Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Happy Air Force Day
peet said:
Being in the sky among the clouds would be an exhilarating experience. The skies are always mysterious and expansive,
October 9th, 2024 10:23
peet said:
Being in the sky among the clouds would be an exhilarating experience. The skies are always mysterious and expansive,
October 9th, 2024 10:23
Waiting for the Rain
Cassie58 said:
You are welcome to some of our rain, we have plenty to share. Your poem tells me you have much heat and the environment is suffering the consequences. I hope you get some relief soon. Plenty of imagery in your lines and yes you entertained too. Have a lovely day.
June 2nd, 2024 01:28
Cassie58 said:
You are welcome to some of our rain, we have plenty to share. Your poem tells me you have much heat and the environment is suffering the consequences. I hope you get some relief soon. Plenty of imagery in your lines and yes you entertained too. Have a lovely day.
June 2nd, 2024 01:28
I don\'t know what\'s Going On
Cassie58 said:
Living alongside is always the best option. Sadly some aren’t capable of doing that. I enjoyed reading your poem today. Have a happy Tuesday.
May 21st, 2024 04:08
Cassie58 said:
Living alongside is always the best option. Sadly some aren’t capable of doing that. I enjoyed reading your poem today. Have a happy Tuesday.
May 21st, 2024 04:08
Another Planet Another Life
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a trip this just took me on! I left home at 14! marriage with 2 kids by 20s, divorced by 30. Now remarried and my 4th child on the way!
I\'m so glad I never gave up on love! This was honestly the best emotional rush your soulful Words have just given me to feel I\'m truly grateful for where I am right now.
Thanks again for sharing
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
May 19th, 2024 03:06
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a trip this just took me on! I left home at 14! marriage with 2 kids by 20s, divorced by 30. Now remarried and my 4th child on the way!
I\'m so glad I never gave up on love! This was honestly the best emotional rush your soulful Words have just given me to feel I\'m truly grateful for where I am right now.
Thanks again for sharing
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
May 19th, 2024 03:06
Catch - 22
orchidee said:
Good write A.
Would Catch 21 or Catch 23 be any better?! Or, oh I dunno , a random number, Catch 48764393956. heehee.
May 13th, 2024 07:51
orchidee said:
Good write A.
Would Catch 21 or Catch 23 be any better?! Or, oh I dunno , a random number, Catch 48764393956. heehee.
May 13th, 2024 07:51
We Exist Interconnected, not Detached
2781 said:
The original I Am, must be the solution.
April 28th, 2024 10:32
2781 said:
The original I Am, must be the solution.
April 28th, 2024 10:32
We Exist Interconnected, not Detached
mvvenkataraman said:
I love poems that are finely rhymed !
April 28th, 2024 09:09
mvvenkataraman said:
I love poems that are finely rhymed !
April 28th, 2024 09:09
What do we do, What do we get in the Name of Love?
Bella Shepard said:
You have woven into this beautiful tapestry of words all that love can be, is and perchance will be, it is everlasting. Excellent!
ou have weaved into this beautiful tapestry of love all
April 8th, 2024 15:35
Bella Shepard said:
You have woven into this beautiful tapestry of words all that love can be, is and perchance will be, it is everlasting. Excellent!
ou have weaved into this beautiful tapestry of love all
April 8th, 2024 15:35
What do I wish for Thee?
Cassie58 said:
A love poem for someone who has captured the author!s heart. Nicely penned stanzas Max.
February 24th, 2024 16:53
Cassie58 said:
A love poem for someone who has captured the author!s heart. Nicely penned stanzas Max.
February 24th, 2024 16:53
Happy New Year
Cassie58 said:
Chattering birds. How I’d love to know what they are saying. They always seem so joyful. Fourth stanza so positive in its message. Happy new year.
December 29th, 2023 10:45
Cassie58 said:
Chattering birds. How I’d love to know what they are saying. They always seem so joyful. Fourth stanza so positive in its message. Happy new year.
December 29th, 2023 10:45
When my Heart Sings a Song
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works well here, as do the references to the natural environment. Your poem is lyrical ……nice. Thank you.
December 16th, 2023 01:45
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works well here, as do the references to the natural environment. Your poem is lyrical ……nice. Thank you.
December 16th, 2023 01:45
Love and Light
Bella Shepard said:
To live life, to love, to experience, this poem is a cornucopia of delights from beginning to end. Thank you for this delight!
November 19th, 2023 12:47
Bella Shepard said:
To live life, to love, to experience, this poem is a cornucopia of delights from beginning to end. Thank you for this delight!
November 19th, 2023 12:47
Your Love or My Love
2781 said:
What is love?
It\'s a bit like what is truth?
November 15th, 2023 02:00
2781 said:
What is love?
It\'s a bit like what is truth?
November 15th, 2023 02:00
Deepavali, a Festival of Lights
2781 said:
I noticed the little Nepalese store I but my tea from have been celebrating.
Amongst the bright decorations and goats meat they had a box full of small clay crucible type terracotta bowls.
I should ask them what there for!
God searches the heart x.
November 10th, 2023 04:51
2781 said:
I noticed the little Nepalese store I but my tea from have been celebrating.
Amongst the bright decorations and goats meat they had a box full of small clay crucible type terracotta bowls.
I should ask them what there for!
God searches the heart x.
November 10th, 2023 04:51
Dreamscape
2781 said:
I have noticed how fantasy often becomes fact.
I hope you find each other.
October 27th, 2023 23:18
2781 said:
I have noticed how fantasy often becomes fact.
I hope you find each other.
October 27th, 2023 23:18
Dreamscape
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. Dreams are great fodder for writing.
October 27th, 2023 10:09
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. Dreams are great fodder for writing.
October 27th, 2023 10:09
Some Other Time, Some Other Universe
JuneM said:
I love this poem, its so relatable and amazing
October 25th, 2023 10:52
JuneM said:
I love this poem, its so relatable and amazing
October 25th, 2023 10:52
The Inspiring Colours of the Flowers
Thomas W Case said:
Great imagery and use of language. You paint a vivid picture with words.
October 23rd, 2023 00:37
Thomas W Case said:
Great imagery and use of language. You paint a vivid picture with words.
October 23rd, 2023 00:37
« Return to the profile of adventuressmalik
