Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
To Grow up and Grow Out
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this poem seems especially significant, given that I am 73 and have passed through these stages of life, with perhaps only one to go. I have watched as my grandchildren, who\'ve now reached adulthood, grew up and grew out. Your seventh stanza \"Cherishable moments...\" , a beautiful philosophy of life. A wonderful write my friend!
June 3rd, 2023 13:27
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this poem seems especially significant, given that I am 73 and have passed through these stages of life, with perhaps only one to go. I have watched as my grandchildren, who\'ve now reached adulthood, grew up and grew out. Your seventh stanza \"Cherishable moments...\" , a beautiful philosophy of life. A wonderful write my friend!
June 3rd, 2023 13:27
To Grow up and Grow Out
novaero said:
This beautiful poem reminds us that life is like a stage, where we play our parts with dramatic flair. We all desire joy, peace, and love, and perhaps a treasure trove of riches. But true wealth lies in happy memories and cherished moments. The mind works through association, growing fondness for what we dwell on. Letting go of attachments can be challenging, but as we grow and live in the present with grace, we create a divine life. Visualizing positive outcomes and leaving worries behind, our thoughts shape the future. 🌌🌺⌛✨
June 1st, 2023 04:46
novaero said:
This beautiful poem reminds us that life is like a stage, where we play our parts with dramatic flair. We all desire joy, peace, and love, and perhaps a treasure trove of riches. But true wealth lies in happy memories and cherished moments. The mind works through association, growing fondness for what we dwell on. Letting go of attachments can be challenging, but as we grow and live in the present with grace, we create a divine life. Visualizing positive outcomes and leaving worries behind, our thoughts shape the future. 🌌🌺⌛✨
June 1st, 2023 04:46
Let me Wrap my Arms Around You
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the necessary motivation Dear Maam! Indeed grateful.
May 29th, 2023 08:01
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the necessary motivation Dear Maam! Indeed grateful.
May 29th, 2023 08:01
Let me Wrap my Arms Around You
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is pure delight. I googled Soul Family and was completely intrigued by the concept. It is a wonderful thought that will stay with me, thank you dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 14:22
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is pure delight. I googled Soul Family and was completely intrigued by the concept. It is a wonderful thought that will stay with me, thank you dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 14:22
Sirens of Fascination
Bella Shepard said:
Two most powerful words in your final stanza, \"Universal Love\", speak to what should be at the heart of our existence. It encompasses everything we experience. Beautifully written!
April 15th, 2023 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Two most powerful words in your final stanza, \"Universal Love\", speak to what should be at the heart of our existence. It encompasses everything we experience. Beautifully written!
April 15th, 2023 13:52
What is Love?
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is so sublime! I adore your every stanza, it\'s as if each one builds more and more nuances to what the essence of love really is. It\'s so delightful, and that climactic ending, \"propels us to our goals,\" so wonderfully sums up our endeavors into love. Much love to you, dear poet!
April 14th, 2023 10:42
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is so sublime! I adore your every stanza, it\'s as if each one builds more and more nuances to what the essence of love really is. It\'s so delightful, and that climactic ending, \"propels us to our goals,\" so wonderfully sums up our endeavors into love. Much love to you, dear poet!
April 14th, 2023 10:42
What is Love?
Accidental Poet said:
Love is \"all of the above\", and I personally have experienced love at first sight. And she still to this day, almost 56 years later is the Queen of my heart. Expertly penned Sir. 👍
April 10th, 2023 10:27
Accidental Poet said:
Love is \"all of the above\", and I personally have experienced love at first sight. And she still to this day, almost 56 years later is the Queen of my heart. Expertly penned Sir. 👍
April 10th, 2023 10:27
What is Love?
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest poet you tackle the very essence of love in such divine rhyming verse. Life, death, love, the great mysteries of existence, and you have captured the mystery of love so beautifully in all of its manifestations, as we reach for something we know is wonderful, but can never quite explain. Love is the experience of \"being\", and your love shines through. These are treasured words you write, thank you dearest poet!
April 10th, 2023 08:47
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest poet you tackle the very essence of love in such divine rhyming verse. Life, death, love, the great mysteries of existence, and you have captured the mystery of love so beautifully in all of its manifestations, as we reach for something we know is wonderful, but can never quite explain. Love is the experience of \"being\", and your love shines through. These are treasured words you write, thank you dearest poet!
April 10th, 2023 08:47
What is Love?
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest poet you tackle the very essence of love in such divine rhyming verse. Life, death, love, the great mysteries of existence, and you have captured the mystery of love so beautifully in all of its manifestations, as we reach for something we know is wonderful, but can never quite explain. Love is the experience of \"being\", and your love shines through. These are treasured words you write, thank you dearest poet!
April 10th, 2023 08:46
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest poet you tackle the very essence of love in such divine rhyming verse. Life, death, love, the great mysteries of existence, and you have captured the mystery of love so beautifully in all of its manifestations, as we reach for something we know is wonderful, but can never quite explain. Love is the experience of \"being\", and your love shines through. These are treasured words you write, thank you dearest poet!
April 10th, 2023 08:46
What is Love?
Bobby O said:
We sure think differently on the subject. But aside from preconceptions I recognize the valid questions raised and was hoping more thoughts about how to deal w the questions were included.
April 10th, 2023 05:45
Bobby O said:
We sure think differently on the subject. But aside from preconceptions I recognize the valid questions raised and was hoping more thoughts about how to deal w the questions were included.
April 10th, 2023 05:45
What is Love?
2781 said:
The answer to love, is in the above.
I don\'t know what kind of love would be received from AI? They might look after your interests, If that was the case the heart would be lost. Cheers
April 10th, 2023 04:10
2781 said:
The answer to love, is in the above.
I don\'t know what kind of love would be received from AI? They might look after your interests, If that was the case the heart would be lost. Cheers
April 10th, 2023 04:10
You have the Right of Way
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is lovely, I\'m smiling as I read words that are so true. \"From what appears on the surface, the reality is much deeper.
The world may be sleepwalking,
but we must pursue our charter\", such words of wisdom and depth. You pierce the shield of superficiality and get to the heart of what is real, We must choose.
April 8th, 2023 13:18
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this is lovely, I\'m smiling as I read words that are so true. \"From what appears on the surface, the reality is much deeper.
The world may be sleepwalking,
but we must pursue our charter\", such words of wisdom and depth. You pierce the shield of superficiality and get to the heart of what is real, We must choose.
April 8th, 2023 13:18
You have the Right of Way
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read, so empowering
theirs tangible meaning
in recognising, true worth of others
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 3rd, 2023 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read, so empowering
theirs tangible meaning
in recognising, true worth of others
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 3rd, 2023 05:10
The Colourful Holi
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I have seen videos of this celebration, and it has always seemed an expression of immense joy and commradery. Your second last stanza says it all \"we belong to the same source\". Thank you so much for sharing!
March 16th, 2023 15:34
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend I have seen videos of this celebration, and it has always seemed an expression of immense joy and commradery. Your second last stanza says it all \"we belong to the same source\". Thank you so much for sharing!
March 16th, 2023 15:34
Slowly Enjoy the gift of Life
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautifully written dear friend and so very true. The gifts of life should be savored, that we may truly feel the universal love you so eloquently describe. This is a fav!
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday.
March 1st, 2023 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
This is beautifully written dear friend and so very true. The gifts of life should be savored, that we may truly feel the universal love you so eloquently describe. This is a fav!
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday.
March 1st, 2023 13:21
Yellow Roses
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, sweet poem, I can see it on a Valentines card, much better though then what one pays big bucks for.
February 13th, 2023 15:17
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, sweet poem, I can see it on a Valentines card, much better though then what one pays big bucks for.
February 13th, 2023 15:17
Yellow Roses
Christina8 said:
Awww, that\'s a really sweet message. Great poem! Happy Valentines Day (tomorrow)
February 13th, 2023 10:57
Christina8 said:
Awww, that\'s a really sweet message. Great poem! Happy Valentines Day (tomorrow)
February 13th, 2023 10:57
Universal Love
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely especially like the first verse ))
February 11th, 2023 12:24
Universal Love
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Bella Shepard said:
You have described the many facets of love in this poem, and brought them all together so beautifully in the final stanza. Just loved it!
February 4th, 2023 07:22
Universal Love
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Sakwa Franc said:
Wow! Nice work
\" One just need passion ... To shape soul expression \"
I love it
February 3rd, 2023 07:24
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
adventuressmalik said:
That\'s so nice that you related. I thought it may not matter to anyone but you noticed it. Thanks
October 31st, 2022 12:45
Golden Arrows: No 17 Squadron Indian Air Force
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
What a stunning tribute to a wonderful air force squadron, national pride at its finest. A great write my friend!
October 30th, 2022 14:14
Festival of Lights
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is a worded shower
of revitalising, sunray validation
to all who read/hear it
and choose to believe
they can count themselves
as \'one of the few.\'
thank you! dear Poet
what a beautiful thing to put out into the world
October 24th, 2022 04:35
The Like Attracts the Like
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
even if don\'t connect with your words on a theological level
that togetherness and oneness you promote makes this a memorable read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
October 21st, 2022 03:05
The Light of Hope
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
Bella Shepard said:
Hope will always spring eternal in our hearts my friend. A beautiful poem, much enjoyed.
September 29th, 2022 11:02
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