Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Universal Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Universal Love
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Universal Love
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Festival of Lights
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
The Like Attracts the Like
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
The Light of Hope
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
Debonair
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, nature in all her glory! Last stanza always to be remembered. Wonderful write my friend.
September 20th, 2022 10:33
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, nature in all her glory! Last stanza always to be remembered. Wonderful write my friend.
September 20th, 2022 10:33
Happiness and Beauty
Bella Shepard said:
Once again you outshine, my friend. I smiled all the way the way through this beautiful poem.
September 17th, 2022 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
Once again you outshine, my friend. I smiled all the way the way through this beautiful poem.
September 17th, 2022 12:28
Love and Learning Continue to Stay
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear poet, love and learning are the soul of being. Each stanza tugs at the heart and mind. Thank you for such inspiration, It\'s a fav!
September 7th, 2022 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear poet, love and learning are the soul of being. Each stanza tugs at the heart and mind. Thank you for such inspiration, It\'s a fav!
September 7th, 2022 14:15
True Love Reflects
shaa said:
Beautiful,so many lines that capture my attention strongly. Some like; \'The indomitable time will heal the mind\', \'Insecure souls may sense some harm\', \'Of the great love stories, there is a dearth\'. I enjoyed reading this
September 3rd, 2022 02:53
shaa said:
Beautiful,so many lines that capture my attention strongly. Some like; \'The indomitable time will heal the mind\', \'Insecure souls may sense some harm\', \'Of the great love stories, there is a dearth\'. I enjoyed reading this
September 3rd, 2022 02:53
Joyful Experiences
Bella Shepard said:
Thought is a precious seed to be cultivated and cared for, so beautifully expressed in your poem. What wonderful words to contemplate my friend.
August 22nd, 2022 14:40
Bella Shepard said:
Thought is a precious seed to be cultivated and cared for, so beautifully expressed in your poem. What wonderful words to contemplate my friend.
August 22nd, 2022 14:40
Joyful Experiences
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah how twisted humanity, can be
naming it \'theology\'
when free \'thought\' is outlawed
and blind obedience, a necessity...)
insightful as-ever, an illuminating read
thank you! dear Poet
I read and learn
August 22nd, 2022 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah how twisted humanity, can be
naming it \'theology\'
when free \'thought\' is outlawed
and blind obedience, a necessity...)
insightful as-ever, an illuminating read
thank you! dear Poet
I read and learn
August 22nd, 2022 04:23
Let it not be the Love
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of love to melt the heart, and fill the soul. Beautiful my friend.
August 13th, 2022 11:14
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of love to melt the heart, and fill the soul. Beautiful my friend.
August 13th, 2022 11:14
Is it Worth Feeling Sad?
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully penned my dear friend. Lovely flow and rhyming pattern, a joy to read aloud. I sometimes think that maybe sadness is there for a reason, that we may come to appreciate the happiness that much more.
August 12th, 2022 14:48
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully penned my dear friend. Lovely flow and rhyming pattern, a joy to read aloud. I sometimes think that maybe sadness is there for a reason, that we may come to appreciate the happiness that much more.
August 12th, 2022 14:48
Is it Worth Feeling Sad?
L. B. Mek said:
recognise your scenarios
and that constant, chaotic presence
of nature\'s, juxta-positioned duality
opposing our search for peace
in our day to day...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2022 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
recognise your scenarios
and that constant, chaotic presence
of nature\'s, juxta-positioned duality
opposing our search for peace
in our day to day...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2022 04:09
Experiences we take away
Bella Shepard said:
To love deeply, is a gift. To be able to express it as you have in this poem is to be treasured. Beautiful!
August 10th, 2022 15:29
Bella Shepard said:
To love deeply, is a gift. To be able to express it as you have in this poem is to be treasured. Beautiful!
August 10th, 2022 15:29
A Butterfly
Bella Shepard said:
Such a lovely analogy, I thank you for something so beautiful to brighten my day!
August 4th, 2022 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
Such a lovely analogy, I thank you for something so beautiful to brighten my day!
August 4th, 2022 14:03
Music of the Wilderness
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, such a lovely read
\'to you O friend my dear
and to all whom you belong.
With that aired the dove,
love to his distant friend.\'
June 28th, 2022 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, such a lovely read
\'to you O friend my dear
and to all whom you belong.
With that aired the dove,
love to his distant friend.\'
June 28th, 2022 03:33
Fetch me to thy Lap
L. B. Mek said:
contrasting..
why seek, what makes you feel
detached - a gap
away from laps, denied to
you
when you have pillows, to
choose from..
seek the comfort, you deserve
falling six feet, to find solace
is a warping of reality\'s, fallacy..
the inevitable, awaits
best to strive for what you, can
while you still have a chance..
(a good write
and yeah, I too feel the same
sometimes, but
it\'s a futile mindset
best
to shake ourselves free
and look forward again
if we spend too much time
looking at what\'s below us
we\'ll find our faces, smacking
into our horizon\'s)
June 27th, 2022 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
contrasting..
why seek, what makes you feel
detached - a gap
away from laps, denied to
you
when you have pillows, to
choose from..
seek the comfort, you deserve
falling six feet, to find solace
is a warping of reality\'s, fallacy..
the inevitable, awaits
best to strive for what you, can
while you still have a chance..
(a good write
and yeah, I too feel the same
sometimes, but
it\'s a futile mindset
best
to shake ourselves free
and look forward again
if we spend too much time
looking at what\'s below us
we\'ll find our faces, smacking
into our horizon\'s)
June 27th, 2022 04:52
Keeping Alive
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Jonas. I really wish if you could share it. Sending you a PM.
May 25th, 2022 17:55
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Jonas. I really wish if you could share it. Sending you a PM.
May 25th, 2022 17:55
Heart of Gold
Jonas Robinson said:
\"Keep me searchin for a heart o gold. And I\'m gettin old.\" I loved this. Thank you for sharing. Love is an amazing gift.
May 25th, 2022 17:00
Jonas Robinson said:
\"Keep me searchin for a heart o gold. And I\'m gettin old.\" I loved this. Thank you for sharing. Love is an amazing gift.
May 25th, 2022 17:00
Keeping Alive
Jonas Robinson said:
A good rhyme feels good this time of year, on an evening like this. Thank you for sharing. I, also have experienced a near death experience.
May 25th, 2022 16:13
Jonas Robinson said:
A good rhyme feels good this time of year, on an evening like this. Thank you for sharing. I, also have experienced a near death experience.
May 25th, 2022 16:13
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