

Poor Whale
Rocky Lagou said:

I honestly love the \"abstract\" style of your poetry and even You, like from what I\'ve read, as a person. I can relate to your creativity and I love your unique flair. (check my bio, I also strive to \"distort the norms\") Also does the title have a deeper meaning, or is it an arbitrary name? πŸ’–βœ¨

February 22nd, 2022 11:38

I prayed with a white man today but my hate still resides
Rocky Lagou said:

Period! I love this message to racial injustice! I also love the storyline. Can you please send me the link to your book? πŸ‘€βœ¨

February 18th, 2022 11:07

So I guess I won’t be getting rich off poetry
Rocky Lagou said:

Okay this was killer! I love this message, but to put it frank, most poets don\'t live off of poetry only. It\'s always a side hustle. But honestly if you contact major publishers and write the next Harry Potter, then you never know 🧐. At least know that your poetry is your art and that no matter how many people (or how much money) your gaining from it, it will always reflect who you truly are. So strive to write what you feel and what inspires you! πŸ’–βœ¨

February 18th, 2022 09:21

So I guess I won’t be getting rich off poetry
orchidee said:

Well, I don\'t know. You could contact some publishers, but there is a cost involved.
Erm, they won\'t like you calling it \'writing s**t\' though!

February 18th, 2022 03:50

Dedicated to My Poetic Side
Goldfinch60 said:

Poetry is such a wonderful release for us all and it is very much shown on this site.

Andy

February 9th, 2022 03:39

Dedicated to My Poetic Side
dusk arising said:

Much poetry comes from the need to release deep frustrations in our lives and is cathartic. This can be seen in practice every day here on MPS. A great place for alll kinds of expression.

February 9th, 2022 02:36

I’m a scientist research development person
Rocky Lagou said:

Okay. Love the title. And the short but direct statements. πŸ‘ Good job!

February 8th, 2022 10:07

The G Spot of Happiness
Rocky Lagou said:

\"mindlessness and mindfulness\" love that dichotomy.

February 7th, 2022 09:15

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