Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
The Universe has to Act
L. B. Mek said:
feeling helpless, is natural
but
convincing ourselves
we Are helpless, just
so we can take
that Nihilistic, easy way out
of questing, to make the best
of our lives
is what\'s, truly
Unforgivable, dear poet
fall, trip, skid, dive
feeling breathless, submerged
and overwhelmed, with it all
that\'s all: Natural
but
after taking time
to absorb our losses and hurt
be it
one knee, or handhold
at a time
we must, eventually
strive
to look up, at that dawning sky
and find
strength enough, from within
to smile...!
we must , at least try
\'onwards\'
climb, till our Time is done
and we can rest
devoid of regret!
March 29th, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
feeling helpless, is natural
but
convincing ourselves
we Are helpless, just
so we can take
that Nihilistic, easy way out
of questing, to make the best
of our lives
is what\'s, truly
Unforgivable, dear poet
fall, trip, skid, dive
feeling breathless, submerged
and overwhelmed, with it all
that\'s all: Natural
but
after taking time
to absorb our losses and hurt
be it
one knee, or handhold
at a time
we must, eventually
strive
to look up, at that dawning sky
and find
strength enough, from within
to smile...!
we must , at least try
\'onwards\'
climb, till our Time is done
and we can rest
devoid of regret!
March 29th, 2022 05:19
From Alpha to Omega
Rocky Lagou said:
It\'s true, some people are cold. Maybe we just need to cut people off when it\'s needed and move on.
March 28th, 2022 13:01
Rocky Lagou said:
It\'s true, some people are cold. Maybe we just need to cut people off when it\'s needed and move on.
March 28th, 2022 13:01
From Alpha to Omega
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, that line
\'A dear friend became impassive\'
changes the whole, pitch
why \'impassive\'?
makes us go back and re-read..
thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, that line
\'A dear friend became impassive\'
changes the whole, pitch
why \'impassive\'?
makes us go back and re-read..
thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 06:15
That\'s all I ask
Bella Shepard said:
Love and faith go hand in hand. A lovely and heartfelt poem.
March 27th, 2022 07:17
Bella Shepard said:
Love and faith go hand in hand. A lovely and heartfelt poem.
March 27th, 2022 07:17
The pure Feeling
Bella Shepard said:
A deep and beautiful poem. Just as the universe is, so is love. Thank you
March 25th, 2022 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
A deep and beautiful poem. Just as the universe is, so is love. Thank you
March 25th, 2022 13:29
The pure Feeling
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much and also to the muse whi introduced such a feeling 🌼
March 25th, 2022 10:30
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much and also to the muse whi introduced such a feeling 🌼
March 25th, 2022 10:30
The pure Feeling
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am fragrance of the flowers
and the blush of the smiles,
traversing all the distances
I can happen across miles.\'
wonderfully creative
thanks for sharing
a great read!
March 25th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am fragrance of the flowers
and the blush of the smiles,
traversing all the distances
I can happen across miles.\'
wonderfully creative
thanks for sharing
a great read!
March 25th, 2022 05:44
A life of Adventure
Bella Shepard said:
Sweetness abounds in this poem. The last stanza resonates, lovely piece.
March 24th, 2022 09:50
Bella Shepard said:
Sweetness abounds in this poem. The last stanza resonates, lovely piece.
March 24th, 2022 09:50
A life of Adventure
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
\'explore the world
make it a friendly venture\'
what soothing words of comfort..
thank you for sharing
March 24th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
\'explore the world
make it a friendly venture\'
what soothing words of comfort..
thank you for sharing
March 24th, 2022 05:30
The Magic Divine
Bella Shepard said:
Love is the magic divine, said so well and so beautifully. Thank you for a lovely read!
March 23rd, 2022 14:35
Bella Shepard said:
Love is the magic divine, said so well and so beautifully. Thank you for a lovely read!
March 23rd, 2022 14:35
Aye Aye Captain!
Bella Shepard said:
I love the feeling you evoke of \"Taking control and steering your own ship\", love that sentiment, the ability to finally have confidence in yourself and in another. Wonderful poem!
March 22nd, 2022 13:42
Bella Shepard said:
I love the feeling you evoke of \"Taking control and steering your own ship\", love that sentiment, the ability to finally have confidence in yourself and in another. Wonderful poem!
March 22nd, 2022 13:42
Aye Aye Captain!
L. B. Mek said:
\'be bold and leave the hesitation.\'
a lovely take on a carpe diem poem
thanks for sharing
March 22nd, 2022 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'be bold and leave the hesitation.\'
a lovely take on a carpe diem poem
thanks for sharing
March 22nd, 2022 06:22
Togetherness We must Cherish
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much ! Only the wise can pick precious stones out of pebbles that I collect.
March 21st, 2022 12:09
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much ! Only the wise can pick precious stones out of pebbles that I collect.
March 21st, 2022 12:09
Togetherness We must Cherish
L. B. Mek said:
\'We are born as individuals
and as individuals we perish,
but with love, peace and truth
togetherness we must cherish.\'
really well written
a great read and message, thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2022 07:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'We are born as individuals
and as individuals we perish,
but with love, peace and truth
togetherness we must cherish.\'
really well written
a great read and message, thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2022 07:16
The Spark has become Fire
Bella Shepard said:
Heartfelt and bittersweet. Lovely poem!
March 19th, 2022 12:45
Bella Shepard said:
Heartfelt and bittersweet. Lovely poem!
March 19th, 2022 12:45
The Spark has become Fire
sally said:
beautiful poem, nicely writen , i like it : )
March 19th, 2022 12:20
sally said:
beautiful poem, nicely writen , i like it : )
March 19th, 2022 12:20
The Spark has become Fire
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Poem !! and wonderful name for the poem !!
March 19th, 2022 08:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Poem !! and wonderful name for the poem !!
March 19th, 2022 08:38
The Spark has become Fire
Paul Bell said:
I suppose that\'s the rollercoaster, takes you up, and then brings you back down. Keep the up bit in your mind and go with it.
March 19th, 2022 04:52
Paul Bell said:
I suppose that\'s the rollercoaster, takes you up, and then brings you back down. Keep the up bit in your mind and go with it.
March 19th, 2022 04:52
Don\'t I know you
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! It\'s really graceful and every word glides gently through this piece. Great job!
March 18th, 2022 10:00
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! It\'s really graceful and every word glides gently through this piece. Great job!
March 18th, 2022 10:00
Don\'t I know you
sally said:
romantic and loving poem, very beautiful describtion of your lover, Bravo !
March 18th, 2022 08:04
sally said:
romantic and loving poem, very beautiful describtion of your lover, Bravo !
March 18th, 2022 08:04
You are the One!
Bella Shepard said:
I can see this poem set to music, it is lovely.
March 17th, 2022 14:24
Bella Shepard said:
I can see this poem set to music, it is lovely.
March 17th, 2022 14:24
Thank you for existing
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you ma\'am. All souls who have experienced near death phenomena have described unbound love they experience.
March 14th, 2022 08:15
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you ma\'am. All souls who have experienced near death phenomena have described unbound love they experience.
March 14th, 2022 08:15
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