Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Heart of Lover
sorenbarrett said:
You authors note as good or better than the poem itself gets the fave. You have captured in essence what I call love and its rewards and costs. Nothing is free not even love.
February 27th, 2026 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
You authors note as good or better than the poem itself gets the fave. You have captured in essence what I call love and its rewards and costs. Nothing is free not even love.
February 27th, 2026 09:07
Like a Real Debonair
Priya Tomar said:
Nature acts without waiting for validation .
The poem reflects the philosophy of Karma Yoga
Well written ..
February 25th, 2026 10:22
Priya Tomar said:
Nature acts without waiting for validation .
The poem reflects the philosophy of Karma Yoga
Well written ..
February 25th, 2026 10:22
Like a Real Debonair
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem celebrates the beauty of nature and the interconnectedness of all living things, emphasizing the importance of good intentions, love, and appreciation for the world around us.
February 25th, 2026 08:37
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem celebrates the beauty of nature and the interconnectedness of all living things, emphasizing the importance of good intentions, love, and appreciation for the world around us.
February 25th, 2026 08:37
Like a Real Debonair
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a carefree feel to it that carries it like the breeze and it shines like the morning sun warming the heart. A most lovely write
February 25th, 2026 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a carefree feel to it that carries it like the breeze and it shines like the morning sun warming the heart. A most lovely write
February 25th, 2026 08:30
No Goodbye to Your Friend!
sorenbarrett said:
In this digital world I doubt that many people have ever had a real friend or even know what one is. Even in the old analog world it was quite rare maybe if you were lucky you might have one in a life time. Today friends are disposable like everything else throw aways to be replaced with something shiny and new like any relationship, children don\'t matter its an all me world. A wonderful write
February 24th, 2026 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
In this digital world I doubt that many people have ever had a real friend or even know what one is. Even in the old analog world it was quite rare maybe if you were lucky you might have one in a life time. Today friends are disposable like everything else throw aways to be replaced with something shiny and new like any relationship, children don\'t matter its an all me world. A wonderful write
February 24th, 2026 14:35
Fly Away Fly Away
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of love and its journey. Nicely written in rhyme it seems a song with the instrumental. Well done
February 20th, 2026 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of love and its journey. Nicely written in rhyme it seems a song with the instrumental. Well done
February 20th, 2026 06:42
A Magical Dream
sorenbarrett said:
There is a time and place for everything. It is not always where and when we want it. Nicely written
February 19th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
There is a time and place for everything. It is not always where and when we want it. Nicely written
February 19th, 2026 09:45
Lucky is the Man
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful poem with a wonderful message. So often we search for beauty on the surface and forget what is inside. A happy man is the one that can see beyond the surface. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it calls out to all those that search for happiness. Well written a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful poem with a wonderful message. So often we search for beauty on the surface and forget what is inside. A happy man is the one that can see beyond the surface. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it calls out to all those that search for happiness. Well written a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:48
A Stork and a Swan
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and cute a nice message about there being more to relationships than similarity. Loved it
February 8th, 2026 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and cute a nice message about there being more to relationships than similarity. Loved it
February 8th, 2026 15:31
Lucky is the Woman
sorenbarrett said:
Lucky indeed is anyone that finds a relationship in which they are content. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Lucky indeed is anyone that finds a relationship in which they are content. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:32
Children of Bharat
Friendship said:
Beautifully done, your poem seeks to instill a sense of pride and unity among readers, reminding them of their heritage and the importance of standing up for their beliefs and homeland in a world fraught with challenges. It serves as a call to arms for defenders of peace and justice, while also acknowledging the necessity of valor in protecting one’s culture.
February 6th, 2026 13:36
Friendship said:
Beautifully done, your poem seeks to instill a sense of pride and unity among readers, reminding them of their heritage and the importance of standing up for their beliefs and homeland in a world fraught with challenges. It serves as a call to arms for defenders of peace and justice, while also acknowledging the necessity of valor in protecting one’s culture.
February 6th, 2026 13:36
Children of Bharat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a people\'s spirit that is indominable. Some people even superior weapons can not defeat. A lovely poem with great imagery and portraying another culture. Lovely
February 6th, 2026 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a people\'s spirit that is indominable. Some people even superior weapons can not defeat. A lovely poem with great imagery and portraying another culture. Lovely
February 6th, 2026 09:25
Swansong
sorenbarrett said:
Full of colors and their metaphoric meaning this poem sings out for union making white light. Lovely
February 5th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Full of colors and their metaphoric meaning this poem sings out for union making white light. Lovely
February 5th, 2026 04:59
The Winter Fades and Spring is Born
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write in rhyme of changing seasons and the zodiac marking their way. Well done
January 11th, 2026 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write in rhyme of changing seasons and the zodiac marking their way. Well done
January 11th, 2026 13:01
The Winter Fades and Spring is Born
Priya Tomar said:
Forget the days once forlorn
Let the morrow of hope be born
Nights of mourning have gone
As the sun rises in Capricorn .
Hope whispers softly in your rhymes .
Nicely done .
January 11th, 2026 12:39
Priya Tomar said:
Forget the days once forlorn
Let the morrow of hope be born
Nights of mourning have gone
As the sun rises in Capricorn .
Hope whispers softly in your rhymes .
Nicely done .
January 11th, 2026 12:39
When the Maps are Torn
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy of good and bad of sharing and greed or savagery and sharing nicely presented and a fave
January 10th, 2026 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy of good and bad of sharing and greed or savagery and sharing nicely presented and a fave
January 10th, 2026 07:29
Across a Hundred Miles
sorenbarrett said:
Love over time and space. A lovely write that seems as much song as poem. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
Love over time and space. A lovely write that seems as much song as poem. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 10:38
The Unbreakable Fitness
sorenbarrett said:
Fitness is not just physical or even mental but extends to spirit and desire to commitment and values. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 14:02
sorenbarrett said:
Fitness is not just physical or even mental but extends to spirit and desire to commitment and values. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 14:02
A Bear and a Bunny
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic rhyme or perhaps a mating call. A fun write.
September 25th, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic rhyme or perhaps a mating call. A fun write.
September 25th, 2025 07:19
The Stork Song
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting bird to choose the bearer of life. A fun read in a song.
September 6th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting bird to choose the bearer of life. A fun read in a song.
September 6th, 2025 11:30
My Prime Number
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept in that a prime number is only divisible by 1 and itself and so such a couple can not be divided by anyone else. Lovely
August 18th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept in that a prime number is only divisible by 1 and itself and so such a couple can not be divided by anyone else. Lovely
August 18th, 2025 14:57
My Prime Number
Poetic Licence said:
You kinda get the feeling someone is smitten or in love!!, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:09
Poetic Licence said:
You kinda get the feeling someone is smitten or in love!!, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:09
The day is beginning to shine
sorenbarrett said:
This poem beams with hope. It speaks of the sun beginning to shine. A lovely message
May 29th, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem beams with hope. It speaks of the sun beginning to shine. A lovely message
May 29th, 2025 09:54
If You can Feel
Poetic Licence said:
The world needs more love urgently, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
The world needs more love urgently, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:21
If You can Feel
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and with a great message to look for a place of love. If we take love with us we won\'t have to look far. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and with a great message to look for a place of love. If we take love with us we won\'t have to look far. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 12:12
Easy Come Easy Go
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the flow of easy come easy go. A little luck can go a long way. An enjoyable fun read.
March 5th, 2025 18:33
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the flow of easy come easy go. A little luck can go a long way. An enjoyable fun read.
March 5th, 2025 18:33
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