Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
Blueish Lagoon of your Eyes
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello
this is lovely & evocative
tchau..Cassia
May 11th, 2022 14:55
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello
this is lovely & evocative
tchau..Cassia
May 11th, 2022 14:55
A Wish
adventuressmalik said:
Your praise is so poetic, it makes me proud not of the poem but because you chose to reflect on it. Thank you dear friend.
May 10th, 2022 07:27
adventuressmalik said:
Your praise is so poetic, it makes me proud not of the poem but because you chose to reflect on it. Thank you dear friend.
May 10th, 2022 07:27
A Wish
L. B. Mek said:
love that last stanza!
wish I could pour it into my
life\'s coffee, circumstances
like granules of wisdom\'s, sugar
to sweeten my cupful sips
of daybreak horizons,
now
late twilight, Time - distilled
as beings so hollow and bleak...
(what a reassuring, read
thank you! dear Poet)
May 10th, 2022 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
love that last stanza!
wish I could pour it into my
life\'s coffee, circumstances
like granules of wisdom\'s, sugar
to sweeten my cupful sips
of daybreak horizons,
now
late twilight, Time - distilled
as beings so hollow and bleak...
(what a reassuring, read
thank you! dear Poet)
May 10th, 2022 05:23
The inspiration of my higher soul
Saxon Crow said:
Keep going brother. Your journey will take you to unexpected and beautiful places
May 10th, 2022 01:54
Saxon Crow said:
Keep going brother. Your journey will take you to unexpected and beautiful places
May 10th, 2022 01:54
A wandering mind and an untamed heart
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is beautiful brings to mind putting oneself in complete spiritual authenticity for what is tangible can constantly change, thanks for sharing ...tchau Cassia
May 8th, 2022 17:56
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello Max
This is beautiful brings to mind putting oneself in complete spiritual authenticity for what is tangible can constantly change, thanks for sharing ...tchau Cassia
May 8th, 2022 17:56
A wandering mind and an untamed heart
Bella Shepard said:
I especially love \"Everything else undergoes a change, in different ways they rearrange. Bound by the spacetime\'s fragment to live free, live without attachment\"\". It speaks to me of the uncertainty of what guides us through life. Perhaps the wandering mind must roam in order to fulfill the untamed heart. You\'ve really made me think and I love that, as I love this poem. Thank You!
May 8th, 2022 14:37
Bella Shepard said:
I especially love \"Everything else undergoes a change, in different ways they rearrange. Bound by the spacetime\'s fragment to live free, live without attachment\"\". It speaks to me of the uncertainty of what guides us through life. Perhaps the wandering mind must roam in order to fulfill the untamed heart. You\'ve really made me think and I love that, as I love this poem. Thank You!
May 8th, 2022 14:37
Dreams and Desires
Bella Shepard said:
The journey of life long learning never ends, until our last breath. You\'ve captured something intrinsic to our very nature here, and done it so beautifully. Thank you!
May 7th, 2022 14:22
Bella Shepard said:
The journey of life long learning never ends, until our last breath. You\'ve captured something intrinsic to our very nature here, and done it so beautifully. Thank you!
May 7th, 2022 14:22
When I drift afar
Nicholas Browning said:
I share sentiments with L.B. Best regards in your endeavors and I enjoyed the read.
May 6th, 2022 05:49
Nicholas Browning said:
I share sentiments with L.B. Best regards in your endeavors and I enjoyed the read.
May 6th, 2022 05:49
When I drift afar
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a beautiful prayer
all the best in your chosen faith
hope it brings you peace, dear poet
May 6th, 2022 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a beautiful prayer
all the best in your chosen faith
hope it brings you peace, dear poet
May 6th, 2022 04:20
Heal my Malady
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
but my dear poet, surely
we scribblers
can word affection, better than
such an understated and underwhelming:
\' she is the one I prefer.\'
lol
(I\'m only teasing
say it like it is! always)
thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
but my dear poet, surely
we scribblers
can word affection, better than
such an understated and underwhelming:
\' she is the one I prefer.\'
lol
(I\'m only teasing
say it like it is! always)
thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2022 05:30
Merry Christmas
Christina8 said:
Oh Christmas is my favorite time of year! This is an excellent poem, with a surprise ending! Absolutely loved it!! Christina
May 4th, 2022 08:42
Christina8 said:
Oh Christmas is my favorite time of year! This is an excellent poem, with a surprise ending! Absolutely loved it!! Christina
May 4th, 2022 08:42
Merry Christmas
adventuressmalik said:
Yes it is.... like some others. I started sharing later. I agree to the \'Ode\' part, the muse definitely deservs it. Thank you.
May 4th, 2022 07:29
adventuressmalik said:
Yes it is.... like some others. I started sharing later. I agree to the \'Ode\' part, the muse definitely deservs it. Thank you.
May 4th, 2022 07:29
Merry Christmas
Nicholas Browning said:
A very distant write as it\'s almost June xD I enjoyed some of the lines detailing a sense of hope and exhilaration. And ode to a woman, who knew? A nice touch.
May 4th, 2022 05:36
Nicholas Browning said:
A very distant write as it\'s almost June xD I enjoyed some of the lines detailing a sense of hope and exhilaration. And ode to a woman, who knew? A nice touch.
May 4th, 2022 05:36
A vision from a life lived earlier....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! It is supposed to be \'an\', It was a typing error. You have a keen sense of observation.
May 2nd, 2022 11:42
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! It is supposed to be \'an\', It was a typing error. You have a keen sense of observation.
May 2nd, 2022 11:42
A vision from a life lived earlier....
Natalia B. Odair said:
I really like this poem!!! You write very well. Only one thing- in the first line, \"I must pen down en event,\" is it supposed to be \"en\" or \"an?\" Beautiful poem though!!!!!!!
May 2nd, 2022 10:56
Natalia B. Odair said:
I really like this poem!!! You write very well. Only one thing- in the first line, \"I must pen down en event,\" is it supposed to be \"en\" or \"an?\" Beautiful poem though!!!!!!!
May 2nd, 2022 10:56
Love is not an emotion...
Saxon Crow said:
Love is a canvas word, like perfection, judgement, forgiveness. It\'s used to create what you want it to mean. Great poem
May 1st, 2022 04:33
Saxon Crow said:
Love is a canvas word, like perfection, judgement, forgiveness. It\'s used to create what you want it to mean. Great poem
May 1st, 2022 04:33
Love is not an emotion...
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Malik, Nice lines..
touched me straight..
emotions last for a short time
love may transcend a lifetime.
Great one poet !!
May 1st, 2022 02:00
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Malik, Nice lines..
touched me straight..
emotions last for a short time
love may transcend a lifetime.
Great one poet !!
May 1st, 2022 02:00
Mirage
L. B. Mek said:
\'either be wise and accept the futility of the situation or ask your muse for help in your evolution\'..
so simplified, yet irrevocably true!
we complicate it all, in our minds
entwined, with our raw emotions
but in that coldness of reality
it\'s as simple
as accepting or seeking help
and this life Truth, applies
to everything, in our lives...
another wonderfully insightful write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 29th, 2022 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'either be wise and accept the futility of the situation or ask your muse for help in your evolution\'..
so simplified, yet irrevocably true!
we complicate it all, in our minds
entwined, with our raw emotions
but in that coldness of reality
it\'s as simple
as accepting or seeking help
and this life Truth, applies
to everything, in our lives...
another wonderfully insightful write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 29th, 2022 04:23
The Virus Blues
Bella Shepard said:
The life before pandemic sometimes seems hard to remember, but if we can hold onto something simple it is a plus. Sometimes the memory of something sweet, like a smile can warm our heart and help us remember those better times. We will survive. A lovely poem, expressed beautifully.
April 28th, 2022 15:37
Bella Shepard said:
The life before pandemic sometimes seems hard to remember, but if we can hold onto something simple it is a plus. Sometimes the memory of something sweet, like a smile can warm our heart and help us remember those better times. We will survive. A lovely poem, expressed beautifully.
April 28th, 2022 15:37
The Virus Blues
L. B. Mek said:
\'From one of the prettiest faces
the smiles that I had stolen just before
the dearest thing in my memory
kept them safe in my treasury.\'
forgive me, dear Poet
but try as I might
I really couldn\'t understand this stanza..
as always, thanks for sharing
an intriguing read
April 28th, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'From one of the prettiest faces
the smiles that I had stolen just before
the dearest thing in my memory
kept them safe in my treasury.\'
forgive me, dear Poet
but try as I might
I really couldn\'t understand this stanza..
as always, thanks for sharing
an intriguing read
April 28th, 2022 03:58
Solace in life
Rozina said:
Yes a very good message in your well crafted lines.
April 27th, 2022 18:24
Rozina said:
Yes a very good message in your well crafted lines.
April 27th, 2022 18:24
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