Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
A Song in my Heart
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
February 25th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
February 25th, 2022 05:12
A Song in my Heart
Vamsi Sudha said:
All the best dear Poet !! Let the meet be a bliss and a milestone in life\'s journey !! Good one poet !!
February 25th, 2022 01:50
Vamsi Sudha said:
All the best dear Poet !! Let the meet be a bliss and a milestone in life\'s journey !! Good one poet !!
February 25th, 2022 01:50
A Skyful of Love
Bella Shepard said:
To experience love is the joy of being. Life has meaning and purpose, it encompasses your soul. You\'ve written something beautiful and heartfelt. Thank you!
February 22nd, 2022 16:08
Bella Shepard said:
To experience love is the joy of being. Life has meaning and purpose, it encompasses your soul. You\'ve written something beautiful and heartfelt. Thank you!
February 22nd, 2022 16:08
A Skyful of Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'No one remains last\'
(sadly
it doesn\'t seem that way at times
rather, it often feels like
there\'s a whole bunch of us, destined
to remain last, all in one line
waiting for a starting gun
to a race for life, that\'s finishing
without us...)
\'Let your compass point to love
and follow *its* pursuit
you shall find everything else
Let love be the conduit.\'
(poetry as soothing, as reading
Rumi, Kabir)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
a great write!
\'in my humble opinion\'
February 22nd, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'No one remains last\'
(sadly
it doesn\'t seem that way at times
rather, it often feels like
there\'s a whole bunch of us, destined
to remain last, all in one line
waiting for a starting gun
to a race for life, that\'s finishing
without us...)
\'Let your compass point to love
and follow *its* pursuit
you shall find everything else
Let love be the conduit.\'
(poetry as soothing, as reading
Rumi, Kabir)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
a great write!
\'in my humble opinion\'
February 22nd, 2022 04:58
A Skyful of Love
spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful
A sincere love
A selfless love
A sky full of love…
Well penned dear poet
February 22nd, 2022 02:32
spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful
A sincere love
A selfless love
A sky full of love…
Well penned dear poet
February 22nd, 2022 02:32
Path to the Heart
adventuressmalik said:
True. Love is a force that binds us, we just play roles, love is eternal.
February 22nd, 2022 01:16
adventuressmalik said:
True. Love is a force that binds us, we just play roles, love is eternal.
February 22nd, 2022 01:16
Path to the Heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'never, say never
just hope for another
and strive, to do better
if your gifted a new lover...\'
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 07:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'never, say never
just hope for another
and strive, to do better
if your gifted a new lover...\'
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 07:30
Hamlock of Separation
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was such a poem! Written with eloquence and beauty! Kudos to you! 💖
February 18th, 2022 11:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was such a poem! Written with eloquence and beauty! Kudos to you! 💖
February 18th, 2022 11:10
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