Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
The Spark has become Fire
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Poem !! and wonderful name for the poem !!
March 19th, 2022 08:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Poem !! and wonderful name for the poem !!
March 19th, 2022 08:38
The Spark has become Fire
Paul Bell said:
I suppose that\'s the rollercoaster, takes you up, and then brings you back down. Keep the up bit in your mind and go with it.
March 19th, 2022 04:52
Paul Bell said:
I suppose that\'s the rollercoaster, takes you up, and then brings you back down. Keep the up bit in your mind and go with it.
March 19th, 2022 04:52
Don\'t I know you
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! It\'s really graceful and every word glides gently through this piece. Great job!
March 18th, 2022 10:00
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely! It\'s really graceful and every word glides gently through this piece. Great job!
March 18th, 2022 10:00
Don\'t I know you
sally said:
romantic and loving poem, very beautiful describtion of your lover, Bravo !
March 18th, 2022 08:04
sally said:
romantic and loving poem, very beautiful describtion of your lover, Bravo !
March 18th, 2022 08:04
You are the One!
Bella Shepard said:
I can see this poem set to music, it is lovely.
March 17th, 2022 14:24
Bella Shepard said:
I can see this poem set to music, it is lovely.
March 17th, 2022 14:24
Thank you for existing
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you ma\'am. All souls who have experienced near death phenomena have described unbound love they experience.
March 14th, 2022 08:15
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you ma\'am. All souls who have experienced near death phenomena have described unbound love they experience.
March 14th, 2022 08:15
Thank you for existing
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Lines Poet
\"Out of these forces
love is a spiritual force
Its binds the souls
and binds us to the source.\"
Nice write !!
March 14th, 2022 03:54
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great Lines Poet
\"Out of these forces
love is a spiritual force
Its binds the souls
and binds us to the source.\"
Nice write !!
March 14th, 2022 03:54
As a Tree feels its Bark
adventuressmalik said:
Dried up but not dead, also depends on our notion of life. Thank you
March 13th, 2022 00:50
adventuressmalik said:
Dried up but not dead, also depends on our notion of life. Thank you
March 13th, 2022 00:50
As a Tree feels its Bark
Desertwind said:
Sounds like dead bark hanging on a live tree . Nice write.
March 12th, 2022 13:24
Desertwind said:
Sounds like dead bark hanging on a live tree . Nice write.
March 12th, 2022 13:24
As a Tree feels its Bark
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can come in so many different ways and often surprises people.
Andy
March 12th, 2022 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can come in so many different ways and often surprises people.
Andy
March 12th, 2022 02:38
A Heart full of Love
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one Malik ! Different outlook and well written.
March 9th, 2022 06:33
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one Malik ! Different outlook and well written.
March 9th, 2022 06:33
A Heart full of Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ! Like this ))
March 9th, 2022 03:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ! Like this ))
March 9th, 2022 03:52
Love that grows Slow
L. B. Mek said:
I love the solace you weaved within these words
what an eloquently kind, inking
of the subtle gentleness
in our life\'s pebble dreams of hope:
\'All that belongs to you is
something that grows slow
be it knowledge, wealth
friendship or true love.
If you feel restricted
layoff the fear and express
Love is forever
Gods are there to bless.
I will dress nicely one day
and ask to for a dance
before the end of days
why shall I miss this chance?\'
(thanks for sharing
such a great read!)
March 7th, 2022 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
I love the solace you weaved within these words
what an eloquently kind, inking
of the subtle gentleness
in our life\'s pebble dreams of hope:
\'All that belongs to you is
something that grows slow
be it knowledge, wealth
friendship or true love.
If you feel restricted
layoff the fear and express
Love is forever
Gods are there to bless.
I will dress nicely one day
and ask to for a dance
before the end of days
why shall I miss this chance?\'
(thanks for sharing
such a great read!)
March 7th, 2022 05:28
Not the Stars
L. B. Mek said:
friendship is oft a precursor
for blossoming of a love
with deep, unshakeable roots..
(and)
\'whilst they remain, within
our eyesight or fingertip\'s reach
we can always, indulge in hope\'
(thanks for sharing
such a lovely read)
March 4th, 2022 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
friendship is oft a precursor
for blossoming of a love
with deep, unshakeable roots..
(and)
\'whilst they remain, within
our eyesight or fingertip\'s reach
we can always, indulge in hope\'
(thanks for sharing
such a lovely read)
March 4th, 2022 06:31
Love is Divine
Bella Shepard said:
Touching and heartfelt. Lovely phrasing.
February 25th, 2022 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
Touching and heartfelt. Lovely phrasing.
February 25th, 2022 12:17
A Song in my Heart
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
February 25th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
February 25th, 2022 05:12
A Song in my Heart
Vamsi Sudha said:
All the best dear Poet !! Let the meet be a bliss and a milestone in life\'s journey !! Good one poet !!
February 25th, 2022 01:50
Vamsi Sudha said:
All the best dear Poet !! Let the meet be a bliss and a milestone in life\'s journey !! Good one poet !!
February 25th, 2022 01:50
A Skyful of Love
Bella Shepard said:
To experience love is the joy of being. Life has meaning and purpose, it encompasses your soul. You\'ve written something beautiful and heartfelt. Thank you!
February 22nd, 2022 16:08
Bella Shepard said:
To experience love is the joy of being. Life has meaning and purpose, it encompasses your soul. You\'ve written something beautiful and heartfelt. Thank you!
February 22nd, 2022 16:08
A Skyful of Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'No one remains last\'
(sadly
it doesn\'t seem that way at times
rather, it often feels like
there\'s a whole bunch of us, destined
to remain last, all in one line
waiting for a starting gun
to a race for life, that\'s finishing
without us...)
\'Let your compass point to love
and follow *its* pursuit
you shall find everything else
Let love be the conduit.\'
(poetry as soothing, as reading
Rumi, Kabir)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
a great write!
\'in my humble opinion\'
February 22nd, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'No one remains last\'
(sadly
it doesn\'t seem that way at times
rather, it often feels like
there\'s a whole bunch of us, destined
to remain last, all in one line
waiting for a starting gun
to a race for life, that\'s finishing
without us...)
\'Let your compass point to love
and follow *its* pursuit
you shall find everything else
Let love be the conduit.\'
(poetry as soothing, as reading
Rumi, Kabir)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
a great write!
\'in my humble opinion\'
February 22nd, 2022 04:58
A Skyful of Love
spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful
A sincere love
A selfless love
A sky full of love…
Well penned dear poet
February 22nd, 2022 02:32
spilleronsheet said:
Very beautiful
A sincere love
A selfless love
A sky full of love…
Well penned dear poet
February 22nd, 2022 02:32
Path to the Heart
adventuressmalik said:
True. Love is a force that binds us, we just play roles, love is eternal.
February 22nd, 2022 01:16
adventuressmalik said:
True. Love is a force that binds us, we just play roles, love is eternal.
February 22nd, 2022 01:16
Path to the Heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'never, say never
just hope for another
and strive, to do better
if your gifted a new lover...\'
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 07:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'never, say never
just hope for another
and strive, to do better
if your gifted a new lover...\'
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 07:30
Love is Divine
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing 🙂
February 20th, 2022 03:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing 🙂
February 20th, 2022 03:22
Hamlock of Separation
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was such a poem! Written with eloquence and beauty! Kudos to you! 💖
February 18th, 2022 11:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was such a poem! Written with eloquence and beauty! Kudos to you! 💖
February 18th, 2022 11:10
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