Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik



What do I wish for Thee?
Cassie58 said:

A love poem for someone who has captured the author!s heart. Nicely penned stanzas Max.

February 24th, 2024 16:53

Love Forms the Pillars
Nubianpoet said:

Thanks 4 sharing.👍🏾😉

February 13th, 2024 09:48

Happy New Year
Cassie58 said:

Chattering birds. How I’d love to know what they are saying. They always seem so joyful. Fourth stanza so positive in its message. Happy new year.

December 29th, 2023 10:45

Happy New Year
2781 said:

If only we understood...

December 29th, 2023 09:06

When my Heart Sings a Song
Cassie58 said:

The repetition works well here, as do the references to the natural environment. Your poem is lyrical ……nice. Thank you.

December 16th, 2023 01:45

Love and Light
Bella Shepard said:

To live life, to love, to experience, this poem is a cornucopia of delights from beginning to end. Thank you for this delight!

November 19th, 2023 12:47

Love and Light
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent

November 19th, 2023 09:06

Your Love or My Love
2781 said:

What is love?
It\'s a bit like what is truth?

November 15th, 2023 02:00

Deepavali, a Festival of Lights
2781 said:

I noticed the little Nepalese store I but my tea from have been celebrating.
Amongst the bright decorations and goats meat they had a box full of small clay crucible type terracotta bowls.
I should ask them what there for!
God searches the heart x.

November 10th, 2023 04:51

Move on O! Innocent heart,
Thomas W Case said:

great meter and rhyme.

October 29th, 2023 04:44

Dreamscape
2781 said:

I have noticed how fantasy often becomes fact.
I hope you find each other.

October 27th, 2023 23:18

Dreamscape
Thomas W Case said:

Great job. Dreams are great fodder for writing.

October 27th, 2023 10:09

Some Other Time, Some Other Universe
JuneM said:

I love this poem, its so relatable and amazing

October 25th, 2023 10:52

Some Other Time, Some Other Universe
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 25th, 2023 10:48

Like a Warm Summer Rain
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic.

October 23rd, 2023 03:51

The Inspiring Colours of the Flowers
Thomas W Case said:

Great imagery and use of language. You paint a vivid picture with words.

October 23rd, 2023 00:37

The Inspiring Colours of the Flowers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful poem .. engaging and lovely to read ))

October 22nd, 2023 13:08

If True Love Touches Your Heart
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely poem .. I liked the read 🙂

October 22nd, 2023 13:07

If True Love Touches Your Heart
rhmn_7 said:

We can find love everywhere, but still need to look for it, nice poem..

October 22nd, 2023 09:34

If True Love Touches Your Heart
2781 said:

Good to hear!
He is what he is.

October 22nd, 2023 08:07

If True Love Touches Your Heart
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

October 22nd, 2023 07:46

My Prime Number
Soman Ragavan said:

To : shruti14 (Mayekar)
Sonal Monhyung
Adventuressmalik
Vani Bhasin
Nicky
Illusions
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Please read my poem \"At Nizzamudin Bridge, a grieving father.\"
Soman Ragavan. 15.9.2023

September 15th, 2023 07:39

Dreams and Desires
Soman Ragavan said:

Please see the poem “The Indian soldiers” by “Nature” and my comments.
Soman Ragavan. 3 September, 2023 //
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September 3rd, 2023 07:34

Through the Thoughts we Yield
adventuressmalik said:

Thank You Ma\'am.

August 29th, 2023 03:26

Through the Thoughts we Yield
Bella Shepard said:

You give me much to ponder here dear friend. The senses, heart, mind, soul, dreams all inextricably intertwined. Beautifully expressed and much appreciated.

August 24th, 2023 14:38

Love\'s Essence will find its Way
Soman Ragavan said:


My comments on the poem \"Love’s essence will find its way” by adventuressmalik
The heart has a kingdom where the lanes are forlorn. Both friends and strangers are welcome. Indeed, the poetic heart is unable to discriminate against another human being : all are friends. “The greatness of humanity is not in being human, but in being humane.” Mahatma Gandhi (1869-1948).

“Rainbows, clouds and the winds convey
the painters paint and the musicians play…”
Here we find references to scenes of nature : rainbows, clouds and winds.

“(…) The love of a wide expanse, of the open sky and the wind, a keen eye for effects of light and colour, especially for the transformations worked by dawn and sunset, a power of seizing the more ethereal qualities of a landscape --- these characteristics he has in common with Shelley. (…)” \"SELECTIONS FROM THE POEMS OF BROWNING.\" (Edited with Introduction and Notes by H. A. Needham). London : Ginn and Company Ltd., (c. 1935). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.

“Love aligns the thoughts so random…” Love is the impulse that arranges randomness into art and beauty and creates the fabric upon which the poet embroiders.

“A joyous heart just wants to adore,
he wants to fly, he wants to soar….”

“Across the seas and mountains fold,
above clouds where dreams unfold.
In a distant land behind a castle’s moat…”

The poet is a fighter pilot : flying and soaring in the skies, over the seas, mountains, clouds.

“Even without a word or something to say,
love\'s subtle essence will find its way.”

Love has a language of its own, a subtle language.

“Oh, rank is good, and gold is fair,
And high and low mate ill;
But love has never known a law
Beyond its own sweet will !”
--J. G. Whittier (1807-1892)
Soman Ragavan. 14 August, 2023. //
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August 14th, 2023 07:17

Through the Thoughts we Yield
Nicole Kay said:

Beautiful!

August 12th, 2023 12:45

Ode to a Skygirl
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"Ode to a skygirl” by adventuressmalik
Skydiving is indeed a strange experience. We rise to heights and throw ourselves out, knowing that we are bound to fall to earth by the force of gravity. We leave all to gravity. Indeed, we have no choice. It must be an exhilarating experience. Thus, we explore not only on the ground and on the sea and on the seabed, but also in the air and even around the earth and in space. It’s the insatiable human wish to roam and discover, to find new frontiers and cross them.
Do read my poems on this site. I am posting a series of poems on India. When you click on Comments on my homepage, you can read the comments I have posted on various poets.
Best wishes to you.
Soman Ragavan. 12 August, 2023. //
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August 12th, 2023 08:14

Through the Thoughts we Yield
Soman Ragavan said:

Many words of wisdom in this poem. Soman Ragavan.

August 12th, 2023 06:34

Let me Wrap my Arms Around You
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely ! Love the repeat of the words ‘ let me wrap my … around you

With the mention of thoughts , songs , arms etc

Very beautiful



July 22nd, 2023 06:19

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