Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
A song in Silence
adventuressmalik said:
I am extremely grateful as a menhir would be when you etch the sacred glyphs of such esoteric praise. But I will fail if I do not direct the showers of such blessings to my muse..... because when most people see that wind that passes through the flute produces the sound.... to me it\'s mind and that mind is muse... indeed. Thank you.
April 14th, 2022 04:33
adventuressmalik said:
I am extremely grateful as a menhir would be when you etch the sacred glyphs of such esoteric praise. But I will fail if I do not direct the showers of such blessings to my muse..... because when most people see that wind that passes through the flute produces the sound.... to me it\'s mind and that mind is muse... indeed. Thank you.
April 14th, 2022 04:33
A song in Silence
L. B. Mek said:
if Shakespeare, could
his comment would
probably, or at least should
go something like:
\' Nor shall Death brag thou wander\'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow\'st:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.\'..
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-26931 )
for in these words
you have immortalised your muse
in ink, dear poet
and gifted us, such a memorable read
thank you!
April 14th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
if Shakespeare, could
his comment would
probably, or at least should
go something like:
\' Nor shall Death brag thou wander\'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow\'st:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.\'..
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-26931 )
for in these words
you have immortalised your muse
in ink, dear poet
and gifted us, such a memorable read
thank you!
April 14th, 2022 03:54
The Rhythm Divine
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the one of the best complements. I am indeed grateful. 🌼
April 13th, 2022 23:10
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the one of the best complements. I am indeed grateful. 🌼
April 13th, 2022 23:10
The Rhythm Divine
Bella Shepard said:
You have put into words so many thoughts that go through my head each day as I take a morning walk, or stand on my deck at night looking at the moon and stars. So many questions, up to us to search for answers. Love this poem!
April 13th, 2022 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
You have put into words so many thoughts that go through my head each day as I take a morning walk, or stand on my deck at night looking at the moon and stars. So many questions, up to us to search for answers. Love this poem!
April 13th, 2022 12:19
The Rhythm Divine
Rocky Lagou said:
A really nice observation. All the world is continuously seeking meaning and a reason to why, where, what, and how? But it\'s nice to coexist in this madness, as I feel the true religion is the one you set for yourself.
April 13th, 2022 08:34
Rocky Lagou said:
A really nice observation. All the world is continuously seeking meaning and a reason to why, where, what, and how? But it\'s nice to coexist in this madness, as I feel the true religion is the one you set for yourself.
April 13th, 2022 08:34
Thank you for your Existence
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, love the last stanza the most! Great job!!
April 12th, 2022 08:40
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, love the last stanza the most! Great job!!
April 12th, 2022 08:40
Thank you for your Existence
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, full of sincerity
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, full of sincerity
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2022 04:59
Love is Like......
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful journey. Love truly means different things to different peoples. It\'s all about the perspective. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 11:07
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful journey. Love truly means different things to different peoples. It\'s all about the perspective. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 11:07
Love is Like......
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the inspiration O! Poet.
April 11th, 2022 06:24
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the inspiration O! Poet.
April 11th, 2022 06:24
I see thee wherever I see
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Christina. She is always there.... wherever she is. I will say the heart in not broken, it is just waiting.
April 9th, 2022 10:52
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Christina. She is always there.... wherever she is. I will say the heart in not broken, it is just waiting.
April 9th, 2022 10:52
I see thee wherever I see
Christina8 said:
Very poignant write, malik! Looking for your love but she is not there, sorry for your broken heart!
April 9th, 2022 10:49
Christina8 said:
Very poignant write, malik! Looking for your love but she is not there, sorry for your broken heart!
April 9th, 2022 10:49
I see thee wherever I see
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! I don\'t consider this as pain but an essential part of the journey. I love my surroundings, I love all, everything.... in a way, which I call universal love.
April 9th, 2022 04:48
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! I don\'t consider this as pain but an essential part of the journey. I love my surroundings, I love all, everything.... in a way, which I call universal love.
April 9th, 2022 04:48
I see thee wherever I see
Vamsi Sudha said:
Broken heart is silent and noiseless but the pain is Very deep !!
Hope you come out of it soon !!
Great heart touchy write !!
April 9th, 2022 02:31
Vamsi Sudha said:
Broken heart is silent and noiseless but the pain is Very deep !!
Hope you come out of it soon !!
Great heart touchy write !!
April 9th, 2022 02:31
Living on the Edge
L. B. Mek said:
\'where we\'re at our most
alive, state..\'
an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'where we\'re at our most
alive, state..\'
an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:09
The colours of the Spring Flowers
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful! thanks for sharing
(whichever \'God\'
grants you this anchor
to Nature\'s, sublime
affords you a wonderful gift
to utilise and overcome
\'those bumps\'
in our day to day, struggle
to distil, hope and beauty
from so much
strife and ugliness, in life..)
stay strong
and remain kind, to All
dear Poet!
April 7th, 2022 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful! thanks for sharing
(whichever \'God\'
grants you this anchor
to Nature\'s, sublime
affords you a wonderful gift
to utilise and overcome
\'those bumps\'
in our day to day, struggle
to distil, hope and beauty
from so much
strife and ugliness, in life..)
stay strong
and remain kind, to All
dear Poet!
April 7th, 2022 05:16
A journey to the Afterlife
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of life and death, how many have we been, how many will we be? A beautiful contemplation for each day. Thank you.
April 6th, 2022 14:16
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of life and death, how many have we been, how many will we be? A beautiful contemplation for each day. Thank you.
April 6th, 2022 14:16
A Canned Life
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
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