Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Thank you for your Existence
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, full of sincerity
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully written, full of sincerity
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2022 04:59
Love is Like......
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful journey. Love truly means different things to different peoples. It\'s all about the perspective. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 11:07
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful journey. Love truly means different things to different peoples. It\'s all about the perspective. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 11:07
Love is Like......
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the inspiration O! Poet.
April 11th, 2022 06:24
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for the inspiration O! Poet.
April 11th, 2022 06:24
Love is Like......
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this ! Very nice poem 🙂
April 11th, 2022 01:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this ! Very nice poem 🙂
April 11th, 2022 01:22
I see thee wherever I see
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Christina. She is always there.... wherever she is. I will say the heart in not broken, it is just waiting.
April 9th, 2022 10:52
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you Christina. She is always there.... wherever she is. I will say the heart in not broken, it is just waiting.
April 9th, 2022 10:52
I see thee wherever I see
Christina8 said:
Very poignant write, malik! Looking for your love but she is not there, sorry for your broken heart!
April 9th, 2022 10:49
Christina8 said:
Very poignant write, malik! Looking for your love but she is not there, sorry for your broken heart!
April 9th, 2022 10:49
I see thee wherever I see
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! I don\'t consider this as pain but an essential part of the journey. I love my surroundings, I love all, everything.... in a way, which I call universal love.
April 9th, 2022 04:48
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! I don\'t consider this as pain but an essential part of the journey. I love my surroundings, I love all, everything.... in a way, which I call universal love.
April 9th, 2022 04:48
I see thee wherever I see
Vamsi Sudha said:
Broken heart is silent and noiseless but the pain is Very deep !!
Hope you come out of it soon !!
Great heart touchy write !!
April 9th, 2022 02:31
Vamsi Sudha said:
Broken heart is silent and noiseless but the pain is Very deep !!
Hope you come out of it soon !!
Great heart touchy write !!
April 9th, 2022 02:31
Living on the Edge
L. B. Mek said:
\'where we\'re at our most
alive, state..\'
an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'where we\'re at our most
alive, state..\'
an intriguing read
thanks for sharing
April 8th, 2022 05:09
The colours of the Spring Flowers
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful! thanks for sharing
(whichever \'God\'
grants you this anchor
to Nature\'s, sublime
affords you a wonderful gift
to utilise and overcome
\'those bumps\'
in our day to day, struggle
to distil, hope and beauty
from so much
strife and ugliness, in life..)
stay strong
and remain kind, to All
dear Poet!
April 7th, 2022 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful! thanks for sharing
(whichever \'God\'
grants you this anchor
to Nature\'s, sublime
affords you a wonderful gift
to utilise and overcome
\'those bumps\'
in our day to day, struggle
to distil, hope and beauty
from so much
strife and ugliness, in life..)
stay strong
and remain kind, to All
dear Poet!
April 7th, 2022 05:16
A journey to the Afterlife
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of life and death, how many have we been, how many will we be? A beautiful contemplation for each day. Thank you.
April 6th, 2022 14:16
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of life and death, how many have we been, how many will we be? A beautiful contemplation for each day. Thank you.
April 6th, 2022 14:16
A Canned Life
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, so so true. This reminds me of the Katy Perry song “Chained to the Rhythm.” We’re all just chained to the same set of rules and the same way of life. A message for the people indeed!
April 5th, 2022 10:15
A Canned Life
adventuressmalik said:
The one word that describes our agreement ! Thanks.
April 5th, 2022 08:25
adventuressmalik said:
The one word that describes our agreement ! Thanks.
April 5th, 2022 08:25
My Prime Number
adventuressmalik said:
Nothing exists without mathematics, it the building block of life and nature. There is ancient Vedic philosophy called Sankhya which can be expressed as numbers. There are also books about philosophical value of numbers, which reflect a different perspective though. Thank you for you inspirational comments.
April 4th, 2022 21:17
adventuressmalik said:
Nothing exists without mathematics, it the building block of life and nature. There is ancient Vedic philosophy called Sankhya which can be expressed as numbers. There are also books about philosophical value of numbers, which reflect a different perspective though. Thank you for you inspirational comments.
April 4th, 2022 21:17
My Prime Number
Bella Shepard said:
I love your example of prime number, \"of first importance\". There is a mathematical undertone to life and I fee that your aura is part of that. A beautiful poem.
April 4th, 2022 11:30
Bella Shepard said:
I love your example of prime number, \"of first importance\". There is a mathematical undertone to life and I fee that your aura is part of that. A beautiful poem.
April 4th, 2022 11:30
My Prime Number
Christina8 said:
I found this to be a wonderful poem! The fact that the self has an aura is true but representing it as a prime number is new. I\'m quite spiritual and found this to be quite interesting!
April 4th, 2022 10:52
Christina8 said:
I found this to be a wonderful poem! The fact that the self has an aura is true but representing it as a prime number is new. I\'m quite spiritual and found this to be quite interesting!
April 4th, 2022 10:52
My Prime Number
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much for equally uplifting words, you are so magnanimous in your praise as you rich in your poetry......
April 4th, 2022 07:25
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you so much for equally uplifting words, you are so magnanimous in your praise as you rich in your poetry......
April 4th, 2022 07:25
My Prime Number
L. B. Mek said:
your author\'s comment, alone
is such a beautifully poetic, ambition
of that we all yearn for the most
wording that nucleus essence in love..
indeed, that we have a word like
\'soulmate\'
to dream of, hope for and strive
to find
is reason enough, to Champion life..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
your author\'s comment, alone
is such a beautifully poetic, ambition
of that we all yearn for the most
wording that nucleus essence in love..
indeed, that we have a word like
\'soulmate\'
to dream of, hope for and strive
to find
is reason enough, to Champion life..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:15
A Smile Across your Lips
Christina8 said:
I think this is really nice, I like your rhymes too! Christina
April 3rd, 2022 09:53
Christina8 said:
I think this is really nice, I like your rhymes too! Christina
April 3rd, 2022 09:53
Silver Line.....
Bella Shepard said:
I especially love the last 2 stanzas, so evocative. Beautifully written!
April 2nd, 2022 13:07
Bella Shepard said:
I especially love the last 2 stanzas, so evocative. Beautifully written!
April 2nd, 2022 13:07
Hold it and never let it Go
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'You ask me to leave you alone
despite being close to my heart,
you are my heartbeat my muse
you’ve always played that part.\'
April 1st, 2022 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'You ask me to leave you alone
despite being close to my heart,
you are my heartbeat my muse
you’ve always played that part.\'
April 1st, 2022 04:25
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