Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Lucky is the Man
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful poem with a wonderful message. So often we search for beauty on the surface and forget what is inside. A happy man is the one that can see beyond the surface. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it calls out to all those that search for happiness. Well written a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful poem with a wonderful message. So often we search for beauty on the surface and forget what is inside. A happy man is the one that can see beyond the surface. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it calls out to all those that search for happiness. Well written a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:48
A Stork and a Swan
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and cute a nice message about there being more to relationships than similarity. Loved it
February 8th, 2026 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and cute a nice message about there being more to relationships than similarity. Loved it
February 8th, 2026 15:31
Lucky is the Woman
sorenbarrett said:
Lucky indeed is anyone that finds a relationship in which they are content. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Lucky indeed is anyone that finds a relationship in which they are content. Nicely written
February 7th, 2026 10:32
Children of Bharat
Friendship said:
Beautifully done, your poem seeks to instill a sense of pride and unity among readers, reminding them of their heritage and the importance of standing up for their beliefs and homeland in a world fraught with challenges. It serves as a call to arms for defenders of peace and justice, while also acknowledging the necessity of valor in protecting one’s culture.
February 6th, 2026 13:36
Friendship said:
Beautifully done, your poem seeks to instill a sense of pride and unity among readers, reminding them of their heritage and the importance of standing up for their beliefs and homeland in a world fraught with challenges. It serves as a call to arms for defenders of peace and justice, while also acknowledging the necessity of valor in protecting one’s culture.
February 6th, 2026 13:36
Children of Bharat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a people\'s spirit that is indominable. Some people even superior weapons can not defeat. A lovely poem with great imagery and portraying another culture. Lovely
February 6th, 2026 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a people\'s spirit that is indominable. Some people even superior weapons can not defeat. A lovely poem with great imagery and portraying another culture. Lovely
February 6th, 2026 09:25
Swansong
sorenbarrett said:
Full of colors and their metaphoric meaning this poem sings out for union making white light. Lovely
February 5th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Full of colors and their metaphoric meaning this poem sings out for union making white light. Lovely
February 5th, 2026 04:59
The Winter Fades and Spring is Born
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write in rhyme of changing seasons and the zodiac marking their way. Well done
January 11th, 2026 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write in rhyme of changing seasons and the zodiac marking their way. Well done
January 11th, 2026 13:01
The Winter Fades and Spring is Born
Priya Tomar said:
Forget the days once forlorn
Let the morrow of hope be born
Nights of mourning have gone
As the sun rises in Capricorn .
Hope whispers softly in your rhymes .
Nicely done .
January 11th, 2026 12:39
Priya Tomar said:
Forget the days once forlorn
Let the morrow of hope be born
Nights of mourning have gone
As the sun rises in Capricorn .
Hope whispers softly in your rhymes .
Nicely done .
January 11th, 2026 12:39
When the Maps are Torn
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy of good and bad of sharing and greed or savagery and sharing nicely presented and a fave
January 10th, 2026 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
A dichotomy of good and bad of sharing and greed or savagery and sharing nicely presented and a fave
January 10th, 2026 07:29
Across a Hundred Miles
sorenbarrett said:
Love over time and space. A lovely write that seems as much song as poem. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
Love over time and space. A lovely write that seems as much song as poem. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 10:38
The Unbreakable Fitness
sorenbarrett said:
Fitness is not just physical or even mental but extends to spirit and desire to commitment and values. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 14:02
sorenbarrett said:
Fitness is not just physical or even mental but extends to spirit and desire to commitment and values. A lovely write
December 21st, 2025 14:02
A Bear and a Bunny
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic rhyme or perhaps a mating call. A fun write.
September 25th, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic rhyme or perhaps a mating call. A fun write.
September 25th, 2025 07:19
The Stork Song
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting bird to choose the bearer of life. A fun read in a song.
September 6th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting bird to choose the bearer of life. A fun read in a song.
September 6th, 2025 11:30
My Prime Number
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept in that a prime number is only divisible by 1 and itself and so such a couple can not be divided by anyone else. Lovely
August 18th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept in that a prime number is only divisible by 1 and itself and so such a couple can not be divided by anyone else. Lovely
August 18th, 2025 14:57
My Prime Number
Poetic Licence said:
You kinda get the feeling someone is smitten or in love!!, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:09
Poetic Licence said:
You kinda get the feeling someone is smitten or in love!!, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:09
The day is beginning to shine
sorenbarrett said:
This poem beams with hope. It speaks of the sun beginning to shine. A lovely message
May 29th, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem beams with hope. It speaks of the sun beginning to shine. A lovely message
May 29th, 2025 09:54
If You can Feel
Poetic Licence said:
The world needs more love urgently, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
The world needs more love urgently, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:21
If You can Feel
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and with a great message to look for a place of love. If we take love with us we won\'t have to look far. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and with a great message to look for a place of love. If we take love with us we won\'t have to look far. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 12:12
Easy Come Easy Go
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the flow of easy come easy go. A little luck can go a long way. An enjoyable fun read.
March 5th, 2025 18:33
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the flow of easy come easy go. A little luck can go a long way. An enjoyable fun read.
March 5th, 2025 18:33
Easy Come Easy Go
Poetic Licence said:
Some sound advice in an entertaining read
March 5th, 2025 14:10
Poetic Licence said:
Some sound advice in an entertaining read
March 5th, 2025 14:10
Easy Come Easy Go
sorenbarrett said:
Luck is always a good friend. A fun poem with good flow
March 5th, 2025 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Luck is always a good friend. A fun poem with good flow
March 5th, 2025 13:40
So You Want to be Stronger !
Cassie58 said:
Pushing our own boundaries. Using our own resources to build inner strength. Enjoyed the read adventuressmalik. Thanks for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 11:59
Cassie58 said:
Pushing our own boundaries. Using our own resources to build inner strength. Enjoyed the read adventuressmalik. Thanks for sharing.
January 28th, 2025 11:59
So You Want to be Stronger !
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the fact we have everything we need inside of us to achieve what we wish, just a case of thinking in a different way, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 09:52
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the fact we have everything we need inside of us to achieve what we wish, just a case of thinking in a different way, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 09:52
Friendship is always fun.....🛫
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write, on how friendship should be, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 11:34
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive and uplifting write, on how friendship should be, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 11:34
The Five Steps to True Love
Poetic Licence said:
A brilliant read, really enjoyed and Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
A brilliant read, really enjoyed and Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 06:29
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