Comments received on poems by adventuressmalik
When I drift afar
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a beautiful prayer
all the best in your chosen faith
hope it brings you peace, dear poet
May 6th, 2022 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a beautiful prayer
all the best in your chosen faith
hope it brings you peace, dear poet
May 6th, 2022 04:20
Heal my Malady
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
but my dear poet, surely
we scribblers
can word affection, better than
such an understated and underwhelming:
\' she is the one I prefer.\'
lol
(I\'m only teasing
say it like it is! always)
thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
but my dear poet, surely
we scribblers
can word affection, better than
such an understated and underwhelming:
\' she is the one I prefer.\'
lol
(I\'m only teasing
say it like it is! always)
thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2022 05:30
Merry Christmas
Christina8 said:
Oh Christmas is my favorite time of year! This is an excellent poem, with a surprise ending! Absolutely loved it!! Christina
May 4th, 2022 08:42
Christina8 said:
Oh Christmas is my favorite time of year! This is an excellent poem, with a surprise ending! Absolutely loved it!! Christina
May 4th, 2022 08:42
Merry Christmas
adventuressmalik said:
Yes it is.... like some others. I started sharing later. I agree to the \'Ode\' part, the muse definitely deservs it. Thank you.
May 4th, 2022 07:29
adventuressmalik said:
Yes it is.... like some others. I started sharing later. I agree to the \'Ode\' part, the muse definitely deservs it. Thank you.
May 4th, 2022 07:29
Merry Christmas
Nicholas Browning said:
A very distant write as it\'s almost June xD I enjoyed some of the lines detailing a sense of hope and exhilaration. And ode to a woman, who knew? A nice touch.
May 4th, 2022 05:36
Nicholas Browning said:
A very distant write as it\'s almost June xD I enjoyed some of the lines detailing a sense of hope and exhilaration. And ode to a woman, who knew? A nice touch.
May 4th, 2022 05:36
A vision from a life lived earlier....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! It is supposed to be \'an\', It was a typing error. You have a keen sense of observation.
May 2nd, 2022 11:42
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you! It is supposed to be \'an\', It was a typing error. You have a keen sense of observation.
May 2nd, 2022 11:42
A vision from a life lived earlier....
Natalia B. Odair said:
I really like this poem!!! You write very well. Only one thing- in the first line, \"I must pen down en event,\" is it supposed to be \"en\" or \"an?\" Beautiful poem though!!!!!!!
May 2nd, 2022 10:56
Natalia B. Odair said:
I really like this poem!!! You write very well. Only one thing- in the first line, \"I must pen down en event,\" is it supposed to be \"en\" or \"an?\" Beautiful poem though!!!!!!!
May 2nd, 2022 10:56
Love is not an emotion...
Saxon Crow said:
Love is a canvas word, like perfection, judgement, forgiveness. It\'s used to create what you want it to mean. Great poem
May 1st, 2022 04:33
Saxon Crow said:
Love is a canvas word, like perfection, judgement, forgiveness. It\'s used to create what you want it to mean. Great poem
May 1st, 2022 04:33
Love is not an emotion...
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Malik, Nice lines..
touched me straight..
emotions last for a short time
love may transcend a lifetime.
Great one poet !!
May 1st, 2022 02:00
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Malik, Nice lines..
touched me straight..
emotions last for a short time
love may transcend a lifetime.
Great one poet !!
May 1st, 2022 02:00
Mirage
L. B. Mek said:
\'either be wise and accept the futility of the situation or ask your muse for help in your evolution\'..
so simplified, yet irrevocably true!
we complicate it all, in our minds
entwined, with our raw emotions
but in that coldness of reality
it\'s as simple
as accepting or seeking help
and this life Truth, applies
to everything, in our lives...
another wonderfully insightful write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 29th, 2022 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'either be wise and accept the futility of the situation or ask your muse for help in your evolution\'..
so simplified, yet irrevocably true!
we complicate it all, in our minds
entwined, with our raw emotions
but in that coldness of reality
it\'s as simple
as accepting or seeking help
and this life Truth, applies
to everything, in our lives...
another wonderfully insightful write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
April 29th, 2022 04:23
The Virus Blues
Bella Shepard said:
The life before pandemic sometimes seems hard to remember, but if we can hold onto something simple it is a plus. Sometimes the memory of something sweet, like a smile can warm our heart and help us remember those better times. We will survive. A lovely poem, expressed beautifully.
April 28th, 2022 15:37
Bella Shepard said:
The life before pandemic sometimes seems hard to remember, but if we can hold onto something simple it is a plus. Sometimes the memory of something sweet, like a smile can warm our heart and help us remember those better times. We will survive. A lovely poem, expressed beautifully.
April 28th, 2022 15:37
The Virus Blues
L. B. Mek said:
\'From one of the prettiest faces
the smiles that I had stolen just before
the dearest thing in my memory
kept them safe in my treasury.\'
forgive me, dear Poet
but try as I might
I really couldn\'t understand this stanza..
as always, thanks for sharing
an intriguing read
April 28th, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'From one of the prettiest faces
the smiles that I had stolen just before
the dearest thing in my memory
kept them safe in my treasury.\'
forgive me, dear Poet
but try as I might
I really couldn\'t understand this stanza..
as always, thanks for sharing
an intriguing read
April 28th, 2022 03:58
Solace in life
Rozina said:
Yes a very good message in your well crafted lines.
April 27th, 2022 18:24
Rozina said:
Yes a very good message in your well crafted lines.
April 27th, 2022 18:24
Solace in life
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully crafted, such a powerful message about what should make a life worth living: peace, love, truth. You soothe my soul with your words, thank you.
April 27th, 2022 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully crafted, such a powerful message about what should make a life worth living: peace, love, truth. You soothe my soul with your words, thank you.
April 27th, 2022 12:31
Love is a gift.... boundless and perpetual
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, some of your wording
forces us to think
and thus, engage..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 26th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, some of your wording
forces us to think
and thus, engage..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 26th, 2022 05:15
In a Seashell lies a Pearl....
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for equally awesome words !
April 25th, 2022 07:31
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you for equally awesome words !
April 25th, 2022 07:31
In a Seashell lies a Pearl....
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title, to last full stop
thank you! dear Poet
\'a portrait of vivacity
within
such, vivid artistry...!\'
April 25th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
from title, to last full stop
thank you! dear Poet
\'a portrait of vivacity
within
such, vivid artistry...!\'
April 25th, 2022 05:45
We keep running without any reason.......
adventuressmalik said:
Ah! Thank you, means my experiment has worked !
April 22nd, 2022 05:25
adventuressmalik said:
Ah! Thank you, means my experiment has worked !
April 22nd, 2022 05:25
We keep running without any reason.......
L. B. Mek said:
simple truisms, worded accessible
and that use of repetition
to drum home your focal point..
wonderfully executed!
thank you, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
simple truisms, worded accessible
and that use of repetition
to drum home your focal point..
wonderfully executed!
thank you, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:40
Contemplate with insights deep..........
Bella Shepard said:
Love is so much more than the meeting of bodies, it\'s the meeting of minds, hearts, souls. Such a wonderful poem in its description of that union. Loved it!
April 21st, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
Love is so much more than the meeting of bodies, it\'s the meeting of minds, hearts, souls. Such a wonderful poem in its description of that union. Loved it!
April 21st, 2022 14:14
Contemplate with insights deep..........
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem about my favorite subject---love. I think your rhymes and content are beyond brilliant!!! Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 10:58
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem about my favorite subject---love. I think your rhymes and content are beyond brilliant!!! Thanks for sharing!
April 21st, 2022 10:58
Contemplate with insights deep..........
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet.
April 21st, 2022 10:50
adventuressmalik said:
Thank you dear Poet.
April 21st, 2022 10:50
Contemplate with insights deep..........
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revel,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.\'
Brilliant!
April 21st, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revel,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.\'
Brilliant!
April 21st, 2022 04:58
Drops of dew.....
Bella Shepard said:
You capture so many thoughts and feelings I have had over time, and could never put into words as you have done. I love the collective consciousness that binds us all. You are a true artist dear friend and I linger on every word of your poem.
April 19th, 2022 10:25
Bella Shepard said:
You capture so many thoughts and feelings I have had over time, and could never put into words as you have done. I love the collective consciousness that binds us all. You are a true artist dear friend and I linger on every word of your poem.
April 19th, 2022 10:25
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