Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
A Canned Life
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
A Canned Life
adventuressmalik said:
The one word that describes our agreement ! Thanks.
April 5th, 2022 08:25
adventuressmalik said:
The one word that describes our agreement ! Thanks.
April 5th, 2022 08:25
My Prime Number
adventuressmalik said:
Nothing exists without mathematics, it the building block of life and nature. There is ancient Vedic philosophy called Sankhya which can be expressed as numbers. There are also books about philosophical value of numbers, which reflect a different perspective though. Thank you for you inspirational comments.
April 4th, 2022 21:17
adventuressmalik said:
Nothing exists without mathematics, it the building block of life and nature. There is ancient Vedic philosophy called Sankhya which can be expressed as numbers. There are also books about philosophical value of numbers, which reflect a different perspective though. Thank you for you inspirational comments.
April 4th, 2022 21:17
My Prime Number
Bella Shepard said:
I love your example of prime number, \"of first importance\". There is a mathematical undertone to life and I fee that your aura is part of that. A beautiful poem.
April 4th, 2022 11:30
Bella Shepard said:
I love your example of prime number, \"of first importance\". There is a mathematical undertone to life and I fee that your aura is part of that. A beautiful poem.
April 4th, 2022 11:30
My Prime Number
Christina8 said:
I found this to be a wonderful poem! The fact that the self has an aura is true but representing it as a prime number is new. I\'m quite spiritual and found this to be quite interesting!
April 4th, 2022 10:52
Christina8 said:
I found this to be a wonderful poem! The fact that the self has an aura is true but representing it as a prime number is new. I\'m quite spiritual and found this to be quite interesting!
April 4th, 2022 10:52
My Prime Number
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much for equally uplifting words, you are so magnanimous in your praise as you rich in your poetry......
April 4th, 2022 07:25
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much for equally uplifting words, you are so magnanimous in your praise as you rich in your poetry......
April 4th, 2022 07:25
My Prime Number
L. B. Mek said:
your author\'s comment, alone
is such a beautifully poetic, ambition
of that we all yearn for the most
wording that nucleus essence in love..
indeed, that we have a word like
\'soulmate\'
to dream of, hope for and strive
to find
is reason enough, to Champion life..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
your author\'s comment, alone
is such a beautifully poetic, ambition
of that we all yearn for the most
wording that nucleus essence in love..
indeed, that we have a word like
\'soulmate\'
to dream of, hope for and strive
to find
is reason enough, to Champion life..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:15
A Smile Across your Lips
Christina8 said:
I think this is really nice, I like your rhymes too! Christina
April 3rd, 2022 09:53
Christina8 said:
I think this is really nice, I like your rhymes too! Christina
April 3rd, 2022 09:53
Silver Line.....
Bella Shepard said:
I especially love the last 2 stanzas, so evocative. Beautifully written!
April 2nd, 2022 13:07
Bella Shepard said:
I especially love the last 2 stanzas, so evocative. Beautifully written!
April 2nd, 2022 13:07
Hold it and never let it Go
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'You ask me to leave you alone
despite being close to my heart,
you are my heartbeat my muse
you’ve always played that part.\'
April 1st, 2022 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'You ask me to leave you alone
despite being close to my heart,
you are my heartbeat my muse
you’ve always played that part.\'
April 1st, 2022 04:25
We all deserve a Lifeline
Bella Shepard said:
Freedom of the mind is a glorious thing, and when free minds are able to connect and share the world can change. Your poem expresses the importance of connectedness. A wonderful poem, I especially love \"let the roses win over the guns\", beautifully said.
March 31st, 2022 14:26
Bella Shepard said:
Freedom of the mind is a glorious thing, and when free minds are able to connect and share the world can change. Your poem expresses the importance of connectedness. A wonderful poem, I especially love \"let the roses win over the guns\", beautifully said.
March 31st, 2022 14:26
We all deserve a Lifeline
Christina8 said:
You said it well in your poem, we all live this life only once and we have to make the best of it. Great job!
March 31st, 2022 12:06
Christina8 said:
You said it well in your poem, we all live this life only once and we have to make the best of it. Great job!
March 31st, 2022 12:06
We all deserve a Lifeline
Rocky Lagou said:
Such an amazing uplifting piece! We must all march in solidarity to better day! I believe that we still have time to improve our wellbeings.
March 31st, 2022 10:20
Rocky Lagou said:
Such an amazing uplifting piece! We must all march in solidarity to better day! I believe that we still have time to improve our wellbeings.
March 31st, 2022 10:20
We all deserve a Lifeline
L. B. Mek said:
\'Lifeline of shiney rays of hope
pearls of luck wrapped on the top,
beauty around us that we adore
sitting by the ocean\'s shore. \'
beautiful imagery
great message, in a well written poem
indeed, may those rare Roses
of kind, goodness
forever triumph, dear poet
thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'Lifeline of shiney rays of hope
pearls of luck wrapped on the top,
beauty around us that we adore
sitting by the ocean\'s shore. \'
beautiful imagery
great message, in a well written poem
indeed, may those rare Roses
of kind, goodness
forever triumph, dear poet
thanks for sharing!
March 31st, 2022 04:29
The Universe has to Act
Sophenia said:
I feel you! Thank you for sharing! You are wonderful!
March 29th, 2022 09:52
Sophenia said:
I feel you! Thank you for sharing! You are wonderful!
March 29th, 2022 09:52
The Universe has to Act
L. B. Mek said:
feeling helpless, is natural
but
convincing ourselves
we Are helpless, just
so we can take
that Nihilistic, easy way out
of questing, to make the best
of our lives
is what\'s, truly
Unforgivable, dear poet
fall, trip, skid, dive
feeling breathless, submerged
and overwhelmed, with it all
that\'s all: Natural
but
after taking time
to absorb our losses and hurt
be it
one knee, or handhold
at a time
we must, eventually
strive
to look up, at that dawning sky
and find
strength enough, from within
to smile...!
we must , at least try
\'onwards\'
climb, till our Time is done
and we can rest
devoid of regret!
March 29th, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
feeling helpless, is natural
but
convincing ourselves
we Are helpless, just
so we can take
that Nihilistic, easy way out
of questing, to make the best
of our lives
is what\'s, truly
Unforgivable, dear poet
fall, trip, skid, dive
feeling breathless, submerged
and overwhelmed, with it all
that\'s all: Natural
but
after taking time
to absorb our losses and hurt
be it
one knee, or handhold
at a time
we must, eventually
strive
to look up, at that dawning sky
and find
strength enough, from within
to smile...!
we must , at least try
\'onwards\'
climb, till our Time is done
and we can rest
devoid of regret!
March 29th, 2022 05:19
From Alpha to Omega
Rocky Lagou said:
It\'s true, some people are cold. Maybe we just need to cut people off when it\'s needed and move on.
March 28th, 2022 13:01
Rocky Lagou said:
It\'s true, some people are cold. Maybe we just need to cut people off when it\'s needed and move on.
March 28th, 2022 13:01
From Alpha to Omega
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, that line
\'A dear friend became impassive\'
changes the whole, pitch
why \'impassive\'?
makes us go back and re-read..
thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, that line
\'A dear friend became impassive\'
changes the whole, pitch
why \'impassive\'?
makes us go back and re-read..
thanks for sharing
March 28th, 2022 06:15
That\'s all I ask
Bella Shepard said:
Love and faith go hand in hand. A lovely and heartfelt poem.
March 27th, 2022 07:17
Bella Shepard said:
Love and faith go hand in hand. A lovely and heartfelt poem.
March 27th, 2022 07:17
The pure Feeling
Bella Shepard said:
A deep and beautiful poem. Just as the universe is, so is love. Thank you
March 25th, 2022 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
A deep and beautiful poem. Just as the universe is, so is love. Thank you
March 25th, 2022 13:29
The pure Feeling
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much and also to the muse whi introduced such a feeling 🌼
March 25th, 2022 10:30
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much and also to the muse whi introduced such a feeling 🌼
March 25th, 2022 10:30
The pure Feeling
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am fragrance of the flowers
and the blush of the smiles,
traversing all the distances
I can happen across miles.\'
wonderfully creative
thanks for sharing
a great read!
March 25th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am fragrance of the flowers
and the blush of the smiles,
traversing all the distances
I can happen across miles.\'
wonderfully creative
thanks for sharing
a great read!
March 25th, 2022 05:44
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