Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik



If You can Feel
Poetic Licence said:

The world needs more love urgently, enjoyed the read

April 6th, 2025 02:21

If You can Feel
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely worded and with a great message to look for a place of love. If we take love with us we won\'t have to look far. Nicely done

April 5th, 2025 12:12

Easy Come Easy Go
Cassie58 said:

Enjoyed the flow of easy come easy go. A little luck can go a long way. An enjoyable fun read.

March 5th, 2025 18:33

Easy Come Easy Go
Natalie Gladmir said:

Good rap. There is a grain of truth.

March 5th, 2025 17:18

Easy Come Easy Go
Poetic Licence said:

Some sound advice in an entertaining read

March 5th, 2025 14:10

Easy Come Easy Go
sorenbarrett said:

Luck is always a good friend. A fun poem with good flow

March 5th, 2025 13:40

So You Want to be Stronger !
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 28th, 2025 15:22

So You Want to be Stronger !
Cassie58 said:

Pushing our own boundaries. Using our own resources to build inner strength. Enjoyed the read adventuressmalik. Thanks for sharing.

January 28th, 2025 11:59

So You Want to be Stronger !
Poetic Licence said:

Highlighting the fact we have everything we need inside of us to achieve what we wish, just a case of thinking in a different way, enjoyed the read

January 28th, 2025 09:52

Friendship is always fun.....🛫
Poetic Licence said:

A very positive and uplifting write, on how friendship should be, enjoyed the read

January 6th, 2025 11:34

The Five Steps to True Love
Tony36 said:

Love it

December 31st, 2024 10:44

The Five Steps to True Love
Poetic Licence said:

A brilliant read, really enjoyed and Happy New Year to you and all

December 31st, 2024 06:29

The Five Steps to True Love
arqios said:

Loving this! Thanks for sharing and happy new year! 😊

December 31st, 2024 06:24

Sweet Dreams are Made of These.....
Bella Shepard said:

My smile grows broader with every stanza. On a cloud covered gloomy day outside my window, there are rays of sunshine peeking through, and I thank you for the happiness your poem evokes. Take care my friend!

December 23rd, 2024 13:47

Sweet Dreams are Made of These.....
Poetic Licence said:

Creating some lovely images as you read through the poem, enjoyed the read

December 23rd, 2024 11:54

Sweet Dreams are Made of These.....
Tony36 said:

Love it

December 23rd, 2024 10:42

A Pilot and his Love
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 20th, 2024 09:53

Happy Air Force Day
peet said:

Being in the sky among the clouds would be an exhilarating experience. The skies are always mysterious and expansive,

October 9th, 2024 10:23

We have a Boat to Row
isa kemmy said:

i love the poem , es ist super.

October 8th, 2024 12:57

We have a Boat to Row
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 8th, 2024 09:47

We have a Boat to Row
peet said:

Lovely poem.

October 8th, 2024 06:12

This Heart I can’t Sell
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

October 3rd, 2024 09:24

Waiting for the Rain
Cassie58 said:

You are welcome to some of our rain, we have plenty to share. Your poem tells me you have much heat and the environment is suffering the consequences. I hope you get some relief soon. Plenty of imagery in your lines and yes you entertained too. Have a lovely day.

June 2nd, 2024 01:28

I don\'t know what\'s Going On
Cassie58 said:

Living alongside is always the best option. Sadly some aren’t capable of doing that. I enjoyed reading your poem today. Have a happy Tuesday.

May 21st, 2024 04:08

Another Planet Another Life
2781 said:

Love can make pawns into queens.

May 19th, 2024 03:53

Another Planet Another Life
Poetic Dan said:

Wow what a trip this just took me on! I left home at 14! marriage with 2 kids by 20s, divorced by 30. Now remarried and my 4th child on the way!
I\'m so glad I never gave up on love! This was honestly the best emotional rush your soulful Words have just given me to feel I\'m truly grateful for where I am right now.


Thanks again for sharing
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write

May 19th, 2024 03:06

Catch - 22
orchidee said:

Good write A.
Would Catch 21 or Catch 23 be any better?! Or, oh I dunno , a random number, Catch 48764393956. heehee.

May 13th, 2024 07:51

We Exist Interconnected, not Detached
2781 said:

The original I Am, must be the solution.

April 28th, 2024 10:32

We Exist Interconnected, not Detached
mvvenkataraman said:

I love poems that are finely rhymed !

April 28th, 2024 09:09

I can be Your Zero Baby
2781 said:

Perfect.

April 9th, 2024 07:14

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