Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik



Easy Come Easy Go
Cassie58 said:

Enjoyed the flow of easy come easy go. A little luck can go a long way. An enjoyable fun read.

March 5th, 2025 18:33

Easy Come Easy Go
Natalie Gladmir said:

Good rap. There is a grain of truth.

March 5th, 2025 17:18

Easy Come Easy Go
Poetic Licence said:

Some sound advice in an entertaining read

March 5th, 2025 14:10

Easy Come Easy Go
sorenbarrett said:

Luck is always a good friend. A fun poem with good flow

March 5th, 2025 13:40

So You Want to be Stronger !
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 28th, 2025 15:22

So You Want to be Stronger !
Cassie58 said:

Pushing our own boundaries. Using our own resources to build inner strength. Enjoyed the read adventuressmalik. Thanks for sharing.

January 28th, 2025 11:59

So You Want to be Stronger !
Poetic Licence said:

Highlighting the fact we have everything we need inside of us to achieve what we wish, just a case of thinking in a different way, enjoyed the read

January 28th, 2025 09:52

Friendship is always fun.....🛫
Poetic Licence said:

A very positive and uplifting write, on how friendship should be, enjoyed the read

January 6th, 2025 11:34

The Five Steps to True Love
Tony36 said:

Love it

December 31st, 2024 10:44

The Five Steps to True Love
Poetic Licence said:

A brilliant read, really enjoyed and Happy New Year to you and all

December 31st, 2024 06:29

The Five Steps to True Love
arqios said:

Loving this! Thanks for sharing and happy new year! 😊

December 31st, 2024 06:24

Sweet Dreams are Made of These.....
Bella Shepard said:

My smile grows broader with every stanza. On a cloud covered gloomy day outside my window, there are rays of sunshine peeking through, and I thank you for the happiness your poem evokes. Take care my friend!

December 23rd, 2024 13:47

Sweet Dreams are Made of These.....
Poetic Licence said:

Creating some lovely images as you read through the poem, enjoyed the read

December 23rd, 2024 11:54

Sweet Dreams are Made of These.....
Tony36 said:

Love it

December 23rd, 2024 10:42

A Pilot and his Love
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 20th, 2024 09:53

Happy Air Force Day
peet said:

Being in the sky among the clouds would be an exhilarating experience. The skies are always mysterious and expansive,

October 9th, 2024 10:23

We have a Boat to Row
isa kemmy said:

i love the poem , es ist super.

October 8th, 2024 12:57

We have a Boat to Row
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 8th, 2024 09:47

We have a Boat to Row
peet said:

Lovely poem.

October 8th, 2024 06:12

This Heart I can’t Sell
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

October 3rd, 2024 09:24

Waiting for the Rain
Cassie58 said:

You are welcome to some of our rain, we have plenty to share. Your poem tells me you have much heat and the environment is suffering the consequences. I hope you get some relief soon. Plenty of imagery in your lines and yes you entertained too. Have a lovely day.

June 2nd, 2024 01:28

I don\'t know what\'s Going On
Cassie58 said:

Living alongside is always the best option. Sadly some aren’t capable of doing that. I enjoyed reading your poem today. Have a happy Tuesday.

May 21st, 2024 04:08

Another Planet Another Life
2781 said:

Love can make pawns into queens.

May 19th, 2024 03:53

Another Planet Another Life
Poetic Dan said:

Wow what a trip this just took me on! I left home at 14! marriage with 2 kids by 20s, divorced by 30. Now remarried and my 4th child on the way!
I\'m so glad I never gave up on love! This was honestly the best emotional rush your soulful Words have just given me to feel I\'m truly grateful for where I am right now.


Thanks again for sharing
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write

May 19th, 2024 03:06

Catch - 22
orchidee said:

Good write A.
Would Catch 21 or Catch 23 be any better?! Or, oh I dunno , a random number, Catch 48764393956. heehee.

May 13th, 2024 07:51

We Exist Interconnected, not Detached
2781 said:

The original I Am, must be the solution.

April 28th, 2024 10:32

We Exist Interconnected, not Detached
mvvenkataraman said:

I love poems that are finely rhymed !

April 28th, 2024 09:09

I can be Your Zero Baby
2781 said:

Perfect.

April 9th, 2024 07:14

What do we do, What do we get in the Name of Love?
Bella Shepard said:

You have woven into this beautiful tapestry of words all that love can be, is and perchance will be, it is everlasting. Excellent!



ou have weaved into this beautiful tapestry of love all

April 8th, 2024 15:35

What do I wish for Thee?
Cassie58 said:

A love poem for someone who has captured the author!s heart. Nicely penned stanzas Max.

February 24th, 2024 16:53

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