Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Yellow Roses
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, sweet poem, I can see it on a Valentines card, much better though then what one pays big bucks for.
February 13th, 2023 15:17
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, sweet poem, I can see it on a Valentines card, much better though then what one pays big bucks for.
February 13th, 2023 15:17
Yellow Roses
Christina8 said:
Awww, that\'s a really sweet message. Great poem! Happy Valentines Day (tomorrow)
February 13th, 2023 10:57
Christina8 said:
Awww, that\'s a really sweet message. Great poem! Happy Valentines Day (tomorrow)
February 13th, 2023 10:57
Universal Love
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Universal Love
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Universal Love
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Festival of Lights
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
The Like Attracts the Like
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
The Light of Hope
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
Debonair
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, nature in all her glory! Last stanza always to be remembered. Wonderful write my friend.
September 20th, 2022 10:33
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, nature in all her glory! Last stanza always to be remembered. Wonderful write my friend.
September 20th, 2022 10:33
Happiness and Beauty
Bella Shepard said:
Once again you outshine, my friend. I smiled all the way the way through this beautiful poem.
September 17th, 2022 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
Once again you outshine, my friend. I smiled all the way the way through this beautiful poem.
September 17th, 2022 12:28
Love and Learning Continue to Stay
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear poet, love and learning are the soul of being. Each stanza tugs at the heart and mind. Thank you for such inspiration, It\'s a fav!
September 7th, 2022 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear poet, love and learning are the soul of being. Each stanza tugs at the heart and mind. Thank you for such inspiration, It\'s a fav!
September 7th, 2022 14:15
True Love Reflects
shaa said:
Beautiful,so many lines that capture my attention strongly. Some like; \'The indomitable time will heal the mind\', \'Insecure souls may sense some harm\', \'Of the great love stories, there is a dearth\'. I enjoyed reading this
September 3rd, 2022 02:53
shaa said:
Beautiful,so many lines that capture my attention strongly. Some like; \'The indomitable time will heal the mind\', \'Insecure souls may sense some harm\', \'Of the great love stories, there is a dearth\'. I enjoyed reading this
September 3rd, 2022 02:53
Joyful Experiences
Bella Shepard said:
Thought is a precious seed to be cultivated and cared for, so beautifully expressed in your poem. What wonderful words to contemplate my friend.
August 22nd, 2022 14:40
Bella Shepard said:
Thought is a precious seed to be cultivated and cared for, so beautifully expressed in your poem. What wonderful words to contemplate my friend.
August 22nd, 2022 14:40
Joyful Experiences
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah how twisted humanity, can be
naming it \'theology\'
when free \'thought\' is outlawed
and blind obedience, a necessity...)
insightful as-ever, an illuminating read
thank you! dear Poet
I read and learn
August 22nd, 2022 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah how twisted humanity, can be
naming it \'theology\'
when free \'thought\' is outlawed
and blind obedience, a necessity...)
insightful as-ever, an illuminating read
thank you! dear Poet
I read and learn
August 22nd, 2022 04:23
Let it not be the Love
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of love to melt the heart, and fill the soul. Beautiful my friend.
August 13th, 2022 11:14
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of love to melt the heart, and fill the soul. Beautiful my friend.
August 13th, 2022 11:14
Is it Worth Feeling Sad?
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully penned my dear friend. Lovely flow and rhyming pattern, a joy to read aloud. I sometimes think that maybe sadness is there for a reason, that we may come to appreciate the happiness that much more.
August 12th, 2022 14:48
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully penned my dear friend. Lovely flow and rhyming pattern, a joy to read aloud. I sometimes think that maybe sadness is there for a reason, that we may come to appreciate the happiness that much more.
August 12th, 2022 14:48
Is it Worth Feeling Sad?
L. B. Mek said:
recognise your scenarios
and that constant, chaotic presence
of nature\'s, juxta-positioned duality
opposing our search for peace
in our day to day...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2022 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
recognise your scenarios
and that constant, chaotic presence
of nature\'s, juxta-positioned duality
opposing our search for peace
in our day to day...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2022 04:09
Experiences we take away
Bella Shepard said:
To love deeply, is a gift. To be able to express it as you have in this poem is to be treasured. Beautiful!
August 10th, 2022 15:29
Bella Shepard said:
To love deeply, is a gift. To be able to express it as you have in this poem is to be treasured. Beautiful!
August 10th, 2022 15:29
A Butterfly
Bella Shepard said:
Such a lovely analogy, I thank you for something so beautiful to brighten my day!
August 4th, 2022 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
Such a lovely analogy, I thank you for something so beautiful to brighten my day!
August 4th, 2022 14:03
Music of the Wilderness
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, such a lovely read
\'to you O friend my dear
and to all whom you belong.
With that aired the dove,
love to his distant friend.\'
June 28th, 2022 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, such a lovely read
\'to you O friend my dear
and to all whom you belong.
With that aired the dove,
love to his distant friend.\'
June 28th, 2022 03:33
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