Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
What is Love?
Bobby O said:
We sure think differently on the subject. But aside from preconceptions I recognize the valid questions raised and was hoping more thoughts about how to deal w the questions were included.
April 10th, 2023 05:45
Bobby O said:
We sure think differently on the subject. But aside from preconceptions I recognize the valid questions raised and was hoping more thoughts about how to deal w the questions were included.
April 10th, 2023 05:45
What is Love?
2781 said:
The answer to love, is in the above.
I don\'t know what kind of love would be received from AI? They might look after your interests, If that was the case the heart would be lost. Cheers
April 10th, 2023 04:10
2781 said:
The answer to love, is in the above.
I don\'t know what kind of love would be received from AI? They might look after your interests, If that was the case the heart would be lost. Cheers
April 10th, 2023 04:10
You have the Right of Way
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is lovely, I\'m smiling as I read words that are so true. \"From what appears on the surface, the reality is much deeper.
The world may be sleepwalking,
but we must pursue our charter\", such words of wisdom and depth. You pierce the shield of superficiality and get to the heart of what is real, We must choose.
April 8th, 2023 13:18
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is lovely, I\'m smiling as I read words that are so true. \"From what appears on the surface, the reality is much deeper.
The world may be sleepwalking,
but we must pursue our charter\", such words of wisdom and depth. You pierce the shield of superficiality and get to the heart of what is real, We must choose.
April 8th, 2023 13:18
You have the Right of Way
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read, so empowering
theirs tangible meaning
in recognising, true worth of others
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 3rd, 2023 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read, so empowering
theirs tangible meaning
in recognising, true worth of others
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 3rd, 2023 05:10
The Colourful Holi
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I have seen videos of this celebration, and it has always seemed an expression of immense joy and commradery. Your second last stanza says it all \"we belong to the same source\". Thank you so much for sharing!
March 16th, 2023 15:34
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I have seen videos of this celebration, and it has always seemed an expression of immense joy and commradery. Your second last stanza says it all \"we belong to the same source\". Thank you so much for sharing!
March 16th, 2023 15:34
Slowly Enjoy the gift of Life
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautifully written dear friend and so very true. The gifts of life should be savored, that we may truly feel the universal love you so eloquently describe. This is a fav!
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday.
March 1st, 2023 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautifully written dear friend and so very true. The gifts of life should be savored, that we may truly feel the universal love you so eloquently describe. This is a fav!
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday.
March 1st, 2023 13:21
Yellow Roses
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, sweet poem, I can see it on a Valentines card, much better though then what one pays big bucks for.
February 13th, 2023 15:17
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, sweet poem, I can see it on a Valentines card, much better though then what one pays big bucks for.
February 13th, 2023 15:17
Yellow Roses
Christina8 said:
Awww, that\'s a really sweet message. Great poem! Happy Valentines Day (tomorrow)
February 13th, 2023 10:57
Christina8 said:
Awww, that\'s a really sweet message. Great poem! Happy Valentines Day (tomorrow)
February 13th, 2023 10:57
Universal Love
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Universal Love
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Universal Love
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Festival of Lights
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
The Like Attracts the Like
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
The Light of Hope
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
Debonair
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, nature in all her glory! Last stanza always to be remembered. Wonderful write my friend.
September 20th, 2022 10:33
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, nature in all her glory! Last stanza always to be remembered. Wonderful write my friend.
September 20th, 2022 10:33
Happiness and Beauty
Bella Shepard said:
Once again you outshine, my friend. I smiled all the way the way through this beautiful poem.
September 17th, 2022 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
Once again you outshine, my friend. I smiled all the way the way through this beautiful poem.
September 17th, 2022 12:28
Love and Learning Continue to Stay
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear poet, love and learning are the soul of being. Each stanza tugs at the heart and mind. Thank you for such inspiration, It\'s a fav!
September 7th, 2022 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear poet, love and learning are the soul of being. Each stanza tugs at the heart and mind. Thank you for such inspiration, It\'s a fav!
September 7th, 2022 14:15
True Love Reflects
shaa said:
Beautiful,so many lines that capture my attention strongly. Some like; \'The indomitable time will heal the mind\', \'Insecure souls may sense some harm\', \'Of the great love stories, there is a dearth\'. I enjoyed reading this
September 3rd, 2022 02:53
shaa said:
Beautiful,so many lines that capture my attention strongly. Some like; \'The indomitable time will heal the mind\', \'Insecure souls may sense some harm\', \'Of the great love stories, there is a dearth\'. I enjoyed reading this
September 3rd, 2022 02:53
Joyful Experiences
Bella Shepard said:
Thought is a precious seed to be cultivated and cared for, so beautifully expressed in your poem. What wonderful words to contemplate my friend.
August 22nd, 2022 14:40
Bella Shepard said:
Thought is a precious seed to be cultivated and cared for, so beautifully expressed in your poem. What wonderful words to contemplate my friend.
August 22nd, 2022 14:40
Joyful Experiences
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah how twisted humanity, can be
naming it \'theology\'
when free \'thought\' is outlawed
and blind obedience, a necessity...)
insightful as-ever, an illuminating read
thank you! dear Poet
I read and learn
August 22nd, 2022 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah how twisted humanity, can be
naming it \'theology\'
when free \'thought\' is outlawed
and blind obedience, a necessity...)
insightful as-ever, an illuminating read
thank you! dear Poet
I read and learn
August 22nd, 2022 04:23
Let it not be the Love
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of love to melt the heart, and fill the soul. Beautiful my friend.
August 13th, 2022 11:14
Bella Shepard said:
A poem of love to melt the heart, and fill the soul. Beautiful my friend.
August 13th, 2022 11:14
Is it Worth Feeling Sad?
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully penned my dear friend. Lovely flow and rhyming pattern, a joy to read aloud. I sometimes think that maybe sadness is there for a reason, that we may come to appreciate the happiness that much more.
August 12th, 2022 14:48
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully penned my dear friend. Lovely flow and rhyming pattern, a joy to read aloud. I sometimes think that maybe sadness is there for a reason, that we may come to appreciate the happiness that much more.
August 12th, 2022 14:48
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