Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
The Rhythm Divine
Rocky Lagou said:
A really nice observation. All the world is continuously seeking meaning and a reason to why, where, what, and how? But it\'s nice to coexist in this madness, as I feel the true religion is the one you set for yourself.
April 13th, 2022 08:34
Rocky Lagou said:
A really nice observation. All the world is continuously seeking meaning and a reason to why, where, what, and how? But it\'s nice to coexist in this madness, as I feel the true religion is the one you set for yourself.
April 13th, 2022 08:34
Thank you for your Existence
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, love the last stanza the most! Great job!!
April 12th, 2022 08:40
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, love the last stanza the most! Great job!!
April 12th, 2022 08:40
Thank you for your Existence
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, full of sincerity
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, full of sincerity
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2022 04:59
Love is Like......
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful journey. Love truly means different things to different peoples. It\'s all about the perspective. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 11:07
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful journey. Love truly means different things to different peoples. It\'s all about the perspective. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 11:07
Love is Like......
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the inspiration O! Poet.
April 11th, 2022 06:24
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the inspiration O! Poet.
April 11th, 2022 06:24
I see thee wherever I see
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Christina. She is always there.... wherever she is. I will say the heart in not broken, it is just waiting.
April 9th, 2022 10:52
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Christina. She is always there.... wherever she is. I will say the heart in not broken, it is just waiting.
April 9th, 2022 10:52
I see thee wherever I see
Christina8 said:
Very poignant write, malik! Looking for your love but she is not there, sorry for your broken heart!
April 9th, 2022 10:49
Christina8 said:
Very poignant write, malik! Looking for your love but she is not there, sorry for your broken heart!
April 9th, 2022 10:49
I see thee wherever I see
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! I don\'t consider this as pain but an essential part of the journey. I love my surroundings, I love all, everything.... in a way, which I call universal love.
April 9th, 2022 04:48
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! I don\'t consider this as pain but an essential part of the journey. I love my surroundings, I love all, everything.... in a way, which I call universal love.
April 9th, 2022 04:48
I see thee wherever I see
Vamsi Sudha said:
Broken heart is silent and noiseless but the pain is Very deep !!
Hope you come out of it soon !!
Great heart touchy write !!
April 9th, 2022 02:31
Vamsi Sudha said:
Broken heart is silent and noiseless but the pain is Very deep !!
Hope you come out of it soon !!
Great heart touchy write !!
April 9th, 2022 02:31
Living on the Edge
L. B. Mek said:
\'where we\'re at our most
alive, state..\'
an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'where we\'re at our most
alive, state..\'
an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:09
The colours of the Spring Flowers
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful! thanks for sharing
(whichever \'God\'
grants you this anchor
to Nature\'s, sublime
affords you a wonderful gift
to utilise and overcome
\'those bumps\'
in our day to day, struggle
to distil, hope and beauty
from so much
strife and ugliness, in life..)
stay strong
and remain kind, to All
dear Poet!
April 7th, 2022 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful! thanks for sharing
(whichever \'God\'
grants you this anchor
to Nature\'s, sublime
affords you a wonderful gift
to utilise and overcome
\'those bumps\'
in our day to day, struggle
to distil, hope and beauty
from so much
strife and ugliness, in life..)
stay strong
and remain kind, to All
dear Poet!
April 7th, 2022 05:16
A journey to the Afterlife
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of life and death, how many have we been, how many will we be? A beautiful contemplation for each day. Thank you.
April 6th, 2022 14:16
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of life and death, how many have we been, how many will we be? A beautiful contemplation for each day. Thank you.
April 6th, 2022 14:16
A Canned Life
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
A Canned Life
adventuressmalik said:
The one word that describes our agreement ! Thanks.
April 5th, 2022 08:25
adventuressmalik said:
The one word that describes our agreement ! Thanks.
April 5th, 2022 08:25
My Prime Number
adventuressmalik said:
Nothing exists without mathematics, it the building block of life and nature. There is ancient Vedic philosophy called Sankhya which can be expressed as numbers. There are also books about philosophical value of numbers, which reflect a different perspective though. Thank you for you inspirational comments.
April 4th, 2022 21:17
adventuressmalik said:
Nothing exists without mathematics, it the building block of life and nature. There is ancient Vedic philosophy called Sankhya which can be expressed as numbers. There are also books about philosophical value of numbers, which reflect a different perspective though. Thank you for you inspirational comments.
April 4th, 2022 21:17
My Prime Number
Bella Shepard said:
I love your example of prime number, \"of first importance\". There is a mathematical undertone to life and I fee that your aura is part of that. A beautiful poem.
April 4th, 2022 11:30
Bella Shepard said:
I love your example of prime number, \"of first importance\". There is a mathematical undertone to life and I fee that your aura is part of that. A beautiful poem.
April 4th, 2022 11:30
My Prime Number
Christina8 said:
I found this to be a wonderful poem! The fact that the self has an aura is true but representing it as a prime number is new. I\'m quite spiritual and found this to be quite interesting!
April 4th, 2022 10:52
Christina8 said:
I found this to be a wonderful poem! The fact that the self has an aura is true but representing it as a prime number is new. I\'m quite spiritual and found this to be quite interesting!
April 4th, 2022 10:52
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